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#1 JG111580

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Posted 11 November 2014 - 04:35 AM

Well, I envisioned Naruto as a story that I wanted to tell my children, whenever I end up having them. Unfortunately, the official ending was so far off the original themes embedded in the story that I won't be able to. For my own piece of mind, I am writing the ending that I had envisioned, one that wraps up the loose ends and doesn't rush things. I wanted an ending that captured the essence of the characters, giving them their moments to shine. I wanted an ending that would leave me fulfilled, not empty and literally unable to sleep depressed. I'm not sure that I will share it here. I'm not sure that posting something like this is even allowed. If, there isn't a problem, please let me know. If anyone is interested, I would love to provide some sense of closure. I also wanted to remove some of the things that were revealed that detracted from Naruto's accomplishments. I intend to pick the story up just after the nine tails is extracted from Naruto. This is where I need your help. I am trying my best to remember all of the loose ends that need to be tied up from that point. Here's what I have so far.

 

The papers found in Orochimaru's lair

That jutsu

Connection to the 6 paths and destiny of tailed beasts

Madara the main villain, orchestrated everything

Karin's evaluation of Naruto's chakra

Obito's redemption, with real consequences

Sauske's redemption, with real consequences

POAL

Black Zetsu's origin

Orochimaru's fate

Eight gates release

Sakura's talent for genjutsu

... and of course pairings

 

Please let me know of anything that I am missing. 

 

 

 

  



#2 redrose3443

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Posted 11 November 2014 - 05:06 AM

This isn't really in the story, but it would be interesting, if you did something with Chatte's theory about Sakura being connected to Hashirama, especially because she has the two elements of which wood comes from. But this is more of a suggestion, then fact from the manga.

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#3 JG111580

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Posted 20 November 2014 - 04:56 AM

Continuing to work on this. I have the entire conclusion outlined from 662 on and 16 pages written. I'd say that's 1/4 to 1/2 of it. I'll have to go back through and edit it before I post, but I think that everyone will like it once it's done. At least, I hope you will.   



#4 Bryon_Konoha_Ninja

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Posted 20 November 2014 - 05:34 AM

Continuing to work on this. I have the entire conclusion outlined from 662 on and 16 pages written. I'd say that's 1/4 to 1/2 of it. I'll have to go back through and edit it before I post, but I think that everyone will like it once it's done. At least, I hope you will.   

 

I hope it goes well, JG :)



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Posted 30 November 2014 - 05:15 AM

I went ahead and posted the entire thing. 3 weeks worth of work and a little lost sleep later... and there you go. Hope some you will check it out. It's my first and probably only fan fic.






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