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#1161 sushi.

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Posted 14 September 2021 - 11:11 PM

So I might be right about Hinata going with Toneri not just
because of being jealous of Naruto and Sakuras moment BUT also to save Hanabi. Looking forward to the next page

Perhaps I got you wrong or did Hinata seriously go with Toneri out of jealousy in the movie?

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Posted 15 September 2021 - 12:34 AM

Perhaps I got you wrong or did Hinata seriously go with Toneri out of jealousy in the movie?


Who knows 🤔

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Posted 15 September 2021 - 01:33 AM

Does anyone even want to look for the scene either in the novel or movie to find out? I don't. I just figured she was going to save her sister, Anything else is likely what happened but just show how bad they were in writing this story.



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Posted 15 September 2021 - 02:07 AM

We just have to see. Anyway I remembered a few months back I argued with a ss fan about this fan fic and one the arguments he/she made is how sakura never smiles in this dousing, been a while since I read it fully so does anyone know its true? Granted won't really matter now since this person blocked me.

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Posted 15 September 2021 - 03:07 AM

We just have to see. Anyway I remembered a few months back I argued with a ss fan about this fan fic and one the arguments he/she made is how sakura never smiles in this dousing, been a while since I read it fully so does anyone know its true? Granted won't really matter now since this person blocked me.

ok when did Sasuke make Sakura smile lmao? 699 doesnt count.

In P2, I felt Sakuras her feelings and behavior toward her teammates were played against eachother to show contrast. Makes negativity in S>S and positivity in S>N even more in your face.

And I wouldnt bother with proenders. SS may be canon, but what does that mean in a retcon? SS relation in fanfics are completely fanonbased, and in contrast to actual canon.

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Posted 15 September 2021 - 04:18 PM

Perhaps I got you wrong or did Hinata seriously go with Toneri out of jealousy in the movie?


Not in the movie but in this doujin. From what I got in the movie, as usual, she didn't believe in Naruto being able to beat Toneri there or save Hanabi and well...

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Posted 15 September 2021 - 08:07 PM

ok when did Sasuke make Sakura smile lmao? 699 doesnt count.

In P2, I felt Sakuras her feelings and behavior toward her teammates were played against eachother to show contrast. Makes negativity in S>S and positivity in S>N even more in your face.

And I wouldnt bother with proenders. SS may be canon, but what does that mean in a retcon? SS relation in fanfics are completely fanonbased, and in contrast to actual canon.

 

Never. its well established that in neither part 1 or 2 did Sakura post her introductory chapter EVER smile because of Sasuke. her expression is always some shade of sorrow or grief or frustration.  or fear usually caused by Sasukes actions

 

Naruto is canonically the only one to ever make her smile in any form in part 1 or in shippuden


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Posted 15 September 2021 - 09:07 PM

Never. its well established that in neither part 1 or 2 did Sakura post her introductory chapter EVER smile because of Sasuke. her expression is always some shade of sorrow or grief or frustration.  or fear usually caused by Sasukes actions

 

Naruto is canonically the only one to ever make her smile in any form in part 1 or in shippuden

In part two. Chapter 699 after he apologized. It was strained.

 

In part one. When he did that genjutsu point out to raise Sakura's spirits after he beat it down a few days before.

 

She also in part one smiled a lot when trying to flirt with him.

 

Oh she also smiled when Sasuke told her how Naruto fought so hard to save her from Gaara.



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Posted 15 September 2021 - 09:48 PM

In part two. Chapter 699 after he apologized. It was strained.
 
In part one. When he did that genjutsu point out to raise Sakura's spirits after he beat it down a few days before.
 
She also in part one smiled a lot when trying to flirt with him.
 
Oh she also smiled when Sasuke told her how Naruto fought so hard to save her from Gaara.

Thats why I said P2. SS in P1 had potential, a love couldve been built from the comradery/friendship they had. I think I changed my mind after the apple incident, and even more during Sakuras confession. And she actually vowed to bring Sasuke back together with Naruto, which couldve strengthened the SS bond. Now that theyre canon thats a wasted opportunity. Kishi cut Sasukes bonds with all of Konoha except Naruto. In P2 SS went straight to hell. Im not saying this because I hate it, Sasuke didnt give two kittens about Kakashi either. He cared for Naruto, Taka and no one else. Thats until the mysterious flip in 699, I excluded it as I consider it a retcon to the 698 chapters before it.

(I agree with most of your examples but the last part, she was smiling because of Naruto, not Sasuke. )

Edited by sushi., 15 September 2021 - 09:48 PM.

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Posted 16 September 2021 - 05:26 PM

Ill stand on what i posted and call those the rare exceptions to the rule. the story pretty much stands on the fact that when it came to Sasuke Sakura was consistently miserable


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Posted 16 September 2021 - 10:05 PM

Miserable and put up this false giggling yes woman act at the start. She was not herself around him and it stands true even now. The relationship is disjointed and dysfunctional, no matter how you look at it. Just as Hinata did nothing to pursue a relationship with Naruto, Sasuke did nothing to pursue a relationship with Sakura and in fact practically sunk it himself. He coldly dismissed and trampling on Sakura's feelings when she poured her heart out to him in chapter 693.


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Posted 16 September 2021 - 10:31 PM

Miserable and put up this false giggling yes woman act at the start. She was not herself around him and it stands true even now. The relationship is disjointed and dysfunctional, no matter how you look at it. Just as Hinata did nothing to pursue a relationship with Naruto, Sasuke did nothing to pursue a relationship with Sakura and in fact practically sunk it himself. He coldly dismissed and trampling on Sakura's feelings when she poured her heart out to him in chapter 693.

Those moments made the SS plot twist even more twisted.

- Sasuke doesnt care about me at all
*Lets her fall into lava but takes Naruto and Juugo with him*
- You really do make me sick
*Murders her in a genjutsu*

All this happened in the span of a few chapters. Youd think Kishi would try to soften the blow this late in the series.

Edited by sushi., 16 September 2021 - 10:32 PM.

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