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#1 Jameshawking

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Posted 06 February 2006 - 11:08 PM

what is a drabble, anyway?

#2 PeacefulPhoenix

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Posted 07 February 2006 - 12:17 AM

omg......a drabble is a small fic that, in this case anyway, is a 100 word story/poem/w/e thing that you write that are related to the current topic, and since yout the onlky one to post, can someone delete this thread?

#3 wingsover

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Posted 07 February 2006 - 01:56 AM

So, what happened to all the old drabbles? I hope they're not deleted...damn. Does anyone happen to have saved the drabbles?


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#4 PeacefulPhoenix

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Posted 07 February 2006 - 02:26 AM

i wish, i just hope Kenhime-sama will come soon, this thread SUKS whe it was created by me...i should have just waited T____T

#5 Kenhime

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Posted 11 February 2006 - 03:49 AM

*hugs* It's okay, Unknown-Warrior1223! Thank you for making this thread, though I am no longer in charge of the drabble challenges. Plus, I can't edit your thread since I don't know how. ^^;;; Well, I find it cool that you revived the drabble challenges none the less. Oh, and please just call me Kenhime. ^^

wingsover, I am sad to say that our drabble thread has been completely lost due to the move. All that work, all that creativity and organization and wonderful commentary--all gone. =( I am sorry. I should have saved the thread!

#6 Vespar

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Posted 11 February 2006 - 03:54 PM

Sorry guys, i haven't been able to post a drabble as of late. They usually take my over an hour to write, as I tend to get picky with my own work. ^^;
That and I'm trying to finish a piece for Valentines Day. tongue.gif

And sorry wingsover. I've only got mine, as I got a weird habit to write in notepad...

#7 roshumba

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Posted 11 February 2006 - 05:34 PM

Let's start this up!! C'mon people
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Theme: Love





Naruto treated her with ramen for the first birthday they spent together.

Just friends

**

Next year, he baked her fifteen cupcakes with fifteen candles.

She knew they were the best of friends.

**

He hardly ate for months. He saved up his paychecks and bought a necklace with a gold leaf around the chain.

He gave it to her and blushed when he kissed her for the first time. It was awkward. He was her first boyfriend.

**

He disappeared, then returned to her a full year later.

Naruto brought back Sasuke.

And it was then Sakura knew Naruto truly loved her.

#8 PeacefulPhoenix

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Posted 11 February 2006 - 09:45 PM

nice drabble man, and Kenhime, or anyone who wants the thingy changed, just PM me, i'll get the thing up, and Kenhime, you can put on the topics, cause i quit

#9 Jameshawking

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Posted 12 February 2006 - 07:22 PM

Interesting drabble man, good job.

#10 roshumba

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 08:04 AM

Another one. Hopefully my petty attempts at writing can get the more skilled writers cracking. *stares at Kenhime*

Topic: Hugs

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Hinata. Naruto. The Ramen Hut.

A date?

Waiting.

Watching.

The two finished eating and were strolling through the park. And Sakura felt a dull punch to her insides when the blue haired girl suddenly threw her arms around him, and slowly but surely, his arms around her.

Waiting.

Crying.

“I saw you hug her.”

“And?”

“I didn’t like it.”

He laughed. “Silly girl.”

He hugged her then, softly and gingerly and worst of all, awkwardly.

“That’s how I hugged her. But this--” He hugged her again: surely, tightly, lovingly, and never letting her go. “This is a real hug.”

#11 Jameshawking

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 12:44 PM

*sniff sniff* Beautiful.

#12 Jameshawking

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 08:19 PM

Lime warnings in the second drabble. Not really graphic but just in case.



Theme is Love for all of them.








He would never be the same. Everything had changed. Everything had changed in one night.

It started normally with the three of them out on the town. The third had been dragged back, kicking and screaming. That was two years ago.

They had been kicked out of the second bar that night due to the blond. Their watches said half past twelve and the Uchiha had decided to go home.

Surprising both the others Sakura said she and Naruto were staying out a little longer. They didn't stay out but they did stay up. In her room she chose him.
^
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Title: Acceptance






He really couldn't move. Not that he'd complain, mind you, but still.

She was crushing him with a gentle warmth. Her breath was ragged even though minutes had passed and he took it as the greatest compliment. Her strawberry hair covered both of them, having grown oh so long the past years.

Their arms were desperately grabbing skin so helplessly, seeking warmth and comfort and confirmation. Their mouths were clamped over one another, their tongues and teeth and lips oh so hungry.

Her hips started moving again and they both groaned into each other. He's happy he can't move.
^
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Title: The Night






She never looked so beautiful, and he never looked so fine. Together they were swirled, both making one.

Through her pain she saw him, her entire body quaking. But in him she found strength, working through this torture.

She knew it was indescribable, the pain unreal, but together they'd get through it, though his hand wasn't so sure.

It was broken and crushed but long forgotten.

A much higher cry burst in the room, one meaning success and promise. Godaime mumbled congratulations to the two, smiling as she passed the baby to them. The both agreed, he'd be Sasuke.
^
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Title:Delivery.






Those are three drabbles I wrote during Global and Religion class. Hope you enjoy them.

#13 PeacefulPhoenix

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 09:01 PM

nice my friends, i hope someone sends me a new list soon......quick

#14 Jameshawking

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 11:03 PM

What did you mean by "Putty"?

#15 roshumba

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Posted 14 February 2006 - 07:22 AM

Topic: Books

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People like Sakura learn by reading. It’s what they’re best at.

Chakra control. Climbing trees. Walking on water.

Easy things for her to read and apply. At these things she was better than Sasuke or Naruto, and she prided herself in this.

But there are something things you can’t just learn from books…

The next day

“Hey, what you up to?” Naruto asked.

She blushed and hid the book behind her back. “Nothing!”

“Nothing? Doesn’t look like nothing to me.”

He reached around and snatched the book from her hands.

Sakura ran away screaming. Naruto’s nose bled.

Icha Icha Paradise.


#16 Jameshawking

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Posted 14 February 2006 - 04:56 PM

rofl. ROSHUMBA! HILARIOUS!

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Posted 14 February 2006 - 05:03 PM

It was normal for the preteens to stand on the bridge semi-silently. It was normal for them to wait.

However, it wasn't normal for his blond to be talking to his love in a low tone.

"I understand Sakura. He makes you high, makes you feel real." he said. He turned up and he showed her his tears.

"But he makes you cry too, though he knows just how you feel. But Sakura, it's you who makes me high. You make me real even when you make me cry." he said.

The men were surprised when she grabbed him.

"Arigato."


Title: Admission


Love, obviously.

#18 PeacefulPhoenix

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Posted 17 February 2006 - 02:40 AM

someone, ANYONE, send me a list PLZ< or post it yourself, cause now it changes every week, plz, help me

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Posted 17 February 2006 - 07:26 PM

I have a few that might be fun... just delete them if you don't like happy.gif()

1) Sand box
2) Board games
3) A march (like a walk)
4) Giggles
5) A new hair style

Love is everything.




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