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#1061 Chatte

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Posted 26 December 2020 - 12:08 AM

Oooh I am so curious to see how that scene is gonna be interpreted by the author. 😍

I love to see our different views on common subjects.

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Posted 03 January 2021 - 09:13 PM

Oh, I love how this is going and I know it's going to get much sweeter.



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Posted 29 January 2021 - 12:17 AM

Okay, guys here it is a brand new page for all of us to enjoy and I think this is another good page.

 

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I mean that look Sakura is giving Naruto right now :excited: :excited: :excited:


Edited by TheFirstEvil100, 29 January 2021 - 12:18 AM.


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Posted 29 January 2021 - 12:23 AM

Omgggg this is so good! Aaah!

Her very well known look that it's only reserved for the knucklehead


Edited by Chatte, 29 January 2021 - 12:24 AM.

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Posted 29 January 2021 - 01:37 AM

I like that Sakura has got her pony tail for this as it shows how serious Naruto has been wounded.

Shikamaru's face feel a little off to me though.



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Posted 29 January 2021 - 02:31 AM

Finally, a new page. 


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Posted 29 January 2021 - 04:25 AM

Me needs some more damn it 


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Posted 29 January 2021 - 05:07 AM

Me needs some more damn it 

 Sadly we probably have to wait another month



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Posted 29 January 2021 - 02:24 PM

Okay, guys here it is a brand new page for all of us to enjoy and I think this is another good page.

 

naruto_doujin__alternative_the_last_ch_0

I mean that look Sakura is giving Naruto right now :excited: :excited: :excited:

 

Homage to when she was healing him after the fight with Orochimaru I see :smile:


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Posted 29 January 2021 - 07:16 PM

I like that Sakura has got her pony tail for this as it shows how serious Naruto has been wounded.

Shikamaru's face feel a little off to me though.

 

 

Homage to when she was healing him after the fight with Orochimaru I see :smile:

For me it's more of a homage to moment when she was "serious" after timeskip, while healing Kankuro, that was first time Naruto was shocked by how far she progressed as ninja-medic.

Nice page.



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Posted 29 January 2021 - 08:01 PM

True but if you ask me that look is only when she is contemplating what she feels for Naruto. Pure concentration doesn't really look like that, coming from Sakura


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Posted 29 January 2021 - 08:28 PM

Well, I'm just happy we are getting some real NaruSaku.



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Posted 29 January 2021 - 09:46 PM

Well, I'm just happy we are getting some real NaruSaku.


Yep since in the movie it's the scene where Sakura said Naruto only loved her cause he didn't want to lose to Sasuke so the comic is hopefully going to go the opposite way.

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Posted 30 January 2021 - 12:01 AM

Finally, a new page. 

 

Tell me about it, Derock! :) I'm glad it's here!

 

 

I mean that look Sakura is giving Naruto right now :excited: :excited: :excited:

 

Right!?



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Posted 13 February 2021 - 08:02 PM

Okay, guys here it is a brand new page for all of us to enjoy and I think this is another good page.
 
naruto_doujin__alternative_the_last_ch_0
I mean that look Sakura is giving Naruto right now :excited: :excited: :excited:

 
First of all, its good that this site never got shutdown because it was down during the cloudware purge of manga websites. 
 
Pros: I find this page reminds of the very first arc of Part the Sunakagure Arc where Sakura healed Gaara's brother. That Arc was the most highlighted of Sakura's character because Kishi during that time really portray her to be 100% FML. Her medic and combat skills were at the peak just before Kishi gave into popularity polls (one of the very first Part 2 interviews he states that Sakura was not popular).
 
Overall, the NaruSaku scene was very cute. this Sakura has not only grown but accepted her feelings towards Naruto. In the past as her kid or teenage self, she would get annoyed and in most cases SP would turn her into a Tsundere and hit Naruto (I admit. It was one of the few things I ever like about SP writing Sakura's character lol). Or maybe it's because Naruto's facial expression and sleep talking did not display any perverted thought or him being in heat  :lmao:
 
Cons: This has never bothered me in the past because I know Tokai is a one-man job. He does not have a crew like a professional mangaka would have at his/hers side.
 
And on top of that, Chinese Wuxia light novels adapted to manhua (Chinese comics) commonly has a very fast pacing and normally skips a lot of detail from the novel itself. For an example take a 5000 chapter LN. It's manhua counter part can  can cover over a 100 novel chapter within 10 comic chapters of illustration. Most cases, readers that have not read the original would get very confused because the story is jumping from one place to another. It just personal preference that I don't mind the pacing
 
But I feel like Tokai should not have skipped the NaruSaku scene. The con of this page is how did Shika and Sai got here? If I remember correctly, Naruto and Sakura got spit up from them at the bonefire/camp and went after Hinata. If I recalled correctly, they were no where near NaruSaku pair (the fight with Toneri), especially, when they fell into the crater which is now the cave. This current page feels like Tokai skipped an entire chapter on NaruSaku scene and Shika/Sai discovering them in the crater.
 
Overall, it presumably to say that the NaruSaku scene that that was high anticipated was off screen. Or maybe Shika and Sai was right behind them all this time and we have yet to have the NaruSaku scene where in the original was the NaruSaku scene of separation. At this point I'm completely lost at the current pacing of the story  :shrug:

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Posted 13 February 2021 - 11:10 PM

 
First of all, its good that this site never got shutdown because it was down during the cloudware purge of manga websites. 
 
Pros: I find this page reminds of the very first arc of Part the Sunakagure Arc where Sakura healed Gaara's brother. That Arc was the most highlighted of Sakura's character because Kishi during that time really portray her to be 100% FML. Her medic and combat skills were at the peak just before Kishi gave into popularity polls (one of the very first Part 2 interviews he states that Sakura was not popular).
 
Overall, the NaruSaku scene was very cute. this Sakura has not only grown but accepted her feelings towards Naruto. In the past as her kid or teenage self, she would get annoyed and in most cases SP would turn her into a Tsundere and hit Naruto (I admit. It was one of the few things I ever like about SP writing Sakura's character lol). Or maybe it's because Naruto's facial expression and sleep talking did not display any perverted thought or him being in heat  :lmao:
 
Cons: This has never bothered me in the past because I know Tokai is a one-man job. He does not have a crew like a professional mangaka would have at his/hers side.
 
And on top of that, Chinese Wuxia light novels adapted to manhua (Chinese comics) commonly has a very fast pacing and normally skips a lot of detail from the novel itself. For an example take a 5000 chapter LN. It's manhua counter part can  can cover over a 100 novel chapter within 10 comic chapters of illustration. Most cases, readers that have not read the original would get very confused because the story is jumping from one place to another. It just personal preference that I don't mind the pacing
 
But I feel like Tokai should not have skipped the NaruSaku scene. The con of this page is how did Shika and Sai got here? If I remember correctly, Naruto and Sakura got spit up from them at the bonefire/camp and went after Hinata. If I recalled correctly, they were no where near NaruSaku pair (the fight with Toneri), especially, when they fell into the crater which is now the cave. This current page feels like Tokai skipped an entire chapter on NaruSaku scene and Shika/Sai discovering them in the crater.
 
Overall, it presumably to say that the NaruSaku scene that that was high anticipated was off screen. Or maybe Shika and Sai was right behind them all this time and we have yet to have the NaruSaku scene where in the original was the NaruSaku scene of separation. At this point I'm completely lost at the current pacing of the story  :shrug:

 

One thing you forgot is Sasuke's appearance at the end of the previous chapter. He's going to appear again (possibly) so he's probably the reason why Shikamaru and Sai suddenly appeared now.


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Posted 14 February 2021 - 01:45 AM

One thing you forgot is Sasuke's appearance at the end of the previous chapter. He's going to appear again (possibly) so he's probably the reason why Shikamaru and Sai suddenly appeared now.


Definitely, and we likely will see a flashback to what happened exactly too.

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Posted 22 February 2021 - 08:24 AM

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Guess what guys? We got a new page!



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Posted 22 February 2021 - 11:37 AM

Well we are getting alot more sasuke in this than the actual movie XD

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Posted 22 February 2021 - 04:52 PM

Got to say I was getting rather worried that we were following a beat for beat scenario of the story we got for a while (aside from the changes we've seen so far from the beginning), but this is actually rather nice. 


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