Strange Days
Started by TokehGecko, Jun 28 2006 01:26 AM
11 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 28 June 2006 - 01:26 AM
Hi there! Ah, just wandering here... Heh.
I posted a new Fanfic, and it kinda is NaruSaku, so maybe you'd be interested. It's my first finished one, as it is a oneshot.
Strange Days: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3013062/1/
Well, hope you like
I posted a new Fanfic, and it kinda is NaruSaku, so maybe you'd be interested. It's my first finished one, as it is a oneshot.
Strange Days: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3013062/1/
Well, hope you like
#2
Posted 28 June 2006 - 01:55 AM
Yo! Tokehgekoh! XD Fancy seeing you here.
Now all we need is SOC and we'll have an unholy triumvirate of writers.
Anyways, it looks good, kept me interested all the way through at least (though, er, given you wrote it and i respect yoru work i would have read through entirely *anyway* ) ... that's it i guess. Nothing horribly constructive in terms of critisism 'cuz a) i'm too tired to think of anything and B) there is no b.
Now all we need is SOC and we'll have an unholy triumvirate of writers.
Anyways, it looks good, kept me interested all the way through at least (though, er, given you wrote it and i respect yoru work i would have read through entirely *anyway* ) ... that's it i guess. Nothing horribly constructive in terms of critisism 'cuz a) i'm too tired to think of anything and B) there is no b.
#4
Posted 28 June 2006 - 02:09 AM
Well, because the great NaruSaku Fic Listing has Great NaruSaku Fics, I imagine... I didn't think it would be good enough to place it there...
Man, Lackey! I didn't know you were a member here too! Great to see you again! I noticed an Author Note Chapter in Betrothal *grumble* But meh... kitten happens, What can you do? I haven't spoken to SOC in a long while, btw... Alden neither...
Man, Lackey! I didn't know you were a member here too! Great to see you again! I noticed an Author Note Chapter in Betrothal *grumble* But meh... kitten happens, What can you do? I haven't spoken to SOC in a long while, btw... Alden neither...
#5
Posted 28 June 2006 - 02:37 AM
WOA that was freaking long, I love it. Naruto is the hokage, But tsunade die by bringing them back to life.
I am gonna start crying, J/K Keep up the good work.
I am gonna start crying, J/K Keep up the good work.
I be there in 2 months YAAY!
#6 Guest_jtl889_*
Posted 28 June 2006 - 03:07 PM
thanx for the fic tokehgecko
#7
Posted 28 June 2006 - 03:43 PM
Really good work Gecko! It may have seemed a bit rushed but that really didnt make a big difference.
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#8
Posted 28 June 2006 - 06:03 PM
QUOTE (TokehGecko @ Jun 27 2006, 10:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, because the great NaruSaku Fic Listing has Great NaruSaku Fics, I imagine... I didn't think it would be good enough to place it there...
Man, Lackey! I didn't know you were a member here too! Great to see you again! I noticed an Author Note Chapter in Betrothal *grumble* But meh... kitten happens, What can you do? I haven't spoken to SOC in a long while, btw... Alden neither...
Man, Lackey! I didn't know you were a member here too! Great to see you again! I noticed an Author Note Chapter in Betrothal *grumble* But meh... kitten happens, What can you do? I haven't spoken to SOC in a long while, btw... Alden neither...
Ah, it's just the Heaven & Earth Fanfiction Library, no "Great".
And the contest just needed more adjectives.
Fanfiction.net C2: Heaven & Earth: A NaruSaku Library
#9
Posted 26 July 2006 - 07:17 PM
that was really good u have a knack for writing
#10
Posted 26 July 2006 - 07:27 PM
great job congrats
#11
Posted 02 August 2006 - 02:28 AM
I love Shikamaru's character in this story, it's better then most of the times I've seen him in other fanfics. Keep on writing!
#12
Posted 12 August 2006 - 10:35 PM
That was beautiful I nearly cry in that story. Please you gotta do another because that was fanastic.
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Let light be our guide towards victory
Whenever there's despair there's a darkness, whenever there's hope there's a light and it's up to us to bring in that light.
Let light be our guide towards victory
Whenever there's despair there's a darkness, whenever there's hope there's a light and it's up to us to bring in that light.
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