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[narusaku256]

A closet SasuHina shipper...I see XD

[ns.Believe.It]

Hey, thanks for that. That was pretty good 

[starlitestarbrite]

*chapters' 614-615:my version.*
[author note summary: my spin on chapters' 614-615.]
*after neji blocks hinata who blocks naruto . neji's the one stabbed *
naruto: we need a freaking medic!...SAKURA-CHAN WE NEED YOU NOW!
tsunade: go on ahead.
sakura: -runs out there- what happened naruto?
neji: no...-caughs up blood- its too late
*sakura's using her mystic palm*
neji: hinata's willing to die for you naruto...just like...
*flashback*
hiashi: your father hizashi chose to die...in my place...he felt his destiny was to protect the head of the main branch.
*end*
neji: i guess that was my destiny to...to protect the head of the main branch
hinata: -eyes water-
sakura: the wounds are too deep...
neji: the words you said back during the chuunin exams' freed me from the shackles of my curse
naruto: -eyes water-
*flashback*
neji: losers will always be losers' that will never change.let me just ask you this: why do you try hard to fight against your destiny?
naruto: because i...was called a loser
*end*
naruto: why would you do this for me?
neji:because i...was called a genius. i'm no longer the caged bird.
sakura: hinata, take him to gai-sensei. naruto? me, and you lets go..
*hinata takes neji to gai while naruto, and sakura now decide to fight together against tobito*
tobito: try saying it again!. i thought you were going to save, and protect your friends...
sakura: why don't you can it already!? naruto has saved so, many lives you wouldn't know about. he's rescued the kazekage, saved our village, and, tried to get our old teammate back, and all you guys want to do -eyes water-...all you freaking akatsuki nuts...want to use him for your own selfish reason...i got news for you tobito that's not going to happen!
tobito: -stares wide eyed at sakura- could it be?
sakura: our sensei kakashi told us once...a person who breaks the rules is scum, but one who betrays their comrades are worse than scum
tobito: kakashi?
*flashback*
obito: but to betray your comrade is worse than scum! -runs in the cave to try, and save rin*
*end*
naruto: sakura-chan?
*meanwhile with team gai*
hinata: -crying-sakura-san couldn't save him
lee: -closes eyes- soar high old rival...and friend
*flashback[warning-filler]*
lee: i will be stronger than you -points to neji-
neji: that'll be the day...the hyuugas are strongest.
lee: you just wait!
*end*
gai: -closes eyes- you've accomplished your goal...that's how a shinobi should be
*flashback[warning-filler]*
gai: but, don't you have any goals'? tenten wants to be a sanin like tsunade, lee wants to be a taijutsu sensei like myself.
neji: my goal?.to be noticed, and remembered as a hero
*end*
gai: you wont be forgotten.
tenten: -holds back tears-
*flashback[warning-filler]*
tenten: *is trying to toss kunais' at the tree as target practace*
*neji walks up*
tenten: dang it! i need a better aim!
neji: your getting better at that
tenten: -blush- but, i don't have a byakugan like you, i'm not as strong as lee, or gai-sensei, and i'm not as powerful as lady tsunade!
neji: maybe it's not your destiny to be like them, and you don't need a byakugan to be a good kunoichi. plus even the strongest have their weak moments.
*end*
tenten:-closes eyes as tears stream down- even the weak have their strong moments to.
*meanwhile back to tobito*
maadara: hey!? tobito snap out of it, and fight them already!
naruto: i'll give everyone some of my chakra while theres no event
*naruto gives everyone some chakra*
sakura: well,? why are you just standing there?
maadara: THATS WHAT I WANT TO KNOW TO! tobito! i will kick your butt too if you don't finish them off!
tobito: -snaps out of it- what have i done? -eyes water-
naruto: -runs back over- -laughs- did you make him cry sakura-chan?
sakura: i'm...not sure
tobito:maadara?
maadara: what now? did you forget the plan already?
tobito: i'm putting you back in the grave where you belong...i had the power to change the world and because of you i was turned into a villan!. but, first...kamui no jutsu!
*naruto, and sakura are in the kamui dimension*
naruto: HEY! GET US OUT OF HERE!
sakura: i think he's...saving us
naruto: -eyes water- but, i wanted to save everyone...i wanted to protect the village -cries- just like the fourth hokage...my father.
sakura: naruto. sometimes...it's okay to let others do things for you, and protect YOU for a change.
*they hug*
*back to tobito*
maadara: GREAT TRAP! now we can get them inside
tobito: no,EVERYONE YOU HAVE TO ATTACK US AT ONCE !
maadara: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
tobito: protecting my sensei's village
kakashi: wait...that's...
tobito: the ninetails was sealed into the son of my sensei...minato namikaze...the fourth hokage...i'm putting YOU back in the grave maadara.
kakashi: -sweatdrop- yup...that's obito.
*back in kamui*
*sakura, and naruto kiss*
THE END

[starlitestarbrite]

*picnic*
[author note summary-naruto, and sakura, and minato, and kushina all go on a picnic together]
*the girls are laying out the blanket while the boys lay out the food*
minato: so, naruto. you, and sakura ever plan on getting married?
naruto: i hope so! some day!
kushina: well, you two'll be a great couple! just like us.
sakura: yeah. -smiles- so, what was it like when you two were dating? did you two start out as friends?
kushina: well, to be honest at first i thought minato was obnoxious, and annoying. but, as we got to know eachother we became closer. we weren't on the same team though.
minato: you two are lucky that your on the same team!. i bet you see eachother every day!.
sakura: yeah, . it was kinda like that with us at first. i used to think naruto was obnoxious, and annoying. he's still a goofball but, i love that about him. his personality is so uplifting
naruto: -blush-
kushina: looks like you found a girl like me after all naruto. thats how i feel about minato to.
naruto: see dad? she's got a short fuse to...like you said mom does when she's mad -laughs-
kushina/sakura: YOU SAID WHAT!?
minato: -scratches head, and laughs- it was a joke
sakura:NAAARRRUUUTTTOOO
kushina:MIIINNNAAATTTOOO
*they both try to run. later naruto, and minato are tied to a treee*
minato: comeon why don't we get any?
kushina: you two should have thaught about that before you insult us
sakura: yeah.
naruto: sakura-chaaan
minato:kushina-chaaan
*much later they load up, and walk home*
minato: well, see you two later
kushina: we should all do this again some day.
sakura/naruto: definantly!
*minato, and kushina hug, and kiss*
naruto: i hope we're like them someday
sakura: i believe we already are!
*sakura, and naruto hug, and kiss*
THE END

[ns.Believe.It]

Excellent writing as usual. I like your version of 614-615 a ten times better than Kishi's 

 

The picnic story is wonderful

 

kushina: we should all do this again some day.
sakura/naruto: definantly!
*minato, and kushina hug, and kiss*
naruto: i hope we're like them someday
sakura: i believe we already are!
*sakura, and naruto hug, and kiss*

 

So sweet to read. I hope you make more omakes on these four together(maybe on a mission or in their house). That would be wonderful to read. 

[narusaku256]

Call it a strange irony but any material regarding NS or MK or even sweeter, both of them together, it always turns out to be awesome!

[starlitestarbrite]

* more than umeboshi*
[author note summary: sakura haruno's favorite food is umeboshi...naruto uzumaki's is ramen noodles. but, their hearts pine for something more than food could ever give them.]
*pre-timeskip valentines day-naruto/sakura age:12*
*sakura, naruton and sasuke are at the academy*
sakura: sooo sasuke. todays valentines day!
sasuke: hn.
naruto: hey sakura-chan? i made you a card
sakura: -takes it- i'll read it later!
*one day during naruto's three year journey wondering with jiyaia. naruto/sakura age:13*
sakura: *she looked through her old notes. there was an unopened valentines day card she took it, and opened it. it read:
"hi sakura-chan!
i like you more than ramen! happy valentines day
from naruto
p.s sasuke-teme's a jerk. he don't deserve a pretty girl like you."*
sakura: -eyes water- -she clutches it to her chest- why was i so cruel to you?...i was no better than sasuke was...
*timeskip october 16th sweetest day: naruto/sakura age:16*
*naruto had been outside training his rasenshurikan with kakashi for hours sakura braught a basket of umeboshi, and a note tucked inside*
sakura: hey...your training hard i see
naruto: yeah. hi sakura-chan!
sakura: just thought you would like a snack. i made these. -she sat the basket down and walked on.
naruto: THANKS SAKURA-CHAN!
*that night under the stars naruto looks at his note it reads:
hey naruto.
don't wear yourself out...i never told you but, i'm REALLY glad your back. these are my favorite type of foods. i'm sure they'll be good for you to. i love you more than umeboshi
from sakura
p.s take a bite before reading the next part"*
naruto: -takes a bite- eeeh? too salty...and kinda tangy!...-reads the last part-
"p.p.s: you just ate salty plums'. see fruits, and vegtables wont hurt you.!!!"*
*the next day*
sakura: -thinks- oh no...did i write love?, or like? oh goodness...why do i feel like i over did it with the note!?-
-sakura runs in to naruto outside-
naruto: sakura-chan. thanks for the basket of food, and the note. it was all really sweet.
*they hug*
sakura: i meant it with all my heart.
naruto: so, we should definantly be girlfriend/boyfriend.
sakura: well, i do like you more than umeboshi -blushes-
naruto: sakura-chan i love you more than ramen!
sakura: wait...i DID write love?
naruto: yes,. i knew you'd come around someday
*they both start kissing. *
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 27 August 2014 - 07:16 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

 Hehehe, this love affair was pretty straightforward and easily understandable unlike Kishimoto's. He's dragged it for too long. Btw nice callback to that rasenshuriken training filler episode. 

[starlitestarbrite]

*fourth of july fireworks*
[author note summary:minato, kushina, naruto, and sakura all watching the fireworks]
naruto: know what i like about fireworks?
sakura: what?
naruto: they're like the stars. magical.like starbursting into pretty lights
sakura: yeah. they're really pretty. enspecially when your with someone you love.
naruto: -blushes-
*they hug*
*lee and gai run past them holding sparklers*
gai: FROM NOW ON THE FOURTH OF JULY SHOULD BE CALLED YOUTH DAY!
lee:WHY'S THAT GAI-SENSEI!?
gai:BECAUSE FIRE WORKS ARE LIKE THE FIREY SPIRIT OF THE SOUL!
lee: THATS A GREAT REASON!
gai/lee: HAPPY YOUTHDAY EVERYONE!!!
minato: those two are really weird
kushina: yeah
*lee runs over and lights a sparkler for sakura*
lee: for you. may both of you have a long youthful romance-runs off-
minato: yikes just a warning naruto...never tick off your girlfriend while she's holding fireworks
-kushina bonks minato on the head-
*naruto, and sakura. minato, and kushina all kiss*
THE END

[narusaku256]

I'd really like for Kushina to be reanimated once everyone is freed from IT XD. I mean Minato is already there...Naruto and especially Sakura....is also there! Minato got his chance with Naruto so I think Kushina deserves one as well! It'll really be a BLAST to this family together XD. If only they lived......sigh... :(

[starlitestarbrite]

I'm trying to figure out how I can do my own version of the end of the manga/chapter 690. I feel it could have been so much better, and more interesting!. it seemed so short, and rushed. any ideas'?

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 30 August 2014 - 04:23 PM.

[narusaku256]

I'm trying to figure out how I can do my own version of the end of the manga/chapter 690. I feel it could have been so much better, and more interesting!. it seemed so short, and rushed. any ideas'?

It was indeed a rushed chapter which quite oddly, makes me curious for the next one! Is there some plot twist? I don't know,...but the possibility cannot be denied! But I do think the war has ended...soooooo....

Btw, something just hit me when I read the manga for the second time on the day it was released! You know, like....all the kages including Naruto's dad...team 7, Hagoromo and all the tailed beast...everyone is reunited at one place annnndddd Minato's and Naruto's words, like..Minato says, "Welcome back Naruto" and then Naruto's answer, "huh? Dad....." Something really tells me that it is Naruto's birthday the next chapter and if not the next, maybe in the next upcoming 3-4 chapters? You sure can write an omake on that one...like...IF things went this way!

I hope I could be of some help to you

[starlitestarbrite]

*it's over...*
[author note summary: well, the wars over FINNALLY!...well,my verson on how chapter 690 could have ended]
*after sakura, kakashi, naruto, and sasuke seal kaguya*
sakura: hey sasuke?...over here! -waves- wheres naruto?
kakashi: i was going to ask that same thing
sasuke: he said he had one more thing to take care of!.
*after taking care of black zetsu naruto appears*
naruto: we did it! -holds thumb up-
sakura: -grins at naruto- hi naruto.
naruto: hey sakura-chan!.
*hagromo, and the edo hokage show up*
minato: welcome back naruto
naruto: huh?...dad?...OH I HAVE TO GIVE YOU BACK YOUR ARMS!
*naruto grows minato back his arms*
naruto: there. now everything's complete -grins and scratches head-
hagoromo: well, i'll send everyone back now-
tobirama: wait...minato?...remember that "surprise" you asked about?
naruto: eh?...a surprise?
*kushina shows up*
kushina: naruto!...i knew you would save the world!
*naruto and kushina hug*
kushina: AND ON YOUR BIRTHDAY TO!
minato: happy birthday naruto!. surprise! your mom, and i got to see you change the world!, and turn...um...18 right?
sakura: aw, that's so sweet!
naruto: -eyes water- thank you both! -cries-
*minato, naruto, and kushina group hug*
minato: hey?...why not let that girlfriend of yours join us?
kushina: -gasps- you have a girlfriend now to!?
naruto: well, sakura-chan? want to make it official?
sakura: -blush- yes! -runs into naruto's arms-
*now they all four group hug*
sakura: happy birthday naruto
naruto: thanks sakura-chan! *kisses her forehead*

sakura:-blush-
sasuke: sensei? you said this would be our last mission as a team.
kakashi: yes. our last mission as a team...as student, and sensei...next time if we're teamed up. it'll be as comrade ninja. what? did you expect a tragic ending?
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
*sakura and naruto kiss*

THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 30 August 2014 - 05:30 PM.

[narusaku256]

Wow! That was quick XD! But I just have 5 words.....'If only they were there :)(btw 'they' points to Kushina and Minato)

[ns.Believe.It]

Brilliant omake! I love the NaruSaku-MinaKushi interactons  

 

If I may, can I suggest one idea that comes to my mind? After Kaguya gets sealed and Team Seven gets back, an interaction between Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke -where the love triangle gets resolved. Maybe include Hinata as well and have Naruto let her down. By the end of that interaction NS gets closure.

[starlitestarbrite]

*...closure*
[author note summary: the other half of my omake! "it's over...".]
*the scene changes and naruto, sakura, sasuke, nd kakashi are back in their world, and everyone else is slowly awakening*
minato: well, son...when your hokage...good luck!
kushina: -sniffs- oh your so cute now! -hugs naruto-
naruto: moom...too...tight!
tobirama: let this be a lesson to everyone...EDO TENSAI IS NOT A TOY!
hagoromo: well, so long everyone!
sarutobi: naruto. thank you for being a role model for my grandson konohamaru.
naruto: your welcome jiji!

minato/kushina: we love you naruto.

naruto: I love you both to!
*hagoromo, and the hokage shoot off like stars*
sasuke: hn.
hinata: naruto-kun! -runs up to him-
naruto: hi hinata
hinata: so...i decided to stop chasing after you...when the war was over -hangs head, and eyes water-
naruto: eh?...chasing after me? i thought you just admired me.
hinata: -face goes red from embarrassement- w-what?
sakura: -sweatdrop- as oblivious as usual.
hinata:you...-blushes- i'm sorry!
naruto: sorry hinata...sakura-chan's always been the only girl i've been focused on. i guess i never noticed you.
*hinata faints*
sasuke: so...sakura?
sakura: yes sasuke?
sasuke: you've had a crush on me since we were twelve.
sakura: -sighs- sasuke...i thought i did love you once. but, you know...the more i got to know naruto i realized he's so much more than you'll ever be. i'm not that ditzy shallow girl from the academy days...i'm sakura haruno...kunoichi. i only THOUGHT i liked you. but, now...i KNOW i love naruto.
sasuke: -smiles- glad your not a fangirl anymore.
sakura: by the way...if you try to kill me, or naruto again i'm kicking your ass all the way to suna!
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
*naruto and sakura hug*
sakura: guess we all have closure now?
naruto: yeah...now that everythings over lets go get some ramen!

*sakura and naruto gaze into eachothers eyes*

sakura: I love you naruto.

naruto: I love you too sakura-chan. always have, and always will
*naruto and sakura kiss*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 30 August 2014 - 08:33 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

THAT. WAS. BEAUTIFUL 

 

 Wow, It took me one hour to come up with a suggestion and you make an omake in TWENTY minutes!!! You have some serious writing talent.

[questdrivencollie]

lol I keep giggling at Gaia and Leah. lol That needs to be a fan art, seriously...maybe I should try drawing it.

 

Nice omakes. I like the last two from 690 best.

[starlitestarbrite]

*non-omake. website rec.*
[author note summary: I'm looking for something, through another site!]
ever heard of the way back machine? it's a website cache archive that allowed you to visit a site's history. I was using it to go back, and read some posts on here since some have that blue link, and it wont work so I use the way back machine to do it lol.

it works for the picture thread. but, there's one thread it wont work on yet...this one:http://www.narusaku....showtopic=12780. or at all. I wanted to read all those. guess it'll always be a mistery lol.

but, i think I found the old NS library https://web.archive..../fanartfics.htm, and https://web.archive..../fanartfics.htm it would have been cool to visit the NS fansites'. why'd they take them down?. I wanted to read the YKYLNSTMW on this one: https://web.archive.....net/indexx.php

[you know you like narusaku too much when...] I like "you know when you" lists. I used to visit sailor moon ones all the time. i hope someday there are more naruto fansites to visit. there's always ff.net, and deviant art, and online forums like this one. but, there need to be more narusaku sites, and fun naruto sites lol

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 15 March 2015 - 07:56 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*sakura day*
[author note summary:sakura's birthday is march 28th...but every april 3d naruto talks about it being "sakura day"]
*since naruto's on a mission she decides to tidy up his apartment, and buy fresh milk, and cup of ramen noodles for him to surprise him when he returns*
sakura: he'll be so shocked when he comes back!...-she looks at the calendar- why is april 3d circled?...and why does it say "sakura day my fav. holiday"?...is this his april fools joke or something? -sweatdrops- or maybe theres a festival in town?
*in tsunade's office*
sakura: so, naruto's comming back in two days?
tsunade: yes...apparently he made up his own holiday. he's had it ever since he was around ten.
sakura: ...so, there's no cherry blosson festival this week?
tsunade: nope.
sakura: -thinks- then what IS sakura day?...my birthday's on the 28th of march...he wouldn't forget that...he's a knucklehead but he seems to remember the important things when it comes to birthdays', and stuff-
*on April 3d. naruto walks into tsunade's office to let her know the mission was a success. sakura was there to welcome him back*
sakura: HI NARUTO!
*they hug*
naruto: hi sakura-chan!. hey "granny" the mission's complete.
sakura: what did you have to do anyway?
naruto: well, since chouji was under the weather i filled in for him on shikamaru, and ino's mission.
sakura:let me guess...he ate so much he had a "food hangover", and couldn't stop vomiting?
naruto: yeah. who knew you could get intoxicated by food.
*later sakura, and naruto go to ichiraku*
naruto: so, -slurps noodles- what did you do when i was away sakura-chan?.
sakura: oh the usual. just help out at the yamanaka flower shop. *she was saving her surprise about taking care of his apartment while he was away for later*
*later: at naruto's*
naruto: waw! the apartment's cleaner than when when i was here last...OH NO! WAS MY STUFF STOLEN?
sakura: -giggles as naruto runs around panicing-
naruto: -checks the mini-fridge- -gasps- RAMEN!...who bought groceris? maybe it was kakashi-sensei?
sakura: no. naruto. it was me!. SURPRISE! i always take care of your apartment, and restock your groceries while your on missions'.
naruto: -blushes- thank you sakura-chan!...this was the best "sakura day" ever.
sakura: what is sakura day?
naruto: well,...it's when i first fell in love with you...it started out as a crush, and over time formed into love.
sakura: -blushes-
naruto: so, i dedicate the day...every april third...in honor of you sakura-chan.
sakura: -eyes water-
naruto: you became, and always will be the only person who saw me for who i was., and refused to let me just hide away...you break through my shell.
sakura: -cries- you break through my shell to naruto. i have an idea...let's consider this OUR holiday. naruto, and sakura day
naruto: -eyes water- sounds great sakura-chan! -realises something- hey?...NarutoSakura...NaruSaku...I GET IT!
sakura: -sweatdrop- you JUST figured that out?
*both laugh*
*sakura, and naruto kiss*
every april third...narusaku day! lol

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 01 September 2014 - 11:08 PM.