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#61 Derock

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Posted 18 October 2020 - 03:47 AM

Maybe... the Otsutsukis are supernatural beings. I may go into that route. 


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Posted 20 October 2020 - 02:19 AM

Maybe... the Otsutsukis are supernatural beings. I may go into that route. 

 

It does seem like it could work :smile:



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Posted 20 October 2020 - 09:56 AM

Maybe... the Otsutsukis are supernatural beings. I may go into that route. 

Well in my story they do remain gods. It's just that I plan on having a counter for their godlike abilities. :D

 

Also, I finally have the cover for my story drawn by Pumiih  :th_yeah:

 

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Posted 20 October 2020 - 04:27 PM

Well in my story they do remain gods. It's just that I plan on having a counter for their godlike abilities. :D

 

Also, I finally have the cover for my story drawn by Pumiih  :th_yeah:

 

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:wow:  :wow:  :wow:  :wow:  :wow:

 

That drawing looks amazing!!!


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Posted 20 October 2020 - 04:53 PM

Well in my story they do remain gods. It's just that I plan on having a counter for their godlike abilities. :D

 

Also, I finally have the cover for my story drawn by Pumiih  :th_yeah:

 

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WOW!! :D  :woot: Pumiih does it again!



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Posted 20 October 2020 - 06:10 PM

:wow:  :wow:  :wow:  :wow:  :wow:

 

That drawing looks amazing!!!

Thank yooou!!

 

 

WOW!! :D  :woot: Pumiih does it again!

Yes she dooes!

 

She always manages to put my vision into the best visual expression!

 

I don't know what I would do without her!

 

I talked thoroughly with her on this one cuz each piece of this cover has a symbolism behind it. :D

 

But yeah, I don't know what I'd do without Pumiih, lol.


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Posted 20 October 2020 - 09:22 PM

I may need to contact Pumiih for the designs of Natsumi and Michiru.


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Posted 20 October 2020 - 09:24 PM

I may need to contact Pumiih for the designs of Natsumi and Michiru.

 

I know I'd love to as well. Heck, someone I talked to on Tumblr drew how I had redesigned Naruto in their own style for my fanfic, and I gotta tell ya... it made me tickled pink! :smile: :D



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Posted 23 October 2020 - 09:23 AM

I may need to contact Pumiih for the designs of Natsumi and Michiru.

If I'd have enough money, I'd hire her lol.

 

Jk, but yeah, she's a real talent.


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Posted 23 October 2020 - 07:58 PM

Thanks to the Debate thread, I got some good research for Natsumi's dialogue and responses towards the NH/SS couple fiasco. As I said before, it may be tricky, but it will work out at the end.  :wink:


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Posted 24 October 2020 - 07:59 AM

Ooh, I saw!! Can't wait for you to put it into actual plot and see how it all unfolds. :D Curious to see your take on it. :D


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Posted 24 October 2020 - 03:37 PM

Ooh, I saw!! Can't wait for you to put it into actual plot and see how it all unfolds. :D Curious to see your take on it. :D

 

And all of this makes me wanna start up my thread for Naruto: The Demon Within.



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Posted 24 October 2020 - 07:01 PM

 

And all of this makes me wanna start up my thread for Naruto: The Demon Within.

Why don't you? Lol.

 

I've been thinking if I should do the same for Kaika Saisei to be honest. 

 

We've been spamming Derock's thread for quite a while, lol.

 

LE: Derock, I am really curious to see your take on the relationships like I said, and how this side ties in the plot overall.

 

I took to to the next level so to speak, and solving the relationships will also have to do with some power-ups, bue hue hue hue hue.


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Posted 24 October 2020 - 07:04 PM

Why don't you? Lol.

 

I've been thinking if I should do the same for Kaika Saisei to be honest. 

 

We've been spamming Derock's thread for quite a while, lol.

 

I don't mind!   :hehehe:


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Posted 25 October 2020 - 07:30 AM

LE: Derock, I am really curious to see your take on the relationships like I said, and how this side ties in the plot overall.

 

I took to to the next level so to speak, and solving the relationships will also have to do with some power-ups, bue hue hue hue hue.

 

Oh, trust me. The relationships will be a wild ride, especially when I'm handling the "canon" couples' fallouts! The drama llamas, as our once member Yoko always mentioned when she was active here, are coming big time! 


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Posted 26 October 2020 - 02:01 AM

Oh, trust me. The relationships will be a wild ride, especially when I'm handling the "canon" couples' fallouts! The drama llamas, as our once member Yoko always mentioned when she was active here, are coming big time! 

 

Now there's a name I haven't heard in a long time. I forgot how many people we lost due to the fallout from the ending.



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Posted 26 October 2020 - 09:28 PM

I won't reveal this until later but:

 

Inspiration


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Posted 27 October 2020 - 02:46 PM

OH MY I am so curious to see that manipulation thing.

 

At some point I wanted to use this manipulation aspect for Sakura's background. But then I changed it because I went for another concept that I think it fits her better given all the symbolism and everything.

 

I'm so curious to see where you're doing with this manipulation thing, haha. :D


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Posted 05 November 2020 - 09:49 PM

Progress:

 

Well, I'm a bit of of a stump when summarizing the current chapters of Part 1 so here's the reason. SPOILERS:

 

Upcoming stuff but major obstacles

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Posted 05 November 2020 - 10:34 PM

Oh man, can't wait for it!

 

I have the first three chapters already planned. My main problem is laying out the whole thing properly, at the moment.

 

Because ideas keep popping but then I hit a wall on another thing I wanted to introduce so then I have to think in so many ways to to make it fit.

 

It's a mess currently, lol.

 

But I trust once it's going to be done, it will be a beautiful mess, lol.

 

Really curious to see how you deal with the karma thing. I kinda also have it in the story, but not so much in your face.

 

However I will have instances of karma/dharma when dealing with certain stuff...

 

I find it really interesting that you're gonna tell this story from an OC's pov kinda. 

 

It's like... your own way to put the audience in the story and fixing it, I think?

 

Yeah, that's how I'm seeing it, at least. :D


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