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[sushi.]

This goes out especially for you Dragunov, sorry for the wait ^^;

Here's chapter 22 http://www.fanfictio...else_to_Protect

Thank you, I've been reading this one for ages. This is like the first ff I read, love it. I thought you stopped writing, but I know you're a mommy now.

[Konohakitten]

Thank you, I've been reading this one for ages. This is like the first ff I read, love it. I thought you stopped writing, but I know you're a mommy now.

Awe thanks I'm happy you've enjoyed it so far I know I was gone for like two months, but I wont stop writing the story. Things are just very hectic what with my 2yr old plus Im due in June so yeah lol it's hard to write. Anyhow enjoy and not to worry I wont stop writing.

Edited by Konohakitten, 11 May 2012 - 04:27 AM.

[tricksie]

Nicely done, Sakura's reactions come across as quite believable.

Thanks! I thought for sure I'd get reviews of saying they thought Sakura was too crying/whiny/whatever/whatever.... And I'm about due for a nasty rant from Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain. lol! He likes to swoop in on the second or third chapter and tell the writer how ooc your characters are and how much better he could write it. (Sorry, not really bashing him. He does it to everyone.)

Anyway, writing about a more vulnerable Sakura, portraying her in what could be taken as an unflattering light, I thought I'd get some kickback from Sakura-bashers. In fact, it was why I included the bit with Tsunade at the end, so that Sakura's grief was remedied in the same chapter. Now I can start the next chapter with the focus on Naruto/Sasuke and the reader won't be left wondering about Sakura.

So thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you like it!

[Dragunov]

This goes out especially for you Dragunov, sorry for the wait ^^;

Here's chapter 22 http://www.fanfictio...else_to_Protect

Great job, Kit! Some rough edges here and there, but thats easily ignored.

[ciardha]

Anyway, writing about a more vulnerable Sakura, portraying her in what could be taken as an unflattering light, I thought I'd get some kickback from Sakura-bashers. In fact, it was why I included the bit with Tsunade at the end, so that Sakura's grief was remedied in the same chapter. Now I can start the next chapter with the focus on Naruto/Sasuke and the reader won't be left wondering about Sakura.

So thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you like it!

You are welcome. You followed Kishimoto's pattern, so it fits just fine. But yeah, you'll probably get sneering Sakura bashers eventually, they can't resist any opportunity to slam Sakura, either for her gentle side or her tsundere side, or anything frankly. They are pointless to let them bother you, just delete any of their comments and ban them from being able to comment from that point on.

[HenryFlitzroy]

Just posted A Single Step, Chapter 2 - Lost

Like your new fic so far, am still totally amazed by A voice in the Wind, keep up the good work!

[Konohakitten]

Great job, Kit! Some rough edges here and there, but thats easily ignored.

Thanks when I find the time I'm going over it again, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope it was worth the wait.

Omg, I can't believe I haven't seen this before. And I'm sure I out it on story alert but I haven't got any notification. *goes to read*

Lol this comment made my day Kim, thanks

[Turson]

Something fresh and interesting, 50 Percent Chance by Gingersoup. -> http://www.fanfictio..._Percent_Chance

[tricksie]

Thanks Konan, Henry and Ciardha!

@ciardha - yeah, it's crazy. there just seems to be such deep hatred for her character. I can't figure it out. I have a few more fics on the way where Sakura is ooc from canon (she leaves with Sasuke in one), and I'm totally anticipating backlash. Not from NS fans, but from trolls and others. Eh, well, whatevs!

[Chew]

I have just published my first ever one-shot N/S story

http://www.fanfictio...I_Love_You_Baka

Mwuahahaha

Edit: If I get enough people to ask for a continuation to the story, I'll write it. So I should say...pending one-shot I left it open ended for a reason

Edited by Chew, 16 May 2012 - 04:33 AM.

[Toasty Warrior]

New one shot I did to keep those happy until I get the next chapter of Strength Of Two Hearts out: http://www.fanfictio...6710/1/Red_Hair

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

@Toasty: I finally got to read your sequel, and I have to say, you've come a long way as a writer. Good job, and looking forward for the next update, and I will read that one-shot of yours when i have time today.

@Konoha Kit: I've finally caught up with your story, and I'm quite shocked that you had them married so soon. Nevertheless, great story.

@Tricksie: I'm quite intrigued that you wrote that story. It's not the best and highly depth narrative story like your Voice in the Wind AU fic that I've grown accustom to over the years. But this story reminds me of my very own Naruto and Sasuke fic.

Anyways I enjoyed the Naruto and Sasuke interaction, and how emotionally Sakura has expressed, and I wouldn't worry about Sakura bashers out there. There are people out there are going to hate and flame. I'd dealt with bashers 80% percent of the time because my lack of comprehensions for grammar. Still, I hope you're not discourage because of some Sakura ranting.

@Chew: You nearly made me cry at the end. Good one-shot.

As for me, I should have Rokudaime Chronicles: New Era updated next week. See yay al *goes back into his den*.

[Chew]

@Toasty: I finally got to read your sequel, and I have to say, you've come a long way as a writer. Good job, and looking forward for the next update, and I will read that one-shot of yours when i have time today.

@Konoha Kit: I've finally caught up with your story, and I'm quite shocked that you had them married so soon. Nevertheless, great story.

@Tricksie: I'm quite intrigued that you wrote that story. It's not the best and highly depth narrative story like your Voice in the Wind AU fic that I've grown accustom to over the years. But this story reminds me of my very own Naruto and Sasuke fic.

Anyways I enjoyed the Naruto and Sasuke interaction, and how emotionally Sakura has expressed, and I wouldn't worry about Sakura bashers out there. There are people out there are going to hate and flame. I'd dealt with bashers 80% percent of the time because my lack of comprehensions for grammar. Still, I hope you're not discourage because of some Sakura ranting.

@Chew: You nearly made me cry at the end. Good one-shot.

As for me, I should have Rokudaime Chronicles: New Era updated next week. See yay al *goes back into his den*.

:'D




I'm glad I could make you almost cry Based on the reviews I'm getting, I'll probably do an epilogue of some sort or a sequel.

[Anguyen92]

^^ Its pretty darn good, would like to see a follow-through to it.

Edited by Anguyen92, 19 May 2012 - 04:41 AM.

[Toasty Warrior]

Thanks for the vote of confidence Fox, and yeah I have gotten better over the years as a writer, but then again that comes with experience.

[Chew]

You're story is really good! Continue it...?

Why thank you Konan-chan

I think I will continue based on popular demand...

[Toasty Warrior]

Speaking of good stories, Shadow2700 just finished another great story, a three shot entitled The Love Of Another: http://www.fanfictio...Love_of_Another

[ichaichamaster]

omg!! guys i started reading this thread and i discovered all my favorite fanfic were written by all of you!! i feel like if i got to know kishi!!OMG!! oh and getting back at the topic, i'm redoing a narusaku fic called love at midnight war. i really want to know what do you guys think, so i quickly wrote a scratch of the first chapters on a thread. can you guys check that out? sorry for not having a link but i'm using a psp to write right now. also notice it has massive spoilers...

[Toasty Warrior]

Strength Of Two Hearts has been updated with chapter thirteen: http://www.fanfictio...h_Of_Two_Hearts

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Speaking of good stories, Shadow2700 just finished another great story, a three shot entitled The Love Of Another: http://www.fanfictio...Love_of_Another


Thanks for the vote of confidence Fox, and yeah I have gotten better over the years as a writer, but then again that comes with experience.

I've just read your one-shot and updated chapter. Awesome as every and I'm quite aware of The Love of Another fic. To me, it was too short.

omg!! guys i started reading this thread and i discovered all my favorite fanfic were written by all of you!! i feel like if i got to know kishi!!OMG!! oh and getting back at the topic, i'm redoing a narusaku fic called love at midnight war. i really want to know what do you guys think, so i quickly wrote a scratch of the first chapters on a thread. can you guys check that out? sorry for not having a link but i'm using a psp to write right now. also notice it has massive spoilers...

That must include me also. If you have time, try posting the link to your work because i'm having a difficult time finding your story.

@To All: Here's an update from the Yellow Flash Duo Trilogy... Rokudaime Chronicles: New Era/Chapter 6: Slip Ups.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 24 May 2012 - 10:53 AM.