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#141 Derock

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Posted 21 November 2007 - 07:48 PM

Recomp....

Write that as a fic ASAP...

and everyone else, nice drabbles...

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#142 SakuNaruLover

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Posted 21 November 2007 - 07:51 PM

nice drabbles everyone happy.gif
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Posted 21 November 2007 - 08:07 PM

Ok, my try. Here goes.




"Papa! Papa!"
A sleepy blond slightly opened his eyes, before his drowsy cerulean orbs gradually focused on the small ball of energy in front of him.

He groaned as his daughter continued to shake him persistently, giggling all the while.
His slim-figured wife snuggled up to him, gently sucking his ear as she whispered, "Naruto...you promised her..."

Said blond growled slightly at his wife's teases and pulled her into a deep kiss, before rising out of bed and mumbled to his daughter, "Ok, ok, I'm up."

His daughter's pout is just too hard to resist. He rolled his eyes at the cute chuckle Mai was emitting as she saw her mother lace herself onto Naruto's back, whispering some last minute instructions to the great Rokudaime Hokage.

Naruto gave a quick nod, before kissing her forehead tenderly, "Sakura, don't overwork yourself."
She merely huffed and raised an eyebrow, "You think I can't handle it?"

Sakura squeaked as pinned her back onto the bed, before gazing mischievously into her emerald orbs, whispering, "Indeed, I doubt you can handle tonight with me..."

"Who would have known that the Hokage was such a pervert?" Her eyes glinted with passion as she remembered the...activities they did last night.

"But you love me anyway." She certainly shouted that out enough...

Mai pouted, "Papa!"
Naruto sighed, before giving his loving wife one last kiss, "Ok, to the Zoo in Moon Country!"



Now I like this one. XD
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Posted 21 November 2007 - 08:10 PM

write a fic, lol, Derock's so funny.

anywho, dun worry Rick, Sakura has already redeemed herself. :3

:3

Altho, if you want Takeshi to die, say the word...

:Looks evilly at Takeshi:

hehehehehehehe

HAHAHAHA

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

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#145 Wilson

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Posted 21 November 2007 - 08:12 PM

QUOTE (Recompense @ Nov 22 2007, 09:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
write a fic, lol, Derock's so funny.

anywho, dun worry Rick, Sakura has already redeemed herself. :3

:3

Altho, if you want Takeshi to die, say the word...

:Looks evilly at Takeshi:

hehehehehehehe

HAHAHAHA

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

:evil:


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Posted 22 November 2007 - 03:30 AM

QUOTE (Wilson @ Nov 22 2007, 01:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
What is it with me and meeting evil underage people? dry.gif


You have my sympathies. a_comfort.gif
BTW why are the drabbles going grim of Compy? You don't want a Freudian analysis of your writing now, do you? sleep.gif
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Posted 22 November 2007 - 03:36 AM

I can't help it. Emoness is flooding into my every pore, my soul is practically bursting with the power of emo. So I release all this pent up energy into drabbles.

I think Recomp is a closet emo though ;3

#148 Wilson

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Posted 22 November 2007 - 03:46 AM

QUOTE (Sqleon @ Nov 22 2007, 04:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I can't help it. Emoness is flooding into my every pore, my soul is practically bursting with the power of emo. So I release all this pent up energy into drabbles.

I think Recomp is a closet emo though ;3


We need more fluff!

I shall use my LOVING drabbles to conquer ur emo drabbles. BELIEVE IT! tongue.gif
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Posted 22 November 2007 - 03:51 AM

I need fluff. Reading all those depressing drabbles made me depressed, especially that diamand ring one.

WHY THE F*** DID YOU WRITE THAT ONE? THIS A NARUSAKU BOARD, NOT AN SASUSAKU BOARD!

#150 CrashLanded

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Posted 22 November 2007 - 04:18 AM

QUOTE (Wilson @ Nov 22 2007, 09:16 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
We need more fluff!

I shall use my LOVING drabbles to conquer ur emo drabbles. BELIEVE IT! tongue.gif


You sound more like Gai than Naruto. BTW why do we don't have a comedy drabble featuring Gai anyway?

Gai+Lee+comedy=FTW!!
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Naru+naivity+sex=comedy+ nosebleed8rx.gif
or
Kankuro+Shika+Temari=boyfriend-brother trouble (Gaara doesn't care) laugh.gif laugh.gif
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Posted 22 November 2007 - 04:09 PM

I like that second one.

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Posted 22 November 2007 - 10:52 PM

QUOTE (CrashLanded @ Nov 22 2007, 05:18 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You sound more like Gai than Naruto. BTW why do we don't have a comedy drabble featuring Gai anyway?

Gai+Lee+comedy=FTW!!
or
Naru+naivity+sex=comedy+ nosebleed8rx.gif
or
Kankuro+Shika+Temari=boyfriend-brother trouble (Gaara doesn't care) laugh.gif laugh.gif


I actually think Gaara will care more, because Kankuro is too useless. tongue.gif
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Posted 23 November 2007 - 01:03 AM

Crash - Have you decided which one? (2)

#154 CrashLanded

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 01:37 AM

QUOTE (Gnosismaster @ Nov 23 2007, 06:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Crash - Have you decided which one? (2)


Actually comedy ain't my strongpoint. I'm more of a dark-humor/angsty-without-being-too-much type of writer. I just wanna read good humor fics.
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#155 Wilson

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 03:13 AM

QUOTE (CrashLanded @ Nov 23 2007, 02:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Actually comedy ain't my strongpoint. I'm more of a dark-humor/angsty-without-being-too-much type of writer. I just wanna read good humor fics.


Eh? Humour is easy and fun though! XD
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Posted 24 November 2007 - 04:21 PM

Well, that depends, you know. My sense of humor tends to be dry at times so I sometimes have trouble writing good humor. See, take this one; to me, it's not really humor, but not really fluff. It just kinda falls... somewhere.

Yearly Checkup. And that's why they were never done at the hospital.


By mutual consent the Rokudaime’s wife was also his personal physician, (Like Sakura would let anyone else molest examine Naruto) explaining why the Hokage sat at home nude while she ran diagnostic jutsu.

She didn’t need them to sense his excitement – his throaty growls told her that. Running her glowing hands over his well-muscled torso and then lower, Sakura barely hung on to her professional bearing.

Naruto relieved her of that by turning and capturing her lips in a heated kiss.

Cuddled up in bed with him several hours later, the Rokudaime’s physician drowsily made her official diagnosis:

“Very healthy.”


See? That'll get maybe a giggle or two at most.
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Posted 24 November 2007 - 10:40 PM

Nice drabble wolf, i enjoyed it biggrin.gif


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Posted 24 November 2007 - 11:13 PM

QUOTE (Jwolf0 @ Nov 25 2007, 05:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, that depends, you know. My sense of humor tends to be dry at times so I sometimes have trouble writing good humor. See, take this one; to me, it's not really humor, but not really fluff. It just kinda falls... somewhere.

Yearly Checkup. And that's why they were never done at the hospital.


By mutual consent the Rokudaime’s wife was also his personal physician, (Like Sakura would let anyone else molest examine Naruto) explaining why the Hokage sat at home nude while she ran diagnostic jutsu.

She didn’t need them to sense his excitement – his throaty growls told her that. Running her glowing hands over his well-muscled torso and then lower, Sakura barely hung on to her professional bearing.

Naruto relieved her of that by turning and capturing her lips in a heated kiss.

Cuddled up in bed with him several hours later, the Rokudaime’s physician drowsily made her official diagnosis:

“Very healthy.”


See? That'll get maybe a giggle or two at most.


Dang! Now THAT'S fluff. XD LOVE IT!
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 01:31 AM

Here's something I typed up a couple of days ago~

Scars. Physical Scars can fade away, but Emotional scars... that's a different story.

Being a combat medic, of course Sakura would deal with wounds of her own.

Though this one was a predicament, nearly encircling her upper left, she bared three crescent shaped scars. When you think of scars though, most people would imagine a skeptical design upon a person's own flesh. Something that would fill you with awe, instead Sakura kept such a wound hidden from anyone who made contact. Unfortunately, this plan of hers backfired completely... she could still feel Naruto's stormy eyes stabbing throughout her left arm when they walked in distances.

He was utterly angry with himself. From head to toe, Naruto was chambered with grief knowing that he was the one who injured the one he loved. That it was his foolish mistake which put Sakura-chan through that agonizing situation.

But she kept it to herself, as the healing process began... the burning sensations simmered down at a slow pace. Her wound was going to heal in due time, but even in training sessions, they both feared for the worst. Many worried-filled questions were left unnoticed and unanswered until that damnable pain returned. It felt as if those razor sharp claws were grazing upon her skin once again.

Sakura was a fighter, but no longer could she hold it in. Naruto noticed that, he was whacked with too much guilt not to notice it. And so, his gentle pleas began, it did not take much time but Sakura accepted them. She still did even when his begs for forgiveness converted themselves into embraces followed by a single kiss filled with desperation.

Sakura knew. She knew too well that he was frightened for her safety. She knew that even though she was the victim that day, Naruto had scars of his own. Scars in which could not and would not disperse even with the most powerful of healing techniques.

Physical Scars could fade away simply with the right medication, but Emotional scars are a different story. Try as hard as you wish to heal something as deep as that form of pain... and it may just take longer than you expect...


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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:13 AM

Nice one, onee-chan. Very nicely written a_hug.gif
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