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#141 Smiter

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 10:54 AM

Aethos... you are playing an extremely dangerous game. tongue.gif

*selects a thunderbolt and hurls it at Aethos, frying him*

I think we're only just getting warmed up. wink.gif Wait 'til Ash wakes up. You know what's worse than Inner Kyuubi?

An Inner Kyuubi in the morning. If she's anything like me, she won't be a morning person. *nods*

*hops up to a nice vantage point to witness what will happen next*

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 01:38 PM

Moving onto next Destination: Drama/Tragedy

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Chapter 23: Port NT, The Final Fall
Subtitle: End To All Good Things, The Perfect Storm


... Mutiny ...

To a leader it's their worst possible nightmare. To the crew it means that the leader isn't doing their job. When a crew or people turn on their higher officials it means something, something has gone wrong. Which is why a mutiny can happen, it can also mean people want change, greed, power, or vengence. All of which are valid reasons, but none should be taken so lightly.

... Vengence ...

Such a harsh word to use, but describes all the feelings of Anger, Rage, Hate, and Sadness. Vengence for being looked down upon, vengence because others inflict vengence upon you. Either way, vengence never ends well ...

After our previous battle, the ship was able to set sail, but we still had a few more holes to patch up. It took a few more days in Eden to seal them up, but it was only temporary.

"Alas my poor NaruSaku, once we reach NT we'll fix you right up good as new!"

I stroked the port bow of the ship that was docked. On the starboard side, there were several gaping holes from the S***S*** cannon fire. Aethos and Arashi were already on repair duty. Everyone else rummaging through the ship, cleaning up what debris was left, along with mopping up the blood of our dead foes. The only part of the ship that wasn't broken into or damaged was our liquor storage (Thank God). We all still smelled like blood, and tried to wash our clothes off before we set sail again. I was thinking over the events that had just occured to us. The S***S*** attack, missing Sharon Apple's Concert ... (I tried not to sob, holding in my tears) ... and now our next destination was to NT. The goal was to salvage what we could from the old club, and then bring back as many members with us as we could.

On the next morning we left Eden, and continued back on course to NT. It took about a week, plus the original four day travel from H&E to NT. We ran into some small typhoons along the way, but nothing Arashi couldn't handle. Although it did seem strange that there were typhoons out in this season. We made sure to take note of that for the return trip.

"Port NT Ahead!" Alpha exclaimed from her crow's nest.

Just then a loud splash just hit us off the port side of the ship! They were FIRING at us!? In the distance, NT was a complete warzone. Buildings on fire and some in ruin, random gunfire was being shot off echoing through the city. NT was falling apart and in the middle of a civil war. We stopped the ship just out of their firing range, and went by row boat. The crew gather on the main deck awaiting my orders. I came from the bridge room followed by Arashi and Yoko.

"So it appears that Kane has done more than just cause a ruckus on NT, but opened full civil war." I looked on at the once great NT, then looked back to my crew. "All right listen up. Smiter, HH, Paul, UN, and Yoko will go to shore with me. Everyone else stay aboard and guard the ship. I would hate for irony to smile upon us again, and have this ship stolen yet AGAIN."

Everyone chuckled and we made our way off the row boat and started to head for shore. Paul and HH where rowing the boat, as I gave my further instructions to this reconassiance team.

"Okay. Smiter and UN gain what info you can and any other supplies that we may need. HH return to the N***H*** and gain what last intel you can. Paul and I have a few things to retrieve from the club before we leave for good."

They all nodded their heads and understood their orders. We reached what used to be the docks, part of it had been blown off or sunken. Everyone went to their own duties while Paul, Yoko, and I made our way to ground zero, the NaruSaku club. We made it past the pier and the Arts sector, both of which were completely in fire and ruins. Just as we made it to the Club sector, Yoko stopped me for a moment. I told Blayze to go ahead and I turned to face Yoko.

"What is it Yoko?"

"Sensei, there's someone I must find before we leave. If it's okay with you."

I looked at her nodded my head.

"Quickly, NT could fall at any moment. Just return to the ship if you get into any trouble. Meet us at the docks in a while. Understand?"

She quickly nodded her head and left on her own. I looked on as my Bloody Angel went on her own exploration and I continued after Blayze. We reached the club which was still in fine condition, except for the cannonball hole on the second floor, but that was okay. We went inside and to the back room to a safe vault. My brother and I placed our hands on the lock and began chanting in a foriegn tongue. The safe opened and we took out what we needed.

Two crystal balls, a red one and a black one, and a very special case of spiced rum.

Blayze took the red one as I took the black one.

We left in a hurry and quickly made our way back over to the docks where Smiter, UN, and HH were already waiting for us. UN had gotten his cooking supplies and a bottle of wine he and his wife had been keeping. Smiter and HH had retrieved all the intel they needed and were ready to go. All that was left was Yoko. We waited for a few more minutes and then she finally came running over to us. We quickly made a board the boat, and rowed back towards the ship. The sound of gunshots still echoing all over the city, and minor explosions from the mass fires. Just as we boarded back onto the NaruSaku Mk.II a final and large explosion occured in the center of the city!

We sailed off as the city of NT had finally fallen. We all stood upon the main deck looking off the starboard side, sailing off into the distance. Our home, the place where we all first came together was now gone. I took off my hat and tipped it to our lost home. But now this was only the beginning of even greater adventure and the ride of a lifetime that we could only imagine!

The ocean was still restless as we were making our way back to H&E. The winds were blowing at nearly hurricane level, and the sea was throwing us around like a rag doll. Everyone was inside the ship resting for the long journey back home. It wouldn't be long before we reached H&E. However, I could sense something was on Arashi's mind ... this weather was really getting to him.

"Arashi, is something wrong?"

He didn't turn his head to face me, but answered. me. "Dai-syon. The speed of these winds and the way the ocean is acting, our ship at this rate may not make it back home."

I wasn't surprised at this news, but I was worried. He continued.

"Also with our current condition, we won't be able to escape through the air. The hull may be able to handle the stress for us to fly, but it's risky."

"But that isn't what's bothering you? Arashi?"

"No sir. It's this storm, it's like - we're being targeted specifically. I don't mean to sound crazy, but it seems the ocean isn't being on our side tonight."

"..." I tried to think of our options. It was either keep sailing and we could possibly sink just before we reach H&E, or risk flying the rest of the way and crash to our deaths. "Then we fly."

Arashi and Yoko both looked at me at the same time. Yoko stood silent, but Arashi tried to argue.

"Dai-syon! That's mad! We don't even know if the ship will hold through those winds!?"

"Are you calling me mad? She will hold, and we will make it back home."

Arashi saw the confidence in my face, and couldn't help but agree with me. It was a mad plan, but it was the only way to escape the sea from sinking us permanently. I picked up the intercom system and made the announcement-

"Crew of the NaruSaku. We're going to try and fly over this damn storm. It sounds insane because of our damages already, but it's our only chance. All hands, brace yourselves for one hell of a ride. We need to get up into the air before things get worse."

I put the intercom down, and Arashi and I made our way out onto the main deck to prepare for flight. Arashi stomped the floor, the controls came up and the ship quickly transformed into an Airship. We made liftoff just before a major wave hit us. The hull was holding just fine and we were still in one piece (no pun intended).

As we reached to the skies, the winds weren't as bad as they were on sea level. We did cut through the sky much faster and without any problem. The wind was still as fierce and nearly blow us off course, but with Arashi's skills we were able to stabilize ourselves. At the rate we were moving we would reach H&E within a few hours, until we saw IT ...

"... Dear God ..." Arashi muttered in pure shock.

It was a super typhoon! There were multiple twisters all moving across the water as if they were dancing with each other. Arashi took a firm grip onto the control wheel and looked to me. I quickly picked up the intercom and shouted-

"ALL HANDS BRACE YOURSELVES!!!"

Arashi, Yoko and myslef secured ourselves down with some ropes tied to the main deck so we wouldn't fly off the ship. It was incredible! Arashi dodged each twister as if it was nothing! Moving the ship in ways that couldn't be described! But each dodge could have nearly flipped us over and come crashing down into the sea. It was one hell of a ride, and something only Arashi could have done himself. He was quite impressed with his own skill and yelled at the sky for more! This was exactly what he wanted! A challenge from nature that he could overcome! This was HIS time, HIS dream, HIS ultimate rush! Just as things began to calm, and the storm seemed to settle down ...

"Why is it so quiet?" Yoko asked.

"Something's wrong, something doesn't feel right." Arashi spoke quietly, then looked up.

It was like the clouds were in a twist, circling all around us like it was trying to pin point our location and target us. This seemed to put Arashi into a panic and he quickly spoke to me.

"DAI-SYON! You need to get everyone off the ship NOW."

"What!? Arashi what's the meaning of-"

"PLEASE CAPTIAN! There's no time! I can't explain it, but this storm ... is after me!"

"Have you gone mad already!?"

"Captian. I've never asked more from you and I have never led you down the wrong path. If there was ever a time for you to trust my words, now is that time!"

I knew something had him spooked, but his eyes clearly spoke truth. And I believed him, so I made the order. I picked up the intercom once again-

"All hands. Abandon ship. Immediately."

Naturally there was confusion, but everyone went to the life boats for emergency drop off. The life boats were built to survive a small drop off once the Airship was near seal level. Everyone had gone to evacuate, except for Aethos who came to the main deck.

"Captain! What's going on!?" He questioned me.

I simply put a hand on his shoulder and looked towards Arashi. Aethos still didn't understand, so he went to Arashi.

"OY! Arashi! What the hell is going on!? Why is the captian ordering us to evac!?"

"You need to get off the ship friend. This storm is coming after me, and I'm going to fight it."

"Tch! Like hell you are! If he's staying then I'm staying with him!"

Arashi naturally pushed him aside to disagree with him.

"NO! You need to go with them, and help everyone get to shore. This is something I have to do alone!"

"Last time I let you go off by yourself you nearly got killed! Captain, permission to stay aboard with this fool!"

Aethos also had the look of firm determination. I didn't want to leave two men behind, but we were wasting time arguing. But I had full faith in both men that they would return again. So I let Aethos stay with Arashi.

"Granted. But I better see you two back at H&E, that's an order."

Arashi scoffed, but was glad to have him with him. Yoko and I left for the life boats and left the two of them to the ship. Arashi lowered the ship to hover just above sea level, and we let the life boats drop into the water. The rest of my crew and I rowed the rest of the way to shore. I had no idea what was going through his mind, but this was what he wanted, his dream to battle against this storm. So I let him pursue his dream.

"Godspeed, the both of you." I spoke as my ship sailed off into the sky.

Meanwhile back on ship, Arashi and Aethos had secured themselves onto the main deck of the Airship. Aethos still unsure of why he was here with this mad man.

"Dear God ... I'm on ship with a mad man who's going to fly straight into our deaths." He said with a very grave voice. Then he became overjoyous over such an adrenaline rush! "YARRR! TONIGHT IS A GOOD NIGHT!"

Arashi showed a smile of admiration for his friend staying on board with him. But things weren't going to look good. The twisters they had passed earlier suddenly merged into one mega typhoon/hurricane! As they entered the vicious winds, the ship was being thrown all around like a piece of dead weight. But Arashi's supurb skill kept them some what stablized! He truly was the greatest helmsman of the known seas! They made a mad charge straight into the wall of wind, both of them laughing their hearts out! They were enjoying themselves as if they were children again. Just then they fought through the entire hurricane, until suddenly it became deathly silent ... they had reached the eye of the storm. Just a noise came from the starboard side! The hull was breaking apart ... they would not survive this storm.

"Arashi! We need to jump ship!"

"In the eye of the storm!? Are you mad!?" But then in that instant an idea popped into his head. "That's not a bad idea ..."

"What!? Are you mad!? And just how are we suppoed to-"

*THUMP*

Arashi punched Aethos in the stomach and knocked the wind out of him.

"W-why?"

Arashi put the ship on auto-pilot and began to strap a parachut to his head, along with an oxygen mask. Aethos then realized what he was going to do, but still couldn't move. Just then Arashi retied his line near him, and Aethos laid next to him. Arashi then took back control of the ship and began to climb. The air becoming colder and the oxygen getting thinner. Aethos could still hear and see him, but not move.

"I've always had respect for you mate. I want you to know that. Not once did I ever give you into the Navy, not once. You were my only friend that believed that I could make it into the Navy when no one else did."

Aethos began to understand what he was going to do and tried to move but was still stunned. Arashi continued to take the airship higher, almost as if he was trying to fly OVER the hurricane.

"Heh, do you remember the day we first became rivals?" He paused, and began to tear slightly. "It was so stupid. I thought you were the cause of my sister's depression before she died. But then I learned that you were the one who would always visit her. You were there for her since we were kids, and I should have saw it. But I was so busy with the Navy I could never see her. I always felt guilty about that, and blamed you for her death when it was actually mine."

The ship rose faster and higher, when finally it reached to a point that it couldn't go any higher.

"This is the end of the line my friend. I want you to know that I've never beared a grudge against you, and that I've always held a respect for you. You were my only friend, even though we are rivals, you were my best friend. This is where we must part."

The ship's nose then began to fall and as they began to fall, Arashi pulled the parachute and cut the line he was secured too. Aethos flew back all the way to the rear of the ship, and pretty much floated over the hurricane and to safety. While the ship on the other hand was nearly fallen apart, and diving at a great speed.

"Good bye, Aethos." He looked as he floated out of the storm. He turned his head as he fell into the darkness of the storm and made one final battle cry. "MAYBE TODAY IS A GOOD DAY TO DIE! FOR NARUSAKU!!!"

And that was the last we saw of Arashi, possibly ... no ... he WAS the greatest helmsman that sailed the Seven Seas. Faithful NaruSaku believer, Ex-Navy Pilot Mavarick, and one of the greatest crew members that I was proud to have. At least he died following his dreams. To pilot through ... "The Perfect Storm".

To Be Continued.

Epilogue: Before Aethos passed out in midair, the last thing he remembered as the storm cleared was a long dark shadow in the water, along with the remains of our once NaruSaku Mk.II.

... Farewell my NaruSaku Mk.II ...

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Chapter 23 is finished.

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(The ship is gone, Arashi is gone. If it seems kinda weird/rushed, I kinda wrote this at 12:00 AM/midnight, and after a party. So I'm kinda woozy, a little tired, and I might fix it up a bit later. But for now, I hope this ended well.)

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 02:16 PM

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Blayze x me? *dies* I love it, Aethos.

In fact, I loff you, Blayze. Let's have secks.


Heh. Me x Alpha-chan? Sounds hot biggrin.gif

I can't have sex with someone I've not seen wink.gif

And Lloyd, that fight scene kicked ass tongue.gif

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 02:23 PM

*shakes head, laughing*

Another great chapter, Hoku. wink.gif We're in real trouble now, having a fanboy for a captain. tongue.gif

Will we ever make it back to NT/H+E? Who knows!?

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 04:39 PM

Aw you and Ash know I'm kidding Smiter

Even though I just couldn't help myself I did have it coming laugh.gif

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 04:47 PM

YAR!!! ARGUS!! GYAH!!! And all that other stuff. XD Oh Aethos, you silly, silly boy. *shakes head* What am I going to do with you?? *eyes light with a Lee-ish fire* HEH-HEH-HEH-HEH. *takes out the mega bazooka* LEZ GO, COWBOY!

XD

Hoku, this just keeps getting better!!! XD XD XD MY GUNS!!!! THAT WAS FREAKING R0XERZ!!!! SONER!!! YOU ARE MY BIOTCH!!! *glomps*

And Smiter...XD XD XD I AM a grouch in the morning. ^^ BUT WE ARE *SO* CANON!!! *clings to t3h Smiteness* XD

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 04:57 PM

I'm not a morning person either... I can be scary, trust me. Just ask my family. Anyway, I loved this Hoku-kun! The fight scene was awesome! *glomps* YAY FOR SWORDS!

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 05:13 PM

Yep, you rocked there Yoko! biggrin.gif

Hehe, Aethos, I know you're just kidding about. wink.gif But you are playing with fire. XD

*clings to t3h Ashness* WE ARE CANON! XD

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 05:24 PM

THAT WAS GREAT! biggrin.gif and yoko did kick ass! biggrin.gif and i also am not a morning person.......when i wake up in the morning XD i never wake up in the morning but if i do........its not pretty tongue.gif


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Posted 24 November 2004 - 05:55 PM

Heh. I hate mornings. I swear much more than normal tongue.gif

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Posted 24 November 2004 - 06:29 PM

i consider myself a morning person.. that is if i wake in the morning (early morning).
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Posted 25 November 2004 - 06:31 AM

lol i don't really wake up in the morning so i can't really say but...the few times i did biggrin.gif weren't pretty tongue.gif


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Posted 26 November 2004 - 08:17 AM

when i wake up its like waking hell. i stomp around also when i get up i wake up with my eyes closed so i hear everything around me. i renember once one of my cousins woke me up by jumping on me as a joke while i slept at 7am!
and i punched him he flew back hit his head on a wall and was out cold for at least 2 hours. i am the leader of the group and since i am only a few months older they all always make me the point man. but they don't wake me up anymore.

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Posted 26 November 2004 - 04:28 PM

awesome as usual *claps*

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Posted 26 November 2004 - 08:20 PM

Morning are evil... and are worse when you have to wake up a 5 a.m. EVERY day.

I am MOST DEFINATELY NOT a morning person...I like sleep. Im kinda forced to catch sleep in school ;_;


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Posted 27 November 2004 - 05:57 AM

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Chapter 24: Home, H&E
Subtitle: The Morning After


We held a formal Naval Burial ceremony and a memorial service in Arashi's honor. Even though his body never washed up to shore, and the ship was non-recoverable, we still honored both. All that DID wash to shore were our sails. We dried it off, folded it into a triangle, and let it go into the sea as HH played the burial at sea song. We all saluted as Ash laid flowers into the water. Aethos gave the a speech to comemorate him.

"He was a fellow NaruSaku believer. A crew member and the best helmsman anyone could ever be. But most importantly he was our friend. He died following his dream to encounter such a storm, and put my life in front of even that. He was more than a friend to me, he was like a brother. Farewell Arashi, may we meet again on the other side. But not all to soon ..."

And we lit a lantern in a more traditional way, and let it float out into the sea, as to let his wandering spirit find the way to heaven, or even home to us.

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On the next morning, we continued on with our lives never forgetting those that were with us. We salvaged what we could from the near by crash site. Most of our cargo had sunken into the sea along with what was left of the ship. Thank God most of our booze casings were all sealed and not broken from the storm. If we didn't have our alcohol supply then I'd think we'd all go insane ... not that we aren't already insane.

Life went on, we continued to live at H&E without any disturbance, or trouble. Everyone went about their business and we got a small amount of traffic coming through our small town. Smiter and I continued to run the town and fix up whatever we needed. Blayze and UN would run the main tavern where we would all meet at the end of the day. Aethos continued to spend most of his time going over all his treasure maps as well as explore more of the area around our town. Meanwhile everyone else just made themselves at home, and moved into their rooms at the main complex. I found myself going back to writing fiction stories again, although it felt fairly slow to me.

Days had passed, and soon we would need to gain more traffic for our town so that we may become known. It was time to find a new ship, one that would take us to limits that we could only imagine of. A ship ten times that was our old one, the NaruSaku Mk.II. I only knew of one ship that could surpass the old one, but it was only in legend ... until now.

"BOSS! BOSS!" Aethos came rushing in my office interrupting my thoughts.

I wheeled my chair around to face him, and he looked as if he had found the holy grail. He specifically holding a parchment, particually a map.

"Well? What is it?" I asked him.

"I think I've found IT." He began to explain excitedly. "I think I've found the map to ... the HMS NaruSaku."

To Be Continued.

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Chapter 24 is finished.

Blah, just another filler episode.

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Posted 27 November 2004 - 10:05 AM

Our beloved ship and pilot... sad.gif

*takes hat off in respect*

Can't wait to see more! I wonder what those crystal balls were all about too...

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Posted 29 November 2004 - 07:38 PM

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Chapter 25: The Crew (Helmsman)
Subtitle: Soritia


"A map doesn't really help if we dont have transportation!" I told Aethos. "And besides, it's only a myth. There is no such hybrid ship that can fly, sail, and go beyond the stars. I mean WE barely even have that kind of technology yet."

"But boss! It's here! Somewhere on this island! The map shows that it's on a neighboring island that we can reach by row boat!" He continued to explain.

"No! I won't risk losing more crew members for a damn hunt. Look, as much I want to believe it exists ... we still need a new helmsman. Sure I can pilot and drive the boat, but I wasn't as advanced as Arashi-" I stopped at the mention of his name.

Aethos looked down for a short time, but shot right back at me with something that surprised me. "Then find a new helmsman! Arashi wouldn't have us sit here and waste away! He would want us to go get a new ship, and sail out in his honor! I'm going to that island to find the new ship, with or without your consent. You can hold me for treason when I come back with our new ship!"

Aethos angrily made his way out of my office and shut the door. I couldn't blame him for what he said. It was true, we did new a new ship and it was time to move on. Perhaps it was time to look for a new helmsman, but where and how? We couldn't really sail out to any other places, and NT was now gone. I felt more depressed and went to the bar where Blayze already had a drink ready for me.

"Oy! What's the matter brother?"

I sat down on a stool at the bar, put my head down, and leaned onto the bar. "Nothing. Just thinking of how our great cause is now sailing away because we have no ship and no pilot."

"Well, Aethos did have that nice map-"

"No! The HMS is only a fictional boat that we created! If it were real don't you think I would have had it by now!?" I barked out and then took another mouth full of rum.

"Calm down brother. Just because it may or may not be real, doesn't mean we can't believe." He poured me another mug full of rum. "It's worth a look in my opinion."

"Perhaps, but we still need a helmsman ..."

And after I had spoken those words the front door swung open and someone had came in. I didn't bother to turn around, assuming it was just one of my fellow members coming in after a long day. But then Blayze nudged me as if to tell me to look, but I didn't bother. I just kept my head down on the bar. Just then the new person had sat down right next to me. It was a young woman, perhaps a year or two younger than me.

"Can I help you miss?"

"One White Russian please."

Blayzed gave an impressed glance and that caught my attention. I began to sit up and face this girl who ordered such an exclusive drink.

"And here I thought I was the only one who drank White Rus-" As I picked my head up and turned around to face her, I felt as if my face was on fire. "-sian."

Twas a beauty before my eyes one of which I thought only Goddesses possesed. Her skin light and fair, while her hair was a smooth dark brown with a hint of a deep scarlet, and her eyes ... those eyes ... almost bewitching. I was at a loss of words, as this heavenly beauty sat directly across from me. No words could describe such eurphoria that this girl ordered the same drink that I enjoy ever so much. She finished her drink and looked at me who was staring at her completely unaware of what I was doing. She gave this laugh at me as if it wasn't the first time this had happened to her, then walked out of the bar in such a way that it was hypnotic.

Just then Blayze brought me back to reality and smacked me upside the head.

"OY LLOYD! Wake up you dog!"

"Huh? Oh right! What just happened?" I shook my head.

"You went completely zombified as soon as that girl ordered a white russian."

"Ah yes ..." And as I remembered the moment I almost went back into a zombie state. Luckily Blayze smacked me once more before I went comatose.

"Hey. HEY!"

"Sorry, sorry! I can't help it. She was - well I - Um ... who was she?" I was stuttering all around.

"Geez, settle down brother. Don't know her name, but she's been coming here pretty regularly for the past week or so. One of the first new inhabitants to move out here to H&E. I think you'd have an advantage, she is a NaruSaku believer."

"Yes! I must find out her name! It must be a name that only bells from the heavens would ring too! Well I'm off brother!" After my declaration to find out who that girl was, I started to rush out of the bar when Blayze called me back.

"OY LLOYD! Don't go running out of here with your mug in hand!"

After I came back and gave back the mug, I ran out of the bar in search of that nameless beauty. I searched left and right, only to find a trail ... it was as if she wanted me to hunt after her. I gladly grinned and chuckled.

"And the hunt begins ..."

I followed this trail all around the Literary section of the town, and around into the Arts section. Little did I know that I was one step behind her, as she was going on about her business. She did give me a small glance and gave this smile/smirk to see that I was on the chase!

I was unsure if she was trying to confuse me, or if she was trying to lure me into some sort of a trap. But I didn't care! I was determined to find out who this nameless beauty that has me in her spell! Finally I had caught up to her, but she kept on walking.

"Your name milady."

"Ahh Sir Hunter! I'm glad you've kept up with me thus far!"

"Since the moment I saw you I could not sit by and let such a beauty beyond words escape! Perhaps angels have no names, only beautiful faces!"

She giggles and picked up her pace a little, then did a swing around to wink at me and walked her way into a building. I followed her not knowing that when she did that swing around she actually jumped over a puddle of mud. I stepped into it unknowningly and entered the building she went into.

"I'm afraid this is the end of the line, Sir Hunter."

"You still haven't told me your-"

"YOU DECECRATE THE HOUSE OF KAKASHI!" Ash & Alpha screamed in shock and pointed at my shoes which were all muddy.

I had realized what I had just done, and how she had lured me into a trap. Ash and Alpha had that firey look in their eyes as they made their way towards me slowly. Fearing for my life, I backed away slowly towards the exit still trying to figure out her name.

"Please, your name milady!"

Just before Ash and Alpha brushed me out the door, she was laughing and enjoying herself as I was being punished by the Kakashi sisters outside. After I was puverized into meat, I began to walk away with my head down since I had lost the hunt. The sun was setting over the docks and the sea looked as if it were on fire. I was then stopped by that same angelic voice!

"I applaud your determination before. You never lost sight of your target."

I raised my head to see the nameless beauty before my eyes. I wasn't sure if it was an illusion on my part or really her. I was frozen solid, unsure of what she would do to me. But instead she came over to me, and walked all around me as if inspecting me.

"I like a man who goes after his goal, and doesn't give up."

"Then perhaps I may show you my skill! Or perhaps a poem? A sonnet! Or even a-"

She then came up from behind me and placed a gentle finger on my lips to silence me.

"You're trying to hard." She whispered into my left ear, then whispered into my right. "You had me Hello."

With a confused look upon face, I wasn't sure about her words. "But I didn't say hello ..."

"Did you now?" She swung around me, gave me this "I've got you" smile, and ran her index finger from one ear down across my cheek to my chin and back up to my other cheek.

It took me a few second to realize what she meant, and as the sun set off into the horizon I instantly cheered out-

"YOSH!"

Her name was Soritia. She was an artist who also shares a passionate love for NaruSaku. She had arrived on H&E some time ago, but hadn't properly introduced herself yet. Apparently she was actually looking for me so that she could join the crew.

And on top of all that, she just happened to be a helmsman.

To Be Continued.

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Chapter 25 is finished.

lol, funny story. To tell the truth, I have no idea why, and i hope yall dont take this the wrong way, but I have a small crush on Soritia for no apparent reason. wink.gif

Kinda stole that chase scene from Knight's Tale. happy.gif

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#159 Blayze

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Posted 29 November 2004 - 09:01 PM

Running off with essential pub equipment, Lloyd... without the mugs, we'd all have to swig tongue.gif

#160 hokuten

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Posted 29 November 2004 - 09:09 PM

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Chapter 26: The Crew (Medical Officer)
Subtitle: Quilted-Remorse


On the next morning, I introduced formally introduced Soritia to everyone and we warmly welcomed her into the crew. She was more than overjoyed to be apart of us, and to get to know all of us. Now we had our helmsman and I finally decided that we would go out to seek the HMS NaruSaku. We all made our way back to the tavern for drinks and food, while I made the announcement-

"Friends! It's high time that we stop sitting around here and drink our sorrows away! Aethos has found the map to the most legendary ship known to us believers."

Everyone gasped as they knew what I was about to reveal to them.

"Yes! The HMS NaruSaku. The legendary top secret ship created by our predecesors. A ship ten times that of our previous one! A ship that can sail not only upon the water and sky, but also among the stars! A ship that holds weapons of destruction that we can use to our advantage! Weapons that can help us fight against all of our foes! S***S***! N***H***! BAH! We have nothing to fear of once we find it!"

Everyone cheered out loud, but there was still some concern in the air.

"But captain, does it really exist?" Smiter was the first to ask.

"It's real! As real as the One Piece! And I will bet my life that both are as real as we are all gathered here!" Aethos gladly answered his question.

"Then it is set! In two days we will travel to search for this ship and reclaim it as our own! HEAR-HEAR!" I exclaimed and raised my glass high.

Everyone toasted and we drank the rest of the night away. On the next morning, I unfortunately found myself lying around in the middle of no where outside of the town. I woke up with a very bad hangover, so tried to sit myself up. The last thing I remembered was playing a drinking game with Smiter, Ash, and Soritia. That and Aethos, Alpha, HH, and Blayze dancing on tables, singing merrily. The next thing I know, I'm awake on the outskirts of town. Well ... atleast they let me keep my clothes ... this time.

As I started to make my way back, I fumbled my way back pretty much. The sun sure was shining bright today, or maybe it was just this hangover. Either way I couldn't really see where I was going. Instead I ended up going out further into the outskirts of town. Somehow I ended up in the middle of a forested area, with no sense of direction. I had flare on hand, but wasn't sure if anyone would be able to see it, much less start a forest fire. I just decided to sit down against a tree and try to sleep off this hangover.

"Why am I always the one who ends up losing at these games ..."

Yet again before I was able to rest, I was interrupted by a voice.

"Excuse me sir!"

It was another young girl.

"Do you know the way to H&E? I'm a little lost myself."

Since I was lost myself, I assumed that home was in the opposite direction of where I came from. So I pointed in the opposite direction I came form and told her-

"That way miss."

She gladly thanked me and went off on her way, but before she left.

"Oh! And here." She handed me two pills and a bottle of water. "Take that and you should feel better. Thank you again!"

How did she know? It didn't matter, I just took the medicine and took a quick nap. When I awoke, I felt almost better than new. It felt as if my body was fully rejuvenated and my head was as clear as water. The medicine that girl gave me was really good. I just hope I didn't point her in the wrong direction. So I took my own advice and followed my footsteps backwards. By shear dumb luck I did find my way back. Everyone was already waiting for me back at the bar as I walked in. They all rushed to my side worried sick of what had happened to me.

"Captain!" - "Are you alright?" - "Sorry about that last night!" - "We thought you went on one of your late night walks again!"

"I'm okay, I'm okay." I rubbed my head happy to see that everyone was atleast concerned about me. Then I saw that same girl who helped me out sitting at the bar. "Thanks to her."

I pointed the new girl out and she looked at me then at herself. She seemed a little embarrased at first, but then came over to us.

"It was nothing. You helped me on my way here, good sir."

"What was it you gave me anyway?"

"Just some hangover medicine that I made. I'm glad that my medicine helped you recover fast."

"You're a medic?"

"Yes. My name is Quilted-Remorse, but you can call me QR. Some of you may also know me as chunkymacaroni from DA. I was a former Naval Medical Officer, but was kicked out for being a NaruSaku believer. I wish to join this brigade."

Just when she told us who she really was everyone realized who she was! Another celebrity had honored us with their presence! I was fairly impressed and did know of her artworks. Here she was in our town of H&E and she wanted to join our crew!

"Where might I find this Captain Hokuten?"

Naturally I was happy to introduce myself. "I am."

She was a little surprised, but also semi knew it was me at the same time.

"We would be honored if you join us on our crusade, QR."

She bowed lightly and we accepted her into our ranks! Now we had a full time Medical Officer with us, as well as a talented Artist! The time was upon us, we are regaining our morale and getting more members along the way!

Soon ... we would search for the HMS NaruSaku and once again, set sail across the seas!

To Be Continued.

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Chapter 26 is finished.

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