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[ns.Believe.It]

I wish I can come up with ideas for time travel/dimension travel omakes'.

Yes please! Make Naruto and Sakura travel back in time to when Minato and Kushina were young. You can write so much on this. You can even write about younger versions of Kakashi, Gai, Jiraiya, Asuma, Tsunade, Shizune and all . It'll be awesome 

[starlitestarbrite]

*a mile in eachothers-shoes**
[author note summary: RTN-verse/naruto-verse fic. menma wishes he never had parents, naruto wishes he could go back to RTN-verse. they each wake up in eachothers world, and are there for the weekend...but, not everything is what it seems, and in the end both learn the grass isn't always greener on the other side.side note: also the movie was confusing. if naruto, and sakura switched lifestyles then wouldn't sakura be the jinchuuriki?, and menma be the tsundere-type....everyone else is just the oposite selves]
*naruto-verse story*
16 years ago a nine-tailed fox was sealed into naruto.
*rtn-verse story*
16 years ago due to conflict between the kiri, and konoha villages'. instead of sealing the three-tailed turtle into rin they sent it over there to destroy their village. so, before the harunos' died they sealed it into sakura.
*rtn-verse*
menma: -walks in his parents house- i'm home...sadly.
minato: well, happy to see you to -laughs-
kushina: your late again!
menma: or maybe i'm early...really you two need lives.
kushina: lose the atittude. how was your date with sakura?
menma: well, loose the interrogation! -sighs- sakura's lucky she don't have parents who bug her.
minato/kushina: that was mean!
kushina: i'm sure she wishes her's were alive.
menma: but, she's independant, and free. so, she's happy.
kushina: of course she's happy she has you in her life!
menma: telling people how they feel now mom?
kushina: GRRR GO TO YOUR ROOM!
*menma goes to his room*
menma: parents are so annoying. -looks out his window at the stars- i wish i never had any.
*naruto-verse*
naruto: -lays on the monuement on his dads head- looking up in the stars- i wish i could go back to that alternate universe.
*the nest day: FRIDAY*
*rtn-verse*
naruto: -wakes up- i'm here again? -runs down stairs- mom! dad!
minato:-jokingly- hey, good morning meaniema
naruto: meaniema?
kushina: -laughs-
minato: still wish you never had parents?
naruto: -thinks- menma...you jerk. see how you like walking in my shoes- no!. i'm thankful to have you both!.
kushina: okay,breakfast is served!
naruto: -sits down, and eats- mmm...this is great
kushina: told you he liked my cooking better
minato: -sweatdrop- -sits down to eat- so, are you going to cook for your girlfriend someday?
naruto: um...i don't know how
kushina: i can teach you, and her both sometime! we can bake cookies!
naruto: i thought guys weren't supossed to cook?
minato: just for the record: i didn't tell him that!
kushina: -sweatdrop- well, guys, and girls need to learn to be equals!
minato: hermaphrodites?
kushina: -bonks minato on the head- THATS NOT WHAT I MEANT!!!
*naruto-verse*
menma: -wakes up in naruto's small apartment* mom?...dad? FINNALLY! they got the hint, and must have sent me to my own place
-knock on the door-
menma: -opens the door-shikamaru?...when did you become a pineapplr head?
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- are we still up for a game of shogi?
menma: shogi? you never play that!.
shikamaru: i play it alot. did you sneak in lady tsunade's office, and drink her sake or something naruto?
menma: -thinks- naruto?...i'm menma-
*walking menma notices the hokage monuement*
menma: -notices minato's face there- -thinks- my dad was hokage? did i awake in an alternate universe?-
*rtn-verse*
*knock knock knock*
kushina:-jokingly- minato you'll get it
minato: your going to make me work all weekend are you?
kushina: yup.
*minato opens the door*
minato: HEY MENMA! SAKURA'S HERE!
sakura: -walks in the kitchen- hi menma-chan.
naruto: -thinks- so, the suffix is reversed. guess menma don't add chan...oh no- hi sakura. having a good morning?
sakura: -sits by naruto- yes i am. are you?
naruto: yes, it just got better. your here.
minato/kushina: AWWW!
minato: what are you two planning to do today?
sakura: well, i don't know.
kushina: -gasp- i know! you two can go to the space center! they have a place where you can look at the stars, planets, constellations'. it makes for a magical day, and night!
*they go to the konoha space center*
sakura: aren't the stars wonderful!?
naruto: yeah!. but, real ones are more...natrually pretty.
sakura: yeah.i can show you my favorite hangout one day.
naruto: how about to night?
sakura: sure.
*later they go to the hokage monuement, and lay on hokage haruno's head looking up in the stars*
sakura: i come up here to think sometimes.
naruto: -thinks- i do this my world...wait...oh gosh-
sakura: being jinchuuriki, being seen as the heros daughter...living in his shadow.
naruto: -thinks- she had it better than i did-
*naruto-verse*
*menma decides to hop on the hokage monuement on minato's head*
menma: so, my alternate self don't have parents...hey how come sakura's not up here? we usually hangout everyday in my world.
*next day:SATURDAY*
*rtn-verse*
kushina: -wakes naruto up- menma. sakura's here. she says you all have to train with kakashi today-
naruto: thanks mom -he looks at the clock- 3:00am?...-sweatdrop-
*team 7 at the tree where kakashi's waiting*
kakashi: hello youthful students! let's run around konoha, and enjoy this starlite night. theeen we can watch the sunrise -runs off-
naruto: kakashi-sensei?...did he switch roles with gai?
sakura: i wish gai-sensei's very melancholy...unlike kakashi-sensei whoes an enthusiast.
sasuke: -gives sakura a rose- a pink rose that matches your hair!
naruto: -sweatdrop-
sakura: -takes it- thank you. -hands it to naruto- for you menma-chan for such a great night last night
naruto: thank you sakura
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
naruto: HA! -points to sasuke- rejected!
sasuke: -blinks-. i'm used to it. i love girls' but, i'm rejected by them all the time
naruto: -thinks- because your either a player, or a jerk.-
*the three decide to just walk around, and talk they go to the graveyard they notice gai by a tomb rock stone*
naruto: whoes he here visitoing?
sakura: i guess his father's grave. maito dai. they used to be very close
gai: -notices team 7- so, kakashi got you three to train early? guess he took the three o-clock fairy myth seriously -sighs- sometimes its hard to tell illusion from reality though
naruto: don't you and lee train together?
gai: no...we don't get along...plus what can i teach any of my students? this world always finds a way to get us down. drain our souls'. what if i give them all the training i can...then something happens?
sakura: well, we should go.
gai: alright.
*the three walk off*
sakura: jeez talking to him is depressing!
sasuke: i know. if i need a sleep aid i'll just talk to gai-sensei.
*all laugh*
sakura: but, in a way he is kind of right? i mean how would we know what'll happen?...sometimes we don't even know how powerful WE ourselves are. it's like the mind is weak against the strong heart.
sasuke: oh no. it's contaigous!
naruto: true...sometimes all we need is someone to be there for us.
sakura: yeah -sadly- but, what if thats not enough? we can't always figure out what we need because we're so caught up with what we want
sasuke: ok...i'm going to find kakashi-sensei! you two are sucking the joy out of my life! -runs off-
sakura: it's almost like it's possible to be dead inside...guess thats what happens when the spirit is crushed...or the soul shatters
naruto: or the heart breaks...I KNOW! lets go see if ichiraku's open
*sakura, and naruto run, and hangout together*
*naruto-vers*
menma: -goes to sakura's house-
mebuki: oh hi naruto. sakura's out right now. she's at the yamanaka flower shop today
menma: okay -walks to the flower shop- so, sakura has parents in this world...bet they give her a hard time -laughs-.
*naruto enters the shop*
ino: hi naruto sakura's out in the garden
*naruto goes and helps sakura in the garden*
menma: hi sakura.
sakura: hey naruto.
menma: -thinks- guess in this world "i" call her sakura-chan- wanna do something?
sakura: i am doing something -waters what she planted-
menma: -sweatdrop-
sakura: you can help.
menma: oh. no that's okay.
sakura: -jokingly- i wasn't asking
menma: -thinks- she sounds like my mom when she wants my dad to do something-
*RTN-verse*
naruto: hmmm...I KNOW! i'll prank the counterparts of konoha twelve. minus myself, and sakura! this'll be funny!
*1-sasuke*
*naruto transforms into a girl*
naruko: do i get a rose?
sasuke: -hearts in eyes- your...so...pretty...if i had a dozen roses i would give them to you -hands naruto/naruko a rose- i must know your name.
naruto: minako!...-detransforms- rhymes with minato
sasuke: -turns red- eeeh? MENMA!
-naruto runs off laughing-
*2-sai*
naruto: hi sai...lady tsunade said someones in the office wanting to see you
sai: -stops painting- why?
naruto: something about one of your paintings winning a contest
sai: -runs off-
naruto: -laughs-
*3-shino*
naruto: hi shino. i baught you something from a gift shop it reminded me of you
shino: thats...weird
naruto: its a gag gift...see? -holds up an ant farm tant with live ants in it digging through the sand-
shino: AAAH ANTS -runs off screaming-
*4, and 5 neji, and lee*
naruko: hi boys
neji: -nosebleeds whaaa!
lee: -nose bleeds-
naruko: oh, and...i'm a boy -detrasnsforms and runs off-
neji/lee: -faces grow red-
neji: thats it...i'm cutting my hair
*6-kiba*
naruto: hey,*gives kiba a cat*
kiba: aww wait.. -cat scratches, and struggles to get away- wait!...-sweatdrop-
naruto: later dog breath -walks off-
*8-choji*
naruto: wanna go out for bbq!
choji: no. i'm on a diet!...plus akimichis have to stay in shape.
naruto: heres a candy bar
choji: -eats it- not so bad...
naruto: nutra-gam bars.you eat it to gain weight -runs off-
choji: grrr meeenmaaa!
*9-ino*
naruto: -puts a bucket on top of the edge of the flowershop door- the peacemaker...lets see how peaceful she remains!
ino: -opens the door and the bucket of water falls on her head-
naruto: -walks out- ahhaahhahaahahhahaha! that was funny! i got you. woah! -hangs upside doun on a tree branch-
ino: two can play that game menma.
*10-shikamaru*
naruto: -sees shikamaru napping on a bench and goes over to his ears- WAKE UP WE'RE UNDER AN INVASION
shikamaru: -wakes up, and falls off the bench- did the suna, and kiri finnally team up to attack us!
naruto: -laughs-
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- nice menma
*11-hinata*
naruto: the hinata from this world is hard to prank...but this is where kakashi-senseis training pays off.- -poofs an injured shadow clone, and hides behinde a bush-though she is good with genjutsu
hinata: MENMA-KIUN!...-uses her byakugan sees the injured clone- -gasps- oh no! I'M COMMING MENMA-KUN!
*naruto slides a rock in from of her*
hinata: -runs, trips on the rock, and lands face down- grrr...freaking blind spot!. -gets up, and notices the clone poof- it was a clone!?
naruto: -runs off-
hinata: MEEENNNMMMAAA!!! -steam blows out her ears- SAKURA-TEME I'LL GET YOU FOR PUTTING HIM UP TO THAT!!
*naruto-verse*
menma: -training-
voice: -quiet- hi n-naruto-kun.
menma: -turns around- oh no...its hinata...but a quieter version- hi hinata
hinata: -blushes and faints-
menma: -walks off to train elsewhere- she's so weird.
*next day:SUNDAY.
*rtn-verse*
*that night naruto decides to rest on the monuement...on haruno's head*
naruto: -gazes at the stars- i enjoy it here...but not to the pint i wanted sakura to suffer the same loneliness as i have...in this world menma seems to be her only true friend. but, in mine we have many friends...so, we know 100% narusaku's end game because we grown closer.
*naruto-verse*
menma: this is the most loneliest life evr...parents aren't so bad after all.
*the next day they switched back to eachothers world menma learned to appriciate his parents. because it would be very lonely to never know a parents love. naruto learned that sometimes the way you live can make you stronger, and give you the strenghth to push yourself to make those around you see that having very little, or nothing doesn't make a person weak. it's whats on the inside that counts*
*a photo of sakura and naruto kissing pop up on the screen*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 09 September 2014 - 01:17 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

This is one of your best Omakes ever, I absolutely enjoyed reading this 

 

sasuke: -gives sakura a rose- a pink rose that matches your hair!
naruto: -sweatdrop-
sakura: -takes it- thank you. -hands it to naruto- for you menma-chan for such a great night last night
naruto: thank you sakura
sasuke: -sweatdrop-

 

hinata: MENMA-KIUN!...-uses her byakugan sees the injured clone- -gasps- oh no! I'M COMMING MENMA-KUN!
*naruto slides a rock in from of her*
hinata: -runs, trips on the rock, and lands face down- grrr...freaking blind spot!. -gets up, and notices the clone poof- it was a clone!?
 

 

These were         

[narusaku256]

Agree with the guy above me XDDD

[starlitestarbrite]

*exception*
[author note summary: naruto never liked needles...and he refuses to let anyone but, one medic-minja do his blood work.]
*naruto's at the docters office*
nurse: okay, now we need bloodwork done, and you'll be fine
naruto: wait! can't you just use mystical palm?
nurse: that's for your chakra...this is to check your physical body!
naruto: but, needles are painful!, and it's rude to stick a needle in someone if they don't want you to!
nurse: i'm just doing my job!
naruto: then your lousy at it! your supossed to take care of your patients not harm them!
nurse: we don't harm our patients! we can't treat our patients if we don't know whats right, or wrong!
*another nurse walks in*
nurse 2: what on earth is going on here?
naruto: i have a nurse from heck!
nurse: -sighs- he's complaining because i told him we need to do a blood test. i have to make sure your not iron deficiant, and its the needle poke that hurts not me!
nurse 2: -sighs- i'll go get the stuff
naruto: get sakura-chan! she'll respect my wishes!
nurse: it don't matter what nurse is on duty they're all going to do their job!
naruto: then prescribe pain killers!
nurse: for a needle poke?
naruto: YEAH WHAT IF YOU SCREW UP!?
nurse: even if i gave you something it would take atleast an hour to kick in, and i'm NOT giving you narcotics for a needle poke that only lasts' a minuete
*sakura comes in with the needles*
sakura: -puts the band around naruto's arm, and cleans off a spot-
naruto: it's like you brainwash people into being poked by needles. their like hornet stings
nurse: well, then that might be a sighn of dehydration. and no we're not.
naruto: then you get poked and see how you like it!
nurse: I HAVE. it's just a needle not a knife!
sakura: -uses a butterfly needle on naruto- there all done.
naruto: -blinks- how did...
sakura: -holds up butterfly needle. a small needle with a butterfly handle-
naruto: -points to nurse- why didn't you say it was a small needle that only feels like a bee sting!?
nurse: you didn't ask!
naruto: sakura-chan's my nurse from now on!!!
*nurse walks out*
sakura: -bonks naruto on the head- WILL YOU STOP COMPLAINING EVERYTIME YOU GET A CHECK UP!
*later that night naruto, and sakura camp out under the stars they hug and kiss eachother*
THE END

[questdrivencollie]

lol  I love the RTN one.

sasuke: let me guess you want a good bye hug?
sakura: -punches sasuke in the face- WHOES WEAK NOW!? -walks off-

 

On the hokeage arc, loved this part so much XD

Edited by questdrivencollie, 10 September 2014 - 02:35 AM.

[Iwantbuns]

These are really enjoyable to read

[starlitestarbrite]

thanks. I have fun making them.

[starlitestarbrite]

I'm gonna start from chapter 1, and read the whole manga lol. a naruto marathon! anime, and manga this way I wont have to wait for anything LOL I watch the anime on kissanime.com, and read the manga on kissmanga.com

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 10 September 2014 - 11:30 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*notice me*
[author note summary: takes place during sakura's confession at the LOI my twist. side note: not only can i do omakes' but, i like doing song parodies. if anyones seen the movie pixel perfect theres a song called notice me. so, im doing my own lyrics lol. sakura style]
sakura: what i said naruto was...i love you
naruto: this joke isn't funny sakura-chan!
sakura: i'm not joking. i just confessed my feelings to you.
naruto: but, why NOW all of a sudden? did sasuke do something? did something happen to him? whats going on?
*sakura poofs up a chair, and guitar*
sakura: fine...want to know my TRUE feelings? they say singing comes from the soul...so, lets see what my heart says
naruto: sakura-chan- *music plays*
sakura: -sings- here's a story of a girl, living in the lonely world. didn't notice a secret crush another boy who thinks to much
naruto: -sweatdrops-
sakura: -sings- atleast you know my name. but, your too busy playing games. if we're standing in the crowd. you smile i'll check you out,and iii want you to knooow if you lost your way i wont let you gooo. if i cut my hair, if i change my cloths would you notice me? if i never spoke if i said hello would you notice me?
*some giggle*
sakura: -sings- whats it take for you to seee i'll get you to notice me. got your head up in the clouds, don't know when your comming down, i don't mean to sink their ships' but i'm not about just friendship, and all the girls who talk to you, give you impressions that just aren't true, and nooo don't get me wrong. better make your move before my love is gooone
naruto: -eyes water-
sakura: -sings- if i cut my hair, if i change my cloths would you notice me? if i never spoke if i said hello would you notice me?I'm not like the rest,
I just don't care if you're the best,
You see it, it's all the same to me,
You just be who you want to be,
It's all the same to me,
Ohhh don't get me wrong,
You better make your move,
Before my love is gone,
Tell me
if i cut my hair, if i change my cloths would you notice me? if i never spoke if i said hello would you notice me?i'll get you to notice me. -stops-
all: -clap, and cheer-
sakura: believe it now naruto?
naruto: yes.
*both hug*
naruto: but, i still need to go after sasuke.
sakura: i know...but,danzo wants to have sasuke killed
naruto: WHAT!?
sakura: i know you probabbly hate me but, i was going to go, and do that so, you would be releived of your burden.
naruto: -hyperventilates-...can't...breath
sakura: naruto?
kiba: you put him into a panic attack
naruto: no you all did! -cries- sasuke, the mission, it's too much...having to keep madaara a secret! i can't handle it anymore -cries- it's too much
sakura: madaara?...he''s behinde this?
kakashi: naruto your not supossed to tell them.
naruto: i'm sorry sakura-chan. i was hiding the truth. now, i can't tell whats real or false anymore. -wipes tears-
hinata: n-naruto-kun. -eyes water- i'm here for you.
sakura: we're all here for you naruto. most of all i want to be there for you to.
kiba: um...we need to hurry, and find sasuke.
lee: can not you see she is showing naruto her youthful feelings? -wipes tears- i am glad. do not turn a way such an amazing girl naruto. she deserves the very best.
naruto: your not going to do something to get yourself almost killed are you?. i don't want to loose you sakura-chan.
sakura: i don't want to loose you either naruto.
kiba: are we going to find sasuke...i wanna see sakura kick the crap out of him!
sai: she must have found her path in life...who understands destiny?
neji: i do. i guess being together is their destiny.
sai: heaven, and earth. maybe we should let them both decide what should happen to their teammate...i may not understand them...but i know sasuke's who seems to have braught them together, and tear them apart at the sametime.
naruto: if anyone's going to kill sasuke it should be me...hopefully i can just talk to him.
sakura: but, i'm comming to!
naruto: no! you all should stay here where it's safe. i'll take care of everything...promise of a lifetime!, and I could never hate you sakura-chan. I love you to much -smiles-
sakura: -eyes water-
naruto: your always been made to cry sakura-chan!
kiba: OH COME ON WHAT IS THIS HARRY POTTER!? naruto, we ALL are coming with you to help you like true shinobi should. besides what would we be when the future hokage's villagers wont help him out?plus i want to see the look on his face when all of konoha appears, and says "surprise", and tell him we're having a "killer" party, and he's the host
*all laugh*
*sakura and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 11 September 2014 - 03:00 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Nice nice nice and Lol at Kiba 

[starlitestarbrite]

I have writers block. how do I get rid of that? oh well, hopfully i'll come up with one later

[ns.Believe.It]

I have writers block. how do I get rid of that? oh well, hopfully i'll come up with one later

Don't worry, take a break. Guess this is why Kishi takes breaks every month too.

Your fans will wait until you regain your inspiration for writing and come up with more awesome omakes 

[questdrivencollie]

I said Leah and Gaia Sensei needed fanart, so here it is:

 

 

I suck at gender bending tho >,< The only real difference I could come up with is the hair, and well you can't see certain female features when a chunin/jonin vest is worn. lol

 

 

I'd like to upload this pic to tumblr, but since the idea is from your work I'd need to credit you, and I feel like I should ask permission.

Edited by questdrivencollie, 20 September 2014 - 03:38 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*candle magic*
[author note summary: last night i had a weird anime dream so i thought "everytime i have an anime dream i like i'm using it to create an omake" lol. the setting is i think everyone was getting ready for christmas, and whoever still had a candle burning in december was the "anime of the year" or something]

*FMA*
edward: -lights the candle-
winry: it's only september.
al: but, never to early to start the candlemas cheer!
edward:true...it is the magical time of year
*DBZ*
goku: -lights the candle- we should do this every year!
goten: and cookies for stocking stuffers!?
goku: and food!
goku/goten:RAMEN!
*love hina*
keitaro: -lights the candle-
kaolla-su: YAAAY -dances around- christmas, christmas, christmas!
naru: not yet it's only september.
mitsune:-holds up a bottle of sake- the day we get drunk, open presents, and siiing
mutsume:remember our watermelon-sake debate?,
mitsune: yeah! and oneday I will prove that it IS possible to get drunk off watermelon
shinobu: -smiles-
*a hinata fan runs over*
hinatafan:-points to shinobu- HEEEY! your everywhere!!
shinobu:hm?...i am?
hinatafan:-runs off-
motoko: well, that was weird
shinobu: must be hinata's fanbase. some think we look alike.
*naruto*
naruto: -lights candle-
*hinatafan runs over*
hinatafan: hey naruto hey naruto hey naruto?
sakura: don't wreck the moment
hinatafan:but i have to show him something! -pulls naruto over to shinobu- who does she look like?
shinobu: -blushes-
naruto: she kinda looks like hinata back in the academy days.hi shinobu
shinobu: hello naruto.
*naruto walks back over to sakura*
sakura: what did they want?
naruto: they wanted me to meet shinobu from love hina.
sakura: waw hinata fans' are desparate!
naruto: i know. i was going to tell them keitaro, and naru end up together but...i'll let them figure that out
*naruto, and sakura hug*
*sailor moon*
usagi: -lights candle-
chibi-usa: looking good moon mama!
*popotan*
maea: -lights candle-
mii: YAAAY! we can enjoy the holidays...anime wonderers uniiite -runs off-
mai: WAIT! -follows her-
ai: well, i'll go see if there are any popotan [sidenote: dandilions.]
*inuyasha*
inuyasha: -lights candle-
kagome: know what i love about the holidays?
shippo: the food?
sango: some adore the lights', and decorations'
maraku: the snow
inuyasha: i like the winter soltice in general.
kagome: i like the spirit. i like how it once represented love, and life.
inuyasha: it still does...or does it?
*naruto*
naruto: -looks in the manga- i can't believe it! its my birthday in the manga, and i have to fight sasuke next!
sakura: -takes the manga- don't worry about that.
naruto: i hope we end up together.sakura-chan
sakura: i do to.
*sakura, and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 15 October 2014 - 07:54 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

questdrivencollie cool pic. thanks -hugs- you can upload it to tumblr

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 20 September 2014 - 03:46 AM.

[questdrivencollie]

questdrivencollie cool pic. thanks -hugs- you can upload it to tumblr

Thank you, I'm glad you like it
 
I made an edit to it, since I realized they would be more energetic than just standing around:


And, nice omake above. I wish I'd have anime dreams more often.

Edited by questdrivencollie, 20 September 2014 - 05:05 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

I'm thinking of doing an arc for sakura lol. but, I'm not sure what the plot can be for a sakura arc!

[ns.Believe.It]

You're back with a bang  Loved that omake. 

[starlitestarbrite]

okay, in the last chapter did sasuke send kakashi, and sakura somewhere or what? its hard to tell what happened, and I'm wanting to use chapter 692 for an omake I'm doing lol. I'm doing my own version of the naruto VS sasuke fight.

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 21 September 2014 - 05:07 AM.