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QUOTE (catsi563 @ Jun 2 2008, 12:57 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I went through and read it last night. So far a good story some minor grammar issues but mostly understandable.
its a typical Naruto drags sasuke back by his ear, and is bannished for hsi troubles. Sakura is OOC at the beginning and through msot of it, but her ooc later is more understandable since shes been denied Naruto's positive influence for 13 years. Naruto wanders becomes stronger, and then becomes Mizukage. he then rescues Konoha form a combined attack by several powers. The pairing is supposed to be NaruSaku but so far the author has seen fit to mvoe the relationship at a (pun slightly intended) Slugs pace. So far in 25+ chapters Naruto has been colder then ice to her ((with granted some good reason)) and the author has offered no reaosn what so ever why these two would even become friends much less lovers.
IM keeping it on watch so I cna see how the author well update I hope he pushes the relationship forward sooner rather then later.
its a typical Naruto drags sasuke back by his ear, and is bannished for hsi troubles. Sakura is OOC at the beginning and through msot of it, but her ooc later is more understandable since shes been denied Naruto's positive influence for 13 years. Naruto wanders becomes stronger, and then becomes Mizukage. he then rescues Konoha form a combined attack by several powers. The pairing is supposed to be NaruSaku but so far the author has seen fit to mvoe the relationship at a (pun slightly intended) Slugs pace. So far in 25+ chapters Naruto has been colder then ice to her ((with granted some good reason)) and the author has offered no reaosn what so ever why these two would even become friends much less lovers.
IM keeping it on watch so I cna see how the author well update I hope he pushes the relationship forward sooner rather then later.
True it does seem anti pairing at the moment, but i think he sets it up for a healing through the all mighty"beating the crap out of each other to we relize that we were both wrong"ploy in the next chapter.
