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[Daniee]

Some new oneshots:

Behind You

A New Found Love

[JoHamSandwich]

Did I Do The Right Thing?

NaruSakuIno love triangle... ahhh the best of both worlds!

[Smiter]

New NaruSakus:

20 Truths about Uzumaki Naruto and Haruno Sakura - by YamiPaladinofChaos - Good read.

By These Fists - by Andivari - set after the current manga chapter.

[Smiter]

XD

I presume someone later explained the birds and bees to poor Neji afterwards...

My favourite bit was number 15, involving Tsunade's old desk. XDDD

[puckreathof]

I'm behind Smiter on that one. I can see it now Naruto:"Yeah baby, who's your Hokage." and other Icha Icha worthy lines. My question is, whose idea was it? Naruto's because it has to be like his wildest fantasy, because he gets his two greatest dreams simultaneously (even if not in truth) or Sakura's? I can't think of her justification, so I'd say Naruto. I will admit though, Itachi and Kisame's last moments come as a close second.

[gamerman_007]

I loved that one. All around funny.

[Kamikaze]

Happy ending by Loki Nishizaki. Nice read, fairly long to. There is an OC which seems to be overpowered (/cough self-insert) <_< , but the story dosent really focus on him too much and it has nice Naru/saku interactions ^_^ .

Also By These Fists by Andivari also seems to be Naru/saku. enjoy ^^

[Shouri no Hana]

Both above have already been mentioned.

“Damn it Sasuke! Hurry the **** up and kill him already! My kid’s being born and you’re the godfather!”

I wonder how Itachi felt when he heard this...must have been one hellva of a death for him.

[LokiNishizaki]

What??! No way! My fic is not a self-insert. I know it might look that way.(Mostly because I can't resist naming most everything I've ever created after Divi-Dead's Nishizaki Takashi... that man is awesome... the fake one anyway.) But it isn't. Self-inserts usually have no back story whatsoever. My OC has a past and a personality built on that past.

And he isn't over-powered. If you consider his age and the training he recieved then there's no way he can be any weaker than he already is. Training for over a decade with the greatest kage ever? Certainly not over-powered.

...Seriously. I'm offended.

[Kamikaze]

What??! No way! My fic is not a self-insert. I know it might look that way.(Mostly because I can't resist naming most everything I've ever created after Divi-Dead's Nishizaki Takashi... that man is awesome... the fake one anyway.) But it isn't. Self-inserts usually have no back story whatsoever. My OC has a past and a personality built on that past.

And he isn't over-powered. If you consider his age and the training he recieved then there's no way he can be any weaker than he already is. Training for over a decade with the greatest kage ever? Certainly not over-powered.

...Seriously. I'm offended.

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Eh, sorry if i offended you. First off, I'd like your story, and im probably gonna write feedback via review sooner or later (im lazy , i know, bad flaw). I kinda just pointed out the OC character because generally i avoid reading stories with original characters as they tend to be .... well, badly written and more attempts of self-insertion, that it becomes a general assumption that i make. Besides, this isnt that big an issue as you focus more on Naruto anyway then the OC as the story progresses.

As to been overpowered, its more a point of view. So far as i know, he dosent have any bloodlines or whatsover, and he's roughly the same age as Kakashi (24/25?) yet i figure in terms of strength, he outdoes him. I know Kakashi isnt the strongest jounin out there and he outright admits there are kids younger then Naruto that can outpower or are stronger then him, however, in terms of experience and genius (ability to learn) , i figure that as a measuring stick, few should be able to consider themselves equal or greater, let alone senin level. I'm guessing your OC ranks rougly senin lvl? At such an age, well, he's gotta be someone really special to do that.... i mean thats kinda what made the fourth shine so bright.

Also, Naruto as the greatest Kage ever? thats hardly concrete yet . He could possible become the greatest, but i think each and every Kage shine in their own way, from the first, right down to even the old lady. No kage should be consider greater then any other because they all accomplish different things, in different times. However, to me, the there will never be a hokage greater then the fourth, he just seems .... well, kinda like a golden boy (best way i can describe e.e).

I'm just alitle wary of strong original characters mind you, when the story focus on them to much. Again, its not something you do, so please do not take it as an insult. I apoligise for calling your OC a self insert and hope you do update again. Don't be offended by me >.> or get put of your writing because of me.

[Daniee]

New Oneshot:

Sakura's Smile

[Hinano]

I love the above fic
I drew a corresponding Oekaki to it over @ my plog

[josh32]

new story:

A Different Sort of Naruto

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

awww, my story isn't there? o well, not like i care. even though i'm damn sure everyone of you have read this story, i'm adding it anyways. you haven't read it? read it NOW!
A Growing Love
okay... yeah...

[josh32]

Updated:

A Different Sort of Naruto

[Vespar]

I can't believe I'm the only one who reads this but Itcha Itcha Naruto's been updated.

http://www.fanfictio...t/s/1840284/30/

Neji's jealous of Naruto living with Sasuke. Meanwhile Sakura writes ItaSasu pr0n for Kakashi and Neji has to enter a... SINGING CONTEST?!

All that and MORE in Itcha Itcha Naruto.

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Aethos... That fic is downright freaky! I'm never going to look at penguins the same way again! Especially the albino kind!!

And I don't know why I read through all the current chapters. <.<
Or why I added it to my alerts list. >.>

...Don't look at me!! -.-;

[tombadgerlock]

Orochimaru tries to seduce Sasuke, while Naruto gets molested by Gaara! Meanwhile, Kakashi opens his own porn shop, and Lee is terrorised by an elephant! Oh, and what's this BopBopBop crystal that everyone's after?

oh my.

Can understand vespar's fear of his psyche :ppp