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Started by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, Feb 07 2017 11:19 AM
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Posted 11 June 2022 - 09:27 AM

My guess the third act will what's really different in this doujin

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Posted 11 June 2022 - 11:31 AM

My guess the third act will what's really different in this doujin


Oh I agree since this is a remake and if we look at the past chapters a lot was changed and removed like all the useless NH moments.

If we all give it time Im sure well see more changes next chapter.

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Posted 11 June 2022 - 08:21 PM

I dont actually like TL plot regardless of pairings. However not everyone got the writing skills to pull of a whole book. This is just a fanstory, so why judge tokai like a published writer.

Ofc you could criticize fanworks too but that its a copy of canon I dont find that valid

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Posted 12 June 2022 - 01:45 PM

I dont actually like TL plot regardless of pairings. However not everyone got the writing skills to pull of a whole book. This is just a fanstory, so why judge tokai like a published writer.

Ofc you could criticize fanworks too but that its a copy of canon I dont find that valid

Neither does Kishimoto......HAH

/Jokes aside, Tokai really knows how to make the characters realistic. At least, how people should act realistically. If two people have a strong connection, someone would make a comment....
"You always seems so good around this guy rather than this guy...maybe they are better for you."
"Who? That guy? We are just friends."
"I don't think he sees it that way."

Not saying the two people have to be with each other, but an outside person looking in will notice the things that they don't. 
I like how Ino is actually a friend to Sakura and not just a rival in Tokai's story. A major aspect Kishimoto just fails at.


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Posted 12 June 2022 - 05:23 PM

Neither does Kishimoto......HAH
/Jokes aside, Tokai really knows how to make the characters realistic. At least, how people should act realistically. If two people have a strong connection, someone would make a comment....
"You always seems so good around this guy rather than this guy...maybe they are better for you."
"Who? That guy? We are just friends."
"I don't think he sees it that way."
Not saying the two people have to be with each other, but an outside person looking in will notice the things that they don't. 
I like how Ino is actually a friend to Sakura and not just a rival in Tokai's story. A major aspect Kishimoto just fails at.


Exactly, as well as Sakura coming to grips with her feelings thanks to that as well as Sasuke's words and his feeling like he has purpose rather than to just show ipmout of nowhere.

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Posted 26 June 2022 - 09:15 PM

New Page, New Chapter:

 

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Posted 26 June 2022 - 09:28 PM

New Page, New Chapter:

 

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Hmmm I wonder just how differently this scene is gonna play out compared to the movie


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Posted 27 June 2022 - 12:23 AM

was it in the film? have not seen that character


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Posted 27 June 2022 - 04:07 AM

was it in the film? have not seen that character


Me either. Maybe some original ideas done to make Hinata have more of a significant role

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Posted 27 June 2022 - 07:00 AM

Wish we could skip the Hinata parts!

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Posted 27 June 2022 - 03:56 PM

was it in the film? have not seen that character

 

 

Having watched the movie a few weeks back,  the character was in the actual movie.  I can safely confirm that.  


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Posted 27 June 2022 - 08:19 PM

Wish we could skip the Hinata parts!


ditto.

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Posted 23 July 2022 - 10:51 PM

Oh boy, this page I know is something that will make many unhappy hell I hate it too.

 

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Posted 24 July 2022 - 01:00 AM

Again though this is just a retelling of the last, so Hinata parts stay intact. I’m not even sure what the problem is now since Naruto is not saving her anymore because he’s a love ignorant twat that instantly developed his hormones solely for Hinata. Sure, I admit the writing problems are still there and Hinata wasn’t and will never be this important, but again this is not a new story, this the movie we all HATED that has been slightly altered to better fit the characters’ canon personalities and give NaruSaku as an alternate resolution. I’m sure we are all reading this with full awareness of that fact. Hate Hinata all you want, but it won’t change the content of the plot, and may I add again that the artist In question is doing this as a complete passion project and is not being compensated in the least for spending vast amounts of time on this doujin.


Edited by Phantom_999, 24 July 2022 - 01:05 AM.

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Posted 24 July 2022 - 10:35 PM

Oh boy, this page I know is something that will make many unhappy hell I hate it too.

 

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sorry you really can't go around hinata sub plot here


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Posted 28 July 2022 - 05:34 PM

Its the only level of relevance shes had in the entire series as it stands


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Posted 28 July 2022 - 07:01 PM

Its the only level of relevance shes had in the entire series as it stands


Absolutely and it doesnt hurt the overall story to keep this element as long as it is tweaked to fit how everyone is meant to be

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Posted 07 August 2022 - 03:14 PM

It goes back to same old question

It is not what happens, it is "how did we get here?"


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Posted 07 August 2022 - 04:22 PM

It goes back to same old question
It is not what happens, it is "how did we get here?"


So true, James

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Posted 07 September 2022 - 03:46 AM

a new page has been out for a week and a half. I just seen it yesterday. More Hinata though, so carry on.

Edited by Illnevergiveup3, 07 September 2022 - 03:47 AM.

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