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#1181 Gravenimage

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Posted 07 February 2011 - 05:02 PM

QUOTE (Serenity Namikaze @ Feb 7 2011, 08:37 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It was always you by luvtoshi was updated with chapter 7

I love the chapter it almost scare me with Naruto being dead.

Edited by Gravenimage, 08 February 2011 - 12:47 AM.

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#1182 Serenity Namikaze

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Posted 07 February 2011 - 07:30 PM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Feb 7 2011, 05:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love the chapter it almost with Naruto being dead.


Likewise. The author really did an awesome job with the fight scene ( even if the author said otherwise) but I espacially love the explanation behind Naruto's condition...not to mention the NaruSakuness of this chapter happy.gif


#1183 Blazing CobaltX

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Posted 08 February 2011 - 08:49 AM

QUOTE (Serenity Namikaze @ Feb 7 2011, 04:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It was always you by luvtoshi was updated with chapter 7

Loved it! happy.gif

#1184 Gravenimage

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Posted 08 February 2011 - 06:30 PM

Without Sasuke by Yethri has been updated with chapter 27 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5588054/28/
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#1185 Toasty Warrior

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Posted 08 February 2011 - 09:33 PM

Love, Hate, & Pain has been updated with chapter sixteen: http://www.fanfictio.../Love_Hate_Pain

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#1186 NaruDeeds

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Posted 11 February 2011 - 11:31 PM

Good news! I'm healthy'ish! Take that flu! Anywho... Guardian chapter 6 is FINALLY up =) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6603405/6/

#1187 Gravenimage

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Posted 14 February 2011 - 10:57 AM

Lucky charm by Eikodoll has been updated with chapter 6 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6568302/6/
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#1188 Serenity Namikaze

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Posted 14 February 2011 - 03:47 PM

A cute one shot for Valentine's day

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#1189 NaruDeeds

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Posted 14 February 2011 - 11:47 PM

My entry for the Heaven and Earth Valentine's Day contest ("Your True Love") is finally finished! I uploaded it at fanfiction as well as the library here on heaven and earth. Here's the fanfiction.net link. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6745265/1/

#1190 Gravenimage

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 02:12 AM

A new OS by Wubbzy titlec Taste the ramen very cute story http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6745667/1/
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#1191 Toasty Warrior

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 03:25 AM

QUOTE (NaruDeeds @ Feb 14 2011, 03:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
My entry for the Heaven and Earth Valentine's Day contest ("Your True Love") is finally finished! I uploaded it at fanfiction as well as the library here on heaven and earth. Here's the fanfiction.net link. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6745265/1/


Another great one shot NaruDeeds and as always, I left my review. a_thumbs.gif

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#1192 Gravenimage

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 11:23 AM

This was by far Narudeeds best story ever!
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#1193 NaruDeeds

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 02:56 AM

QUOTE (Toasty Warrior @ Feb 15 2011, 03:25 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Another great one shot NaruDeeds and as always, I left my review. a_thumbs.gif



QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Feb 15 2011, 11:23 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This was by far Narudeeds best story ever!



/e blushes. Thanks guys biggrin.gif

#1194 Destiny

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 03:23 AM

Fool Me Once, Shame on Me Chapter 15 !!!! Love it! So happy it was updated! Lovely Sasuke and Sakura fight. And the ending has me all revved up for more!!

Love is everything.

#1195 NaruDeeds

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 02:12 AM

"A Jinchuriki's Strength"- Chapter 3 is up =) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6681144/3/

#1196 shadow_Uzumaki

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 02:30 AM

QUOTE (digifruit @ Feb 5 2011, 03:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That's generally the mindset I go into when reading anything, be it fanfiction or actual novels, so I tend to be a terrible reviewer unable to offer up any useful critique. I just enjoy it for what it is, and I doubt younger writers like hearing critique anyway, preferring to hear praise instead. But then, sometimes I wonder if it's that kind of mindset that keeps fanfiction authors stagnant. Like, I'm a fairly mediocre author at best (even downright terrible at times), but sometimes I do get an inflated ego due to the lack of any critical reviews when I really should be honing my craft sweatdrop.gif

And, btw, what is the OVA ciardha is talking about? Is it a NaruSaku short? Can't believe I missed it



Sorry, mediocre? Didn't see that in your stories, they always bring me to the brink of tears except for your Flavor of Life where I really DID cry with the melancholic tone your stories feature. It's probably because I have a lower taste and easily impressed, but your stories have always been amazing.

Edited by shadow_Uzumaki, 17 February 2011 - 02:31 AM.


#1197 foxboi

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 03:06 AM

Hello!!I'm new and would like to share my story here it is wow.png Sakura's lover-chapter 1








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Posted 17 February 2011 - 08:22 AM

QUOTE (shadow_Uzumaki @ Feb 16 2011, 06:30 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sorry, mediocre? Didn't see that in your stories, they always bring me to the brink of tears except for your Flavor of Life where I really DID cry with the melancholic tone your stories feature. It's probably because I have a lower taste and easily impressed, but your stories have always been amazing.

lol, dude, I'm trying to be humble here, don't stoke my ego, haha tongue.gif
But, seriously, I'm not that great. I may be an alright storyteller, but I'm a pretty low-level writer, so it balances out to me being a middle-of-the-road author, haha. I think the moment I start thinking that I'm talented is the moment I stagnate and stop improving

QUOTE (foxboi @ Feb 16 2011, 07:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hello!!I'm new and would like to share my story here it is wow.png Sakura's lover-chapter 1

and welcome to the forums, foxboi wave.gif
I read the first two chapters of your story, it's pretty cute, I enjoyed it smile.gif
For your next chapter, work on capitalization and formatting (ie, spacing your paragraphs) and keep practicing the art of writing. You're still young so don't get discouraged; keep writing and have fun with it. Having fun is the most important part, hehe

#1199 Torxe

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 09:10 AM

@foxboi => the link you posted is broken; care to post a new one? thx.

In support of the Sakura we once knew:

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 02:43 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Feb 17 2011, 09:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
@foxboi => the link you posted is broken; care to post a new one? thx.
Ya... dry.gif been having trouble with that latly...here heres something I picked up from fanfic:
One of my fav's!!




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