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[Gnosismaster]

I like that one.

[SakuDotz]

Here's my first drabble:

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There are rumors going on that a certain person has huge amount of luck, as in good luck...…

And Sakura thinks it is about Naruto...…

She had heard from her master, Tsunade that Naruto has a THAT amount of luck, some of those stories which she had heard from Jiraiya that she could not believe… though Sakura was curious how her teammate had all that money for ramen and sometimes gifts he bought for her...…

So here they are, a team consists of Naruto, his cousins now sisters, Megumi and Lily, Sai and herself on another D-rank mission.

As they walk around in the marketplace, a voice was calling towards Naruto…

"Hey you.."

Naruto, who was giving his little cousin, Lily, a piggyback ride, suddenly stopped…

"Naru-chan... why did you stopped?" asked the ten year old strawberry-blonde girl. He walked up to the stand while carrying Lily...…

"Naruto, what are you doing?!" Sakura demanded to know what her teammate is doing.

Naruto took out his wallet "Gama-chan" which had a little a bit of money inside, took some out for two scratch-offs, one for Lily and one for himself.

"What's he doing?" Sai asked

"I think that's a lottery stand," Megumi said.

Naruto was busying showing Lily how to do the scratch-off.

"Naruto, we don't have time for this. We can do that another..."

"Awww... lost," Lily pouted, but then...

"We have a winner!"

"Huh?!" all three were surprised. They walked up towards the stand. The woman on the stand gave Naruto a receipt and a bundle of money…

"Thanks!!" Naruto chuckled for winning.

"Wait; let me see the receipt..." Megumi said as her cousin gave her the receipt...…

Her face-faulted and her jaw almost dropped...

"Let me see," Sakura said curiously...she read the receipt and...…

Sakura couldn't speak; her face was faulted as well and she was speaking jibberish... Naruto won how much?!!!

In the mind of anyone who wants to be wealthy in life, especially those who are greedy, seeing that kind of money will give them daydreams of swimming in pool full of money while the song, "I'm in the Money", plays in the background.

Though Naruto is not that kind of guy for that matter...

Sakura couldn't believe it. The rumors are true. Naruto has heaps amount of luck in gambling. If Tsunade was known as the Legendary Sucker, then Naruto could be known as the Legendary Winner. Now, if he doesn't spend it on about 100 bowls of ramen and give some to charity, he will be in financial secure for life or both of them will be secure, if she marries him...…

"Marry him, SHANNARO!!!" Inner Sakura screamed in her mind, throwing a fist in the air.

"Uh...Sakura...? Are you there?"Megumi was calling her.

Sakura blinked, while she saw Lily hugged Naruto tight to congratulate him for winning the money. She smiled at the blonde who grinned at his younger cousin. Though, in her mind, Inner Sakura is currently planning to proclaim Naruto so no other girl can catch him.

There are OC's in this drabble, I will post them later about them

Whoa! Nice work, Derock! You should totally like more. I especially love the ending with Inner Sakura. Can't forget about her! XD

Bleh, Recompense! I have to catch up on your drabbles. I didn't see your recent ones.

[SakuNaruLover]

Nice drabbles everyone

[Derock]

Another drabble... (very raunchy here)

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She can't take it anymore...he can't take it anymore...…

They want each other...NOW!!!

Shining ocean eyes has met with beautiful jade eyes as the two lovers began to explore each other...

Rough meets soft and dedicate...hands and lips were together...though this was not their first... their first time was fast and an act of desperation...this time, it was nice and slow, time was definitely ignored...

Pure pleasure and lust has come between the two lovers and soon they will head to the road to ecstasy in pure bliss...…

The next morning...

Sakura woke up with a smile on her face. She lies on her “pillow” when she saw that his eyes were opening…

"Hey...," he sleepily greeted as he give his lover a kiss in the lips…

"Morning..."

"Last night was something, huh?"

"Yeah...," She agreed. "Though, do you think we have time for...more?"

Naruto instantly pull Sakura up for another round...or in their minds...round 10.

[Wilson]

Nice Derock, loved it. XD

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Nice drabble again Derock Dude

Although, round 10, maybe a bit too much lol.

[Sakura Blossoms]

Derry, you must have been on like the almost exact same wave-length as me, because I had just written a drabble slightly like your second one...(which was very good btw XD)...and was just coming to post mine now

And it clocks in at just around 100 words too :thumbs:

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The smell of her skin on his body…

The scent of his on hers…

Two lovers intertwined…dancing…moving…gliding against each other in a dance as old as time…

Moving…urging…sliding against each other…

Poetry in motion, as soft strawberry-coloured tresses flowed over strong, flexible arms that held…loved…gave comfort and warmth, and a stirring passion that could only be extinguished when the final flames of their love, were doused by the crashing waves that flowed over and through them, in a never-ending game of passion and desire, that were played out by one blond-haired fox…and his sweet cherry blossom...

[Derock]

Now that's a nice one, Sakura-chan :thumbs:

[JoHamSandwich]

De-man and Shaunana are teh PERVS. XDD

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Very nice Shauna

Seems like today is perv day, which is awesome for me

[Recompense]

Goddamn plot expostition.

This is just leading up to my final two 'Takeshi's Madness' Drabbles

Enjoy the plot exposition

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Kakashi stood at the door, his back comfortably resting against the solid wall. His book of guidance sat in its usual position, open and not five inches from his face. His hair was defying gravity in a fashion that had destroyed more than a few Scientists minds. He waited patiently for the screaming, moaning, and crying in the room behind him to stop.

Eventually, Naruto walked out, moving in a furious, ground-eating stride. Kakashi, pushed off the wall, his eyes never leaving his book. They didn’t pause in their reading even when Naruto asked in an enraged and frustrated voice,

“How many?”

kakashi’s eye betrayed a sliver of the sadness he felt.

“43 civilians dead, 13 academy students, 6 genin, 5 chuunin dead. Double that wounded, including yourself and Sakura-san.”

Kakashi could feel the anger that rolled off of Naruto now, and he ever so cautiously backed an inch away, they continued walking towards Takeshi’s holding cell before Naruto spoke up again.

“Well, we kind of have an idea of what might possibly be wrong with him. Maybe.”

“Oh?”

They stopped in front of the window looking in to Takeshi’s room, he was struggling against the restraints, as usual. His legs were bounds, his hands were chained without an inch of leeway this time. His head was restrained by a metal collar, as his body was encased in a metal cage.

Naruto turned to face Kakashi, who put his book away.

“According to Ino and the psychologist, Takeshi-sensei isn’t alone in that body.”

“Split personality disorder?”

“Yup, but for some reason, his eyes change, so we don’t know if it’s a bloodline, or what.”

Kakashi would’ve stroked his beard, if it weren’t for that mask. Yes, he has a beard, and he likes to stroke it when he thinks, deal with it.

“Well, I haven’t heard anything about a clan like that, anything else?”

“well, apparently Takeshi killed his four year old brothers when he was younger, and apparently there were others who died with them.”

“Was it Takeshi, or the other personality’s?”

“We don’t know. We can classify them now, though.”

“Oh? How?”

“When his eyes are black, it means he’s gone completely bat-kitten insane.”

“I could have guessed that given what happened yesterday.”

“Right, when the eyes are green like normal, he’s Takeshi.”

“Continue…”

“When they’re yellow, then it isn’t insane, or sane.”

“That’s just stupid enough to not make any sense.”

“Yeah? Try talking to Ino about it, all she said is that it wasn’t normal. She couldn’t describe it.”

Kakashi looked back at Takeshi, who’s eyes were black, a grin adorned his features as he curiously inspected the room. Again.

“Well, at least now we know what we’re dealing with. What do you think we should do?”

“Now? We need to wait for tommorow, make sure Ino is okay, I’m gonna go check on Sakura-chan.”

And they left, never noticing the gleam of yellow in Takeshi’s eyes as he glared at them through the mirror.

damn

[Tohno Shiki]

Finally an explanation d00d. A slightly disturbing one, but an explanation nonetheless. MPD wins!

Nice work, now write the continuation to the one before!

[Unexpectations]

Goddamn plot expostition.

This is just leading up to my final two 'Takeshi's Madness' Drabbles

Enjoy the plot exposition

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Kakashi stood at the door, his back comfortably resting against the solid wall. His book of guidance sat in its usual position, open and not five inches from his face. His hair was defying gravity in a fashion that had destroyed more than a few Scientists minds. He waited patiently for the screaming, moaning, and crying in the room behind him to stop.

Eventually, Naruto walked out, moving in a furious, ground-eating stride. Kakashi, pushed off the wall, his eyes never leaving his book. They didn’t pause in their reading even when Naruto asked in an enraged and frustrated voice,

“How many?”

kakashi’s eye betrayed a sliver of the sadness he felt.

“43 civilians dead, 13 academy students, 6 genin, 5 chuunin dead. Double that wounded, including yourself and Sakura-san.”

Kakashi could feel the anger that rolled off of Naruto now, and he ever so cautiously backed an inch away, they continued walking towards Takeshi’s holding cell before Naruto spoke up again.

“Well, we kind of have an idea of what might possibly be wrong with him. Maybe.”

“Oh?”

They stopped in front of the window looking in to Takeshi’s room, he was struggling against the restraints, as usual. His legs were bounds, his hands were chained without an inch of leeway this time. His head was restrained by a metal collar, as his body was encased in a metal cage.

Naruto turned to face Kakashi, who put his book away.

“According to Ino and the psychologist, Takeshi-sensei isn’t alone in that body.”

“Split personality disorder?”

“Yup, but for some reason, his eyes change, so we don’t know if it’s a bloodline, or what.”

Kakashi would’ve stroked his beard, if it weren’t for that mask. Yes, he has a beard, and he likes to stroke it when he thinks, deal with it.

“Well, I haven’t heard anything about a clan like that, anything else?”

“well, apparently Takeshi killed his four year old brothers when he was younger, and apparently there were others who died with them.”

“Was it Takeshi, or the other personality’s?”

“We don’t know. We can classify them now, though.”

“Oh? How?”

“When his eyes are black, it means he’s gone completely bat-kitten insane.”

“I could have guessed that given what happened yesterday.”

“Right, when the eyes are green like normal, he’s Takeshi.”

“Continue…”

“When they’re yellow, then it isn’t insane, or sane.”

“That’s just stupid enough to not make any sense.”

“Yeah? Try talking to Ino about it, all she said is that it wasn’t normal. She couldn’t describe it.”

Kakashi looked back at Takeshi, who’s eyes were black, a grin adorned his features as he curiously inspected the room. Again.

“Well, at least now we know what we’re dealing with. What do you think we should do?”

“Now? We need to wait for tommorow, make sure Ino is okay, I’m gonna go check on Sakura-chan.”

And they left, never noticing the gleam of yellow in Takeshi’s eyes as he glared at them through the mirror.

damn

Hmmm... Not sure what to say... But, it's interesting

[Tohno Shiki]

...This is dedicated to Recomp.

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The rain poured in torrents, wave after wave relentlessly battering into the ground.

He was oblivious to it all. Everything but the dying girl in his arms.

Naruto felt tears well up unbidden at the corners of his eyes, but made no attempt to stop them.

"Why..."

The painstaking smile that she cast towards him spoke of sorrow and regret for what could have been, and he felt shards of grief pierce his heart at the obvious pain she was in.

"Na...ru..."

Looking into her brilliant emerald eyes, he saw in them what she was unable to say aloud.

I'm sorry...

He held her gaze even as it gradually faded into the murky stare of the dead, staring at her porcelain features and committing them to memory.

"Don't worry...I'll avenge you..."

Leaning forward, he brushed his lips against her cold foreheard as his eyes became flecked with specks of red and his teeth elongated into fangs.

It was time for Sasuke to learn that all actions had consequences.

[Recompense]

nice, squiggles

much better than this.

This is the second to last of the 'Takeshi's Madness' Drabbles

Enjoy, its just setting up for the finale.

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“What’s going on here!?”

Naruto burst into the room, his cloak inherited from his father billowing as he flew past the door, coming into the room holding his insane sensei.

Takeshi was currently screaming, struggling against the metal bindings in an attempt to break free, pushing, pulsating, his wrists were chaffed and raw, his mouth was sore from screaming, his face was slick with sweat, as he pulsed against the bindings striving desperately to reach someone, anyone, and unleash the fury that was building up inside him.

Naruto walked to his sensei, his blue eye’s filled with not just disappointment, but hope

What a foolish boy.

Takeshi stopped struggling, his body relaxing, his head falling back onto the steel bed. His eyes closed calmly, as if he were concentrating. his entire demeanor suddenly seemed calm.

Naruto turned to leave, there was obviously no problem, just another psychotic episode. He was at the door, his arm extended for the handle, when he heard the voice.

“Boy.”

Naruto turned, that was his sensei, yet it… wasn’t. the voice was harsh, unflinching, and there was an under-current to it, something that awoke a primal fear deep inside Naruto’s very soul.

“Boy, listen to me.”

The table lifted, it shifted, ripping off its base. Naruto turned, facing his sensei, who was now inexplicably floating in the air. He met his sensei’s eyes. Those yellow eyes.

“I will kill you.”

Naruto immediately recovered from the shock of seeing his sensei floating, realizing that whatever the hell this thing was, it wasn’t natural.

“I will kill you first, and then I’ll kill your b*tch.”

Naruto knew what this thing was talking about when it said b*tch. And it was all he could do not to tear this thing to shreds with his claws at hearing its threat. He let it continue, this was his best shot at learning about the enigmatic third personality inside of his sensei.

“And then, your town.”

Suddenly the eyes shifted back to black, an insane grin filled Takeshi’s features, as he fell to the floor with a resounding crash, the heavy steel table he was caged to cracking the floor, leaving him standing like a coffin before it is laid to rest.

Naruto turned to leave, his mind still considering the options of what to do with his insane sensei.

He didn’t have long now.

It was almost time.

NEW EMOTES!!

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Some weird drabbles, but very good nonetheless. And Squall, i will smite you one day

[Tohno Shiki]

You will never smite me Rick!

[roninmedia]

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Many Shades of Pink

When we first shared things about ourselves, the pink I loved was in her hair.

When we first shared our stories after our reunion, the pink I loved was in her cheeks.

When we first shared our feelings for each other, the pink I loved was in her lips.

When we first shared our loved for each, the pink I loved was in her hair because of where it led.

[Gnosismaster]

Hehe, I like that one.

[Tohno Shiki]

Another one dedicated to Recomp! This is a semi-sequel to my other drabble, so you can think of it as the ending if you wish.

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They lay side by side, the two boys who had once been best friends. One with blood pooling from a gaping chest wound, and the other with his internal organs irreparably shredded.

Both of them were dying, and they knew it.

Looking into the other's rapidly dimming eyes, Naruto couldn't help but wonder if things could have ended differently. Or was it fated that Team Seven would die on this cursed day?

Fighting the wracking pain in his chest, he struggled to say something, anything to tell Sasuke of the overwhelming regret and guilt he felt.

Even as his mouth opened and closed, Naruto found that the words eluded him. How could he ever hope to express the endless amount of torment and heartbreak that the Uchiha had put him through using mere words?

Looking into those inscrutable eyes, emotionless even as death approached, Naruto felt his cracked and bloodied lips part in a final grin as he mouthed his last words.

"You...bas...tard..."