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[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

totally agree ! 

What personally bothered me in the last chapter is that it was too Pairings-centered, putting people together like that, just for them to have kids, was bad. 

 

When I read chapter 700 I was wondering WHY Naruto didn't use his shadow clones at work while he would be spending some time with his children ! 

So yeah, that's a good idea ! Katia approves it ! 

 

Thanks, Ichigo-chan I kinda think Naruto just had a dumbass moment if he forgot to consider using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to spend time with his kids AND do his job as Hokage. Or the theory I had that perhaps he's begun to have some regrets about how his life turned out... X-D

But I'm glad you liked it, since it means a lot since it just came to mind and stuck for a while, and I wanted to share it.

[Nar123]

I had an idea for a scene, guys;
 
Shikamaru: Hey, Naruto, how much longer're you gonna be?
 
*Naruto is looking over some paperwork* Naruto: Yeah, gimme a minute, Shikamaru.
 
Shikamaru: Seriously, are you almost done?
 
Naruto: Huh? Oh, right, right! *puts the paper down* Listen, man, can you look at it all? I think I got it signed right. *does a hand sign and explodes*
 
Shikamaru: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME!!! A shadow clone?! NOT AGAIN!! Naruto!! What a drag it is to be your advisor if you're not even here for me to advise you...!!!
 
*Naruto and Sakura Uzumaki's place, a little outside of the Hidden Leaf Village. Just a few minutes walk to the village*
 
Naruto: So that's how it is. *smiles as he is sitting with his 8-year old son, Jiraiya, fishing* Fish sure are hopping today, huh?
 
Jiraiya: They sure are, Dad. Hey, do you think Unca Shikamaru's gonna be mad you used the Shadow Clone Jutsu while in the office? I mean, I always hear Shikanosuke talking to me 'bout how Unca Shikamaru feels like you're shirking your responsibilities as Hokage.
 
Naruto: Hey, I get the work done, Jiraiya, plus I also can memorize everything thanks to the Shadow Clone Jutsu. We don't gotta worry too much. If Shikamaru needs to talk to me, he knows where to find me.
 
Jiraiya: I just hope he won't be TOO mad!

*Sakura comes out, holding Haruka, her and Naruto's 6-year old daughter's hand* Sakura: So any luck with the fishing, guys?
 
Naruto: Hey, hon! Yeah, they're jumping, but... *feels a tug, then gets up, focusing himself as he grits his teeth and pulls, crying out as he yanks up a big fish*

Jiraiya: HOLY COW!!!

Haruka: It's so big!!

*Naruto grins as he holds onto it* Naruto: Sakura, I think I got us dinner tonight! Maybe we oughta invite a few people!

Sakura: You dork, as if we need a few people! That fish's at least 20 pounds!
 
Naruto: Hey, you're an amazing cook! I bet you could make something great with it, like sashimi! 

*Sakura smiles and shakes her head at her husband, as he finally gets the fish to stop moving* Sakura: Naruto, sometimes, you can be an idiot.
 
*Leaping off the fish, Naruto walks over to Sakura, putting his arms around her waist, causing her to squeal and let go of Haruka's hand as she puts her hands on Naruto's chest* Naruto: I know. But I'm your idiot.
 
*Sakura chuckles, as the two kiss, with Jiraiya gagging in the background, and Haruka giggling*
 
 
I think showing interactions with those who have children and their new roles would also need to be explored, which is why I also thought of Naruto sometimes using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to do work at the office as Hokage AND to spend time with Sakura and the kids. Of course, much to Shikamaru's chagrin, it gets annoying fast, even if Naruto would memorize everything his Shadow Clone did when the Jutsu is dispelled. Plus I also see Sakura not just as a top medic at the Leaf Village Hospital, but also in charge of a team of medical ninja as well as now and then staying at home to look after Jiraiya and Haruka. 
 
So whatcha think, guys and girls? :3 Was it OK?

Your Naruto is the real Naruto, its more IC than 700

[Metalhead87]

totally agree ! 

What personally bothered me in the last chapter is that it was too Pairings-centered, putting people together like that, just for them to have kids, was bad.

 

Agreed. There were far more important aspects of each character's personal story that should have been addressed opposed to who they married.

 

I had an idea for a scene, guys;

 

Shikamaru: Hey, Naruto, how much longer're you gonna be?

 

*Naruto is looking over some paperwork* Naruto: Yeah, gimme a minute, Shikamaru.

 

Shikamaru: Seriously, are you almost done?

 

Naruto: Huh? Oh, right, right! *puts the paper down* Listen, man, can you look at it all? I think I got it signed right. *does a hand sign and explodes*

 

Shikamaru: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME!!! A shadow clone?! NOT AGAIN!! Naruto!! What a drag it is to be your advisor if you're not even here for me to advise you...!!!

 

*Naruto and Sakura Uzumaki's place, a little outside of the Hidden Leaf Village. Just a few minutes walk to the village*

 

Naruto: So that's how it is. *smiles as he is sitting with his 8-year old son, Jiraiya, fishing* Fish sure are hopping today, huh?

 

Jiraiya: They sure are, Dad. Hey, do you think Unca Shikamaru's gonna be mad you used the Shadow Clone Jutsu while in the office? I mean, I always hear Shikanosuke talking to me 'bout how Unca Shikamaru feels like you're shirking your responsibilities as Hokage.

 

Naruto: Hey, I get the work done, Jiraiya, plus I also can memorize everything thanks to the Shadow Clone Jutsu. We don't gotta worry too much. If Shikamaru needs to talk to me, he knows where to find me.

 

Jiraiya: I just hope he won't be TOO mad!

*Sakura comes out, holding Haruka, her and Naruto's 6-year old daughter's hand* Sakura: So any luck with the fishing, guys?
 

Naruto: Hey, hon! Yeah, they're jumping, but... *feels a tug, then gets up, focusing himself as he grits his teeth and pulls, crying out as he yanks up a big fish*

Jiraiya: HOLY COW!!!

Haruka: It's so big!!

*Naruto grins as he holds onto it* Naruto: Sakura, I think I got us dinner tonight! Maybe we oughta invite a few people!

Sakura: You dork, as if we need a few people! That fish's at least 20 pounds!
 

Naruto: Hey, you're an amazing cook! I bet you could make something great with it, like sashimi! 

*Sakura smiles and shakes her head at her husband, as he finally gets the fish to stop moving* Sakura: Naruto, sometimes, you can be an idiot.
 

*Leaping off the fish, Naruto walks over to Sakura, putting his arms around her waist, causing her to squeal and let go of Haruka's hand as she puts her hands on Naruto's chest* Naruto: I know. But I'm your idiot.

 

*Sakura chuckles, as the two kiss, with Jiraiya gagging in the background, and Haruka giggling*

 

 

I think showing interactions with those who have children and their new roles would also need to be explored, which is why I also thought of Naruto sometimes using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to do work at the office as Hokage AND to spend time with Sakura and the kids. Of course, much to Shikamaru's chagrin, it gets annoying fast, even if Naruto would memorize everything his Shadow Clone did when the Jutsu is dispelled. Plus I also see Sakura not just as a top medic at the Leaf Village Hospital, but also in charge of a team of medical ninja as well as now and then staying at home to look after Jiraiya and Haruka. 

 

So whatcha think, guys and girls? :3 Was it OK?

 

Hehe, I like it! Naruto should have totally done that (and I suspect, with this project, totally will)

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

 

Agreed. There were far more important aspects of each character's personal story that should have been addressed opposed to who they married.

 

Hehe, I like it! Naruto should have totally done that (and I suspect, with this project, totally will)

 

Agreed, Metalhead :) 

 

And thanks! I figure Naruto would be the kind of dad like Goku is, where he loves his family so much even if he does dork out now and then Too bad Kishimoto-sensei ruined my expectations with 700.

[MoonDrop04]

 
Nice! xd But I think there is a slight problem with this plan. Many people have their own version of what an ending could be. But not that many people can write scenario/script/fanfic to properly expresses his/hers idea!
 
It's a nice theory! The reason why I think Sakura regrowing Naruto's arm. Is because she already surpassed Tsunade in the usage of seal. healing much more people at once. And being able to pas her seal on to Obito!

Yes I know many people who have their own ending won't be able to express themselves properly in their work but in this CONTEST I'm not suggesting the entire fandom to enter it.....

When I was thinking about this idea this past week I realized there should be a limit to the number of participants to enter the contest. Reason being is that the entire fandom will be the judges of our work, but reading hundreds of different works would Definetly prove too much!!

So in order to simplify this problem we should limit the number of participants to 15-20 people only. Each of these people would be ones who they think can write an ENDING properly. And their own version Ending can written in anyway they choose as long it meets the future requirements that will be established within the Contests rules.

Remember the people will be judging which of the writers works will be the best one, it depends on you to write as best you can to appease to the fandom. Like I have said before this contest will be a TEST for each of us to find out if we can write a Future Part 3.

[Metalhead87]

Yes I know many people who have their own ending won't be able to express themselves properly in their work but in this CONTEST I'm not suggesting the entire fandom to enter it.....

When I was thinking about this idea this past week I realized there should be a limit to the number of participants to enter the contest. Reason being is that the entire fandom will be the judges of our work, but reading hundreds of different works would Definetly prove too much!!

So in order to simplify this problem we should limit the number of participants to 15-20 people only. Each of these people would be ones who they think can write an ENDING properly. And their own version Ending can written in anyway they choose as long it meets the future requirements that will be established within the Contests rules.

Remember the people will be judging which of the writers works will be the best one, it depends on you to write as best you can to appease to the fandom. Like I have said before this contest will be a TEST for each of us to find out if we can write a Future Part 3.

 

I'm definitely still interested. What are the contest rules? Also, would people be allowed to collaborate with one another? (Say, a writing partnership of some sort)

[MoonDrop04]

 
I'm definitely still interested. What are the contest rules? Also, would people be allowed to collaborate with one another? (Say, a writing partnership of some sort)

These are the rules I have been able to come up with so far.....

-the writer must write their Ending as Naruto Shounan manga style. No matter how much you want to express Naruto's love for Sakura or the other way around you have to remember the manga didn't express shoujo romance traits, so you shouldn't either. Same goes for other pairings you will include in your ending...

-the writer must include as many as the plot holes that weren't in kishi's ending in their own work. The TRUE ENDING must be conclusive to the Naruto series to which the entire fandom deserves.

-at the end of their ENDING the writer must write a future generation to be used as a basis for the future PART 3 PROJECT.

-the writer must include between 4-12 chapters in their Ending. Reason being is because if Kishi didn't rush the ending the way he did, he could have written one more volume worth of chapters (10 chapters). So if that were the case the Naruto Manga would have ended in chapter 710 rather then 700. But I understand if people don't think they can write that much chapters so that's why the lowest limit of chapters they can write is 4 chapters.

That is all I can think of currently but some rules can still be added in the future :)

Hmmm you know what that's Ok!!! If people want to team up together to make an ending that'd be awesome!!! It will be just like the BAKUMAN manga so it's cool X)

[Metalhead87]

These are the rules I have been able to come up with so far.....

-the writer must write their Ending as Naruto Shounan manga style. No matter how much you want to express Naruto's love for Sakura or the other way around you have to remember the manga didn't express shoujo romance traits, so you shouldn't either. Same goes for other pairings you will include in your ending...

-the writer must include as many as the plot holes that weren't in kishi's ending in their own work. The TRUE ENDING must be conclusive to the Naruto series to which the entire fandom deserves.

-at the end of their ENDING the writer must write a future generation to be used as a basis for the future PART 3 PROJECT.

-the writer must include between 4-12 chapters in their Ending. Reason being is because if Kishi didn't rush the ending the way he did, he could have written one more volume worth of chapters (10 chapters). So if that were the case the Naruto Manga would have ended in chapter 710 rather then 700. But I understand if people don't think they can write that much chapters so that's why the lowest limit of chapters they can write is 4 chapters.

That is all I can think of currently but some rules can still be added in the future :)

Hmmm you know what that's Ok!!! If people want to team up together to make an ending that'd be awesome!!! It will be just like the BAKUMAN manga so it's cool X)

 

Awesome! Thank you for clarifying. How would someone go about being considered for this (he hinted lol)?

[MoonDrop04]

 
Awesome! Thank you for clarifying. How would someone go about being considered for this (he hinted lol)?

What do you mean? Like who's going to be your partner?? Or How the ending will be chosen?? Lol

[Metalhead87]

What do you mean? Like who's going to be your partner?? Or How the ending will be chosen?? Lol

 

Sorry, should have specified lol

 

I meant how would someone go about entering the contest and having a go? Should we just write something and turn it in or would you rather we made a request to have a bash at it?

[MoonDrop04]

 
Sorry, should have specified lol
 
I meant how would someone go about entering the contest and having a go? Should we just write something and turn it in or would you rather we made a request to have a bash at it?

Yes I thought of that too X) lol

Since there will be a limit of writers in the Contest I thought it would be best to set a sign-in registration for a a few days. Within that time limit whoever has signed in by the end will be the ones to write the endings in the Contest. The max number of entrees will be 20 people....

[Metalhead87]

Yes I thought of that too X) lol

Since there will be a limit of writers in the Contest I thought it would be best to set a sign-in registration for a a few days. Within that time limit whoever has signed in by the end will be the ones to write the endings in the Contest. The max number of entrees will be 20 people....

 

Ah, I see. Okay then. Well, when it's possible to sign up, consider me signed up! 

[MoonDrop04]

 
Ah, I see. Okay then. Well, when it's possible to sign up, consider me signed up! 

Sweet X) but first we gotta spread the word about the Contest. We need more people to know what we are doing in order to make this a possibility!!!

[Metalhead87]

Sweet X) but first we gotta spread the word about the Contest. We need more people to know what we are doing in order to make this a possibility!!!

 

Ah yes, very true.

[Nar123]

Sweet X) but first we gotta spread the word about the Contest. We need more people to know what we are doing in order to make this a possibility!!!

There is already a contest! We could use the "10th year of H&E" contest to get our ending!
http://www.narusaku....e=5#entry706329

Edited by Nar123, 21 December 2014 - 01:00 AM.

[MoonDrop04]

There is already a contest! We could use the "10th year of H&E" contest to get our ending!
http://www.narusaku....e=5#entry706329

I've heard about this!!! Never got the chance to actually find out about it but this could work!!!

.......but what they are suggesting is just a NS ending while I'm suggesting a Naruto AND NS ending!!! The whole series wasn't just about NS but about other Bonds and "Dreams" as well. Could they possibly take up our suggestion to include everything we have discussed so far in the thread and add it to their contest??

[Nar123]

I've heard about this!!! Never got the chance to actually find out about it but this could work!!!

.......but what they are suggesting is just a NS ending while I'm suggesting a Naruto AND NS ending!!! The whole series wasn't just about NS but about other Bonds and "Dreams" as well. Could they possibly take up our suggestion to include everything we have discussed so far in the thread and add it to their contest??

Ever since the ending the Contest is free for all themes as long it has NS

So basically each one of us could submit a ending over there

[MoonDrop04]

Ever since the ending the Contest is free for all themes as long it has NS

So basically each one of us could submit a ending over there

Alright alright that takes care of that XD but are they voting which would be the best and how long is the contest??

[Nar123]

Alright alright that takes care of that XD but are they voting which would be the best and how long is the contest??

There is more information back at the link i posted, but I think the mods are going to judge, I also think it is until february or January

Edited by Nar123, 21 December 2014 - 04:50 AM.

[MoonDrop04]

There is more information back at the link i posted, but I think the mods are going to judge, I also think it is until february or January

Alright I posted something on the link you provided me. Check it out and tell me what you think.......would it work?