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[FoolishYoungling]

Good job once again. I wonder if we will see Hinata soon.

[Phantom_999]

Likely. The story will be going on for a while, I assure you. How long, well that depends, cause I don't think I can drag it on too much or it will get stale. Trying to find the perfect length here. Care to share some thoughts guys?

[FoolishYoungling]

Likely. The story will be going on for a while, I assure you. How long, well that depends, cause I don't think I can drag it on too much or it will get stale. Trying to find the perfect length here. Care to share some thoughts guys?

 

My thoughts? Well, I think the story should go on forever until Shunamori gets Yuuki.

[Dkey]

 

My thoughts? Well, I think the story should go on forever until Shunamori gets Yuuki.

 

What are you talking about. Don't you see Yuuki clearly likes someone else.

[FoolishYoungling]

 

What are you talking about. Don't you see Yuuki clearly likes someone else.

 

Well yes, but she is obviously blinded right now. One day she will understand that she truly loves Shunamori. Shunamori hasn't told Yuuki about his feelings for her because he wants her to be happy about loving Akira. Yes I'm creating a little fanfiction love story out of a fanfiction.

[Phantom_999]

In that case you're welcome to try.  what is it that makes you so eager about shipping them btw? 

Edited by Phantom_999, 24 July 2013 - 10:57 AM.

[narusakuno1]

But I kinda ship Shinamori and Yuuki based on the team 7 circle. See how Yuuki like Akira because of his looks and talents just like Sakura and Sasuke.

[narusakuno1]

And also seems like Shunamori cares for her a lot! He must be watching her all the time simce he said "You *always*stare at him" If he knows that she always stare at Akira he must ALWAYS watch Yuuki! I'm using NaruSaku parallel here! + She hasn't talked to him (Akira) yet and doesn't know him that much! Oops got carried away-.- Btw this fansfic is sooooo interesting!!! Please make more but take your time!

[FoolishYoungling]

In that case you're welcome to try.  what is it that makes you so eager about shipping them btw? 

 

Like narusakuno1 said. Shunamori cares a whole bunch about Yuuki. If she views him as a best friend already, I see no reason how Shunamori wouldn't love her. Plus this Akira guy is reminding me of Sasuke too much.

[Dkey]

but you guys are forgeting that she os Naruto's child and she can't just go for the other guy. Shunamori doesn't belong to the long line of losers like Naruto did.

[FoolishYoungling]

but you guys are forgeting that she os Naruto's child and she can't just go for the other guy. Shunamori doesn't belong to the long line of losers like Naruto did.

 

Why does Shunamori have to be like Naruto? He is a great person all around, and there is no way (unless he is gay) that he won't fall in love with Yuuki somewhere in his life. And sense Yuuki doesn't even talk to Akira, she obviously likes him because of his looks and talents. I don't like that. Reminds me of SasuSaku way too much.

[Phantom_999]

Uh well actually Akira is not anti-social or stoic like Sasuke. I was thinking of a similarity to Minato. sort of. Anyways I assure you he is not a jerk. I am happy that people like my fanfic though. But if anything I COULD write an alterate fanfic where Yuuki and Shunamori get together.

[FoolishYoungling]

Uh well actually Akira is not anti-social or stoic like Sasuke. I was thinking of a similarity to Minato. sort of. Anyways I assure you he is not a jerk. I am happy that people like my fanfic though. But if anything I COULD write an alterate fanfic where Yuuki and Shunamori get together.

 

YEEESSS!!! Yuuki and Shumamori must be together! No matter what it takes!

[Phantom_999]

That will come after the main story though.  BTW I never said that no one else could write a fanfic here about a Child of Naruto and Sakura/any female of your choice. Feel free, cause I love reading fanfics. Well okay I'll be honest. I don't necessarily enjoy fanfics where the characters are ludicrously OOC without good reason. In fact, I was personnaly uncomortable with my part 6 of Naruto's future child, but again I made that only to get some laughs(and hint at SasuHina). Anyways I would still enjoy any work, since I'm sure I'm not the only one with ideas.

Edited by Phantom_999, 24 July 2013 - 06:54 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

That will come after the main story though.  BTW I never said that no one else could write a fanfic here about a Child of Naruto and Sakura/any female of your choice. Feel free, cause I love reading fanfics. Well okay I'll be honest. I don't necessarily enjoy fanfics where the characters are ludicrously OOC without good reason. In fact, I was personnaly uncomortable with my part 6 of Naruto's future child, but again I made that only to get some laughs(and hint at SasuHina). Anyways I would still enjoy any work, since I'm sure I'm not the only one with ideas.

I'll think about making one. I'm going to bed for now.

[narusakuno1]

I'll think about making one. I'm going to bed for now.

I'm looking forward to this! ^.~

[FoolishYoungling]

I'm looking forward to this! ^.~

 

If I make it, it'll probably take place after Phantom's story. If he decides that Yuuki needs to be with Akira then I probably won't be able to make it. No worries. If he wants Yuuki to be with Akira then that is the way it'll be.

[Phantom_999]

No I'm sure you could make it even if I pair up Yuuki with Akira. Just reset the romance thing.

 

Here I'll give you an idea. Fast forward in Yuuki's world about 5-6 years and Shunamori realizes he DOES have feelings for her and there becomes an entire love triangle involving that. Yuuki is going out with Akira And he is trying to subtly hint at her but it flies over her head. And if that doesn't inspire you, I'll take it instead.  But it won't be in the main story it is in an alternate canon. Anyways I'm planning out the meeting and where to go with the story from here.   And another thing I'm gonna have to change some of the line in the previous chapters lest I make the plot inconsistent.

Edited by Phantom_999, 29 July 2013 - 07:30 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

No I'm sure you could make it even if I pair up Yuuki with Akira. Just reset the romance thing.

 

Here I'll give you an idea. Fast forward in Yuuki's world about 5-6 years and Shunamori realizes he DOES have feelings for her and there becomes an entire love triangle involving that. Yuuki is going out with Akira And he is trying to subtly hint at her but it flies over her head. And if that doesn't inspire you, I'll take it instead.  But it won't be in the main story it is in an alternate canon. Anyways I'm planning out the meeting and where to go with the story from here.   And another thing I'm gonna have to change some of the line in the previous chapters lest I make the plot inconsistent.

 

Thanks for the ideas. I'll be sure to try and make Akira pay for taking Yuuki away from Shunamori. He'll get whats coming to him!

 

And what lines do you need to change?

Edited by FoolishYoungling , 29 July 2013 - 09:21 PM.

[Phantom_999]

well, the fact that Gaara was expecting them for one. Let me just look over my work so I can keep it consistent. Oh AND use your imagination is all I can say.  but yeah I'll will work on how the alternate world is.

Edited by Phantom_999, 30 July 2013 - 01:20 AM.