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[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

After a looong time The Demon's Rein has been updated.

Chapter 7

Well holy crap, this is a surprise, i thought he would never update again lol

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Well i just found a new story, its written by the woman who writes A Souls Salvation.

1000 Words

Looks like it will be an awesome fic in my opinion, although im curious about the title.

[drag-eart]

Same, I was planning on posting it but you beat me to it. Interesting start. Hope she doesn't forget A Soul's Salvation though.

[Radon]

Well A.S.S seems to be winding down as of late, and she said that the next couple chapters will focus on Naruto and Sakura's relationship.

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Im just glad she made another NaruSaku fic, AFF needs them

[Gnosismaster]

The first thing I thought when I saw the title was 10,000 Fists in the Air by Disturbed.

[TheVileOne]

http://www.mediamine...w_st.php/146679

Interestingly enough, the writer of the story, "Hurricane Chronicles Renewed" at the above link rips off my story, "Death Before Dishonor" with no credit or mention at all. He posted it as his own.

Anyone have the fanfiction.net link to this story? For whatever reason, I can't post reviews on mediaminer.

[Derock]

http://www.mediamine...w_st.php/146679

Interestingly enough, the writer of the story, "Hurricane Chronicles Renewed" at the above link rips off my story, "Death Before Dishonor" with no credit or mention at all. He posted it as his own.

Anyone have the fanfiction.net link to this story? For whatever reason, I can't post reviews on mediaminer.

well... there's no fanfiction.net link to that story... but I saw the ripoff... as for posting the review, register first, then on the blue box on top that says, "Write a review", "Read reviews", etc.

[TheVileOne]

Yes, I've done so on mediaminer, but for whatever reason it does NOT allow me to log in and post reviews.

Complaints to moderators and admins have gone un-answered.

It's interesting, I kind of liked the story at first, but when I saw him rip-off of my writing in the third story, I was like, "holy kitten, wtf!"

I was very disappointed it had to come to that because it looked like it might've been a decent story otherwise.

Hardly anyone on here even talked about my story that much.

[Elellon]

A Soul's Salvation is updated with chapter 16!

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

http://www.mediamine...w_st.php/146679

Interestingly enough, the writer of the story, "Hurricane Chronicles Renewed" at the above link rips off my story, "Death Before Dishonor" with no credit or mention at all. He posted it as his own.

Anyone have the fanfiction.net link to this story? For whatever reason, I can't post reviews on mediaminer.

I didnt even knew you wrote a fic, time to try and look for it lol.

Edit: just found your fic here and then realised i had read it and faved it on ff.net lol.

In fact i was planing on sending you a message soon asking if you were going to make that sequel still, so since your here ill ask now, do you still plan on making it? lol. I think it would be awesome and would love to see it

[TheVileOne]

I really want to make it, but I have some problems:

-I'm bad on research, character names, and jutsu. I don't really have the time and energy to work on that.

-I have an idea on what I want to do and what fights I want to happen, but I'm not sure on how to make them happen. This is kind of why I didn't promise a sequel. I just promised on making a really good and fun Naruto/Sakura lemon or getting together story which I feel I did. I hate all the stories where it feels like it takes them forever to get together, or when they do it's disappointing. Or I hate the ones where they are AU and it's like, "Naruto my way," and they take forever to get moving as well, or they are just arriving in Wave Country. I've seen a million freaking stories labeled Naru/Saku like that. There aren't enough where it's just them getting together and it's done really well, hot, and passionate. That's what I really just wanted to see, and I think I did it OK.

-Writing is HARD! It's hard to work myself into a mode and getting the time where I can just sit and write all of it out. I'm surprised I was able to just do this two chapter story at all, which was just meant as a romantic interlude set of the larger story I had in mind. I write anime DVD reviews for IGN (freelance) and even that's hard, especially to work myself in the mode to write them, making it so the reviews don't run too similar if I have to do a bunch at once, and writing good comments for a show I generally don't hate but I'm just indifferent to. When I have to write so many reviews in a certain amount of time to meet deadlines, it kind of burns me out.

[MagusKyros]

A Soul's Salvation is updated with chapter 16!

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I must say, chapter 15 and 16 were disappointing to me. They get together, and not soon after, the author writes them as they are lusting after each other.

[Elellon]

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I must say, chapter 15 and 16 were disappointing to me. They get together, and not soon after, the author writes them as they are lusting after each other.

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Well, Naruto and Sakura have been 'wanting' each other for months, if not years already. If they move a bit fast, it's only to make up for lost time ^^

[MagusKyros]

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Well, Naruto and Sakura have been 'wanting' each other for months, if not years already. If they move a bit fast, it's only to make up for lost time ^^

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True as that may be. But if you were wanting the other person just to satisfy your physical needs, then that's a shallow desire. You can view it all over the world. Relationships based on physical desires will not last.

[Nick Soapdish]

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True as that may be. But if you were wanting the other person just to satisfy your physical needs, then that's a shallow desire. You can view it all over the world. Relationships based on physical desires will not last.

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But it hasn't been just about satisfying physical needs. They've been cuddling and threatening to do more, but have turned back each time. And the author's been pretty clear about how they've loved each other for the whole story. So I'm not having any problems with it going so fast now.

[Elellon]

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True as that may be. But if you were wanting the other person just to satisfy your physical needs, then that's a shallow desire. You can view it all over the world. Relationships based on physical desires will not last.

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I wouldn't say that they have a relationship based on physical desires, it's just that their relationship includes physical desires. You can take the proof from the last chapter, even though Naruto didn't get lucky, he was 'more than satisfied' with the way Sakura reacted to his confession.

On another note, All I have Left has been updated with chapter 16 and Troika Parallel is updated with chapter 18.

[Coulomb]

Human Contact has been updated with...

Chapter 13

[Radon]

Well both Sakura and Naruto have been keeping their feelings for one another inside, and that has to cause some sexual tension. I don't believe it's totally uncharacteristic of them, plus they have been shown to be semi-perverted so it's understandable to me that they might rush into this.

[Shouri no Hana]

I think it was briefly mentioned on page 47, but after that it was forgotten.

Ryuusei no Kyuubi <--- Link...not labeled well...

Title Translation: Shooting Star Kyuubi or Kyuubi of the Falling Star

Summary: Alternate Universe: Uzumaki Naruto was just someone who would rather be alone, however with a freak reconnection with space runaway and demon, Kyuubi. The two can come together to create Konoha’s infamous Red Hunter, Rockman! However the Earth is no longer at peace, with an unexpected comrade, Naruto faces this crisis; however something continues to bug him. Who is this ‘Harp Note’ and what is the FM King truly after?!

Alternate Universe Elements:
This is a Ryuusei no Rockman crossover, but not a 'Two Worlds Meet' type of X-over
Items that do not exist in the Naruto world are present without an explanation (ex: iPods)
Naruto, Kyuubi and Sakura are out of character
It takes place in Part One, however everyone is 15 and is dressed (to an extent) in their Part Two uniforms

Those are only the four main AU elements that will make your decision if this story is worth reading, and I know most are probably not going to bother because of those elements. Give it a taste and see...it might just be worth a little bit of your time...and since they are older some things are going to move a lot faster and won't seem so...weird...