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[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

 

You just want some NS Smut don't you

 

Why, is that so wrong?? XD

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

You just want some NS Smut don't you

 
I don't care about as much as I did when I was still a shipper 6 years ago. In fact, I don't read NS fanfic and doujin anymore. I'm just here solely for the plot. 
 
I'm anxious to see if we get some rom com, drama continues or Tokai flat out skips the cave scene.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 28 August 2020 - 10:10 AM.

[Phantom_999]

Well point being is that these NS moments have been nothing but a pleasent surprise so far and the writing for this doujin is fantastic because again much of the cast is completely within character, unlike that disgusting, cringing fanfic faux-shojo trash

Edited by Phantom_999, 03 September 2020 - 10:35 AM.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Well point being is that these NS moments have been nothing but a pleasent surprise so far and the writing for this doujin is fantastic because again much is the cast is completely within character, unlike that disgusting, cringing fanfic faux-shojo trash

 

I hear that, Phantom!

[Illnevergiveup3]

 

new page.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Here comes the cave scene. The NaruSaku scene of separation (canon) or Narusaku scene of Requited Love

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 05 September 2020 - 12:14 PM.

[Phantom_999]

Ah yes, the garbage fest of hypocrisy, and killing of NaruSaku not only as a ship even but for anyone that bothers to pay attention to the series, the obliteration of their friendship and the notion THAT THEY WERE EVER FRIENDS. That scene makes it sound like that Nardo and Sakura never cared about each other as individuals,  they just stuck together for their mutual Sasukegasms. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hopefully this fanfic can correct this miscourse, but from what I see, that is not gonna be a problem

Edited by Phantom_999, 17 October 2020 - 03:56 PM.

[Derock]

Off-topic for a sec, Tokai did an amazing job on this page. The detailing is stunning!

[Illnevergiveup3]

Off-topic for a sec, Tokai did an amazing job on this page. The detailing is stunning!

yeah, that moon looks astounding.

 

and another off-topic question, does anyone know how the hell Naruto was able to be damn near in space in the movie and not die? And how as he flying? 

Edited by Illnevergiveup3, 05 September 2020 - 03:48 PM.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Holy crap!! O_O

[TheFirstEvil100]

Hmm, I just noticed that as well maybe Tokai will come up with a reason why this can happen.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Off-topic for a sec, Tokai did an amazing job on this page. The detailing is stunning!

It really is!

[BlueStarSaber]

Did naruto land on the moon in one of those panels?

[Derock]

Did naruto land on the moon in one of those panels?

 

It's very hard to describe but Naruto is actually falling into the crater from that "Big Bang" explosion that plummet the earth on the previous page. I don't know how or what causes the explosion on the moon itself, unless the beam was so big ala DBZ levels that it hit the moon on its trajectory. 

[Chatte]

 

It's very hard to describe but Naruto is actually falling into the crater from that "Big Bang" explosion that plummet the earth on the previous page. I don't know how or what causes the explosion on the moon itself, unless the beam was so big ala DBZ levels that it hit the moon on its trajectory. 

I think that is the case. Hopefully we'll get a more detailed explanation in the following pages.

 

As for Tokai, props to him! He's doing an amazing job. I never really thought I could like something even remotely similar to The Last, yet here I am, reading his story.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Ah yes, the garbage fest of hypocrisy, and killing of NaruSaku not only as a ship even but for anyone that bothers to pay attention to the series, the obliteration of their friendship and the notion THAT THEY WERE EVER FRIENDS. That scene makes it sound like that Nardo and Sakura never cared about each other as individuals,  they just stuck together for their mutual Sasukegasms. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hopefully this fanfic can correct this miscourse, but from what I see, that is not gonna be a problem:smile:

 
My concern for this scene is that Tokai will skip Naruto's heart demon. It is a its a Chinese wuxia reference when one's heart is filled with negative emotions (which is is seen in many Chinese cultivation novels). Naruto has been traumatized since childhood from Sakura's infatuation over Sasuke. From the hospital scene in part 1 to chapter 693.
 
He needs vent out these negative emotion otherwise its going to be a repeat. He's going to be the same way to Sakura just as he's done in the canon to Hinata... drink his life away and neglect his NS child or children.
 
Naruto had experienced Sakura's feelings in the Genjutsu. although, he will not deny Sakura's feeling, that heart demon will devour his sanity because he will be questioning himself "what if Sasuke and Sakura become close". Because there will be times when Sakura and Sasuke will be alone as friends or part of a two man cell team when Naruto becomes Hokage and marries Sakura. 
 
This will be the perfect scene for Naruto to vanquish the heart demon and just vent his frustrations. It should be something like the canon version, but different and more logical approach. I'm sure Naruto is going to repeat his phrase "I hate when people lie to themselves". Of course it should set off a chain reaction for Sakura to get angry, but she knows Naruto had suffered greatly from her childhood crush.
 
That's more than enough to break her heart and make her cry. She might or might not retort back at her second failed confession before leaving Naruto alone. Naruto on the other hand, noticed that he broke Sakura's heart. Going by the canon, the reason why never confessed to Sakura because he wanted to make Sakura happy because her feelings towards Sasuke and what he said to sai and what was also said in that chapter 693. 
 
Guilt is the first step of vanquishing the demon heart and make Naruto trust her more. And off course the usual patch up romance scene at the conclusion. That's how i would have write it if i was the author 

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 14 September 2020 - 03:16 PM.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

@Chatte It's been five years since I've seen you posted here. How have you been 

[Chatte]

@Chatte It's been five years since I've seen you posted here. How have you been 

Hey dear! Weeeeeeell, a looot has happened in my personal life which kept me away from everything Naruto and not only.

 

I even lost my blog where I  posted the theories at some point. I was quite in a depressive moment of my life when that happened tbh.

 

However, I managed to get it back, managed to get my life on track, and now I'm coming back, hehe.

 

That's basically it. The short version.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

I missed your Theory Thread because Ramenatsu posted a lot of the Japanese response and kishi's interviews fro 2chan forum.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Hey dear! Weeeeeeell, a looot has happened in my personal life which kept me away from everything Naruto and not only.

 

I even lost my blog where I  posted the theories at some point. I was quite in a depressive moment of my life when that happened tbh.

 

However, I managed to get it back, managed to get my life on track, and now I'm coming back, hehe.

 

That's basically it. The short version.

 

Well, better late than never to come back to the fold, Chatte :) It's good to have you back!