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[Phantom_999]

Yes, yes, I'm making a boy for Yuuki to like later. Just be patient okay? I made Shunamori with the concept of not a couple but a relationship closer than best friends.  Think Ichigo and Rukia if you do not ship them. 

Edited by Phantom_999, 08 July 2013 - 04:52 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Yes, yes, I'm making a boy for Yuuki to like later. Just be patient okay? I made Shunamori with the concept of not a couple but a relationship closer than best friends.  Think Ichigo and Rukia if you do not ship them. 

 

I expect Shunamori and Yuuki to make 23 kids together before you end this story. Don't do above 23, because that would be too much.

Edited by FoolishYoungling , 08 July 2013 - 05:55 PM.

[Phantom_999]

They're not getting together!!!   yuuki is interested in someone else.  and Shu is going to be either celibate or meet someone quiet and aloof. A Kyuudere.  plus if you want 23 kids you'd have to start PRETTY early.

Edited by Phantom_999, 09 July 2013 - 08:45 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

They're not getting together!!!   yuuki is interested in someone else.  and Shu is going to be either celibate or meet someone quiet and aloof. A Kyuudere.  plus if you want 23 kids you'd have to start PRETTY early.

 

I know right. What was I thinking? Just 22.

[Phantom_999]

18. take it or leave it!! 

[FoolishYoungling]

18. take it or leave it!! 

 

18 babies? Are you on crack? No more than 3.

[Phantom_999]

DEAL!!! With Yuuki's future husband ( It's not Shunamori). BTW, there are families with a teen number of children or more. Just letting you know. 

Edited by Phantom_999, 11 July 2013 - 04:16 PM.

[Dkey]

What about siblings for yuuki. Her parents are young.

[Phantom_999]

No the Naruto and Sakura in Yuuki's world passed on already.

 

Well anyways here's part 3

 

Battle against Meido's Dawn part 3

 

Naruto: Urgghh........ Ow, my head............. * Opens his eyes* what was that? YUUKI!!!!!  *runs over to her* Yuuki!!! Open your eyes, Yuuki!!!

Yuuki: Uhhh.... Uhhhh....... Papa?

Naruto: Yuuki!!! Are you hurt anywhere!?

Yuuki: No, I don't think so. Ow!! My head......

Naruto: Yuuki! You could've been killed...........

Yuuki: I......I....... I'm sorry papa......*tearing up* I-it's just that I saw that flame and I panicked and.... and.........

Naruto: No-No! I'm not mad at you! *hugs her* I understand why and I don't blame you, but you scared me........ I don't want you to die either..... okay? *pats her head*

Yuuki: *drying her tears* Okay.

Naruto: but MAN that was something!!!! Who taught you to do that!?

Yuuki: I... I don't know. My mind went blank when I thought I would lose you again and it just ..........happened.

Naruto: Well whatever it was it Saved me!!!  You were amazing Yuuki!!! 

Yuuki: Thank you, papa.......    

Naruto: So how do we find Sakura-chan and Misato?

Yuuki: hmm......

 

*A boy calls out*

 

boy: YUU-CHAN!!!!!

Yuuki: Eh? shu-kun? SHU-KUN!!!!!!!! *Hugs the boy* What are you doing here!!??

Boy: I was worried. So I followed you.

Naruto: thinking *HUH??????????????* Yuuki! Is this- *thinking* He looks JUST LIKE-

Yuuki: Oh right I forgot. Papa, this is my best friend since we were kids, Uchiha Shunamori-kun.

Naruto: HUUUUUUUUUUH!!!!!!?????? Sasuke got married too!!!!?????

Shunamori: Yeah. Good to see you again Naruto-ojisan. And did you always overreact like that?

Naruto: *thinking* he TALKS like Sasuke........ Well anyways how did you find us here?

Shunamori: I followed you. I saw what happened. Yuu-chan, were you always able to do that?

Yuuki: No. it  just happened.

Shunamori: Hmm. Strange.......

Naruto: Well anyways let's find Sakura-chan and Misato then.

Shunamori: Yeah I saw them get blasted off that way. We'll find Sakura oba-san and Misato, Yuu-chan. *forms seal* BYAKUGAN!!!!!

Naruto: HUH!!!!!?????   *thinking* D-Don't tell me that....... *out loud* Shunamori. is your mom- 

Shunamori: Yeah. Hyuuga Hinata.

Naruto:  *thinking* No way....... *out loud* How did THAT happen?

Shunamori: You think they're the type to talk about it?

Naruto: Right......... anyways do you see them yet? 

Shunamori: Not yet getting close though.

Yuuki: So Shu-kun, how're things back at home? Is everyone alright?

Shunamori: Yeah, more or less. Or were you talking about Amatsu Akira? 

Yuuki: W-W-W-W-What!!?? What brought him up? *blushing*

Shunamori: Well you're always staring at him.

Yuuki: I-I-I do not!!!!!! *blushes heavily*

 Naruto: OOOH!? You like someone Yuuki? 

Yuuki: N-NO!!!!!!!! *Muttering* Stupid Shu-kun........

Shunamori:  Oh. My mistake then. He got captured by the way.

Yuuki: WHAT!!!??? NO!!!!! What happened to him!!!!???? is my Akira-kun alright- AAH!!!! *claps both hands over her mouth*

Naruto: My Akira????    

Shunamori: I was kidding Yuu-chan.

Yuuki: SHU-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shunamori: Now was that so hard to admit? We're best friends. You could at least tell me that much.

Yuuki: *grumble* *whispers* STILL!! did you have to mention him in front of Papa!!??

Shunamori: *Whispers back* I don't think it would hurt. Unless he is overprotective and would gut the guy at first sight.....

Yuuki: WHA-!!! DON'T SAY SUCH THINGS!!!!!!! 

Naruto: What are you two talking about???

Shunamori and Yuuki: Nothing......

Shunamori:  *whispers* Besides Yuu-chan, he is not the same man here. you know that right?

Yuuki: Yes...... But I still see him as my Papa because he said he wouldn't leave me alone anymore. *smiles softly* 

Shuunamori: I see. I hope that he  keeps that promise then.

Naruto: Found them yet?

Shunamori: Yeah over there.

 

Reaching Sakura

 

Sakura: Ah!! Naruto!!!! Yuuki-chan!!!!

Naruto: Sakura-chan!!!

Yuuki: Mama!!!!

Sakura: *runs over* Sweetie, are you alright!!?? *hugs Yuuki*

Yuuki: Yes. A bump on the head but that's it.

Sakura: Oh! that's a pretty bad bump........ *heals it* Alright it seems okay, but be sure to take it easy and get some rest later we're not sure if it's concussive.

Yuuki: Okay.

Sakura: Naruto, are you hurt?

Naruto: I'm fine. What about you?

Sakura: I'm alright. It's Nothing too bad. I still want to make sure you're fine though. Here, let me see......

Shunamori: Sakura Oba-san. It's good to see you.

Sakura: Eh? Who's this? Wait is he Sasuke-kun's son from Yuuki-chan's world?

Naruto: Yeah. you'll never guess who the mom is though.

Sakura: Hmm? Really?

Misato: Naruto-sama!!! Ojou-sama!!!!

Yuuki: Misato!!

Misato: *puts his hands on her shoulders* Are you alright Ojou-sama?

Yuuki: Yes Shu-kun came here too!!

Misato: What? Shinamori-kun??

Shunamori: Misato. Good to see you again.

Misato: What are you doing here Shunamori-kun?

Shunamori: I was looking for Yuu-chan. So I followed you through here. I made sure no one followed me.

Misato: Are you sure?

Shunamori: It wouldn't make any difference. Meido's Dawn seemed to already be aware of the gate.

Misato: Hmm.

Sakura: Huh. Sasuke-kun's Son was worried about Yuuki-chan? Are they-

Naruto: No they're childhood best friends apparently. beside Yuuki likes someone else.

Sakura: OOOH? 

Yuuki: Papa!!!!  

Naruto: Oh, alright. She'll tell you herself.

Sakura: Promise? 

Yuuki: Promise.

Misato: Well, in any case, we must get to the sand Village with haste We'e not sure how they will attack next but now we can guess why they are after Ojou-sama. it probably has something to do with what happened to Naruto-sama back there.

Naruto: Yeah we need to find shelter for now. Let's go

Sakura: Yes. Come, Yuuki-chan, Shunamori-kun.

Yuuki and Shunamori: Okay!

 

To be Continued........

Edited by Phantom_999, 27 September 2013 - 01:21 PM.

[Dkey]

 

No the Naruto and Sakura in Yuuki's world passed on already.

 

 

I meant the "adoptive" ones.

[Phantom_999]

Oh, that's what you meant. No, she doesn't have adopted parents. It's just Misato looking after her.   I mean I could write in siblings but the focus would have to spread out more. I just want to keep it on Yuuki. But I could write some fanfics with two or more kids.

Edited by Phantom_999, 15 July 2013 - 04:27 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

I expect a Shunamori vs Akira fight to happen. It will be called "The Battle for Yuuki's Heart- Best Friend No More."

Edited by FoolishYoungling , 15 July 2013 - 05:23 PM.

[Phantom_999]

You are shipping fanfic characters?  Well Ask Kishi if he likes the story and see if he makes it an official manga. 

[FoolishYoungling]

You are shipping fanfic characters?  Well Ask Kishi if he likes the story and see if he makes it an official manga. 

 

I asked him and he said that he would never make someone's fanfic into a manga unless it had a girl named Yuuki marry a guy named Shunamori.

 

Oh, and where did you get the names from? Like Yuuki, Misato, etc...

[Phantom_999]

Yeah, yeah, He is a shipper of Sasuke and Naruto's (non-canon) kids. That a fan made. Well anyway, for the names I based Yuuki on the fact that Sakura's favorite word is Yuki which means courage (if I spelled it correctly, Because adding another u changes the meaning I'm pretty sure), Misato is from a manga I read about an Autistic child, and Shunamori I made up on the spot. I just thought of two Japanese romanizations that sounded cool and pieced them together, so feel free to tell me if it is a real name or not, but I'll keep it either way.   

Edited by Phantom_999, 21 July 2013 - 07:56 PM.

[Canadian_DJ]

I want naruto and sakura to have a son, with pink hair and his names gonna be shinachiku, and I want his forehead to show, I want his hair style to be like natsu's hair from fairy tale. I also want him to have the same skin color as naruto and I want his eyes to be like sakuras aka eyelids and eye color. I also want him to have narutos facial features, namely his strong chin. I want his verbal tick to be "Dattebano, -ttebano" and I want him to have sakura's amazing chakra control and narutos stamina, and I want him to have a light hearted and joking personality like naruto and i want him to be just as smart as sakura and have her amazing skill of analysing and I want his fighting style to be like sakura and learn some of naruto's fighting style as well.

[Phantom_999]

Okay!!  In another fanfic!!

[Canadian_DJ]

Okay!!  In another fanfic!!

Hm? Oh no, I was describing how i want their child to be in the manga. So you dont gave to trouble yourself, but if you want, why not

[Phantom_999]

Okay Part 4 preview.

 

Naruto: *whew* Finally made it....... 

Sand ninja: Uzumaki Naruto? What are you  doing here?

Naruto: I need to see the Kazekage at once!

Sand ninja: How do we know you're really Uzumaki Naruto?

We don't have time for this. Let me see Gaara!

Sand Ninja: hmm. Welll it sounds like the way you would talk Let me get Kazekage-sama then

*Comes back with Gaara* 

Gaara: Naruto........ what are you doing here 

Naruto: Gaara, you've gotten Tsunade- Baachan's message? Well we're on the run from Meido's Dawn for now 

Gaara: I see. So where's your daughter?

Naruto: Gah!! She-she-she told you? 

Gaara: Of Course. I need to see her to confirm what The Hokage said is true. 

Naruto: Alright, then. Yuuki, come here. It's okay, this is the Kazekage Gaara.

Yuuki: H-Hello Kazekage-sama...... *clutching Naruto's arm*

Gaara: Hmm. She does look like Sakura. But she has your eyes.

Naruto: W-Well anyway, You believe us now, right?

Gaara: Yeah, but It was no like I didn't believe you. I just wanted to confirm the girl with My own eyes. Anyway I will provide rooms for you. Follow me.

 

*In the Inn*

 

Naruto: huh the place is pretty nice.

Misato: Naruto-sama, Sakura-sama and Ojou-sama have gone ahead. in the underground Springs.

Naruto: Oh. Okay, well let's go too then.

 

*In the Springs*

 

Sakura: So Yuuki-chan, who is the boy that you like? *scrubbing Yuuki's head*

Yuuki: Um......Um...... *blushing* His name is Amatsu Akira-kun......... *looking coy*

Sakura: Akira-kun? sounds cute. 

Yuuki: Yes the has bright red hair, really kind, warm looking brown eyes, and is friendly with everyone. But I've never talked to him. Plus the school got shut down due to the war so I don't see him often........

 

 I've got a couple more ideas though so I'll finish them later 

Edited by Phantom_999, 30 July 2013 - 01:04 AM.

[Phantom_999]

Here's the full Part 4

 

The Battle against Meido's Dawn Part 4 

 

Naruto: *whew* Finally made it....... 

Sand ninja: Uzumaki Naruto? What are you  doing here?

Naruto: I need to see the Kazekage at once!

Sand ninja: How do we know you're really Uzumaki Naruto?

Naruto: We don't have time for this. Let me see Gaara!

Sand Ninja: hmm. Welll it sounds like the way you would talk Let me get Kazekage-sama then

*Comes back with Gaara* 

Gaara: Naruto........ what are you doing here? 

Naruto: Gaara, you've gotten Tsunade- Baachan's message? Well we're on the run from Meido's Dawn for now 

Gaara: I see. So where's your daughter?

Naruto: Gah!! She-she-she told you?  

Gaara: Of Course. I need to see her to confirm what The Hokage said is true. 

Naruto: Alright, then. Yuuki, come here. It's okay, this is the Kazekage Gaara. He's my friend.

Yuuki: H-Hello Kazekage-sama...... *clutching Naruto's arm*

Gaara: Hmm. She does look like Sakura. But she has your eyes.

Naruto: W-Well anyway, You believe us now, right?

Gaara: Yeah, but It was not like I didn't believe you. I just wanted to confirm the girl with My own eyes. Anyway I will provide rooms for you. Follow me.

 

*In the Inn*

 

Naruto: huh the place is pretty nice.

Misato: Naruto-sama, Sakura-sama and Ojou-sama have gone ahead. in the underground Springs.

Naruto: Oh. Okay, well let's go too then.

 

*In the Springs*

 

Sakura: So Yuuki-chan, who is the boy that you like?   *scrubbing Yuuki's head*

Yuuki: Um......Um...... *blushing* His name is Amatsu Akira-kun......... *looking coy*

Sakura: Akira-kun? sounds cute.  

Yuuki: Yes. he has bright red hair, really kind, warm looking brown eyes, and is friendly with everyone. But I've never talked to him. Plus the school got shut down due to the war so I don't see him often........

Sakura: Oh, The school got closed. That's what you meant by by used to be top of your class.

Yuuki: Yes, But actually, Shu-kun and Akira-kun are at the top of the class too. even in the physical areas, But I don't think I'm that good in that though. 

Sakura: Huh. I wasn't surprised by Shunamori-kun, But Akira-kun is smart too. That's interesting. But I would not doubt that you are gifted in Ninjutsu.  You're our Daughter after all.

Yuuki: Thank you Mama.

Sakura: Do you like him because he seems nice or because of his good looks and talent?

Yuuki: I can't say. Maybe both. Why?

Sakura: Personal experience you could say. *smiles sadly* I fell in love with someone because I thought he looked cool and thought his skills were amazing to look at, But I did not know him as a Person, and it ended badly.

Yuuki: Eh? your first love was not Papa?

Sakura: No, It was Shunamori-kun's dad.

Yuuki: Really? But Sasuke Oji-san is really nice to me. Well he doesn't show it but he always looks out for me when he's around and helps out others in need.

Sakura: What? He is? He DOES?

Yuuki: Yeah, isn't he really nice here too?

Sakura: Not really, you could say......... Well He's not with us right now either. *thinking* Is she really talking about Sasuke-kun????

Yuuki: Hmm. Then how do you feel about Papa?

Sakura: What!?*blushing* W-Well- how do I put this? Uh, We'll talk about that another time dear.

Yuuki: Are you avoiding the question Mama?? *giggles*

Sakura: *Flustered* Ne-never mind, that! Now, close your eyes Yuuki-chan. *gently Pours a bucket of water over  Yuuki's head to wash off the foam*

 

*Men's  Springs*

 

Naruto: Shunamori.

Shunamori: Hmm?

Naruto: What's your dad like in your world?

Shunamori: Honestly? Well he isn't home much. But from what I hear he helps out lot around the village. When he's around though, since he's always travelling.

Naruto: Huh? He does?

Shunamori: surprised? So how is he here then?

Naruto: Well He is a rogue here to say the least.

Shunamori: Really? What happened?

Naruto: It's hard to say.

Shunamori: Well he did not talk about how he met mother so I can't say how they met then, although they did mention they married in secret.

Naruto: Weird though. How did they fall in love?

Shunamori: who knows?

Misato: Sasuke, Did say one thing to me though. he changed because of you Naruto-sama. Of course we are talking about Shunamori-kun and Ojou-sama's actual fathers from our world.

Naruto: Huh? He said that? *thinking* That's weird. So is there hope for me to redeem him without death here too? *Out loud* So anyway, lets finish up. It's almost time for the meeting.

 

To be continued.

 

*side notes* In case anyone thinks Sasuke sounds OoC then I would like to point out that The circumstances with this alternate Sasuke are slightly altered. I'll work on how later. Plus If he was  still an a**h*** then Hinata would not have married him, keep this in mind.

Edited by Phantom_999, 23 August 2013 - 02:20 PM.