Reading Between the LinesNow, I can't believe that someone would write this drivel, especially after having read the scene in question. Obviously, this person, Goddess of Oblivion, is reading a different manga than I am, or maybe just watching the anime. I don't watch the anime, personally, because I've already read the manga and it's pretty much the same thing.
Perhaps the anime painted this scene in a different light, so as to give a faint ray of hope to the SasuSaku faithful. (Given that they need reassurance in that difficult time between age 14 and age 16 facing the abject foolishness of SasuSaku.)
Alright, I'll be fair. I've been generous in my characterizations on occasions. My capricious whims are very harsh for certain other characters, here after refered to as Sasuke. Most of you know my stance on Sasuke and a large percentage of you agree with my views, though perhaps you lack the fanatical fervor of my Sasuke-hate. It matters not.
The above link is, at heart, a bastardization of the manga and a betrayal of Sasuke's character. It is a
very Princess-Tsunade 'Everyone Just Needs a Hug' sort of fiction and that's not okay.
It suffers from something I like to call 'Hopeful Presumption of the Non-Existant,' and propagates it by using a technique with which all five-year-old children are familiar: 'You didn't say I could, but you didn't say I
couldn't.'
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Sorry if the story is OOC at all, but it?s hard to write Sasuke being anything but a prick (love him as I do).
Huh, it's hard to write Sasuke as anything other than a prick, eh? Strange, when I write Sasuke, he tends to come out confused and angry, then takes it out on others. I think that's probably because Sasuke is... (altogether now) an
a**hole.
Let's all pull on our thinking caps and Geno's going to give another thinking-exercise, alrighty? Good.
If it's hard to write Sasuke as anything other than a prick, is it not a reasonable conclusion to say that he is a prick? And when you write him as having an ulterior motive, internal monologue, or other narrative conveniences, then you have to choose whether to stick true to the character (which she has not) or alter the behavior of the character in question.
I think we're all at a point in our relationships where I can state without shame or fear of reprisal that I believe Sasuke has no inner monologue or ulterior motive. Is he clever enough for it? Yes. Does that mean he does it? Not in the least. I for one am a clever person and I turn off my brain all the time. It's been four or five years of manga and we haven't once gotten an internal thought from Sasuke that wasn't envy, jealousy, superiority, or scorn.
By my above statement, plus the small amount of supporting details and large amount of common sense applied, Goddess of Oblivion has skewed Sasuke wildly. He never said he loved her, but remember: He never said he
didn't love her!
It's funny how plausible that sounds. I'll admit it, it sounds pretty good when I say it out loud. But then I remember the corrolary:
He never said he didn't love her, but he never said he
did.
And that pretty much solves that. QED.
So in closing: Sasuke's characterization in the above link is nothing more than hot air and dreams. It's a pretty fantasy of the dark avenger that lacks the substance almost every other pairing has. I'll even give NaruHina substance, because it is sweet and 1950s and Betty Crocker, but it's not a castle built on sand like SasuSaku. Sasuke's not the sort to be tamed. He's dark and evil and broken up. I'd even go so far as to say he's past the point of no return. He can't be fixed by love. He's not going to be softened with effort or time. It's been five years already and he's still wallowing in his own grief/anger/incapability.
There. I've said what I feel needs to be said. Enjoy yourselves.