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[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

lol Hey guys. Heres a little one-shot that made me chuckle. It's not really a NaruSaku, tho there is a little bit in it but it's a good concept and one of the few fanfics with just blatant slapstick.

Basically it's a twist on the whole 'Naruto brings back a beaten Sasuke from the VotE and gets kicked out of the village' plot and I think it deserves a once over, atleast in some spare time.

A Simple Misunderstanding

this story is so much win, Legendary Legacy is a damn awesome writer, and i love his mock fics. Im so glad someone did this because i refuse to read those crap stories with that crap plot device of naruto getting beaten by sakura for bringing back sasuke. Its so damn stupid.

[Nick Soapdish]

Edit: To SoapDish,
Dude I know that I just didn't want to spoil it for other people, I'd rather let them read it, than hearing me explain the whole story. Even with spoiler tags it drags people to read my comment. It's natural curiosity. That's why my comment is so vague. I had a whole lot to say. But I didn't want to spoil it for anyone, let them read and see what I see in the story by me pointing the key characters that were written out of characterization and how it progressed.

And I rest my case anyways he deleted it.

A story being deleted after receiving criticism doesn't necessarily mean that the writer agreed with the criticism. It may just be coincidence or maybe they didn't want to have to deal with the criticism.

The 'no bashing' rule applies in here as well.

If you're concerned about spoiling it, that is what the spoiler tags are for - just give a hint about what's inside before the tag.

I didn't care so much for the story - Insert Name Here.

Spoiler! --Click here to view--

Like this.

If somebody still reads it, that's their problem.

[Gnosismaster]

lol Hey guys. Heres a little one-shot that made me chuckle. It's not really a NaruSaku, tho there is a little bit in it but it's a good concept and one of the few fanfics with just blatant slapstick.

Basically it's a twist on the whole 'Naruto brings back a beaten Sasuke from the VotE and gets kicked out of the village' plot and I think it deserves a once over, atleast in some spare time.

A Simple Misunderstanding

I read it and I hate it. That story was stupid in my opinion.

[desaix]

lol Hey guys. Heres a little one-shot that made me chuckle. It's not really a NaruSaku, tho there is a little bit in it but it's a good concept and one of the few fanfics with just blatant slapstick.

Basically it's a twist on the whole 'Naruto brings back a beaten Sasuke from the VotE and gets kicked out of the village' plot and I think it deserves a once over, atleast in some spare time.

A Simple Misunderstanding

I like the riff it was taking, but the fic as a whole fell a little flat. Not quite sure I can pinpoint anything specific, but maybe it was just that the punchline fell in the wrong place or something.

Humor's damned hard to write. I've made a few attempts, but rarely do I feel 'successful' when doing so... and often end up with the same problem. Don't blame the author at all, but I just don't think it worked.

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

I read it and I hate it. That story was stupid in my opinion.

it was a mockfic, Legendary Legacy is known to do that, he writes up oneshots with horrible overused plot devices, like Yaoi, High School fics and the thing that all sakura bashers like to do, which is make sakura beat up naruto for bringing back sasuke.

[drag-eart]

Finally, I just posted my new chapter to my story

Crying in the Dark

Ch. 8 - Memories Long Past (pt.1)

[blindeye]

Another mock fic by Legendary Legacy. This is the funniest fan fic I have ever read!!!! Pure genius!

Whats the Worst That Could Happen

Alrighty, a big ol' hodgepodge of mockery in this one; mainly Super-Naruto's and Female Kyubi's, but traces of other things if you search hard enough. Enjoy.

[InvaderSpax]

been another day so.........wait for it..........

Mind of Others: Chapter 16

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Another mock fic by Legendary Legacy. This is the funniest fan fic I have ever read!!!! Pure genius!

Whats the Worst That Could Happen

yeah that fic is easily his best mock fic, although all are good, this one made me have tears in my eyes.

on topic:

Broken Soul: Saving the Promise has been updated.

Broken Soul: Chapter 27

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

found another pretty good story just now.

its called A Missing Peace and its set after Akatsuki are defeated and sasuke is back and deals with the ROOT/Danzou problem and orochimaru/kabuto.

A Missing Peace

[Shadow Legend]

New Fic:Sorrow Filled Pride

[drag-eart]

I highly recommend this fic, it's really good. Probably what we NaruSaku fans have been waiting for. I know you all will enjoy it. It's called

Daimyo - by Selunchen123

Summary:The firecountry has a daimyo, and the court of the daimyo is corrupt and mean spirited. When Naruto encounters the future Queen of the firecountry, Sakura, he finds himself caught in a game full of betrayal, and unexpectantly finds love in the cherry empress.

[Radon]

7000 Words was too short for that chapter. I demand 30,000 words a chapter! lol I think it's a really good premise and I really want to see more done on it.

[Sir Whirly]

Mind of others was updated today. And now he has a new one.


All I have left.
At the conclusion of the battle between Naruto and Gaara Naruto protected all of his friends present. But what if Konoha did not win the battle, and the Third had not sealed Orochimaru's arms? Naruto and Sakura have to face the new world alone. NaruSaku

Have fun guys

[Gnosismaster]

That is a good story. But I wonder what happened to Jiraiya?

[Nick Soapdish]

Another long one-shot.

In Anger and Affection by Mana Mihara

[blindeye]

Chapter 3 is up
All I Have Left by Traekor

Edit: Now chapter 4 is up! Two updates in a day!
All I Have Left Ch 4

[Nick Soapdish]

Lots of updates!

All I Have Left - Chapter 5
Sakura's Choice - Chapter 4
A Soul's Salvation - Chapter 14
Troika Parallel - Chapter 15

[MagusKyros]

Lots of updates!

All I Have Left - Chapter 5
Sakura's Choice - Chapter 4
A Soul's Salvation - Chapter 14
Troika Parallel - Chapter 15

I would imagine that A Soul's Salvation is in it's, or is near it's final stages.

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

I would imagine that A Soul's Salvation is in it's, or is near it's final stages.

I think it is getting close too, and it should be interesting to see how the Sasuke issue plays out.