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[Gnosismaster]

Tell me about it, I don't like angst but I read it anyway. WHY MUST I SUFFER?????????

[viper]

Some loser posted this:

What Wasn't Supposed to be

Be forewarned, it's rated M. For good reason. So no kiddies.

*coughs* Feel free to flame the author. She sucks.

Spoiler! --Click here to view--

I know. I only do it because I'm modest. That's why I hate posting fanfiction, I care too much what people think D:

I enjoy read this fic was really good show the love between 2 people not porn fic like some people have done before 5/5

[TheVileOne]

Your kind of brushing off the concept here. The idea isn't Ino using Naruto's body to make out with Sakura, but that the two of them have a problem, Ino has been traped in Naruto's mind, trying to avoid the Kyuubi. Shes alone and afraid and seeks comfort in Naruto's dreams. She gets to know him through his memory's and eventually falls for him. But Sakura and Naruto have finality started to date and Ino gets jealous, but she causes more harm then good by casing Naruto's already fragile mind to loosen it's grip on Kyuubi's cage. They are back to their old rivalry for Naruto but don't want that to ruin the friendship they have. They have to do something, and Sakura dosn't like the idea of breaking Ino's heart. So they compromise.

That's not the problem I have. It's just Ino making Naruto turn into a woman and doing the girl on girl thing with Sakura. Just doesn't work to me. I mean how accurate is a henge really?

To me it would be more interesting if Ino was in her body and was actively pursuing Naruto. If they have her body Traekor states, I don't understand why she can't get back into it. Or specifically WHY she can't.

It's a love triangle with a refreshing twist, and I personally enjoy it. Whether you like it or not is not my concern but I don't want other people to brush over this because of your comments.

I stated I like the drama, but I don't like the twist of Ino using Naruto's body like that.

Also, the idea of Ino seeing Naruto's memories and falling for him or liking him have been done before as well.

[Jun-sama]

Ahhh...my first long story.

Useing it to improve my standar of english, so if you see any grammatical error and spellingr errors, please point them out.

Naruto; Tales of the Sword
ナルト

ツルギノ故事

Plots:
ツルギノ故事Seven years after Aktsuki inadvertently unleashes every bijou upon the world, a vastly different Naruto and Sakura struggle to come to terms with their pasts while inevitably, the fate of a recovering world is hung upon a sword's edge once more.

Please note: Sakura is very out out of character.
I have a good reason for that so please grit your teeth and read on.
all will be explained in time.

Also note: I have reduced the Power of many jutsus. God know why, I can't write a story where anyone can blow up a city with his own power, or can stop a bijou single handedly. (the yondaime is exceptional). Shinobi will be appropriately powerful when compared to normal soldiers, but don't expect them to rip the tops of mountains or do a sasuke and come up with an unstoppable bloodline.


http://www.fanfictio...es_of_the_Sword

[Radon]

Great story Jun!

Thought I would post this as it made me all warm and fuzzy inside.

The Perfect Day has got to be one of the best feel good NaruSaku stories I've read in a while. It and AU with a bit of SasuIno but it dosn't detract from the overall story. It's one of those kinds of stories that just makes you feel great after reading. A little fluffy bit the ending is like the ending to a great movie, you just want to watch it over and over again.

Warning, very, very, VERY fluffy.

The Perfect Day

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

heres a story which i dont think has been posted:

its pretty good.

Sakura's Choice

[Shadow Legend]

heres a story which i dont think has been posted:

its pretty good.

Sakura's Choice

Aww man... I was going to put this fic up on the board

Oh well

Anyway, I have a new fanfic today and a update on Fury,Guilt and Love

History Repeats Itself

Chapter 7

[Sir Whirly]

The legend of Uzumaki Naruto is awesome. And it´s sequel is even better, more mature and with a better treatment of the main characters (Naruto, Sakura and Kira).

The ending of last chapter was... just woooooooowwwwww

Spoiler! --Click here to view--

Team Hebi makes an appearance; all of them have joined forces with the Lich King.

I have been reading that story since chapter 10 of the first part. It is one I have been shamelessly pluggin for quite some time

[TheVileOne]

Anyone got a link to the life of Uzumaki Naruto?

I'm looking forward to fanfics that expand on Naruto/Sakura as well as Kushina/Minato.

From the sound of things Minato and Naruto are attracted to similar types of ladies. I mean, let's face it, Sakura is a bit loud and a bit of a fire-cracker at times. I think deep down she is more like Naruto than she wants to realize.

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

Anyone got a link to the life of Uzumaki Naruto?

I'm looking forward to fanfics that expand on Naruto/Sakura as well as Kushina/Minato.

From the sound of things Minato and Naruto are attracted to similar types of ladies. I mean, let's face it, Sakura is a bit loud and a bit of a fire-cracker at times. I think deep down she is more like Naruto than she wants to realize.

im not sure if we are thinking of the same fic, but the only fic i know with a similar title is a NaruHina.

[Jun-sama]

Chapter two for Naruto; Tales of the Sword ツルギノ故事 is up.

I have had a few days break to de-stress from school so I found the time to write.

What do you think guys? Is the story worth drawing into a doujinshi?

http://www.fanfictio...es_of_the_Sword

[Shadow Legend]

Two updated fic's first Kitsune fire: Lovewill Blossom Among Us
has Finally been updated and Sakura's Choice has updated

Chapter 14

Chapter Two

[Radon]

Posted this on NF but I have to post it here too!

Well I got a fanfic that some of you may like in here. It's angsty for sure, but it's more of a reality angst, and ironically deals with all my fears in NaruSaku in one big pile and then manages to resolve them all and end happily.

Summary :
Spoiler:
"Sasuke has returned, and gotten closer to Sakura as a result. Their relationship breaks Naruto, causing him to leave Team Seven in order to find himself in life. As the years go by, Sakura can't neglect the feelings she has for Naruto, even tho they can never be returned. But when the truth is revealed, and the tables are turned. Can the lie that is Sakura's marriage brake her even worse than it did Naruto? And can he realize that your first love isn't always true?"


My Opinion :
Spoiler:

Spoiler! --Click here to view--

This is gritty, this is real and I love it. It takes everything that worry me about NaruSaku and forces me to confront them and move past them. Life isn't always fair, and this story truly made me feel a sense of almost relief at what would come out of these events. My favorite part has to be when Naruto confesses that he is the reason that Sakura truly fell in love with Sasuke, and that he was the reason that she and him got married.

The story is They All Fall Down by AzureBalmonk. 13,000 words in total, not as long as his other one-shot (21,000 words... I know) but is still amazing.

This story is primarily a NaruSaku but also contains SasuSaku, NaruIno, ChoIno and a light HinaKiba. The SasuSaku does go all the way, and it is the central device that moves the plot along, so if you aren't comfortable with this than I suggest you pass this story up.

WARNING : This fic contains strong sexual themes as well as strong language. Reader discretion is advised.

They All Fall Down





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Wow another great story came out to day, this one caught my eye and I have to say it's amazing!

WARNING : This story contains suicide, but it is done through the traditional Samurai art of Seppuku, but it's still labeled as a NaruXSaku.

Seasons Don't Fear by necro-wulf. This is his first fic, and either he took tones of creative writing classes or hes just simply amazing...

Seasons Don't Fear : Chapter 1

[InvaderSpax]

Mind of Others: Chapter 14

Dude updates like it's going out of style.

[Rick (Bonta-kun)]

They All Fall Down

That link doesnt work, or at least it doesnt for me, so heres another link:

They All Fall Down

[Uzumaki's Fire]

That link doesnt work, or at least it doesnt for me, so heres another link:

They All Fall Down

I liked that oneshot a lot!

[MagusKyros]

The fic was good up until the end. Naruto shouldn't have ever got back with Sakura, ever; however, Sakura's reason for marrying Sasuke was also the biggest "WTF" I have ever read in my entire life.

I mean, "WTF?!"

Good read up until the end, but the characterization and continuity fell apart so fast.

[drag-eart]

The fic was good up until the end. Naruto shouldn't have ever got back with Sakura, ever; however, Sakura's reason for marrying Sasuke was also the biggest "WTF" I have ever read in my entire life.

I mean, "WTF?!"

Good read up until the end, but the characterization and continuity fell apart so fast.

I agree. WITH EVERYTHING!!

Naruto and Tsunade moment...and then Naruto with Sakura...the reason WTF!!!...He really bombed it. It could have been so much better if he could have had more time and thought about it. Instead cramming everything in it. :shamefulcry0js:

Don't get me wrong he is a good writer just this story didn't work for me. The way he used Naruto and how he interacted with Sakura and Tsunade. I mean come one Seriously. Thanks God someone sees it the way I do. I really thought I was the only one seeing this.


Edit: To SoapDish,
Dude I know that I just didn't want to spoil it for other people, I'd rather let them read it, than hearing me explain the whole story. Even with spoiler tags it drags people to read my comment. It's natural curiosity. That's why my comment is so vague. I had a whole lot to say. But I didn't want to spoil it for anyone, let them read and see what I see in the story by me pointing the key characters that were written out of characterization and how it progressed.

And I rest my case anyways he deleted it.

[Nick Soapdish]

Constructive criticism, people!

"Bombed it" or "WTF" doesn't come close.


And since it's been a day, here's another update for Mind of Others - Chapter 15.

[Radon]

lol Hey guys. Heres a little one-shot that made me chuckle. It's not really a NaruSaku, tho there is a little bit in it but it's a good concept and one of the few fanfics with just blatant slapstick.

Basically it's a twist on the whole 'Naruto brings back a beaten Sasuke from the VotE and gets kicked out of the village' plot and I think it deserves a once over, atleast in some spare time.

A Simple Misunderstanding