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#8421 Rabbit

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:46 PM

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:48 PM

Depends on the idea XD spiiiillll it.

 

Ok! :D

 

So first of all we don't ignore the ending! ;) I had an idea that either Naruto or Sakura (I would really really prefer Sakura). To time travel to the past. More to the point, her mind/soul etc time travels into her younger body. Now this is Sakura who is married with Sasuke and has a child. But is trapped into her younger body. And has to go trough all of it again. Trough that journey she will face the same things. But also her desire to return to her family (especially her child). This part needs to be done very well.

 

Some points:

 

Sakura will do anything to get back to her future. Even if she needs to relive the whole thing over. So she can be with her child. But trough the journey with trying to help Naruto (speed up the process). She falls for Naruto. She is then torn because of that, and fells terrible. Naruto will also grow with her on this journey.

 

This is not a fluffy fanfic. It needs to be very deep!

 

She has the same skills as her older self. Minus the stamina/seal etc. So people will be suspicious about her (Kakashi etc etc).

 

No bashing. In the end the writer can decide if she gains her daughter back (which I also prefer). We ignore Kishi terrible writing of characters. So no Naruto being like he is in the manga ending. What happens to Sasuke/Hinata etc etc will depend on the writer. How she travels in time (and gains her daughter) is up to the writer.

 

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This are just ideas that just pooped into my head. So that's why they are not connected that well.  :D But you get the gist of it?


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:49 PM

That would be easy to do...I think.

:hm: are you insulting Kishi's writing...? 


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:50 PM

Not really. When you think about it, it's fictionnal character.

 

Kishi established the core of the character. If he sell out, he kills his character and his story for money. If someone make a story without killing the character as an alternate ending, won't you take it. It's still purely fictionnal. Why should I consider 699-700 legit when it doesn't added up to the rest of the sotry and it felt like a bad fanfic.

 

It's called selective memory. I won't debate on the net that NH ain't canon to the story kishi kitten up in every possible way. same goes X1000 to SS. But I let go of that manga by saying that NS is the canon pairing intented and that they will get an ending they deserve, even if I have to write it all, find an corrector for my grammar mistake and someone willing to draw my story and give hm/her a good amount of money for it. I'll get my good ending 1 way or another. If I don't find someone to draw, I'll just imagine it while I'm reading the story as a whole.

I can't draw like Kishimoto but I'd be so willing to help you. You have such powerful determination <3


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:50 PM

Ah yes...my cure! It's almost here. One more day! Oh god, thank you!

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:50 PM

The databooks also said  "[/size]The one that filled his(Sasuke) lonely existence was Sakura."[/size]
Bad writing, indeed.


How? It all about sasuke.

I thought Karin did that?

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:51 PM

:hm: are you insulting Kishi's writing...? 

Which one? Kishi or Kishi (Madara edition)?

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:51 PM

Ah yes...my cure! It's almost here. One more day! Oh god, thank you!

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:51 PM

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Well, it refers to my profile page at tumblr. Lol.

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:55 PM

Which one? Kishi or Kishi (Madara edition)?

 

Well when you put it like that... :zaru:

We should call Troll Kishi, Kishidara from now on. 


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:55 PM

Others are welcome to add/improve upon my idea for a fanfic! :D


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 02:59 PM

 

Ok! :D

 

So first of all we don't ignore the ending! ;) I had an idea that either Naruto or Sakura (I would really really prefer Sakura). To time travel to the past. More to the point, her mind/soul etc time travels into her younger body. Now this is Sakura who is married with Sasuke and has a child. But is trapped into her younger body. And has to go trough all of it again. Trough that journey she will face the same things. But also her desire to return to her family (especially her child). This part needs to be done very well.

 

Some points:

 

Sakura will do anything to get back to her future. Even if she needs to relive the whole thing over. So she can be with her child. But trough the journey with trying to help Naruto (speed up the process). She falls for Naruto. She is then torn because of that, and fells terrible. Naruto will also grow with her on this journey.

 

This is not a fluffy fanfic. It needs to be very deep!

 

She has the same skills as her older self. Minus the stamina/seal etc. So people will be suspicious about her (Kakashi etc etc).

 

No bashing. In the end the writer can decide if she gains her daughter back (which I also prefer). We ignore Kishi terrible writing of characters. So no Naruto being like he is in the manga ending. What happens to Sasuke/Hinata etc etc will depend on the writer. How she travels in time (and gains her daughter) is up to the writer.

 

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This are just ideas that just pooped into my head. So that's why they are not connected that well.  :D But you get the gist of it?

I honestly think it would be better to focus on YOUNG Sakura being moved into the future, and by young I mean the her that hasn't lost her self respect, spine and character development. A Sakura who would see all the BS wrong with this world and Reject it, attempt to fix it and put it to rights, but that's just my opinion :argh: and also, I hate angst. I hate writing it to be specific.

I prefer humor....


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:00 PM

Which one? Kishi or Kishi (Madara edition)?

I. want.RtN. Kishi ! I want the one who wrote RtN to re-write this catastrophic ending :sweat:  


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:02 PM

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Thought I should share with this and sadly, being one of my favorite, this make me sad. I guess they're right about one thing: old generation was the best generation.

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:03 PM

I. want.RtN. Kishi ! I want the one who wrote RtN to re-write this catastrophic ending :sweat:  

I want Trollmoto/Kishidara to make all this kitten IT and troll the entire fandom the likes of which have never been seen nor will be seen again.  :pimp: It would literally make up for all his terrible writing in the past. 


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:05 PM

It's sad watching you guys doing this. Reason - not important now, you can't change anytihng right now. If we are right - in time we will see it. Yep NH and SS - stupid and have no reasons to be put above NS to be canon, but whatere it is - deal with it. You can be in denial, but not make this story - to crush your life/vision. Be true to what story teach you from beggining - don't give up on your dreams. Even more - The Last and 2 last chaptres - oh God, they a awful, but what if part 3 make NS to win? I'm not saying it will, but who knows? This was done to a show "How I Met Your Mother" in the end. Just get your lesson and try to become someone better if this story was something important to you.



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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:05 PM

I want Trollmoto/Kishidara to make all this kitten IT and troll the entire fandom the likes of which have never been seen nor will be seen again.  :pimp: It would literally make up for all his terrible writing in the past. 

Yes, that would be grand wouldn't it ?  Naruto fandom would have an 'interesting' day  :zaru:


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:06 PM

I guess Neji's death is one of the top five things I hated in this manga. I was trying to forget about him, but when I saw on tumblr a post showing his first appearance and last appearance(the grave) I became very depressed. He didn't have to die! A good character killed off from the author for nothing! This makes me rage.
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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:07 PM

I guess Neji's death is one of the top five things I hated in this manga. I was trying to forget about him, but when I saw on tumblr a post showing his first appearance and last appearance(the grave) I became very depressed. He didn't have to die! A good character killed off from the author for nothing! This makes me rage.

Did you see the latest post I posted?

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 03:08 PM

I guess Neji's death is one of the top five things I hated in this manga. I was trying to forget about him, but when I saw on tumblr a post showing his first appearance and last appearance(the grave) I became very depressed. He didn't have to die! A good character killed off from the author for nothing! This makes me rage.

Hey, atleast the guy was saved from Kishimoto's random-pairing-no jutsu  :twitch:


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