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[RyohkiFan]

I wonder if I post this story on FF.net will SS fans take this garbage?

@Ryohkifan
Why were the ppl mad at the Shikamaru novel?

Whoops sorry, decided to take a nap, I believe that's what they mad at since google translate put Shikamaru but I don't really know, if you wanna see them, I could pm you if you like (If you even see this post lol)

Edited by RyohkiFan, 04 March 2015 - 08:58 PM.

[TouKen4Life3g]

Whoops sorry, decided to take a nap, I believe that's what they mad at since google translate put Shikamaru but I don't really know, if you wanna see them, I could pm you if you like (If you even see this post lol)

What exactly happened?

[NaruSaku fan in Kentucky]

This is what should have happened.

 

 

[RyohkiFan]

What exactly happened?

I don't really know...I just saw it and the person posting some pictures but since I don't know JP, I don't actually know what's happening

[Nar123]

I will drop this nuclear bomb as I promised this morning. Bye guys.

Sakura's novel -------still a worse story than twilight----------

Author's note: I can't believe I used twenty minutes of my time to create a garbage.

Target audience: Masochists who wants to end their miserable life

WARNING: Readers will receive mild brain tumor, hyperventilation, heart attack and several STD's from reading the story.

Spoiler

Sakura is living her busy everyday life as a medic. But she feels there is something missing in her life. Whenever she sees Hinata she could feel jealous just seeing how perfect she is. She is beautiful, intelligent, strong, brave, a heiress, and is loved by everyone. The medic can't stop but sometimes wish how life would be if she was in Hinata's shoes. What set them apart? And then she catches glimpse of her best friend, now the village hero, showering Hinata with affection. That's when she realizes that what's missing in her life is to be loved by someone.

Blah blah blah blah

An enemy attacks the Konoha hospital wanting to get the DNA samples of Konoha's strongest shinobis.

Blah blah blah

The enemy shinobi saw an opening and fired a katon jutsu towards the medic. Just when she was closing her eyes, waiting for the pain to come, she felt like she was being lifted from the air. She opened her eyes and the first thing she saw was her long lost teammate. Wasn't he supposed to be traveling around the world?

"Why are you here?"

"I told you 'next time' didn't I? I'm a man of my word."

Hearing the love of her life speaking to her in that deep voice, protecting her, and holding her in his arms made Sakura's heart beat so fast she didn't know if it was caused by the urgency of the situation or just the Sasuke effect.

Sasuke gently put her down and rubbed her back. "Are you alright?"

Sakura was surprised with the concern in his eyes she barely uttered a small "thank you".

"I'll protect you."

And just as his words, Sasuke attacked the enemy shinobi battalion.

It didn't take more than thirty seconds since Sasuke's appearance, for the 132 enemy shinobis to be decapitated by the Chidori Eisou.

Sakura just watched in awe. This guy must be the god of battle. The way he moved was like the five elements. As quiet as the wind, fierce like a fire, fluid like the water, fast as a lightning, and unrelenting like the earth. And he still managed to come out of the battle without a single blood stain on his wear. No amount of fighting together with him during the war is going to help her get used to the piece of art that was Sasuke Uchiha.

Sasuke Uchiha is her one and only love. No guy could give her the thrilling excitement just by looking at him, and make it more clear that there is a huge distance she has to challenge. Sasuke could make her understand that she was never enough and isn't that the most valuable thought! After all, if you were satisfied with where are you are now, isn't that the same as not growing? No, she will never become arrogant to think that she is accomplished, especially when there is Sasuke. She will see her faults and work to destroy it. That's just who she is. Bettering herself each and every day.

"Finished." Sasuke said those words with the same indifference as he would, have he completed ten push-ups.

But this wasn't the time to think about love. Sakura rushed towards him to check for any injuries. As soon as she reached his figure, she ran her hands through his entire body for a medical scan. Just as she reached towards his neck, her fingers were caught by the Uchiha's hands.

"I'm alright Sakura."

"Please let me do my job. We don't know if they had some unknown poisons in their weapons......", Sakura looked up towards Sasuke as she tried to lecture him, but couldn't complete her sentence as she realized how close she was to him. She could see Sasuke's hair, wet and attached to his forehead from the fight, which must have been something akin to a five minutes exercise for this genius. She could see his sweat steaming off from his neck. Her inner self had an uncontrollable urge to lick the saltiness.

It was at that moment the medic felt the whole building rocking back and forth.

"What is happening?"

Sasuke's eyes were already turned into crimson when he replied, "this whole hospital will explode."

=================================================================

In a fraction of a second, Sakura's lips connected to Sasuke's as she released her Byakugou. The energy force travelled from Sakura inside Sasuke through their connected lips while Sasuke's limbs were being obliterated along with the building. But Sasuke enjoyed it. He felt the excitement coursing through him as Sakura's kiss was recreating him, his ears, his legs, his fingers, his lungs, and his heart. The lingering feeling of Sakura's chakra running everywhere in his body gave him a powerful feeling. Her kiss created his everything. What a dominant woman she was for her lips now had complete control over his body.

Gone was the explosion and left among the debris were the two inseparable beings. Time seemed to have stopped for the two. Sakura tried to take a step back and stop their lip-locking as she tried to assess the situation, but Sasuke held her close as one of his hands held her arm and one held the back of her head.

"Aaaah....Sakura.....don't" Sasuke moaned into her mouth.

Who was she to deny him?

"Of course....not....ah....Sasuke-kun."

====================================================================

Today was the day Sakura dreamed of her entire life. The day she was going to become a family with the man who she always admired and loved. The man who always secretly protected her. Sakura couldn't stop her smile while holding her husband's hands. She could see Sasuke's lips forming into a small smirk as he squeezed back her fingers.

On her neck was a necklace Sasuke gave her. It had a cherry blossom in the middle of the Uchiha crest. It was a new Uchiha crest and a symbol to show that Sakura is the mother of all future Uchiha's. So even a hundreds and thousands of years later the Uchiha descendants would look at the crest and know about her. Sakura Haruno, the creator of the Uchiha's. The future Uchiha bloodline being proof of the love between her and the Uchiha leader living on hundreds and thousands of years later.


THE END

Don't ask me questions about why is this, this and that. If I wanted to write a story that made sense I wouldn't have written this story in the first place. This is my first time writing a story and in English. There will be grammatical errors but that's a good thing. The errors are aligned with the horribleness of this story.

Sincerely,
Your one and only ramenanmitsu

keep going ramen , one day you might be able to surpass the mighty kishi regarding of how much you end up making a person feel sick after reading a literature work

[LuckyChi7]

Off Topic, but the second best Videogame OTP 

 

 

 

The heart was inserted into the picture, but MARCUSxANYA 

[Atheck]

This is what should have happened.

 

 

 

If that were to happen, Sasuke would promptly put Sakura back into a torturous genjutsu where she's being viciously killed over and over again while Susanoo provides her the same fate offered to Danzo when he was in the ethereal warrior's grasp. 

[sushi.]

I will drop this nuclear bomb as I promised this morning. Bye guys.

Sakura's novel -------still a worse story than twilight----------

Author's note: I can't believe I used twenty minutes of my time to create a garbage.

Target audience: Masochists who wants to end their miserable life

WARNING: Readers will receive mild brain tumor, hyperventilation, heart attack and several STD's from reading the story.

Spoiler

Sakura is living her busy everyday life as a medic. But she feels there is something missing in her life. Whenever she sees Hinata she could feel jealous just seeing how perfect she is. She is beautiful, intelligent, strong, brave, a heiress, and is loved by everyone. The medic can't stop but sometimes wish how life would be if she was in Hinata's shoes. What set them apart? And then she catches glimpse of her best friend, now the village hero, showering Hinata with affection. That's when she realizes that what's missing in her life is to be loved by someone.

Blah blah blah blah

An enemy attacks the Konoha hospital wanting to get the DNA samples of Konoha's strongest shinobis.

Blah blah blah

The enemy shinobi saw an opening and fired a katon jutsu towards the medic. Just when she was closing her eyes, waiting for the pain to come, she felt like she was being lifted from the air. She opened her eyes and the first thing she saw was her long lost teammate. Wasn't he supposed to be traveling around the world?

"Why are you here?"

"I told you 'next time' didn't I? I'm a man of my word."

Hearing the love of her life speaking to her in that deep voice, protecting her, and holding her in his arms made Sakura's heart beat so fast she didn't know if it was caused by the urgency of the situation or just the Sasuke effect.

Sasuke gently put her down and rubbed her back. "Are you alright?"

Sakura was surprised with the concern in his eyes she barely uttered a small "thank you".

"I'll protect you."

And just as his words, Sasuke attacked the enemy shinobi battalion.

It didn't take more than thirty seconds since Sasuke's appearance, for the 132 enemy shinobis to be decapitated by the Chidori Eisou.

Sakura just watched in awe. This guy must be the god of battle. The way he moved was like the five elements. As quiet as the wind, fierce like a fire, fluid like the water, fast as a lightning, and unrelenting like the earth. And he still managed to come out of the battle without a single blood stain on his wear. No amount of fighting together with him during the war is going to help her get used to the piece of art that was Sasuke Uchiha.

Sasuke Uchiha is her one and only love. No guy could give her the thrilling excitement just by looking at him, and make it more clear that there is a huge distance she has to challenge. Sasuke could make her understand that she was never enough and isn't that the most valuable thought! After all, if you were satisfied with where are you are now, isn't that the same as not growing? No, she will never become arrogant to think that she is accomplished, especially when there is Sasuke. She will see her faults and work to destroy it. That's just who she is. Bettering herself each and every day.

"Finished." Sasuke said those words with the same indifference as he would, have he completed ten push-ups.

But this wasn't the time to think about love. Sakura rushed towards him to check for any injuries. As soon as she reached his figure, she ran her hands through his entire body for a medical scan. Just as she reached towards his neck, her fingers were caught by the Uchiha's hands.

"I'm alright Sakura."

"Please let me do my job. We don't know if they had some unknown poisons in their weapons......", Sakura looked up towards Sasuke as she tried to lecture him, but couldn't complete her sentence as she realized how close she was to him. She could see Sasuke's hair, wet and attached to his forehead from the fight, which must have been something akin to a five minutes exercise for this genius. She could see his sweat steaming off from his neck. Her inner self had an uncontrollable urge to lick the saltiness.

It was at that moment the medic felt the whole building rocking back and forth.

"What is happening?"

Sasuke's eyes were already turned into crimson when he replied, "this whole hospital will explode."

=================================================================

In a fraction of a second, Sakura's lips connected to Sasuke's as she released her Byakugou. The energy force travelled from Sakura inside Sasuke through their connected lips while Sasuke's limbs were being obliterated along with the building. But Sasuke enjoyed it. He felt the excitement coursing through him as Sakura's kiss was recreating him, his ears, his legs, his fingers, his lungs, and his heart. The lingering feeling of Sakura's chakra running everywhere in his body gave him a powerful feeling. Her kiss created his everything. What a dominant woman she was for her lips now had complete control over his body.

Gone was the explosion and left among the debris were the two inseparable beings. Time seemed to have stopped for the two. Sakura tried to take a step back and stop their lip-locking as she tried to assess the situation, but Sasuke held her close as one of his hands held her arm and one held the back of her head.

"Aaaah....Sakura.....don't" Sasuke moaned into her mouth.

Who was she to deny him?

"Of course....not....ah....Sasuke-kun."

====================================================================

Today was the day Sakura dreamed of her entire life. The day she was going to become a family with the man who she always admired and loved. The man who always secretly protected her. Sakura couldn't stop her smile while holding her husband's hands. She could see Sasuke's lips forming into a small smirk as he squeezed back her fingers.

On her neck was a necklace Sasuke gave her. It had a cherry blossom in the middle of the Uchiha crest. It was a new Uchiha crest and a symbol to show that Sakura is the mother of all future Uchiha's. So even a hundreds and thousands of years later the Uchiha descendants would look at the crest and know about her. Sakura Haruno, the creator of the Uchiha's. The future Uchiha bloodline being proof of the love between her and the Uchiha leader living on hundreds and thousands of years later.


THE END

Don't ask me questions about why is this, this and that. If I wanted to write a story that made sense I wouldn't have written this story in the first place. This is my first time writing a story and in English. There will be grammatical errors but that's a good thing. The errors are aligned with the horribleness of this story.

Sincerely,
Your one and only ramenanmitsu

Huuuh? Is that an actual part of the novel or a satire you made up?

[trang95]

Huuuh? Is that an actual part of the novel or a satire you made up?

satire

[TouKen4Life3g]

I still can't believe Sakura didn't get any hit on the guy. Really? Not even a tsundere hit? Sigh.

[AHK]

I still can't believe Sakura didn't get any hit on the guy. Really? Not even a tsundere hit? Sigh.

Of course not, it was always meant to be the other way around. Sakura knows her place

[RedFaction]

I still can't believe Sakura didn't get any hit on the guy. Really? Not even a tsundere hit? Sigh.

I wouldn't really call Sakura a tsundere. I would say she's more of a yandere now.

[Gaara's hair]

Did I read yandere

[TouKen4Life3g]

It's funny because you can tell it was supposed to be NS when they do the old "I hit you because you're an idiot but I'll hug, kiss, or show great care" that usually leads to love in the end if not the highest level of friendship without any pairing.

[TouKen4Life3g]

Oh btw, ranking is out and Naruto volume 72 is at 50. So yeah, time to say goodbye next week.

[Atheck]

Oh btw, ranking is out and Naruto volume 72 is at 50. So yeah, time to say goodbye next week.

 

How many sales has it garnered? I'm still curious to learn if Naruto can reach two million within the next few months. 

[AHK]

Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

I would say pretty kitten for a series that was supposed to be one of the biggest XD

[trang95]

Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

More or less bad. It only sold 22,971 copies or so after only its fourth week.

[trang95]

I would say pretty sh*tty for a series that was supposed to be one of the biggest XD

You nailed it XD

[sushi.]

I wouldn't really call Sakura a tsundere. I would say she's more of a yandere now.

Well I wouldn't call Sakura Sakura anymore.