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[FireFox]

 

Now now, everyone must hear the wise words from Kishimoto, about of our lord and savior Hinata-hime-sama.

This world is to cruel I can't find peace even in death   .

 

I'm taking you with me if I suffer so will you    .

[ichigo500]

I will drop this nuclear bomb as I promised this morning. Bye guys.

Sakura's novel -------still a worse story than twilight----------

Author's note: I can't believe I used twenty minutes of my time to create a garbage.

Target audience: Masochists who wants to end their miserable life

WARNING: Readers will receive mild brain tumor, hyperventilation, heart attack and several STD's from reading the story.

Spoiler

Sakura is living her busy everyday life as a medic. But she feels there is something missing in her life. Whenever she sees Hinata she could feel jealous just seeing how perfect she is. She is beautiful, intelligent, strong, brave, a heiress, and is loved by everyone. The medic can't stop but sometimes wish how life would be if she was in Hinata's shoes. What set them apart? And then she catches glimpse of her best friend, now the village hero, showering Hinata with affection. That's when she realizes that what's missing in her life is to be loved by someone.

Blah blah blah blah

An enemy attacks the Konoha hospital wanting to get the DNA samples of Konoha's strongest shinobis.

Blah blah blah

The enemy shinobi saw an opening and fired a katon jutsu towards the medic. Just when she was closing her eyes, waiting for the pain to come, she felt like she was being lifted from the air. She opened her eyes and the first thing she saw was her long lost teammate. Wasn't he supposed to be traveling around the world?

"Why are you here?"

"I told you 'next time' didn't I? I'm a man of my word."

Hearing the love of her life speaking to her in that deep voice, protecting her, and holding her in his arms made Sakura's heart beat so fast she didn't know if it was caused by the urgency of the situation or just the Sasuke effect.

Sasuke gently put her down and rubbed her back. "Are you alright?"

Sakura was surprised with the concern in his eyes she barely uttered a small "thank you".

"I'll protect you."

And just as his words, Sasuke attacked the enemy shinobi battalion.

It didn't take more than thirty seconds since Sasuke's appearance, for the 132 enemy shinobis to be decapitated by the Chidori Eisou.

Sakura just watched in awe. This guy must be the god of battle. The way he moved was like the five elements. As quiet as the wind, fierce like a fire, fluid like the water, fast as a lightning, and unrelenting like the earth. And he still managed to come out of the battle without a single blood stain on his wear. No amount of fighting together with him during the war is going to help her get used to the piece of art that was Sasuke Uchiha.

Sasuke Uchiha is her one and only love. No guy could give her the thrilling excitement just by looking at him, and make it more clear that there is a huge distance she has to challenge. Sasuke could make her understand that she was never enough and isn't that the most valuable thought! After all, if you were satisfied with where are you are now, isn't that the same as not growing? No, she will never become arrogant to think that she is accomplished, especially when there is Sasuke. She will see her faults and work to destroy it. That's just who she is. Bettering herself each and every day.

"Finished." Sasuke said those words with the same indifference as he would, have he completed ten push-ups.

But this wasn't the time to think about love. Sakura rushed towards him to check for any injuries. As soon as she reached his figure, she ran her hands through his entire body for a medical scan. Just as she reached towards his neck, her fingers were caught by the Uchiha's hands.

"I'm alright Sakura."

"Please let me do my job. We don't know if they had some unknown poisons in their weapons......", Sakura looked up towards Sasuke as she tried to lecture him, but couldn't complete her sentence as she realized how close she was to him. She could see Sasuke's hair, wet and attached to his forehead from the fight, which must have been something akin to a five minutes exercise for this genius. She could see his sweat steaming off from his neck. Her inner self had an uncontrollable urge to lick the saltiness.

It was at that moment the medic felt the whole building rocking back and forth.

"What is happening?"

Sasuke's eyes were already turned into crimson when he replied, "this whole hospital will explode."

=================================================================

In a fraction of a second, Sakura's lips connected to Sasuke's as she released her Byakugou. The energy force travelled from Sakura inside Sasuke through their connected lips while Sasuke's limbs were being obliterated along with the building. But Sasuke enjoyed it. He felt the excitement coursing through him as Sakura's kiss was recreating him, his ears, his legs, his fingers, his lungs, and his heart. The lingering feeling of Sakura's chakra running everywhere in his body gave him a powerful feeling. Her kiss created his everything. What a dominant woman she was for her lips now had complete control over his body.

Gone was the explosion and left among the debris were the two inseparable beings. Time seemed to have stopped for the two. Sakura tried to take a step back and stop their lip-locking as she tried to assess the situation, but Sasuke held her close as one of his hands held her arm and one held the back of her head.

"Aaaah....Sakura.....don't" Sasuke moaned into her mouth.

Who was she to deny him?

"Of course....not....ah....Sasuke-kun."

====================================================================

Today was the day Sakura dreamed of her entire life. The day she was going to become a family with the man who she always admired and loved. The man who always secretly protected her. Sakura couldn't stop her smile while holding her husband's hands. She could see Sasuke's lips forming into a small smirk as he squeezed back her fingers.

On her neck was a necklace Sasuke gave her. It had a cherry blossom in the middle of the Uchiha crest. It was a new Uchiha crest and a symbol to show that Sakura is the mother of all future Uchiha's. So even a hundreds and thousands of years later the Uchiha descendants would look at the crest and know about her. Sakura Haruno, the creator of the Uchiha's. The future Uchiha bloodline being proof of the love between her and the Uchiha leader living on hundreds and thousands of years later.


THE END

Don't ask me questions about why is this, this and that. If I wanted to write a story that made sense I wouldn't have written this story in the first place. This is my first time writing a story and in English. There will be grammatical errors but that's a good thing. The errors are aligned with the horribleness of this story.

Sincerely,
Your one and only ramenanmitsu

Hahaha oh God ! You shouldn't post it anywhere, SJ will use it to write Sakura's book ! (and I wouldn't be surprised if something like this really happens in the book...) 

[hinataiscreepy]

Hinatards really don't understand the concept of an arc.

 

Naruto's arc was to overcome his loneliness to be recognized by the village and more precisely friends and people he can relate to so that he can be connected to this world and getting the girl as icing on the cake. He did this at the end of the pain arc but learned nothing from it during the godawful epilogue

 

Sasuke's arc was to defeat his past (Itachi) and to be Naruto's closest friend and rival. He really did not kill Itachi, went on a crazy angst spread and effed everything around. He is the biggest kitten and gets the girl somehow. He is wandering outside doing things...

 

Sakura's arc was to go from the dumb sasuke fangirl who hated Naruto to the independent girl who comes to love Naruto (to know what love really means) and support his dream. Her development went that way until the kage arc till the end. She remains that pathetic abused girl who still fangirls sasuke and is a housewife with the husband not being here.

 

Hinata's arc was to go from that weak and shy girl to a more assertive, stronger person who is acknowledged by her father and clan. She was supposed to change the curse tradition and lead the clan with Neji in Harmony. In the end, Neji dies the exact way his dad did and Hinata is sadly chained to her fate of being a pairing fodder when Naruto was ironically meant to be the cataclysis of her change not the opposite.

Edited by hinataiscreepy, 04 March 2015 - 06:07 PM.

[Lady Lys]

I wonder if I post this story on FF.net will SS fans take this garbage?

They would. They so so so so would. 

[Narufan85]

Anything new and exciting today?

[Tiller]

WTF is this SS kitten?

[FireFox]

WTF is this SS bullsh**?

Ramen's predicting what will Kikitten and SP Otaku Fappetry  will do with Sakura's Novel   *few people died from reading this in the process*     

[Gaara's hair]

Anything new and exciting today?

Ramen's story

[Nostradamus]

Hinatards really don't understand the concept of an arc.

 

Naruto's arc was to overcome his loneliness to be recognized by the village and more precisely friends and people he can relate to so that he can be connected to this world and getting the girl as icing on the cake. He did this at the end of the pain arc but learned nothing from it during the godawful epilogue

 

Sasuke's arc was to defeat his past (Itachi) and to be Naruto's closest friend and rival. He really did not kill Itachi, went on a crazy angst spread and effed everything around. He is the biggest kitten and gets the girl somehow. He is wandering outside doing things...

 

Sakura's arc was to go from the dumb sasuke fangirl who hated Naruto to the independent girl who comes to love Naruto (to know what love really means) and support his dream. Her development went that way until the kage arc till the end. She remains that pathetic abused girl who still fangirls naruto and is a housewife with the husband not being here.

 

Hinata's arc was to go from that weak and shy girl to a more assertive, stronger person who is acknowledged by her father and clan. She was supposed to change the curse tradition and lead the clan with Neji in Harmony. In the end, Neji dies the exact way his dad did and Hinata is sadly chained to her fate of being a pairing fodder when Naruto was ironically meant to be the cataclysis of her change not the opposite.

I couldn't have said it better myself.

[redrose3443]

This world is to cruel I can't find peace even in death   .

 

I'm taking you with me if I suffer so will you    .

Sorry but, I use my card for this;

 

 

WTF is this SS bullsh**?

Ramen's attempt to imitate some of the greatest minds ever know, Kishi and SP.

[Khaleesi]

I feel like posting my own version because I'm competitive (I'll crush him with my own two little but powerful hands) and I enjoy ruining lifes (you all will get embolism).

[AHK]

I feel like posting my own version because I'm competitive (I'll crush him with my own two little but powerful hands) and I enjoy ruining lifes (you all will get embolism).

For the sake of my sanity....

Don't.

[Khaleesi]

For the sake of my sanity....

Don't.

Now that I remember...isn't it forbiden to do it...?

 

Off topic: Me

 

[AHK]

Now that I remember...isn't it forbiden to do it...?
 
Off topic: Me
 

Lol idk, I was just kidding. Doesn't really matter to me XD

[FireFox]

Sorry but, I use my card for this;

 

 

Ramen's attempt to imitate some of the greatest minds ever know, Kishi and SP.

I feel like posting my own version because I'm competitive (I'll crush him with my own two little but powerful hands) and I enjoy ruining lifes (you all will get embolism).

NOOOOOOOOOOO !!! DON'T !!!   YOU'RE TO CRUEL AND EVIL  YOU'LL KILL US ALL   .

 

 

 

[LuckyChi7]

A fun little fanfic idea I came up with:

 

Title:

 

Devastation  

 

Setting: 7 years after the events of Naruto's Story.

 

Konoha 

 

Land of Fire 

 

Sand Village 

 

Mist Village 

 

 

Summary: The Village of Lightning, and The Stone Village have been eliminated by an unknown adversary whose claimed to have surpass strength of Hogoromo, Hamura, and Kaguya. Gaara of The Sand protected his village in a sand prison jutsu from the threat with the help of Shukaku. The Three Tails - Isobu protected Mist Village and died to keep the people alive due to the promise he made to the late 4th Mizukage.  In Konoha,  Naruto Uzuamaki at the age of 26 steps down as Hokage due to his lack of strength to protect the village. His Wife, Hinata was the first person who was murdered by this threat, along with his children. Sasuke died after fighting the threat for 3 days straight which left Sakura in depression for 3 months after seeing her daughter get killed before her eyes. The Village however was left in ruins since Naruto's departure from the village after being discouraged by the villagers for the first time since his birth.  After a series of recollection of memories from her past, Sakura makes it her goal to find Naruto and help him come to his senses to save the Shinobi world once more.  

 

 

 

I really didn't think too deep into ploting out this out because I was simply winging it! 

[hinataiscreepy]

I couldn't have said it better myself.

 

Naruto is a very simple story for teenagers who may be going through something similar like Naruto (kishi was very lonely and sad in his youth) to keep on living and persevering because they will be eventually rewarded like Kishi was (being a successful mangaka being his childhood dream). Mr Plinkett would have told him to folllow this simple pattern.

 

I am sure that Naruto's celebrating his victory against Neji illustrates Kishi's climbing the ladder. Its heartwarming. Kishi literally turned the back on the readers who were inspired by his own life Learning lesson. The ending perfectly illustrates how he has Fallen much like naruto he is a workalcholic eating ramen alone and he is neglecting his kid and wife. He is a sad and lonely man. He has given up and has betrayed his readers.

 

Speaking of Metal gear solid, Solid snake starts out as a sad lonely man who is only good at killing. He changes, makes friends, he fights for something, he gives other people a reason to live, he redeems himself, makes peace and redeems his father, near the end of his life he gives up on his addiction to war and is enjoying eggs with his friends.

 

Squall from final fantasy does something similar. He used to be an inexpressive lonely teenager who was afraid of growing up and being connected to this world cause he was afraid of being abandoned. He grows up, he becomes little by little more open, kind hearted and gets the girl and is enjoying full of opportunitoes. His smile at the end must be the most simple and satisfying character arc accomplishment ever

Edited by hinataiscreepy, 04 March 2015 - 06:25 PM.

[Narufan85]

Ramen's story

Yeah. I'm afraid I'll pass on the SS stuff.

[narusaku256]

I'm wondering whether to post the Sakura novel extended version here or make a thread about it?

The ones I cherish don't get on my nerves. Because if they do, I wouldn't cherish them in the first place. The ones I'm close friends with till now are the ones who actually know the kind of person I am. They know perfectly well that I don't feel concern, sympathy, or care for others, but they don't mind it. They are willing to stay friends with me regardless of that. And I honestly think I don't deserve them.

Nope. I've lived in other places as well like Australia, India, Singapore, Hong Kong and others .

Lol, you're not bothering me. I truly don't mind reading it. If YOU say it's good I think it IS good.

India? Wh...when? And...where? If you don't mind answering these questions 'f course. Its okay if you don't want to

[Liu bie]

I will drop this nuclear bomb as I promised this morning. Bye guys.

Sakura's novel -------still a worse story than twilight----------

Author's note: I can't believe I used twenty minutes of my time to create a garbage.

Target audience: Masochists who wants to end their miserable life

WARNING: Readers will receive mild brain tumor, hyperventilation, heart attack and several STD's from reading the story.

Spoiler

Sakura is living her busy everyday life as a medic. But she feels there is something missing in her life. Whenever she sees Hinata she could feel jealous just seeing how perfect she is. She is beautiful, intelligent, strong, brave, a heiress, and is loved by everyone. The medic can't stop but sometimes wish how life would be if she was in Hinata's shoes. What set them apart? And then she catches glimpse of her best friend, now the village hero, showering Hinata with affection. That's when she realizes that what's missing in her life is to be loved by someone.

Blah blah blah blah

An enemy attacks the Konoha hospital wanting to get the DNA samples of Konoha's strongest shinobis.

Blah blah blah

The enemy shinobi saw an opening and fired a katon jutsu towards the medic. Just when she was closing her eyes, waiting for the pain to come, she felt like she was being lifted from the air. She opened her eyes and the first thing she saw was her long lost teammate. Wasn't he supposed to be traveling around the world?

"Why are you here?"

"I told you 'next time' didn't I? I'm a man of my word."

Hearing the love of her life speaking to her in that deep voice, protecting her, and holding her in his arms made Sakura's heart beat so fast she didn't know if it was caused by the urgency of the situation or just the Sasuke effect.

Sasuke gently put her down and rubbed her back. "Are you alright?"

Sakura was surprised with the concern in his eyes she barely uttered a small "thank you".

"I'll protect you."

And just as his words, Sasuke attacked the enemy shinobi battalion.

It didn't take more than thirty seconds since Sasuke's appearance, for the 132 enemy shinobis to be decapitated by the Chidori Eisou.

Sakura just watched in awe. This guy must be the god of battle. The way he moved was like the five elements. As quiet as the wind, fierce like a fire, fluid like the water, fast as a lightning, and unrelenting like the earth. And he still managed to come out of the battle without a single blood stain on his wear. No amount of fighting together with him during the war is going to help her get used to the piece of art that was Sasuke Uchiha.

Sasuke Uchiha is her one and only love. No guy could give her the thrilling excitement just by looking at him, and make it more clear that there is a huge distance she has to challenge. Sasuke could make her understand that she was never enough and isn't that the most valuable thought! After all, if you were satisfied with where are you are now, isn't that the same as not growing? No, she will never become arrogant to think that she is accomplished, especially when there is Sasuke. She will see her faults and work to destroy it. That's just who she is. Bettering herself each and every day.

"Finished." Sasuke said those words with the same indifference as he would, have he completed ten push-ups.

But this wasn't the time to think about love. Sakura rushed towards him to check for any injuries. As soon as she reached his figure, she ran her hands through his entire body for a medical scan. Just as she reached towards his neck, her fingers were caught by the Uchiha's hands.

"I'm alright Sakura."

"Please let me do my job. We don't know if they had some unknown poisons in their weapons......", Sakura looked up towards Sasuke as she tried to lecture him, but couldn't complete her sentence as she realized how close she was to him. She could see Sasuke's hair, wet and attached to his forehead from the fight, which must have been something akin to a five minutes exercise for this genius. She could see his sweat steaming off from his neck. Her inner self had an uncontrollable urge to lick the saltiness.

It was at that moment the medic felt the whole building rocking back and forth.

"What is happening?"

Sasuke's eyes were already turned into crimson when he replied, "this whole hospital will explode."

=================================================================

In a fraction of a second, Sakura's lips connected to Sasuke's as she released her Byakugou. The energy force travelled from Sakura inside Sasuke through their connected lips while Sasuke's limbs were being obliterated along with the building. But Sasuke enjoyed it. He felt the excitement coursing through him as Sakura's kiss was recreating him, his ears, his legs, his fingers, his lungs, and his heart. The lingering feeling of Sakura's chakra running everywhere in his body gave him a powerful feeling. Her kiss created his everything. What a dominant woman she was for her lips now had complete control over his body.

Gone was the explosion and left among the debris were the two inseparable beings. Time seemed to have stopped for the two. Sakura tried to take a step back and stop their lip-locking as she tried to assess the situation, but Sasuke held her close as one of his hands held her arm and one held the back of her head.

"Aaaah....Sakura.....don't" Sasuke moaned into her mouth.

Who was she to deny him?

"Of course....not....ah....Sasuke-kun."

====================================================================

Today was the day Sakura dreamed of her entire life. The day she was going to become a family with the man who she always admired and loved. The man who always secretly protected her. Sakura couldn't stop her smile while holding her husband's hands. She could see Sasuke's lips forming into a small smirk as he squeezed back her fingers.

On her neck was a necklace Sasuke gave her. It had a cherry blossom in the middle of the Uchiha crest. It was a new Uchiha crest and a symbol to show that Sakura is the mother of all future Uchiha's. So even a hundreds and thousands of years later the Uchiha descendants would look at the crest and know about her. Sakura Haruno, the creator of the Uchiha's. The future Uchiha bloodline being proof of the love between her and the Uchiha leader living on hundreds and thousands of years later.


THE END

Don't ask me questions about why is this, this and that. If I wanted to write a story that made sense I wouldn't have written this story in the first place. This is my first time writing a story and in English. There will be grammatical errors but that's a good thing. The errors are aligned with the horribleness of this story.

Sincerely,
Your one and only ramenanmitsu

I did not read your story because ss, but have ever tried a NS angst story?