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[MagusKyros]

I like where it's going but I didn't like the first chapter.

I'm sorry but if Sakura and Naruto are engaged shes not suddenly going to run off with Sasuke, it's just not who Sakura is. Maybe if she was like she was when she was 12 but not anymore...

I just stopped reading it after I read all that crap. One of the biggest "wtf" things I've read on FF.net

[Gnosismaster]

I'll let you know if it gets better.

Sometimes, I curse my devotion to NaruSaku by reading moments like those.

[Nick Soapdish]

Moving On has been updated.

Part Four

[Uzumaki's Fire]

Moving On has been updated.

Part Four

I read that last night on my PSP before going to bed.....

Naruto is always the secretive one and it's so hard for him to tell his secrets to people extremely close to him because of him believe that he should make other people happy all the time but it backfired...

[Gnosismaster]

That chapter made me sad.

[MagusKyros]

Moving On has been updated.

Part Four

That fic is said to be a continuation of "Finding Sakura," which I'm sure most of us here wouldn't like. However, that fic can be read as a separate story. Nonetheless though, I just don't read anything Michiru's Mirror writes.

[newbi]

That fic is said to be a continuation of "Finding Sakura," which I'm sure most of us here wouldn't like. However, that fic can be read as a separate story. Nonetheless though, I just don't read anything Michiru's Mirror writes.

I second this statement, i ran into "Finding Sakura" recentley and that story scared the hell out off me, never finished reading it.

But she is a good writer thou, i had a look on "moving on" as well before i saw that she wrote it, and she seems to like a "dark and sad undertone" for the base of her stories.

And as you, i try to avoid her stories.

[Nick Soapdish]

That fic is said to be a continuation of "Finding Sakura," which I'm sure most of us here wouldn't like. However, that fic can be read as a separate story. Nonetheless though, I just don't read anything Michiru's Mirror writes.

I didn't like the beginning and wound up skipping over a lot of the middle. But I did like the end where Naruto forgave Sakura for her actions while possessed by a demon and Sakura forgave Naruto for not realizing what was wrong.

[drag-eart]

I read that and I like the way Naruto asked Sakura about Naruto (sounds weird, doesn't it?)

Yeah me too
Actually Like the part when Naruto fought back I mean literally fought back against Tsunade, you don't see that in a fic.

That fic is said to be a continuation of "Finding Sakura," which I'm sure most of us here wouldn't like. However, that fic can be read as a separate story. Nonetheless though, I just don't read anything Michiru's Mirror writes.

Yeah that story threw me off. I didn't really like it, especially the ending on how naruto forgave her, but even though they weren't together, but they were in a supposed relationship. (so she cheated) And another thing I didn't like was when naruto blamed the whole thing on himself, that's what got me mad. I was hoping on a more detailed account between naruto and sakura, but she ended it so quickly it pissed me off, a wasted read of my two hours I spared. It changes my perspective on the story moving on, even if it's supposed to be a future fic of naruto and sakura. I just hope your right Magus, hopefully it's a separate story and she doesn't mention Finding Sakura or the past in Moving On, I guess I'm fine with it.

[Gnosismaster]

Yeah that story threw me off. I didn't really like it, especially the ending on how naruto forgave her, but even though they weren't together, but they were in a supposed relationship. (so she cheated) And another thing I didn't like was when naruto blamed the whole thing on himself, that's what got me mad. I was hoping on a more detailed account between naruto and sakura, but she ended it so quickly it pissed me off, a wasted read of my two hours I spared. It changes my perspective on the story moving on, even if it's supposed to be a future fic of naruto and sakura. I just hope your right Magus, hopefully it's a separate story and she doesn't mention Finding Sakura or the past in Moving On, I guess I'm fine with it.

And I was about to read it. Good thing I didn't.

[MagusKyros]

Yeah me too
Actually Like the part when Naruto fought back I mean literally fought back against Tsunade, you don't see that in a fic.
Yeah that story threw me off. I didn't really like it, especially the ending on how naruto forgave her, but even though they weren't together, but they were in a supposed relationship. (so she cheated) And another thing I didn't like was when naruto blamed the whole thing on himself, that's what got me mad. I was hoping on a more detailed account between naruto and sakura, but she ended it so quickly it pissed me off, a wasted read of my two hours I spared. It changes my perspective on the story moving on, even if it's supposed to be a future fic of naruto and sakura. I just hope your right Magus, hopefully it's a separate story and she doesn't mention Finding Sakura or the past in Moving On, I guess I'm fine with it.

It's in chapter four's A.N. Moving On is a future continuation of Finding Sakura.

However, what I'm saying is that the story, so far, can be read as on it's own.

[murdoc]

I was really enjoying Moving On until I found out that it was the sequel to Finding Sakura

[Gnosismaster]

You could just pretend that it wasn't.

[Radon]

In the end I hate fanfics like that. I'm sorry to those who love angst but I hate it. The only angst based story's I will read are those that don't contain cheating (sex or otherwise) and rape. It's just not what I like and it just dosn't fit with the way the Naruto story works.

I think the only way people can get away with angst in Naruto is because, if you really wanted, you could make the Naruto story 10x darker without actually affecting the plot of the series. It has such a dark undertone that it leads well to angst.

Just not my cup of tea in the end, and it always takes a couple of days to get over story's like that an remind myself that they are NOT cannon... sigh...

[murdoc]

You could just pretend that it wasn't.

I'm trying but it doesn't work

Blind to It Before - Chapter 8 is up of one of my fave NaruSaku stories!

This fic is good but now I'm definitely seeing being a medic nin in a different way, I had never thought of those situations like the bathroom scenes, I know they were just made up but it's kinda weird thinking if Sakura had to help some patients to do those things while she was working at the hospital and training with Tsunade.

[finalninja]

all of you stop reading your fanfics
and read this it so amazing I was at tears at this http://www.fanfiction.net/r/3656392/

[MagusKyros]

Here's a news flash for some of you. The author just found out how negatively received "Finding Sakura" was outside of FF.net, and has now announced "Moving On" to be a completely separate story.

Also, is the author "Michiru's Mirror" a girl?

[desaix]

Here's a news flash for some of you. The author just found out how negatively received "Finding Sakura" was outside of FF.net, and has now announced "Moving On" to be a completely separate story.

Also, is the author "Michiru's Mirror" a girl?

From reading that author's note, it sounds like he\she was referring to this thread in particular. So, my guess is that he\she is a member here, or at least a lurker.

[desaix]

As Michiru's Mirror 's beta, I can tell you that yes, she is obviously a girl and as far as I know, she is not a member on this site.

I was browsing through this website and found this thread where her story "Moving On" was praised and recieved quite a warm reception so I sent her the link, just to show her some outside feedback other than FF.net.

What I didn't realize was that this thread also contained negative criticisms of her story "Finding Sakura." I didn't get to read it fully seeing as how its about 41+ pages worth of posts...

Obviously this was an accidental mistake on my part.....*sighs* (Mea culpa)

Sounds like we made a good first impression on her, too.