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[FoolishYoungling]

Naruto should of invited Sakura to spend the night with him. Wait, they're only 17... dangit.

Hinata: Yuuki-chan? Am I married? I mean- i was just wondering- *thinking* Since it's not Naruto-kun. *Sigh*
Yuuki: Yeah..... but he isn't in the village a lot and and you don't really talk about him. plus you had a private wedding cause you said you were too embarrassed.
Hinata: Eh?

Thank you.

[Phantom_999]

You're welcome.   And they ARE 17..... Her parents would kill him if they did that, obviously.  

Okay well here's a Part 7 preview ( to make it up to those that felt a bit disappointed with part 6)

Naruto: Okay Yuuki, We are going to spend time with you today. what would you like to do?  
Yuuki: Okay well first I'd like to eat at Ichiraku then go for a walk around the village, After Let's watch the fire Works together.  
Sakura Okay then dear.   

Entering Ichiraku

Naruto: Hi! We're Back!
Teuchi: Ah you're Back! So, brought your daughter again, eh?
Naruto: AHH!!!    How did you know!?
Ayame: If you wanted to keep it a secret, you should try talking more quietly and out of prying ears.  
Sakura: RIGHT.  
Ayame: Well, I couldn't believe that an alternate world exists but It only makes sense cause she seems older than you two could possibly have right now.  
Teuchi: Any ways since Yuuki-chan came all the way here we'll offer a special discount. And don't worry, We won't tell anyone about you.
Yuuki: Thank You!!

Afterward

 

Naruto: Thanks again!! Are you both full?
Yuuki: Yes!
Sakura: Mm Hmm.
Naruto: Okay then, lets start moving!

Walking around the village.......
Person Number one: Huh? Sakura-san has a sister?
Person number two: No she's an only child. Must be an identical cousin.
person number three: Strange the smaller Sakura has blue eyes......
Yuuki: A lot of people are staring, should we go somewhere else?
Naruto: No, it's okay just ignore them
Yuuki: okay.....  
Sakura: Yuuki-chan?
Yuuki: No it's nothing. Well lets keep going then!!!

Afterwards they they started to look at the fire works......

Sakura: Yuuki-chan, Was that Anmitsu delicious?
Yuuki: Yes, Thank you mama!!
Naruto: Hey the fire Works are starting!!
Yuuki: Ah! So pretty!!!   Papa, Mama.... Thank you for spending so much time with me..... It means so much..... *tears start flowing*
Naruto: Yuuki!? Whats wrong?
Sakura: Are you okay, dear?
Yuuki: Yes.... *sob* I'm sorry.... It's just, that those people were confused about me, and I remember that I don't belong here really... then when I think of my world I always feel lonely......
Sakura: Why? *looks at Yuuki* Tell us sweetie... Why do you feel lonely? *cups Yuuki's face in her hands*
Naruto: *thinking* *IT CAN'T BE.......that look in Yuuki's eyes.... I recognize it!!* Yuuki! Don't tell me that we-
Misato: OJOU-SAMA!!!!
Naruto, Yuuki, Sakura: Misato!!
Yuuki: Misato I'm sorry... I-
Misato: Ojou-sama!!! They've come!!! Meido's Dawn has come!!!!!

Edited by Phantom_999, 28 May 2013 - 01:11 AM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Phantom. Do you have any more fanfics I could read?

[Phantom_999]

I already made some remember? The thread got closed though.

[FoolishYoungling]

I already made some remember? The thread got closed though.

What? Where? When? Why?

[Phantom_999]

Don't remember? NS Family Life? I mad a a fanfic there about a Son of Naruto and Sakura, Haruto. And a SH fanfic too?

Here's the link

http://www.narusaku....showtopic=11382

SO, IN celebration of Chapter 631, I 'll Make sure that this Fanfic is the best work I've ever done!!!!!!! So wait patiently for it.

Edited by Phantom_999, 22 May 2013 - 02:17 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Don't remember? NS Family Life? I mad a a fanfic there about a Son of Naruto and Sakura, Haruto. And a SH fanfic too?

Here's the link

http://www.narusaku....showtopic=11382

SO, IN celebration of Chapter 631, I 'll Make sure that this Fanfic is the best work I've ever done!!!!!!! So wait patiently for it.

Sorry I forgot. It's been a year and half, ya know! And we haven't talked much in that time until now.

Anyway, taking time off because of excitement from 631 is no excuse Phantom. I want a new part every hour! (kidding)

[Phantom_999]

Oh I know you're joking. But still rushing the story is not doing any favors. Besides 631 gave me some ideas on the family interactions. I just need to flesh it out somehow. Then there's Meido's Dawn; I'm working out goals, ambitions, abilities, threat levels and all that. so just be patient.

[Phantom_999]

Okay well here's Part 7. I won't go into the fight scenes just yet let me work out these guy's combat skills.  Also I'd like to see Sakura's power up so I can put it into the story

Naruto: Okay Yuuki, We are going to spend time with you today. what would you like to do?   
Yuuki: Okay well first I'd like to eat at Ichiraku then go for a walk around the village, After Let's watch the fire Works together.   
Sakura Okay then dear.    

Entering Ichiraku

Naruto: Hi! We're Back!
Teuchi: Ah you're Back! So, brought your daughter again, eh?
Naruto: AHH!!!     How did you know!?
Ayame: If you wanted to keep it a secret, you should try talking more quietly and out of prying ears.   
Sakura: RIGHT.   
Ayame: Well, I couldn't believe that an alternate world exists but It only makes sense cause she seems older than you two could possibly have right now.   
Teuchi: Any ways since Yuuki-chan came all the way here we'll offer a special discount. And don't worry, We won't tell anyone about you.
Yuuki: Thank You!!

Afterward

 

Naruto: Thanks again!! Are you both full?
Yuuki: Yes!
Sakura: Mm Hmm.
Naruto: Okay then, lets start moving!

Walking around the village.......
Person Number one: Huh? Sakura-san has a sister?
Person number two: No she's an only child. Must be an identical cousin.
person number three: Strange the smaller Sakura has blue eyes......
Yuuki: A lot of people are staring, should we go somewhere else?
Naruto: No, it's okay just ignore them
Yuuki: okay.....   
Sakura: Yuuki-chan?
Yuuki: No it's nothing. Well lets keep going then!!!

Afterwards they they started to look at the fire works......

Sakura: Yuuki-chan, Was that Anmitsu delicious?
Yuuki: Yes, Thank you mama!!
Naruto: Hey the fire Works are starting!!
Yuuki: Ah! So pretty!!!    Papa, Mama.... Thank you for spending so much time with me..... It means so much..... *tears start flowing*
Naruto: Yuuki!? Whats wrong?
Sakura: Are you okay, dear?
Yuuki: Yes.... *sob* I'm sorry.... It's just, that those people were confused about me, and I remember that I don't belong here really... then when I think of my world I always feel lonely......
Sakura: Why? *looks at Yuuki* Tell us sweetie... Why do you feel lonely? *cups Yuuki's face in her hands*
Naruto: *thinking* *IT CAN'T BE.......that look in Yuuki's eyes.... I recognize it!!* Yuuki! Don't tell me that we-
Misato: OJOU-SAMA!!!!
Naruto, Yuuki, Sakura: Misato!!
Yuuki: Misato I'm sorry... I-
Misato: Ojou-sama!!! They've come!!! Meido's Dawn has come!!!!!

Naruto: Meido's Dawn?

Misato: An organization that is after Yuuki-sama. They are are currently at war with the five nations in our world. And they also......

Yuuki: In our world they constantly attacked us to try capture me. Mama and Papa protected me, but the jutsu that hit them cause a sickness that they never recovered from.... and... I  lost them last year..... *Tearing up* *sniff sniff*

Sakura: What?? We both die!?

Naruto: Yuuki!! I- I don't-

Misato: There's no time! We must see Hokage-sama and inform her of this!! Sakura-sama Get Kakashi-san, He knows of the situation!!

Sakura: R-right!! *leaves*

Misato: Naruto-sama!! come with us!!

Naruto: Right!!

 

Entering the Hokage's office

 

Misato: Hokage-sama

Tsunade: What is it!? Has Meido's Dawn come!?

Misato: Yes They'll be here in a matter of days!!

Tsunade: Darn!! I didn't think they'd get here so quick!! And I haven't even devised a strategy yet!!

*Kakashi and Sakura enter*

Kakashi: I came as soon as I heard. What do we Do??

Misato: *sigh* I'm not sure we can do anything, at the moment. Not without getting everyone involved. They are unlike anyone you've ever faced..... I'm afraid that the two of us must leave.

Yuuki: But!! I've found Mama and Papa again!!!!

Misato: I know Ojou-sama. But we can't involve them. This was something that came over because of us and they were not as prepared as we were for the threat. There is a chance you could see them die again here.

Yuuki:............... *tearing up*

Naruto: NO!!! I will not die!!!

Sakura: Naruto....

Misato: My lord?

Naruto: I know what it feels like to not have parents, And though the me from your world is gone I'm still here!!!! I won't abandon Yuuki!! If you're going,so am I!!!

Sakura: Right!! I'm going too!!!!

Misato: Are you sure my lord, may lady? I can't guarantee anything against these enemies. And we don not want to weep twice for losing the same people so dear to us.

Naruto:I Said I'm going, and I said I won't die!!!! I never break a promise!! I'm not leaving my daughter alone!! EVER AGAIN!!! 

Sakura: You mean OUR daughter!!!! I'm not going anywhere without her either!!

Yuuki: Mama, Papa..... Thank you...... *sob sob*

Misato: Alright..... I won't stop you then. We leave in the morning Pack your things and be ready to leave at dawn.

Naruto: And Sakura: RIGHT!!!!!

Kakashi: Well If you're that determined..... I have nothing to say. Except good luck.

Tsunade: Wait by the gates tomorrow before you go. We have to discuss some things.

Naruto Okay.

 

The next morning, by the gates

 

Tsunade: I will inform everyone of the details of the organization, just in case they attack and I've also sent envoys to the other countries to inform them as well in case of  attack.

Misato: I see...

Tsunade: I will also send Kakashi to track you from time to time to inform you of the incoming events.

Misato: Very well. but they are a crafty bunch they may follow you  undetected.

Kakashi: I will take extra precautions during those times.

Misato: Alright then. Let us be off

Yuuki: Mama, Papa!!! Let's Go!! 

Naruto and Sakura: Right!!!!!

 

And so Naruto and Sakura head off on an unknown journey to face an unknown enemy and to protect a daughter whom they never knew about, and so the the inter dimensional battle against the Mysterious Organization Meido's Dawn begins.

 

*High in the sky*

 

A mysterious figure hovers over the village, Clad in a skull mask and a Black cloak decorated with Purple flame Patterns.

 

Masked figure: Target confirmed.........................

 

The End. (Of this part of the fanfic) 

Edited by Phantom_999, 02 July 2013 - 12:25 PM.

[Phantom_999]

Okay I would like to note that the mysterious child has now ended.................. No, I'm not cancelling the fanfic.

 

I mean it has stopped being completely about Yuuki, so I will be calling this next part  "Battle against Meido's Dawn". the Mysterious child  title is done, and is being replaced. So with that let the story continue!!!

 

The Battle against Meido's Dawn Part 1

 

Naruto and Sakura have set off with Misato and Yuuki for the coming battle against the new organization Meido's Dawn which comes through an alternate world of theirs. sworn to protect their daughter from that world they have journeyed off into the unknown. What they are doing, where they will go, no one is sure...................

 

Misato: Hmm I was wondering.......

Yuuki: What is it Misato?

Misato: I did say it was best to leave, but well, when I think about it, I did not think where would be best to go to at the moment.

Naruto:  You did not plan this out?

Misato: Yesterday, no. Well do you think you could convince the Kazekage to let us stay for the time being in the village of sand? that one is closest anyway.

Naruto: Gaara? yeah sure why not?

Sakura: Misato, can you also go into further detail about what is happening in you world?

Misato: Of course Sakura-sama. I forgot I did not address both of you with the full details. we merely did not have enough time yesterday. When we reach the village I will tell you everything I know.

Sakura: Alright but tell me. How did we die over there exactly?

Misato: I do not the exact cause, but it was common knowledge that you shielded Ojou-sama from the relentless assault of the organization. As she said yesterday, they were after, why we do not know. Last year, they assaulted our village as usual in the hopes off getting Ojou-sama into their grasp however the 2 of you fought them off, though not before one of their most fearsome jutsu almost struck Ojou-sama, and you used you own bodies to keep her safe. After that you were afflicted with a sickness that took your lives.

Sakura: I never heard of that before. What kind of jutsu was it?

Misato: None that is known to us yet. Bu that I do know is that each and every member of Meido's Dawn can use all five chakra natures. And that is not even the most terrifying part. they can mix their Chakras together to perform terrifying feats that is yet unseen. For instance from What I saw the two of you were hit with green heat-less flames.

Sakura: What? I wonder what that is?

Naruto: Yeah me too..........

Masked figure: Now now spilling the beans to those who are not involved would only trouble them. Won't you agree?

Misato: What!?  *looks around* Meido's Dawn!!!!!

Naruto and Sakura: WHAT!!!!!???? *Sakura pulls Yuuki behind her*

The Masked man: Ah. It is an honor to see you again, Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura. you both look younger here. Then again you were not made hokage here yet, Were you Naruto?

Misato: You're here for Ojou-sama, are you not?

Masked man: What a silly question. why ask if you already know?

Misato: Naruto-sama, Sakura-sama!!! Take Ojou-sama and flee from here!!!!!!

 

Another masked figure appears behind them, and a woman's voice spoke

 

Masked woman: How careless, dear Misato. did you really think that there would be just one of us to come pick up the girl after just explaining our jutsu's unique attributes?

Misato: Hmph.

Masked man: And may I add that there are more of us as well.

Three other masked figures appear, surrounding them.

Masked man: Now then 6th Hokage Uzumaki Naruto, and Medic Master Haruno Sakura, gives us your brat..... Or shall I say the brat that your alternate selves left behind.

Naruto: Over my dead body......... Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!!!!

Yuuki:  *Heart throbs* Papa, NO!!!!!!!!!!!

Sakura: SHANNAROOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! *activates her Hyakugou seal and charges*

Misato: *Weaves signs* I call on the the messengers from the underworld!!!! * five shinigami appear* We won't let you have Yuuki-sama!!!!!!

 

To be continued.    

Edited by Phantom_999, 07 July 2013 - 10:44 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Still doing a great job Phantom!

 

Prediction Time:

 

Sasuke is leader of Meido's Dawn.

[Phantom_999]

That would destroy SH then you know. 

[FoolishYoungling]

That would destroy SH then you know. 

 Oh. Sasuke better be on his best behavior in the alternative world then. And of course married to Hinata.

[Phantom_999]

Well I'm thinking over Part 2. I might have it posted tomorrow though. But on a related subject I WILL play this song all day when NS happens!!!!   

 

http://www.youtube.c...h?v=U5dSQiHKBoc

 

It's cute!! and relays their feelings pretty well if I so so myself.   well except the beginning cause that sounds like first crush which would apply to Sasuke with regards to Saukra.

[FoolishYoungling]

Can't wait for it Phantom. Make sure to pm me when you post it. Please and thank you.

[Phantom_999]

Alright here's part 2. Enjoy!

 

Battle against Meido's Dawn Part 2

 

Naruto: Rasengan!!!!!

 

Masked Man and another Masked figure clasp hands and a purple Barrier comes out

 

Naruto: !!!!! * BOOM* rasengan deflects of the barrier

Masked Man: Impressive rasengan as always Uzumaki Naruto. But you still have not reached your full potential yet. It's  still too early for you to be challenging us. 

Naruto: I'm not done yet!!!! Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!!!!!

 

Sakura: Hah!!!!!!!!!! Punches at one of the  Masked figures. They dodge and she shatters a boulder behind them to dust. 

Masked figure (another woman): Yikes!!! Still have to watch out for your fists as usual, eh Medic Master!? teleports behind Sakura, and combines chakra with another masked Figure.

Sakura: !!! Shannaro!! Spins around and back fists, they teleport out of the way, and a sonic boom occurs.

Masked woman 2:  Damn!!!! We would have been obliterated if she hit us. They may not be at their peak yet in this world but they are not gonna be easy either.

 

Misato's Shinigami Attack two of the masked Figures,wielding a variety of weapons. *The masked figures casually dodge.*

 

Masked Woman 1: Misato, Are you even trying? You're not using the full extent of your jutsu. Oh, was your chakra drained when you traveled through the gate?

 

Misato: HNNNN!!!!! *thinking* It still has not returned yet!!!*

 

Naruto: Misato! are those-

Masked Man: Should you be looking away Naruto!!!!???? attacks him, and Naruto Dodges.

Naruto: Alright I have to end this..... *transforms into his cloak mode and prepares a rasenshuriken* Take This!!!!!!!!!. *Throws it* 

Masked man: !!!!!!!!!! Everyone dodge!!!!!!!

 

*Rasenshuriken decimates the area*

 

Naruto: Did that get them??? WHAT!? *looks behind* 

Masked man: *Sigh* Ah right I almost forgot. That Rasenshuriken of yours along with your Kyuubi Cloak was what got a whole lot of our organization members in the first place. Guess we really must finish you off first. *All members mix their Chakra together. A green flame appears.*

 

Naruto: A Green Flame!?

Yuuki: !!!!!!!  PAPA!!!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! *Runs forward  to Naruto* *The flame is fired* PAPAAAA!!!!!!

 

*Yuuki Grabs on to Naruto*

Naruto: Yuuki!!!??? *His body starts to move on his own. He thrusts his hand up and begins to form a rasengan, but it looks like no rasengan. Instead He forms an ominous looking wind storm in his palm. He throws it at the flame.  The Storm swallows the Flame, and engulfs the masked figures.*

 

Masked Man: SHIIIIIIII- *Mixes his chakra with the others.* *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM* A giant explosion bursts.

 

Sakura: KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! *gets swept away in the explosion and flies out of sight*

Naruto: SAKURA-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Gets blown away along with Yuuki*

Misato: UGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! *thinking* Ojou-sama!!! *Flies away*

 

A few hours later.........

 

Masked man: NGGGHHH!!! ARGH!!!!!! *cough cough* Damn it!!! Why did it have to awaken NOW!!!!???? *Coughs out blood*

*A hologram of a Masjked figure appears appears*

Mysterious Masked figure: Goutetsu......

Goutetsu: *Gasps and kneels* Shikage-sama!!!

Shikage: Judging from your state, I see you have not captured the target.....

Goutetsu: No sir. Haruno Yuuki's Powers had just manifested when we were going to kill the Uzumaki Naruto of this world.

Shikage: It manifested already?

Goutetsu: Yes Sir. She amplified his chakra and caused a huge storm to blow us all off.

Shikage: I see..... Then come back through the gate. We need to devise a new strategy. I have opened the portal already. Once everyone is conscious regroup and come back.

Goutetsu: As you wish......

*Shikage's hologram disappears.*

Goutetsu: Well it looks like you are starting to awaken, Haruno Yuuki. Bearer of the chakra of chaos.

 

To be continued. 

Edited by Phantom_999, 24 July 2013 - 06:04 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Interesting. Plot it getting better. But I do have to ask. Why did you name her Haruno Yuuki instead of Uzumaki Yuuki?

[Phantom_999]

Haruno Yuuki sounded cuter in my head.    And I thought it was would be kind of sexist if the kids take the Dad's surname all the time.

Edited by Phantom_999, 03 July 2013 - 10:54 AM.

[Phantom_999]

Well I'll be doing a part 3 preview then. I'll be introducing a new character. 

 

Naruto: Urgghh........ Ow, my head............. * Opens his eyes* what was that? YUUKI!!!!!  *runs over to her* Yuuki!!! Open your eyes, Yuuki!!!

Yuuki: Uhhh.... Uhhhh....... Papa?

Naruto: Yuuki!!! Are you hurt anywhere!?

Yuuki: No, I don't think so.

Naruto: Yuuki! You could've been killed...........

Yuuki: I......I....... I'm sorry papa......*tearing up* I-it's just that I saw that flame and I panicked and.... and.........

Naruto: No-No! I'm not mad at you! *hugs her* I understand why and I don't blame you, but you scared me........ I don't want you to die either..... okay? *pats her head*

Yuuki: *drying her tears* Okay.

Naruto: but MAN that was something!!!! Who taught you to do that!???   

Yuuki: I... I don't know. My mind went blank when I thought I would lose you again and it just ..........happened.

Naruto: Well whatever it was it Saved me!!! You were amazing Yuuki!!!

Yuuki: Thank you, papa.......

Naruto: So how do we find Sakura-chan and Misato?

Yuuki: hmm......

 

*A boy calls out*

boy: YUU-CHAN!!!!!

Yuuki: Eh? shu-kun? SHU-KUN!!!!!!!!  *Hugs the boy* What are you doing here!!??

Boy: I was worried. So I followed you.

Naruto: thinking *HUH??????????????* Yuuki! Is this- *thinking* He looks JUST LIKE-

Yuuki: Oh right I forgot. Papa, this is my best friend since we were kids, Uchiha Shunamori-kun.

Naruto: HUUUUUUUUUUH!!!!!!?????? Sasuke got married too!!!!?????

Shunamori: Yeah. Good to see you again Naruto-ojisan. And did you always overreact like that?

Naruto: *thinking* he TALKS like Sasuke........ Well anyways how did you find us here.

Shunamori: I followed you I saw what happened. Yuu-chan, were you always able to do that?

Yuuki: No. it  just happened.

Shunamori: Hmm. Strange.......

Naruto: Well anyways let's find Sakura-chan and Misato then.

Shunamori: Yeah I saw them get blasted off that way. We'll find Sakura oba-san and Misato, Yuu-chan. *forms seal* BYAKUGAN!!!!!

Naruto: HUH!!!!!?????  *thinking* D-Don't tell me that-

 

And that was all I could come up with on the spot.  And  NO Yuuki and Shunamori are not a couple. they are best friends. That's it.    

Edited by Phantom_999, 05 August 2013 - 07:51 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

And that was all I could come up with on the spot.  And  NO Yuuki and Shunamori are not a couple. they are best friends. That's it.    

 

Friendzone?