Well there are comments on Deviantart as well, you can point out his/her mistakes there :)
Edit: no need, somebody already mentioned it ... but I guess it is what it is now, doubt the author will rework the panels, so let's let him/her tell the story he/she got planned out.
The author is a he XD
He can make it out as Naruto is still not affected by the Genjutsu, but still is capable to be in the Genjutsu ? Or it' can be made as Sakura's view in the Genjutsu.