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[Gravenimage]

I think my problem is I always try to use big words in my stories xP and my inspiration dies after probably half way through the first chapter. Bahh Dx

You need practice not everyone will get it on their first story. By the way Shippu-chan I have started writing chapter 14 from anything for you.

[ShippudenGirl]

You need practice not everyone will get it on their first story. By the way Shippu-chan I have started writing chapter 14 from anything for you.

Yay

And, I had an idea, maybe you and me can work on a fic together, aye? One day >P

Oh, and I'm gonna re-write all of my Rokudaime chapter 1, I hate it and I'm thinking of a different plot. I hope I like thos one

[Serenity Namikaze]

Anything for you that's the reason I exist from yours truly has been updated with chapter 13 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5258080/13/

WOW, FINALLY, Naruto and Sakura are together ( about DANM time )
I must say that you know how to play with drama here Graven-kun and I think that the fact that you wrote so well that aspect make the climax of NaruSaku in this chapter more enjoyable.

While I'm not as exited as reading the NaruSaku fateful reunion, I'm still curious about Hinata and Sasuke ( I know that I've already told you that in one of my review on FFnet but Sasuke personality in your fic is one of the most realistic one that I've read so far. I usually don't like reading fic when Sasuke is involve because the authors are always giving him the SUPER bad villain role or much worst, the sweety romantic clone version of Naruto )

Anyway, continue your wonderful work

@Shippu-chan

I would gladly read your fic and give you my opinion if you like...we need more good NS fanfics writer

( I would write one too but time is a luxury that I don't have right now )

Edited by silverserenity, 11 May 2010 - 02:54 AM.

[ShippudenGirl]

Aww thanks Silver-chan •^^• I'm still trying to think of a good plot >P and I bet you'd make an awesome fic!

And yeah Graven-kun, I loved that chapter... The lemon was ho- I mean... <.< >.> I didn't read the lemon Uhmm... *cough*

[Gravenimage]

WOW, FINALLY, Naruto and Sakura are together ( about DANM time )
I must say that you know how to play with drama here Graven-kun and I think that the fact that you wrote so well that aspect make the climax of NaruSaku in this chapter more enjoyable.

While I'm not as exited as reading the NaruSaku fateful reunion, I'm still curious about Hinata and Sasuke ( I know that I've already told you that in one of my review on FFnet but Sasuke personality in your fic is one of the most realistic one that I've read so far. I usually don't like reading fic when Sasuke is involve because the authors are always giving him the SUPER bad villain role or much worst, the sweety romantic clone version of Naruto )

Anyway, continue your wonderful work

@Shippu-chan

I would gladly read your fic and give you my opinion if you like...we need more good NS fanfics writer

( I would write one too but time is a luxury that I don't have right now )

Will do serenity-chan I have started writing the next chapter. It will be focus on Sasuke and Hinata.

[ShippudenGirl]

i would really like to read your storys myself shippu-perv

Thanks Goku •^^• lmao, I still haven't even come up with a title >D

[Serenity Namikaze]

Thanks Goku •^^• lmao, I still haven't even come up with a title >D

My advice for this is this : do your summary of your story and then you'll find a good title. I don't know about other authors but that's what I usually do and it's always work for me

Will do serenity-chan I have started writing the next chapter. It will be focus on Sasuke and Hinata.

I kind of expected that and I know that they can have some good drama development too...I mean, Sasuke is still view as a social outcast for most of the villagers, not to mention that Neji still hate his guts. I don't remember Hinata's father opinion toward him but I highly doubt that it will be positive. As for Hinata, the simple fact that she ran away from home is enough to bring lots of good idea.

PS : Try adding hilarious moments too if that's possible...I still remember Naruto and Sasuke little performance in front of the ladies

Edited by silverserenity, 11 May 2010 - 03:29 AM.

[Gravenimage]

A voice in the wind by tricksie has been updated with chapter 7 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5827210/7/


A new story by AlphaDelta1001 has been uploaded tittle Naruto: Forbidden Chronicles http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5964072/1/

Edited by Gravenimage, 12 May 2010 - 03:26 AM.

[Hak]

Found this promising new fic Not an Anbu yet by Vanicent. In the first authors note he said that this is gonna be a NaruSaku story just that he didn't know wether it will be friendship or romance...
After 2 chapters the story looks good, story is having well enough originality and the writing is almost faultless... Just for a side note that the starting point of this story is very dangerous for not overpowering Naruto while the story progresses.

[untold62]

Found this promising new fic Not an Anbu yet by Vanicent. In the first authors note he said that this is gonna be a NaruSaku story just that he didn't know wether it will be friendship or romance...
After 2 chapters the story looks good, story is having well enough originality and the writing is almost faultless... Just for a side note that the starting point of this story is very dangerous for not overpowering Naruto while the story progresses.

I have to agree with you.
I am just curious how is he about to make NS happen if the way Naruto is depicted right now isn't making it easier.

[Gravenimage]

Truth unfolds in wave by Mr.mclane has been updated with chapter 60 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/4750396/60/


EDIT: anything for you that's the reason I exist by yours truly has been updated with chapter 14 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5258080/14/

Edited by Gravenimage, 21 May 2010 - 04:31 AM.

[Nick Soapdish]

Tricksie's A Voice in the Wind has been updated with Chapter 8.


Yours, Mine and Ours has just been updated with Chapter 4. But be advised, it's a NaruSaku/NaruIno at the moment.

Edited by Nick Soapdish, 23 May 2010 - 10:31 PM.

[Gravenimage]

He said She said by EroSlackerMicha has been updated with chapter 31 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/4359370/31/

[catsi563]

his characterizations are waaaaaaaaay off on all his characters. But at least hes consistent, and hes one of thsoe writers that its almost carthatic reading his stuff. you can feel the emotion in his stories.

[Gravenimage]

A voice in the wind by tricksie has been updated with chapter 9 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5827210/9/


Mizukage by Dragon6 has been updated with chapter 54 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/3138018/54/

Edited by Gravenimage, 30 May 2010 - 02:54 AM.

[JoHamSandwich]

Nice Two-Shot:
Forehead Protector

[Gravenimage]

Naruto Twilight Legend by Maileesaeya has been updated with chapter 2 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5757209/3/

Whirlpool Country by Paradox Jast has been updated with chapter 28 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/4087763/28/

Without Sasuke by Yethri has been updated with chapter 17 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5588054/17/

Outbreak by Denim88 has been updated with chapter 16 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/3865683/16/

A voice in the wind by tricksie has been updated with chapter 10 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5827210/10/

ANBU times by believeit16 has been updated with chapter 21 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/4583813/21/

Edited by Gravenimage, 05 June 2010 - 09:17 PM.

[Nick Soapdish]

I was getting a duplicate of chapter 9 with A Voice in the Wind, but that seems to be fixed now.