Jump to content

Close
Photo

The Great NaruSaku Fic Listing II


  • This topic is locked This topic is locked
1593 replies to this topic

#761 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 22 July 2007 - 09:52 PM

Tell me about it. I mean the author is really taking her very sweet time in starting a relationship between Naruto and Sakura. I HATE IT WHEN IT TAKES A VERY LONG TIME!!!!!!!

#762 Nick Soapdish

Nick Soapdish

    Holding my breath

  • Legendary Ninja
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,364 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Hurricane-y Florida

Posted 22 July 2007 - 10:12 PM

Yeah, I hate the anticipation.

I'm not terribly fond of the Sakura-bashing in the very beginning or how Naruto snubbed Sakura in response, but I'm still enjoying the fic for what I'm hoping will eventually happen.

#763 murdoc

murdoc

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 318 posts

Posted 22 July 2007 - 10:36 PM

What is frustrating me is that it seems the only one that is trying to make their relationship work is Naruto (but something always gets in the way) because every time that Sakura can make a move she never does it because Naruto told her to stay away.

I would like this fic more if she would focus a little bit on Naruto's problems, you know Kyuubi, Akatsuki (I forgot if they are still a problem in that fic), but she only focuses on him when it's something about Sakura.

What I think it was a little rushed was how Sakura's feelings towards Naruto changed, because for a couple of chapters I thought that Sakura only wanted to regain Naruto's friendship but suddenly there was that chapter that Sakura was dreaming or thinking (I don't remember) about her and Naruto having kids and I didn't understand when did Sakura's feelings went from friendship to romantic, maybe I missed something.

#764 Nick Soapdish

Nick Soapdish

    Holding my breath

  • Legendary Ninja
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,364 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Hurricane-y Florida

Posted 22 July 2007 - 11:33 PM

Naruto doesn't seem to be trying that hard either. He's had opportunities and flubbed them. Seems to me that Neji and Kiba are the most interested in them getting it right. sleep.gif

#765 Radon

Radon

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 398 posts

Posted 22 July 2007 - 11:41 PM

Ugh... I hate angst, and especially when it starts slipping like that. It looks like it's going to come to a pinicle soon tho. Darn, now I need to go read some fluff...
"Fact: The fandom makes characters look hotter and act hornier than they actually are..."

#766 murdoc

murdoc

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 318 posts

Posted 23 July 2007 - 12:13 AM

Yeah but at least Naruto is trying

QUOTE (whoamii @ Jul 21 2007, 01:28 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sorry if these have already been mentioned
The Uzumaki Prodigy <3 One of my fav. fanfics
ANBU Brat It's really good, too bad there seem to be no Updates
Losing Naruto Very nicely written
Mizukage=]
Girls are Wierd Hehe, yay! Made me laugh!
Anything by Sharingank!


Losing Naruto is one of my favorite fics, too bad it ended right after they solved their problems, I wanted at least one more chapter to see how Naruto and Sakura interacted with each other now that Sakura finally admitted her feelings

Naruto: Trail Of Freedom was update like a week ago:

http://www.fanfictio...rail_Of_Freedom

#767 Nick Soapdish

Nick Soapdish

    Holding my breath

  • Legendary Ninja
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,364 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Hurricane-y Florida

Posted 23 July 2007 - 12:20 AM

QUOTE (murdoc @ Jul 22 2007, 08:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yeah but at least Naruto is trying
Losing Naruto is one of my favorite fics, too bad it ended right after they solved their problems, I wanted at least one more chapter to see how Naruto and Sakura interacted with each other now that Sakura finally admitted her feelings

Naruto: Trail Of Freedom was update like a week ago:

Trail of Freedom


Losing Naruto isn't actually finished.

In the AN of the last published chapter, the author says that it's the second to last chapter. And then there's an epilogue.

Hopefully, she still comes through with that.

#768 Radon

Radon

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 398 posts

Posted 23 July 2007 - 06:56 AM

Another angsty story but this ones mild on the angst and from what I can tell it's vengeance angst not relationship angst... still one of the best written stories I've read in a while.

Winter
"Fact: The fandom makes characters look hotter and act hornier than they actually are..."

#769 Uzumaki's Fire

Uzumaki's Fire

    The Darkness shall not have its place in the Light.

  • Academy Student
  • Pip
  • 40 posts
  • Location:Uhhhh... I'm lost
  • Interests:Known as: forum spammer, ero-sennin jr jr, orange, slapbunny<br /><br />Likes: XBOX 360, NaruSaku, FanFiction.net, schools, skinning

Posted 23 July 2007 - 06:23 PM

QUOTE (Radon @ Jul 23 2007, 02:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Another angsty story but this ones mild on the angst and from what I can tell it's vengeance angst not relationship angst... still one of the best written stories I've read in a while.

Winter


Yeah that one... was really good.... I like the fact that the person was so descriptive with what's happening that I could see it happening in my eyes..

#770 MagusKyros

MagusKyros

    Hare Krsna!

  • Special Jounin
  • PipPipPip
  • 890 posts
  • Interests:Philosophy

Posted 23 July 2007 - 06:45 PM

QUOTE (Nick Soapdish @ Jul 23 2007, 12:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Naruto doesn't seem to be trying that hard either. He's had opportunities and flubbed them. Seems to me that Neji and Kiba are the most interested in them getting it right. sleep.gif


Which is why most angst fics suck. A Soul's Salvation is a good fic, but it seems a bit unrealistic on how some things are played out in the story.
A NaruSaku Manifesto - A presentation on the NaruSaku pairing using the manga.


#771 Radon

Radon

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 398 posts

Posted 23 July 2007 - 07:18 PM

I think Neji and and Kiba understand that they both like each other, but don't know the other one returns the feelings.
"Fact: The fandom makes characters look hotter and act hornier than they actually are..."

#772 Cloud

Cloud

    SOLDIER

  • Kyuubi
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 4,565 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Midgar

Posted 23 July 2007 - 08:25 PM

ANBU Brat is NaruHarem, isn't it? I've only read a few chapters, and so far, thats what it seems like.

#773 SpongeBobtheBuilder

SpongeBobtheBuilder

    Academy Student

  • Academy Student
  • Pip
  • 27 posts

Posted 24 July 2007 - 03:21 AM

Wait For Me has been updated. Lo and Behold, it's no longer a one-shot! Cookies for DigiFruit, who I'm pretty sure is a member here.

#774 Radon

Radon

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 398 posts

Posted 24 July 2007 - 04:47 AM

Yah that one went from weird... to weirder lol. Interesting concept tho, still makes absolutely no sense what so ever tongue.gif
"Fact: The fandom makes characters look hotter and act hornier than they actually are..."

#775 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 24 July 2007 - 12:47 PM

Yeah, hopefully it will clear up soon.

#776 drag-eart

drag-eart

    WILSON...HitsuMatsu!..haha

  • Genin
  • PipPip
  • 190 posts
  • Gender:Male

Posted 25 July 2007 - 12:04 AM

This story is a typical sakura telling naruto he hates him because he hurt sasuke, naruto leaves. The twist though naruto leaves and becomes the akatsuki leader. And Konoha is going into war. It's pretty decent read. I really liked the naruto being the leader of his own village and becoming Akat. Leader. Hopefully he elaborates more on how naruto became the leader.

Demon's Return
Drag-eart's FF.net Profile:Drag-eart
Be the Ultimate Ninja! Play Billy Vs. SNAKEMAN today!

#777 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 25 July 2007 - 12:19 AM

I read that and I like the way Naruto asked Sakura about Naruto (sounds weird, doesn't it?)

#778 Radon

Radon

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 398 posts

Posted 25 July 2007 - 02:44 AM

I like where it's going but I didn't like the first chapter.

I'm sorry but if Sakura and Naruto are engaged shes not suddenly going to run off with Sasuke, it's just not who Sakura is. Maybe if she was like she was when she was 12 but not anymore...
"Fact: The fandom makes characters look hotter and act hornier than they actually are..."

#779 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 25 July 2007 - 03:16 AM

Yeah, I hated that part too. Made me pissed at Uchiha.

#780 Uzumaki's Fire

Uzumaki's Fire

    The Darkness shall not have its place in the Light.

  • Academy Student
  • Pip
  • 40 posts
  • Location:Uhhhh... I'm lost
  • Interests:Known as: forum spammer, ero-sennin jr jr, orange, slapbunny<br /><br />Likes: XBOX 360, NaruSaku, FanFiction.net, schools, skinning

Posted 25 July 2007 - 05:01 PM

QUOTE (drag-eart @ Jul 24 2007, 08:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This story is a typical sakura telling naruto he hates him because he hurt sasuke, naruto leaves. The twist though naruto leaves and becomes the akatsuki leader. And Konoha is going into war. It's pretty decent read. I really liked the naruto being the leader of his own village and becoming Akat. Leader. Hopefully he elaborates more on how naruto became the leader.

Demon's Return


Gah! My story idea was just like it but in a way different.... *cries*


Only difference with my idea was Sakura wasn't engaged, Naruto doesn't become Akatsuki leader but Sakura lashes at Naruto because of the reawakening of Inner Sakura when she sees Sasuke back at Konoha and Naruto gets banished and has a 24 hour probation but he leaves anyway with 2 scrolls (guess).... he goes to some random not known very well village and lives takes down Pein and his village got torn down because of Akatsuki (before Pein vs Naruto, pein ordered it).... and rebuilds/rename to cheriigakure because of the cherryblossom trees and u know....


I guess my idea wasn't so original after all.....




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users