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#7601 DeathGodMack

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 12:59 AM

chapter is out already in japan for a while now, many reactions on twitter however cant read them so.

Someone translate them pls.


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 12:59 AM

Can a kind soul translate the reactions.
Make it mixed tho, not just ones from obvious NS fans.

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:00 AM

Even if they're mad i doubt they'll do anything about it. 

 

And that damn Kishi will never re-write the ending. Best he can give us is, to come clean and reveal what was really supposed happen.


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:01 AM

What 2 chapter kills could have been a epic conclusion in like 5-7 chapters. Some can be put together or split more, but this is how I see it

Redo from 699. (no text and dialog, just the main idea)

 

-699 Sakura healing Sasuke and Naruto, seeing a in character team 7 dynamic here. Naruto could brought up the forehead comment before he pass out from blood lost.  Once they are both up and healed, we see them break the tsukuyomi. Then we saw everyone release from IT. We never even got a reaction like, it was such as what a wonderful dream. (I wanted someone to say that)

 

-700 Once everyone is shown, we go to the funeral. We see Sakura recomfort Ino and Choji be there for Shikamaru and Naruto recomfort Hinata.

 

-701 5 kage summit in the leaf. You deal with the remaining rogue ninja. You shown the 5 kage arguing and ultimately agreeing upon giving Sasuke a pardon. Suigetsu is reinstate as a mist nin (he was a prisoner of Orochimaru so he wasn't a rogue nin and his dream was to surpass his brother Mangetsu by reforming the 7 swordmen of the mist)

Karin Jugo and Orochimaru follow Sasuke to his redemption trip. I believe they could trust Orochimaru because even if he was a villain, he never was a liar really. Sasuke knew what Orochimaru want from him when he joined. So when he said he follow Sasuke's way, I believe he tells the true. Kabuto could  be trusted (because he break of a genjutsu that technically reform a person). He can went on a trip to find himself on his own. Plus everyone could agree that after this war, they were enough death. Plus after those matter, Tsunade announce that she resign as the 5th hokage and that she name Kakashi as her sucessor.

 

-702 Naruto resolve his feeling with Hinata they'll be friend, he'll be here for her if she need anything but that he loves Sakura. Hinata smile knowingly because afterall, it kind of pretty obvious.  Sasuke's and taka d departure. The rest go on ahead as Sasuke demand before he make his good-bye with every member of  team 7. They telling him to not go crazy again. Sakura's threaten him to break every bone in his body if he does and Naruto reminding him that he has any tailed beast to heal him. We see one last time that dynamic in the team 7 that we know before Naruto handed the headband to Sasuke, who say to Naruto thank you for saving him. Then we switch to Kakashi saying he has some paperwork to fill leaving Naruto and Sakura alone.

 

703-Sakura thanks Naruto to have save Sasuke and therefore to have fulfill his promise of a life time. She bring back what he said to her before passing out and Naruto explain the bench scene and explain that he still thing about doing it because he still love her. We see flashback of everything that hinted where Sakura's seem to have develop feeling for Naruto, and then she realize that it was always him. She tell him that he can kiss her forehead, afterall she already give him her 1st kiss. We see a confuse Naruto and then she proceed to explain the CPR scene. After the kiss on her forehead, she finally admit that it was always him and that he made it harder that it should have been before kissing him and tell him that she loved him too.

 

704- Future where people are actually happy, not pair for the sake of being pair and Naruto a good dad where we have an hokage celebration for Naruto where every other Kage comes to see it too (still the leaf village, I don't want them to be living all in the same village)

 

Did I miss something ?

Here's a part of my attempt to make an ending. Next chapter won't be out in a while, I've got like 3 homework to hand over next week. I'll try to make it by the end of the week. https://www.fanficti...hould-have-end

R &R Please:)


Edited by archangel, 10 November 2014 - 01:08 AM.


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:03 AM

I have come to accept that those chapters were the real ones, the only bright side to it is I know for a fact that the vast majority of the Japanese audience ( who read Naruto for its story and could care less about ships)  the people that Kishi should really be catering too ,will be severely disappointed in this travesty kishi calls an ending. 
 
If they think this will help sell there stupid movie, they have another thing coming. RTN broke records for a reason, cause it was really about *NARUTO* Yha know?? The character this manga is named after. It stayed true to his character as well


I accepted it too, but I also accept that the obvious lack of care shown in those chapters and the lengths Kishi went to destroy Naruto and Sakura's character, I fully believe that NS was ways intended and he caved to pressure. Don't even care, NS is always canon to me.

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:06 AM

chapter is out already in japan for a while now, many reactions on twitter however cant read them so.

 

Can you link me to the reactions?


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:09 AM

I accepted it too, but I also accept that the obvious lack of care shown in those chapters and the lengths Kishi went to destroy Naruto and Sakura's character, I fully believe that NS was ways intended and he caved to pressure. Don't even care, NS is always canon to me.

Same here. I have been a member of this FC since 2006. 2 horrible chapters is not gonna ruin what i love about NS. I mean sure I will stick to fanfiction from now on, but I still love the pair all the same.
 



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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:09 AM

 

Can you link me to the reactions?

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:12 AM

A lot of them seem to be happy with the SS/NH ending. meh, ah well.



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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:13 AM

Can someone translate some of those? I tried looking at them, but it's like I was reading a foreign language...


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Edited by AHK, 10 November 2014 - 01:14 AM.

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:14 AM

A lot of them seem to be happy with the SS/NH ending. meh, ah well.

 

It's difficult to read anything because of Google Translate's terrible quality during translation. 



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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:16 AM



Whelp it's legit as kitten I guess based on this pic.....

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:16 AM

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I'm probably gonna be assassinated for that post  :hm:


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:17 AM

Lol this one is pretty funny

 

ナルトの子供たちの名前がぶっとんでる気がするw

 

"W that I feel that the name of the children of Naruto are flying Bukkake is"


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:19 AM

Yeah, seems like these two chapters are legit. 


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:19 AM

Lol this one is pretty funny

 

ナルトの子供たちの名前がぶっとんでる気がするw

 

"W that I feel that the name of the children of Naruto are flying Bukkake is"

WoooW harsh for a person from a culture known in the world for its politeness. I LIKE IT  :argh:


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:19 AM

Lol this one is pretty funny

 

ナルトの子供たちの名前がぶっとんでる気がするw

 

"W that I feel that the name of the children of Naruto are flying Bukkake is"

LOOOOL Bukkake? Thats an awful thing to say. 


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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:20 AM


Whelp it's legit as kitten I guess based on this pic.....

 

Is that Kishi's artwork? Did he personally create it? The colouring style doesn't appear to be his. 



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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:20 AM

Lol this one is pretty funny
 
ナルトの子供たちの名前がぶっとんでる気がするw
 
"W that I feel that the name of the children of Naruto are flying Bukkake is"


Lmao extra points for using flying bukkake in a sentence !!!

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Posted 10 November 2014 - 01:21 AM

Interview if anyone's interested (don't know if this has been posted before):

 

http://ajw.asahi.com.../AJ201411100007


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