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[hokuten]

argh ... i need help ... for some reason i cant seem to write this lemon continuation.

It's like I've lost my pervertedness and matured ... that and since this chapter's main attraction is naruten it's so hard to for me to write then together. I mean my inner NaruSaku is preventing me from writing them together. It's like I just CANT write naruto with another girl so easily anymore... someone help me...

[Smiter]

*throws Hoku into Jiraiya's personal porn collection and locks him in there with enough food and drink*

Maybe that'll work.

Why not solve your problem with an OBVIOUS solution?

A NaruSaku lemon. Your inner NaruSakuness can't prevent you!

[Blayze]

Losing pervertedness =/= Maturing.

The two aren't even linked. I know plenty of perverts of various ages

And Lloyd, I can't open the NC PM you sent me. There's a bloody error.

[alphabet]

Or maybe you could write Sakura's name instead of Tenten's, and then go back when you're done and change it?

Better yet, write a NejiTen with NaruSaku lemon instead?

[hokuten]

but i mean this chapter is for the continuation of VoH. I'm trying to work my way to sakura, its hard... all i know is when i finish VoH (or atleast the NaruSaku ARC, if you will ) it will all be good, very very good!

EDIT: i would have done neji, but that kinda clashes with the storyline, cuz technically, Neji's busy training Hinata, and Lee's hooked up with Tenten, only Lee's been gone for a while, so they've been seperated.

Ugh, and not to mention my whole timeline of this whole story is just messed up. I said "2 Summers", so at the beginning, he's 14/15. then in this updated fic, he's supposed to be 17/18, BUT i said like 4-5 years ... i think ... ugh, i'm so confused i'm not even on track with my own fic..

well is anyone willing to do a little beta-reading of what I have so far???

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Everyone, I will soon, post my chapter of Painful birthday on ff.net. Until then, I would like to announce, I am the first person to ever post in the fanfic section on Narutofan, with a full actual story, not a link or something hehe. So my story is the first one there =) hehe. Anyways, I am thinking I might add stories to this fic, but I would like to gain more reviews so I know it will be worth writing. I like being reveiwed and it lets me know that people like the story. Time to time i write the story and will finish a story if i am truely proud of it, even if i dont gain many reveiws. But reveiws are nice to have and I really would like to at least gain as many as possible.

[Smiter]

Good luck with that, UN.

Well, I could help beta-read for you Hoku but I think I could only comment on the flow of the plot since my grammar can suck. But I've been taking lessons from Aethos and Ash, so hopefully I can help out on that now.

Simply e-mail me if you like!

[Blayze]

Heh. I make a good spelling/grammar proofreader

I just finished making changes to a chapter of someone's Inuyasha story

[Smiter]

Crow-sensei of "Second Chances" made a new story!

It's a collection of drabbles. The first one is a first person POV of thoughts - I'm sure you can easily guess who the people she's referring to are.

Little Itches:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2091539/1/

(Click after you read the drabble)

Click For Spoiler

Yep, Sakura drinking sake with Sasuke and regretting not being with Naruto, who eventually went with Hinata. Sasuke seems to be wishing he had gone with Hinata as well. When they realised who they really wanted to be with, it was too late as Naruto had proposed to Hinata. A pretty sad SakuNaru SasuHina NaruHina drabble.

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Heh. I make a good spelling/grammar proofreader

I just finished making changes to a chapter of someone's Inuyasha story

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Can you grammer check my writting I suck with grammer and spelling.

[Blayze]

Painful Birthday is yours, right UN? Okay. I'll start on it now. Because I get sidetracked by many things (But still finish everything eventually), it might take a while

[hokuten]

about that NC PM, i was just saying "RPG battle!? WTF!? When did they add that system!?" lol

I'll send you guys what I have so far, and you'll see where I'm stuck at.

lol, although its supposed to be a continuation, it all seems pretty random and out of the way. and i'm not sure how i'm organizing the timeline...

[Blayze]

about that NC PM, i was just saying "RPG battle!?  WTF!?  When did they add that system!?"  lol

I'll send you guys what I have so far, and you'll see where I'm stuck at.

lol, although its supposed to be a continuation, it all seems pretty random and out of the way.  and i'm not sure how i'm organizing the timeline...

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I would have replied, but... ah... all my PMs have vanished.

[hokuten]

lol NC just got suspended. guess they haven't been paying their bills?! lol...

[Blayze]

*checks NC*

*struggles to keep face straight*

*fails*

Aha! That's classic!

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Painful Birthday is yours, right UN? Okay. I'll start on it now. Because I get sidetracked by many things (But still finish everything eventually), it might take a while

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Yeah, it is, thanks so much Blayze. I am really bad at grammer and spelling.

Hey what is NC? That is Narutocommunity? The only reason i might even think that was because we have a thread called Narutocommunity.com. Hehe

[alphabet]

Guess what? GUESS WHAT?

This is my 200th post, that's what.

Hur hur.

[Soritia]

*GLOMPS* Congrats Alphy!!!!! We must now party!

[alphabet]

Party? Yeah!

COME ON, TROOPS! GET IN HERE AND DANCE!