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Posted 08 November 2007 - 11:35 PM

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 11:49 PM

LOVEE it! She's so pretty! biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 November 2007 - 05:21 AM

I have nothing to post except for this little practice sketch I've did. Just now. xD



I know they're not perfect, but they're like.. a huge improvement.. XD Ilike how they came out. :3

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Posted 15 November 2007 - 05:43 AM

Wow! Those are pretty good! happy.gif

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Posted 15 November 2007 - 06:12 AM

QUOTE (Yoko @ Nov 15 2007, 10:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I have nothing to post except for this little practice sketch I've did. Just now. xD



I know they're not perfect, but they're like.. a huge improvement.. XD Ilike how they came out. :3


This is a nice job, however not without its flaws. Actually the flaws are not in the front or oblique profile but in the side profile. What is wrong here is the chin (though not much, only its a bit longer than usual) and the top of the head. While the head bulges out in the back, it should not go up, like in the upper right sketch, the lower line on the scalp was the correct one, if you were making a bald sketch. But for the back of the head I'll go with you in the render. In the lower right sketch the error was the jawline, which actually should curve inwards slightly before curving outwards and of course the chin, which needs to be a bit more rounded.

Damn! That felt nice, teaching someone. I used to do that before I got into this damn university.
You're good, better than many out there and have potential (maybe someday I'll get myself a scanner and digitize my old sketches).
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Posted 15 November 2007 - 07:07 PM

Looks very nice, Yoko happy.gif
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Posted 15 November 2007 - 09:21 PM

QUOTE (CrashLanded @ Nov 15 2007, 01:12 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is a nice job, however not without its flaws. Actually the flaws are not in the front or oblique profile but in the side profile. What is wrong here is the chin (though not much, only its a bit longer than usual) and the top of the head. While the head bulges out in the back, it should not go up, like in the upper right sketch, the lower line on the scalp was the correct one, if you were making a bald sketch. But for the back of the head I'll go with you in the render. In the lower right sketch the error was the jawline, which actually should curve inwards slightly before curving outwards and of course the chin, which needs to be a bit more rounded.

Damn! That felt nice, teaching someone. I used to do that before I got into this damn university.
You're good, better than many out there and have potential (maybe someday I'll get myself a scanner and digitize my old sketches).

XDD thanks! even though it was a sketch I did within half an hour. I work slow, so that's short for me ♥

I'll keep this in mind. critique = ♥! 8D

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Posted 15 November 2007 - 09:26 PM

Yoko-chan! Sigh, I take it back, i take back my comment on your inability to draw faces.

YOU ROCK! It looked GD AS! XD
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Posted 16 November 2007 - 12:12 AM

Lookin' good, Yoko. =D

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 11:01 PM

Just a character design doodle. =3



There's lots of stuff wrong with it, I know. It's just a work doodle. D8 I don't actually like it all that much. xD; Just something to show I'm still alive >.>

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Posted 24 November 2007 - 12:49 AM

QUOTE (Yoko @ Nov 24 2007, 12:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Just a character design doodle. =3



There's lots of stuff wrong with it, I know. It's just a work doodle. D8 I don't actually like it all that much. xD; Just something to show I'm still alive >.>


Dang...brilliant. A bit vague at some parts, but nice nonetheless. Gd job! :thumbs:
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Posted 24 November 2007 - 12:55 AM

QUOTE (Yoko @ Nov 23 2007, 07:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Just a character design doodle. =3



There's lots of stuff wrong with it, I know. It's just a work doodle. D8 I don't actually like it all that much. xD; Just something to show I'm still alive >.>


For being nothing but a work doodle, it looks good to me~!

Good Job, Yoko~oko! :thumbs:
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Posted 24 November 2007 - 05:33 PM

ASSASSIN'S CREEEEEEEEEEEED~!
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Posted 28 November 2007 - 12:20 AM

Another work doodle. Two, actually.. >.>



More character design-ness. Again, done at work.


And.. done at my mom's work, while waiting to go home XDDD; I know there's flaws, and I'll fix 'em before inking :3
Obviously, no reference. It's been at least a year since I last drew Sakura D:


I'm starting to draw again. 8D it's awesome. ♥

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Posted 28 November 2007 - 12:24 AM

Ohmygosh, its beautiful Yoko! *______________________*

This is awesome, you get better and better! Keep it up~!

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Posted 28 November 2007 - 01:05 AM

THAT'S a doodle? O.O????

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Posted 28 November 2007 - 01:35 AM

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That's... omg. Better than amazing! Especially the Sakura Haruno one! 8D

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Posted 28 November 2007 - 02:16 AM

Very gorgeous Yoko! th_glomp.gif The Sakura one, especially, it's very beautiful *_*

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Posted 28 November 2007 - 02:45 AM

QUOTE (Yoko @ Nov 28 2007, 05:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Another work doodle. Two, actually.. >.>



More character design-ness. Again, done at work.


And.. done at my mom's work, while waiting to go home XDDD; I know there's flaws, and I'll fix 'em before inking :3
Obviously, no reference. It's been at least a year since I last drew Sakura D:


I'm starting to draw again. 8D it's awesome. ♥


I'm not going to say anything about the first sketch, as it is only a study to work on the final, so commenting on that would be unfair. About the other, I'd say nicely done. So what's wrong? Its the right shoulder that is a bit shorter than it should be. Then the length of the nose. Female noses aren't that long, so shorten it a little. Finally the wrist and hand, which is nice but still needs finetuning. Actually making a good wrist and hand would require practice and study of human anatomy, so don't stop.

At the end I'd say, you need to practice on a basic skill, making straight lines in single strokes. I have a training exercise for you. Make a box 4x4 inches and fill it with parallel straight lines. Do it 20-30 times for vertical, horizontal and slanting. This would give you enough practice to make better sketches. Then the next step would be single stroke curved lines. For that try making perfect circles. 100-200 times should be enough.

A good sketch uses the minimum of lines for the maximum expression. As erasing causes damage to the paper making errors has to be avoided. So these training exercises help in lessening errors.
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Posted 28 November 2007 - 05:34 PM

Wow, looks great, Yoko^^
There are some small flaws, but its still very good in my eyes. Especially the Sakura one happy.gif

Keep up the good work. You're getting better at this happy.gif
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