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#5581 Gammy Das

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:42 AM

What 2 chapter kills could have been a epic conclusion in like 5-7 chapters. Some can be put together or split more, but this is how I see it

Redo from 699. (no text and dialog, just the main idea)

 

-699 Sakura healing Sasuke and Naruto, seeing a in character team 7 dynamic here. Naruto could brought up the forehead comment before he pass out from blood lost.  Once they are both up and healed, we see them break the tsukuyomi. Then we saw everyone release from IT. We never even got a reaction like, it was such as what a wonderful dream. (I wanted someone to say that)

Once everyone is shown, we go to the funeral. We see Sakura recomfort Ino and Choji be there for Shikamaru and Naruto recomfort Hinata.

 

-700 5 kage summit in the leaf. You deal with the remaining rogue ninja. You shown the 5 kage arguing and ultimately agreeing upon giving Sasuke a pardon. Suigetsu is reinstate as a mist nin (he was a prisoner of Orochimaru so he wasn't a rogue nin and his dream was to surpass his brother Mangetsu by reforming the 7 swordmen of the mist)

Karin Jugo and Orochimaru follow Sasuke to his redemption trip. I believe they could trust Orochimaru because even if he was a villain, he never was a liar really. Sasuke knew what Orochimaru want from him when he joined. So when he said he follow Sasuke's way, I believe he tells the true. Kabuto could  be trusted (because he break of a genjutsu that technically reform a person). He can went on a trip to find himself on his own. Plus everyone could agree that after this war, they were enough death. Plus after those matter, Tsunade announce that she resign as the 5th hokage and that she name Kakashi as her sucessor.

 

-701 Naruto resolve his feeling with Hinata they'll be friend, he'll be here for her if she need anything but that he loves Sakura. Hinata smile knowingly because afterall, it kind of pretty obvious.  Sasuke's and taka d departure. The rest go on ahead as Sasuke demand before he make his good-bye with every member of  team 7. They telling him to not go crazy again. Sakura's threaten him to break every bone in his body if he does and Naruto reminding him that he has any tailed beast to heal him. We see one last time that dynamic in the team 7 that we know before Naruto handed the headband to Sasuke, who say to Naruto thank you for saving him. Then we switch to Kakashi saying he has some paperwork to fill leaving Naruto and Sakura alone.

 

702-Sakura thanks Naruto to have save Sasuke and therefore to have fulfill his promise of a life time. She bring back what he said to her before passing out and Naruto explain the bench scene and explain that he still thing about doing it because he still love her. We see flashback of everything that hinted where Sakura's seem to have develop feeling for Naruto, and then she realize that it was always him. She tell him that he can kiss her forehead, afterall she already give him her 1st kiss. We see a confuse Naruto and then she proceed to explain the CPR scene. After the kiss on her forehead, she finally admit that it was always him and that he made it harder that it should have been before kissing him and tell him that she loved him too.

 

703- Future where people are actually happy, not pair for the sake of being pair and Naruto a good dad where we have an hokage celebration for Naruto where every other Kage comes to see it too (still the leaf village, I don't want them to be living all in the same village)

 

Did I miss something ?

This would've been so amazing. :')




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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:42 AM

@DeathGodMack:
 

Sometimes defeat is the only answer. That's what Naruto taught us. :zaru:
 


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:43 AM

To think a hater came on my fanfic and told me this before this sh*tty ending happened. Hurt my heart just now...http://gyazo.com/486...0b933ccb4c8b812


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:47 AM

@DeathGodMack:
 

Sometimes defeat is the only answer. That's what Naruto taught us. :zaru:
 

No!!!!


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:47 AM

Does anybody read 'The Breaker' over here?




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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:49 AM

Road to Ninja - Naruto 690 (around that) 700 - The Last.
Think about that for a second and why Kishi chose to sell RTN chapter along DB. The answer lies there ;)

Plz explain. While the DB does raise an eyebrow, I don't think it covers 693-700


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:50 AM

giving up ain't never a option. Defeat is never an option neither is failure. Naruto is a damn failure he went against his word and he failed after so long. Talent STILL ended up beating hard work in the end and that was Kishi's messages to us that hard work beats talent. Like I said giving up and failing AINT never an option and that was the whole point of this story and Naruto's character that he doesn't give up and he will achieve what he set out for. But instead Kishi showed us that no matter how hard someone works at something you will fail miserably. But if it's born in you then you're set for life. Yeah Kishi you went against your own damn messages and contradicted yourself til the end.

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:51 AM

That's a Defeatist attitude you have there.

 

Listen kid.

 

This isn't a contest, this isn't a race, this is a fictional story written by a man across the world.

 

Now I'm quite curious if you are a troll only attempting to fuel the fire that will inevitably die, or are you a sincere diehard "Narusaku" fan. 

 

People have came here to offer solace to every one, and people are free to mourn a crappy end to an ultimately crappy story. That's fine and dandy.  However your incentive appears to get people more riled up than what they should be.  In a month, or less, many of us will get pass this like many emotional investment into stories.  That's a reality.  Holding out for something better is fine, and you are entitled to that, but falsely encouraging things because you have an ulterior motive is not cool.


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:51 AM

 

You can admit it is a sh*tty ending, and not like the ending, without having to dwell on it your whole life mate.

 

Nothing wrong with that.

Lay off, If he wants to cling to hope than why stop him. He's only using logic unlike a certain Managaka whose name I won't mention.


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:51 AM

Does anybody read 'The Breaker' over here?

I read it long time ago.

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:52 AM

The only thing i'm doing now is refreshing this page every 5 minutes :fu: well I'm pretty sure now that I'm not alone with my thoughts. And what more if monday comes--i feel the tons of copies of WSJ will be burnt. :argh:

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:55 AM

Road to Ninja - Naruto 690 (around that) 700 - The Last.
Think about that for a second and why Kishi chose to sell RTN chapter along DB. The answer lies there ;)

 
Hmm.. I think I know what you're talking about but I don't quite get it either. Are you saying that there's more than meets the eye? Would Kishi really do that? I still don't understand why Sakura was like that in chapter 699 though. Care to explain? :argh:

 

EDIT: PM ME YOUR THEORY, PLEASE.

 

For me its not easy as that.Becoz of this disaster i can't open my facebook or mail or any forum account.I'm being bombarded with insult and loser messages from NH and SS fans.I can't even post in forums,then again after this disaster i don't want to post.

 

Oh, sorry about that. But it'll die down in a week or so. You can continue posting after that. The next time they insult you again, give them a smart answer. Show them that you still stand by NS despite the 'ending' and ask them if they're happy that their pairing happened without any means of development. If they say yes, well, you know what to say.


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:57 AM

Lay off, If he wants to cling to hope than why stop him. He's only using logic unlike a certain Managaka whose name I won't mention.

 

You have not read this kid's posts as dutifully as I have.  He's adding fuel to the fire.  Things settle, and he starts it back up again.  

 

The manga is over shadow1275, as far as we aware it at least it is over.  There's always room for remakes, and better stories.  Dragon Ball is an example of this, also Digimon is getting that awesome remake.  However, I know when I smell something is up, and he is not being as sincere as we're being lead to believe.  Also, Kishimoto did not intentionally make this ending to hurt you.  We do not know the circumstances honestly.  Let's settle it was a bad ending, and that is that. 

 

Yes, it hurts, I know it hurts.  It hurts like getting punched in the gut, but what I'm stressing is that you, and every one will heal and eventually move on.  

 

That is a reality.


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:57 AM

I read it long time ago.

The sequel, I mean. 'New Waves'.




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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:58 AM

 

I wish Sakura was more like Eri. Just once I wanted to see her take pride in herself and demand respect. I would hav loved to see her cuss out Sasuke just once but oh well. To me pre 693 Sakura and post 693 Sakura are 2 different ppl completely


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:58 AM

Even Moffle is angry with the ending.

 

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 12:02 PM

Plz explain. While the DB does raise an eyebrow, I don't think it covers 693-700


You're close onto it ;) will be writing the theory soon.

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 12:02 PM


 
I wish Sakura was more like Eri. Just once I wanted to see her take pride in herself and demand respect. I would hav loved to see her cuss out Sasuke just once but oh well. To me pre 693 Sakura and post 693 Sakura are 2 different ppl completely


Wow that's one ship i wished to be canon. But i knew where it all boils down. Still school rumble was a good catch

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 12:02 PM

Even Moffle is angry with the ending.

 

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Most sane people are upset with the ending


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Posted 08 November 2014 - 12:02 PM

The sequel, I mean. 'New Waves'.

Ow, I only read until gomoryong come to Seoul.
I don't continue to read it after that. I will continue read it someday. Or just buy the volume release when I have money.




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