

Art thread~~~
#541
Posted 17 October 2007 - 04:39 PM

#542
Posted 17 October 2007 - 10:26 PM
Somethin's missing.
...AH YES.
It needs more bewbs.
Just kidding. It's awesome. ;D
#543
Posted 22 October 2007 - 11:33 PM
the scars should be nuff to make up for the lack of bewbage. XD
YAYYYY YOKOOOO CHAAAAA!!!

w00t. =D
#544
Posted 25 October 2007 - 03:57 PM

#545
Posted 25 October 2007 - 04:09 PM
Wow...she looks so hot Mel! @.@
I love the way that you've designed her, and the way that she's kind of crouching down like that. She has this kind of smexy/pixie look about her that I really like

Awesome job with this, Mel!

#546
Posted 25 October 2007 - 05:01 PM

#547
Posted 25 October 2007 - 05:11 PM
It's very nice!
The head is more or less perfect, and I do love your style so I have nothing to complain about there. The shoulders and neck looks believeable, and that's damn good really. The chest is also very good, and looks more realistic than many other things I've seen. The biggest problem with this is without a doubt her right leg! It's impossible! It looks like the leg comes straight out of her stomach, which should be pretty uncomfortable if I have to guess. Another thing you could have done which would have made this pic much better is to change where you put her left arm. You could for instance have her bend it and put her hand on her left knee? Because right now, it dissappears somehow through her right leg, and looks just a tad to long. But this is a kittening hard pose, so don't feel bad about small mistakes.
So I think that the pic would be much better if you redraw her right leg so it looks like its attatched where it belongs, and perhaps change the angle and pose of her left arm. The feet is ok, and I hate drawing that myself. The hand is great, the upper body is great and the head is awesome!

#548
Posted 25 October 2007 - 07:19 PM
The head is more or less perfect, and I do love your style so I have nothing to complain about there. The shoulders and neck looks believeable, and that's damn good really. The chest is also very good, and looks more realistic than many other things I've seen. The biggest problem with this is without a doubt her right leg! It's impossible! It looks like the leg comes straight out of her stomach, which should be pretty uncomfortable if I have to guess. Another thing you could have done which would have made this pic much better is to change where you put her left arm. You could for instance have her bend it and put her hand on her left knee? Because right now, it dissappears somehow through her right leg, and looks just a tad to long. But this is a fucking hard pose, so don't feel bad about small mistakes.
So I think that the pic would be much better if you redraw her right leg so it looks like its attatched where it belongs, and perhaps change the angle and pose of her left arm. The feet is ok, and I hate drawing that myself. The hand is great, the upper body is great and the head is awesome!
Ohmygod, Critique. XDDD Thank you so much 8D I'll trace it on the computer and change it digitally. xD; Or trace it onto another paper and change it there. >.> Either way works. XD;
The pose keeled me. Don't know what the hell made me want to even attempt it.. xD
Thank you so much for hte critique. ;_;

#549
Posted 26 October 2007 - 03:38 AM
I actually like how this came out xD
♥~ Tone in background used from tonestock on DA. :3
Also, this is dedicated to Shauna. ♥~~~♥!
I'm super late when it comes to commenting on this picture XD but here's my 2 cents anyways. Your sketch/outlines are pretty good and it seems that you know how to shade. However, it seems as if you're not too strong with shading with regard to the direction that the light is coming from... eh.. just my opinion so if you think otherwise, feel free to ignore me.
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#550
Posted 26 October 2007 - 09:25 PM
XDDD No, no, you're right. I phail at direction of light. D:
Thanks for the crit, Lee. ;_;
Anyway, I was allowed to make a design for a shirt/hoodie/something. all the students are. xD
I came up with a face. with hair. woo. 8D;
sleepytiemnao. x.x

#551
Posted 26 October 2007 - 10:20 PM
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
#552
Posted 26 October 2007 - 10:49 PM


#553
Posted 26 October 2007 - 11:55 PM
Thanks for the crit, Lee. ;_;
Anyway, I was allowed to make a design for a shirt/hoodie/something. all the students are. xD
I came up with a face. with hair. woo. 8D;
sleepytiemnao. x.x
Oh, she's gorgeous @.@
Wonderful job on her, Mel!

I love the way that her hair looks so full-bodied and free-flowing. And that expression on her face, with the way her eyes are closed, and her lips are shaped...just beautiful @.@
And ha! That necklace that she's wearing looks awfully familiar

Great job on this pic, Mel! I can't wait to see the finished version!

♥
#554
Posted 27 October 2007 - 01:02 AM
#555
Posted 27 October 2007 - 08:29 AM
That...is...uber.
D:
#556
Posted 08 November 2007 - 12:31 AM

#557
Posted 08 November 2007 - 12:51 AM
So awesome! I hadn't seen much of anyone's stuff in while, but DAMN girl! You've improved.

I love the hair wrap thing in that first pic. I just love that method of tying hair. XDDD

#558
Posted 08 November 2007 - 02:47 AM
Fuuuuuuuuuuuu, this is uber, yah Saku knows what i'm talkin bout! :-DDD
i *always* haff them.. ANATOMYGASMS! when i see ur beautiful art!
KATSU'S A SUGAR DADDY! XD
#560
Posted 08 November 2007 - 02:19 PM

Great job once again. Both girls look great :thumbs:

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