not yet. But I am sure he will update it soon.
And when he does it will be kickass, and sweet with Hinata seeing I hope.
Naruto: Alternative The Last (Doujinshi)
Started by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, Feb 07 2017 11:19 AM
Doujinshi Naruto Sakura Sai Shikamaru Naruto:TheLast Hinata NaruSaku Sasukarin
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Posted 22 December 2018 - 01:06 AM
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Posted 30 December 2018 - 09:17 AM
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
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Posted 30 December 2018 - 09:24 AM
... and a smack in the face!
https://www.devianta...-p-03-778806071
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You just beat me to it.
Final Update of 2018
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Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 30 December 2018 - 09:27 AM.
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
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Posted 01 January 2019 - 05:02 PM
The NS power level is over 9000...And I love it. 
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Posted 01 January 2019 - 08:09 PM
This is basically like SAO abridged. It just fixes all the problems.
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Posted 02 January 2019 - 01:15 PM
like the way he drew Sakura-Chan in that third to last panel with the smile. Makes it perfect.
I wish I could have the powers of Superman so I could save protect the world under God's will.
Always have the spirit and the guts to never ever give up no matter what.
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Posted 02 January 2019 - 06:28 PM
This writing is better than all of part 3 of Naruto. It sh##s on The last big time.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 02:24 AM
New Page. (Forgot how to do the spoiler thing.)
Edited by Illnevergiveup3, 05 February 2019 - 02:25 AM.
I wish I could have the powers of Superman so I could save protect the world under God's will.
Always have the spirit and the guts to never ever give up no matter what.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 02:25 AM
New Page.
AHH I NEED MORE!!
THAT'S WHAT HEROES DO, THEY SAVE PEOPLE!!
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 02:53 AM
New Page. (Forgot how to do the spoiler thing.)
Thank you.
Which I've told you - time and time again - is dangerous! There will never be consensus, son, among those you have helped to ascend. They will all differ in their views of what it means to be free. The peace you so desperately seek does not exist.
These men are united now by a common cause. But when this battle is finished they will fall to fighting amongst themselves about how best to ensure control. In time it will lead to war. You will see.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 03:25 AM
New Page. (Forgot how to do the spoiler thing.)
Eh, was expecting a bit more than that, but at least its progressing. Though he should get someone to proofread because Sakura's question sounds weird because of the grammar.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 03:54 AM
Bit disappointed ...
Why using genjutsu as a tool to bring them together ? should be better than this! This is just like The Last Naruto being force to see the girls past memories ...
I thought hes gonna bring them together "Naturally" ... not using genjutsu.
I hope i'm wrong and this genjutsu is for something else.
An out of control man needs a strong woman to control him.
And even a violent woman will become soft and tender to the man she love.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 06:06 AM
The difference is that the genjutsu in the movie forced Naruto to act out of character in the Last and suddenly devote himself to Hinata based on stuff he already knew/was present for and suddenly he gave a damn.
In this one, the genjutsu is making them see memories the other did not know about. For Naruto, it was seeing the conversation with Ino, and I'm guessing for Sakura it was the forehead scene, so I wouldn't worry.
As for the grammar, I believe Tokai is Spanish, and English is not his first language.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 09:44 AM
New Page. (Forgot how to do the spoiler thing.)
Nah. No worries bro. Sweet update by tokai. Dammit the hype and suspense these upcoming pages 
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 10:21 AM
Bit disappointed ...
Why using genjutsu as a tool to bring them together ? should be better than this! This is just like The Last Naruto being force to see the girls past memories ...
I thought hes gonna bring them together "Naturally" ... not using genjutsu.
I hope i'm wrong and this genjutsu is for something else.
No, I agree. It's better if the characters decide to act on their own rather than being shoved together by some external force.
But he chose to use the framework of the Last instead of coming up with a totally new scenario, so it makes sense that he would do it like that.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 11:44 AM
No, I agree. It's better if the characters decide to act on their own rather than being shoved together by some external force.
But he chose to use the framework of the Last instead of coming up with a totally new scenario, so it makes sense that he would do it like that.
Yes , you right , this is about fixing things that wrong with the last , not making an entire new script / scenario , i forgot that.
An out of control man needs a strong woman to control him.
And even a violent woman will become soft and tender to the man she love.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 05:31 PM
I wish he would address this part for last and let things drag out between Naruto and Sakura. I understand that he does not have enough time to do that.
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 06:30 PM
Even though there is a grammatical error, I'm loving the Sakura portrait on the first panel. That's the queen right there. And also:
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
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Posted 05 February 2019 - 06:37 PM
Bit disappointed ...
Why using genjutsu as a tool to bring them together ? should be better than this! This is just like The Last Naruto being force to see the girls past memories ...
I thought hes gonna bring them together "Naturally" ... not using genjutsu.
I hope i'm wrong and this genjutsu is for something else.
Admittedly....you are are right. It is kind of cheap, but as V said in V for Vendetta "Violence can be used for good." So, a bad thing can be used for the right reasons.
I don't like it, but like Drk said...this is hell of a lot better use than what Naruto the Last did and a far more proper way of how it would have actually gone.
NaruSaku always had that one last hurdle to get over, but what I am HAPPY for is seeing Ino play a role. Being that true friend that points out the obvious and be like "Girl, quit lying to yourself" instead of her staying this "envious back stabber over a boy who is not worth it."
So, take the good with the bad I guess.
Even though there is a grammatical error, I'm loving the Sakura portrait on the first panel. That's the queen right there. And also:
Edited by James S Cassidy, 05 February 2019 - 06:37 PM.
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