Well I think by now everyone knows Analyzer speaks nothing but BS. 
Analyzer isn't talking 'BS'. The Person doesn't want to debate about Naruto, but more or less wants to debate against other opinions and argumentations in general.
Example 1
My Quote
The 2nd most used reason to why someone should let a Character die is when the Writer wants to highlight a tragic moment during the Story, or to highlight an Antogonist more. The benefit from that is you can build up the tension towards the antagonist or provide a memorable impression on the died character. [Example 1: Pain killed Jiraiya. It was a memorable Arc because of the death of Jiraiya, and it improved Pain characterwise to be a worthy and serious Antagonist. It also improved the build up towards the Naruto-vs.-Pain fight at the end.] Thats the main reason to why so many People remembers the Pain-Arc as one of the best Arc, if not the best Arc.
Her Quote (reply on my Quote)
Jirayai's death is actually common in the hero's journey where you have a mentor (Master) dying by a man later the apprentice avenges against them. It's an easy set-up: It sets stakes higher, and Naruto is put into a place to learn the skills to defeat Pain as fast as possible
"The 2nd most Reason" = "Jiraiyas death is acutally common"
I don't know why this Person just re-wrote my whole Argumentation to her own version. It provides nothing to the debate since this is just repeating what i wrote, just in her own version and more specified to the Narutoverse, while i generalized it more.
Example 2
My Quote
The most used reason to why someone should let a Character die is when the Writer doesn't need the Character anymore, because he clearly doesn't want to utilize the Character further in his Story. The benefit from that is you can open up a new chapter or use the open room to introduce new Characters to fill the gap [Example : Madara died during the War-Arc in order to let Kaguya fill the gap of being the end-Boss]
Her Quote (reply to my Quote)
On this topic, Madara's death does more than just pave the way for Kaguya, for example. It is a Twist, a betrayal that you didn't see coming. The Stakes and power level are set higher. Granted, Kaguya's introduction/execution could have been slightly better, but it worked
Again, just re-writing my Argumentation instead this time adding more specific points on top my argumention towards the Narutoverse, while my argumention was 'again' just a generalized one. Her reply to this matter provides nothing to the debate 'again'.
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Obviously i don't really know the answer to why this Person is doing that. I claim that this Person just wants to re-write/change my argumentation, so this Person can atleast say that she added someting too on this matter for the debate... while in fact she provided nothing to the debate because she more or less just repeated what i wrote.
She also writes them in a way to look 'knowing' in that matter, or even tries to build up a 'experienced' look on her argumentation while the 'content' itself of her argumentation is just below average, or even 'BS'. Sometimes she also tries to add things like "I'm a writer too, so i know these things" "If you would have done a workout (like me)..." to have more effects to look 'experienced'
I guess she needs to do this becaue her own argumenation lacks convicitions and strength.
But lets keep going...
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Her Quote
It's notable that Sasuke offers to die at his point. Naruto though, doesn't want him to, and says no
I mean.. WTF is this ? 'Sasuke offers to die, but Naruto says no' Hello? Thats what Kishimoto wrote, and we are debating about his Writing. She can't just bring his 'intention' to why he 'wrote' it like that as an argumenation, since we all already know what his intention was, and already debating it.
We all already know that he 'wrote' it like that so Sasuke doesn't die. We are debating about wheter or not it would make more sense or not to let him die instead, so she just can't say "but, Kishimotos intention was to let him live.. so this is the better outcome of course" since his 'Intention' is also a matter of the debated topic (the intention of the writing is 'always' a matter of the debated topic)
Her Quote
Which is better -is- in the eye of the beholder
Again coming up with this argumenation for like the 100th time. Do you want to see the comparison ?
My Argumentation
The Logical/Psychological Persepective:
Sasuke never had to deal with the Aftermath of his actions. No one cared when he killed Orochimaru. No one cared when he killed Itachi. No one cared when he killed Danzo. All his attempts to kill Konoha-Ninjas or Ninjas from allied-Nations (Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi, Sai, Yamato, Killer-Bee, Raikage etc.) weren't successfull. Its like Kishimoto made sure that Sasuke only success in killing the 'bad-guys', but gives Plotarmor to everyone as soon he fights someone from Konoha (except Danzo).
How does a Person regrets his decisions if he isn't affected by aftereffects from his actions? There is a difference between a murderer who kills a Person who never someone cared about, and a murderer who kills a Person who is/was important for someone else. Imagine if he killed Shikamaru, no one would forgive him for that. But Dady-Kishimoto made sure that he doesn't kill one of the good-guys. a whole new level of Plotarmor.
Sasuke changes his mindset and goals as much as a woman who changes her panties in a week.
1. He wants to kill Itachi and rebuild his clan
2. Then he neglects his goal rebuilding his clan by almost killing some Konoha-Ninjas. The consequences would be that he wouldn't be allowed to rebuild his clan for his action, and would have to do that in a own hide-out, hidden from all Villages.
3. Then he wants to kill Danzo
4. Then he wants to kill everyone in Konoha, and destroy the Village
5. Then he wants to be the next Hokage of Konoha
6. Then he wants to kill Naruto and the Kage to create his own kind of peace, by being the main-villain for every country in order to let them ally all together.
How can someone trust this Guy ? How can someone not be afraid that he will change his mind 'again' ? Why does the end settles everything up ? He admitted defeat to Naruto, so he is immune now to change his mindset again ? Is that quality Writing for you ? Where the Writer basically just says "Well, he got the mindset of Naruto now and forever, just trust this guy" I'm sorry. He used the whole War-Arc just as a steppingstone to reach his own goal, and the next moment later his mindset is now settled up forever as being a good guy ?
The Character/Plotwise perspective:
Sasukes death would not only benefits him, however also benefits the story.
Sasuke is a Character who breaks bad in the Story. He killed many People, He killed a Kage, He attacked a Kage, He helped a Terror-Organisation etc... Just because he seeked for Revenge at the beginning of the Story towards his killed Clan. Every decision he made changed the Plot, and developed him Characterwise (despite his mindest got changed waaaay to much). The death of Sasuke would highlight his development and his decision he made in the past, becauce his death would drive the audience to look/think back to brainstorm his Storyline. (What went wrong? What if he came back to Konoha after killing Itachi? What if he didn't attack Killer-Bee ? etc.) to also provide a message for the next generation or other Shinobis to why 'Revenge' or 'Hate' isn't the path you should choose as a Ninja. It would be a lesson to everyone to prevent going such a bad path which Sasuke went. And how can u highlight a bad-path? exactly, with a 'DEATH' at the end.
Is someone now caring for those questions or lessons? No, because he lives. The audience is now more or less patiently waiting to how badass he develops further, and how strong he will be as an experienced adult. What a great Intention from the Writers, thats truly quality writing here.
Sasukes death would have developed Naruto 'sooo' much. Imagine Narutos first and only kill ended the Uchiha-Clan, because Sasuke didn't let him a other choice. Live, or be killed. Kill, or die. Save the World, or let Sasuke rule the Worl with a dystopie. Naruto would made up for the wasted Time he did chasing Sasuke, and neglecting his duties to become a worthy Hokage by killing him. Because he would realize at the end that the World needs him more than as to he needs Sasuke. Because thats what a Hokage is meant to be, making decision 'for' the people you swear to protect, and not to make decision you want for yourself. No matter what promises you made, the people you swear to protect as a Hokage comes first. It would be his biggest lessons to develop as a great Hokage, and it would be such a meaningful and memorable moment which also provides a breathtaking scenario and atmosphere for the audience.
Damn, writing this just makes my hate towards the Canon-version even bigger.
I don't want to point out that Sasuke was already at his peak/end characterwise. There was only one goal left for him, rebuilding his own clan, but honsetly.. does he deserves that ? No.
Putting him in Jail or something doesn't provide anything either at the end of this stage, so killing him would make so much more sense.
Her argumentation
It's notable that Sasuke offers to die at his point. Naruto though, doesn't want him to, and says no. Instead, Sasuke does his redemption through life, rather than giving up his life. This is the brighter outcome. Sasuke dying would work too, but it would make the next moments darker and bittersweet. Which is better -is- in the eye of the beholder. You argue it is better if he died, but based on Naruto's goal and the tone of 700, what happened fits well into that mold
"but based on Nartuos goal and the tone of 700, what happened fits well into that mold" Thats what i mean, most of her argumentations lack conviction and strength since she doesn't support them with real argumenations. Its more ore less just a quote of "well, what Naruto wants is always the best for the story" Can we maybe all admit that the story is more than just the 'Protagonist' ? and that a good Story is not only based around the Protagonist wheter or not he acheivesall of his goals, or just some of them ?
Her Quote
There's no set up of trust. Notably, Naruto and Kakashi pushed hard for Sasuke to be allowed to go free. So I'm not sure where Sasuke is automatically trusted comes from.
If they wouldn't trust him they wouldn't set him free... Whats the point of her ? You put a murderer in jail because u are convinced that he is not to be trusted anymore in the society to provide a safety place for the others, so he has to be punished by the criminal law. That didn't happen to Sasuke, because Naruto and Kakashi were convinced that he is to be trusted after the war-arc.. which doesn't make sense since i made good argumentations above to why Sasuek shouldn't be trusted. Kishimoto just settled his good-guy-mindset for Naruto and the audience by providing him some sense in his mind with lackluster characterdevelopment..
Kishimoto: "Sasuke is now a good guy, just believe it..because im the writer so i make sure he doesn't breaks bad his mindset again.. despite he did it like 7 times spontaneous and arbitrarily in the story"
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Her Quote
So ultimately, no, death does -not- make a story better
Her Quote she made befor the last Quote
So yes, your point of Jirayai is accurate
My Quote about Jiraiya
[Example 1: Pain killed Jiraiya. It was a memorable Arc because of the death of Jiraiya, and it improved Pain characterwise to be a worthy and serious Antagonist. It also improved the build up towards the Naruto-vs.-Pain fight at the end.] Thats the main reason to why so many People remembers the Pain-Arc as one of the best Arc, if not the best Arc.
1. My argumentation was that Jiraiyas death improved the Pain-Arc Storywise
2. She agrees on my Argumentation
3. Later she writes "So ultimately, no, death does -not- make a story better"
4. ????
She condradicts herself, because she 'needs' to debate against me no matter what. No Argumentation, but tries her best to debate against my argumentations. Thats her main goal in this thread anyways.
She doesn't care about Naruto or 'good' Writing, she just wants to debate against others.. maybe because of passing her boring time.
Sometimes she even skip some part of my Argumentations i made to make clear why a alternative writing would be a way better one, i guess because she can't debate to them
"So yes, in my mind, Kishimoto is about as skilled as J.K. Rowling" - Analyzer, the peak of her nonsense
Edited by Riverkid, 01 August 2017 - 04:30 PM.