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[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Well. Apparently Tokai2000 started rebooting the final chapter and The Last to fit a NS ending. I though just looking at first, there is no way anyone can resolve and fixed the issues from TL and Chapter 700. Although, my curiosity got the better of me, so I checked out the doujin and so far. It looks better than the original TL. So i'll give it a try and see what happen in the future. Although he still has plenty of work to do to fix Sakura and Hinata's feelings all thanks to Kishi and SP.  He skipped and cut out some scene/replaced them and the pacing is very fast (maybe a little too bit). The artist kept the Shippuden designs because he likes them very much (meaning no short hair, Obito ripoff Naruto). I scanlate the pages on my old webcomic account. Enjoy 

 

Chapter 2 spoilers

 

 

Guess who Hinata ride with to the cave of the infamous genjutsu instead of her Naruto-kun?

     

 

 

 

This guy does this all by himself in a short span of time and the Boruto artists has like 6 assistants working with him and he can't get the chapters done that quickly lol. And Tokai's art is more better quality and more professional XD.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 25 October 2016 - 11:45 AM.

[T XD]

Well. Apparently Tokai2000 started rebooting the final chapter and The Last to fit a NS ending. I though just looking at first, there is no way anyone can resolve and fixed the issues from TL and Chapter 700. Although, my curiosity got the better of me, so I checked out the doujin and so far. It looks better than the original TL. So i'll give it a try and see what happen in the future. Although he still has plenty of work to do to fix Sakura and Hinata's feelings all thanks to Kishi and SP.  He skipped and cut out some scene/replaced them and the pacing is very fast (maybe a little too bit). The artist kept the Shippuden designs because he likes them very much (meaning no short hair, Obito ripoff Naruto). I scanlate the pages on my old webcomic account. Enjoy 

 

Chapter 2 spoilers

 

 

Guess who Hinata ride with to the cave of the infamous genjutsu instead of her Naruto-kun?

     

 

 

 

This guy does this all by himself in a short span of time and the Boruto artists has like 6 assistants working with him and he can't get the chapters done that quickly lol. And Tokai's art is more better quality and more professional XD.

He's very good XD Bravo to him.

 

Yes, he's much better and has good creativity. The artist is well talented also. I'll be with his manga.

 

By the way, which site is it on ?

Edited by T XD, 25 October 2016 - 12:24 PM.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

He's very good XD Bravo to him.

 

Yes, he's much better and has good creativity. The artist is well talented also. I'll be with his manga.

 

By the way, which site is it on ?

 

You can catch my scanlations here http://narudoujinalt...s/comics/first/

 

The beginning I'm sure is not part of the original TL. Made Sakura actually reflects on the confession or failfession.

 

 

Danm bastard hid her face from the readers when she was mumbling to herself  

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 25 October 2016 - 12:41 PM.

[T XD]

 

You can catch my scanlations here http://narudoujinalt...s/comics/first/

 

The beginning I'm sure is not part of the original TL. Made Sakura actually reflects on the confession or failfession.

The panels of your previous post, I didn't find them.

 

Yup, she's reflecting on both.

Edited by T XD, 25 October 2016 - 12:42 PM.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

The panels of your previous post, I didn't find them.

 

Yup, she's reflecting on both.

 

 The link is broken?

[T XD]

 

 The link is broken?

These panels :

 

 

Chapter 2 spoilers

 

 

 

   

 

 

Ah wait. They're spoilers. It's not out yet

Edited by T XD, 25 October 2016 - 12:47 PM.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

These panels :

 

 

Chapter 2 spoilers

 

 

 

   

 

 

Ah wait. They're spoilers. It's not out yet

 

Yeah. That's the word "spoilers" is a plural   Tokai's more than halfway done with the second chapter.

[Illnevergiveup3]

 
Yeah. That's the word "spoilers" is a plural   Tokai's more than halfway done with the second chapter.

Pretty nice work. Do we read right to left or left to right?

Edit- nevermind I figured it out.

Edited by Illnevergiveup3, 25 October 2016 - 01:11 PM.

[T XD]

 

Yeah. That's the word "spoilers" is a plural   Tokai's more than halfway done with the second chapter.

He releases a chapter every week ?

[milan kyuubi]

Well. Apparently Tokai2000 started rebooting the final chapter and The Last to fit a NS ending. I though just looking at first, there is no way anyone can resolve and fixed the issues from TL and Chapter 700. Although, my curiosity got the better of me, so I checked out the doujin and so far. It looks better than the original TL. So i'll give it a try and see what happen in the future. Although he still has plenty of work to do to fix Sakura and Hinata's feelings all thanks to Kishi and SP.  He skipped and cut out some scene/replaced them and the pacing is very fast (maybe a little too bit). The artist kept the Shippuden designs because he likes them very much (meaning no short hair, Obito ripoff Naruto). I scanlate the pages on my old webcomic account. Enjoy 

 

Chapter 2 spoilers

 

 

Guess who Hinata ride with to the cave of the infamous genjutsu instead of her Naruto-kun?

     

 

 

 

This guy does this all by himself in a short span of time and the Boruto artists has like 6 assistants working with him and he can't get the chapters done that quickly lol. And Tokai's art is more better quality and more professional XD.

 

i like it very much! This person has amazing talent.

 

Tho I wished he/she would have scrapped the 693/699/700/TL/Gaiden/Bolt. I did not like seeing stuff from things like TL! I mean no offense to the creator, just my opinion.

[Illnevergiveup3]

It actually inspired me to start on my project.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

He releases a chapter every week ?

 

A page.

 

Pretty nice work. Do we read right to left or left to right?

Edit- nevermind I figured it out.

 

Well. Remember what we talked about two years ago in the PM about TL having a NS ending 

 

 

Too bad the art is still looks kind of crap. I'm sure Tokai will fixed this.

 

 

 

 

i like it very much! This person has amazing talent.

 

Tho I wished he/she would have scrapped the 693/699/700/TL/Gaiden/Bolt. I did not like seeing stuff from things like TL! I mean no offense to the creator, just my opinion.

 

All is called Alternate TL (which means an alternate version). There is so much one person can do.

 

According to Tokai, the ending so post to end as NS, so Boruto should not be in existence or at least as Naruto's offspring. Boruto (if created) should be Toneri's son or a man that Tokai chooses for Hinata.

 

Well, we can treat this doujin as a what if SP had gone with the misleading of NH fandom. We are getting to the most controversial part of TL is the cave scene and river of genjutsu is coming up  Already Tokai is being harassed by NHtards. Another kitten-storm is coming.

 

Lets look what he did so far. Scarf-kun does not exist and Hinata's character is much improved than SP's version. That's why a lot of scenes had to be omitted because technically, she knits the red scarf     

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 25 October 2016 - 11:43 PM.

[T XD]

 

A page.

 

 

Well. Remember what we talked about two years ago in the PM about TL having a NS ending 

 

 

Too bad the art is still looks kind of crap. I'm sure Tokai will fixed this.

 

 

 

 

All is called Alternate TL (which means an alternate version). There is so much one person can do.

 

According to Tokai, the ending so post to end as NS, so Boruto should not be in existence or at least as Naruto's offspring. Boruto (if created) should be Toneri's son or a man that Tokai chooses for Hinata.

 

Well, we can treat this doujin as a what if SP had gone with the misleading of NH fandom. We are getting to the most controversial part of TL is the cave scene and river of genjutsu is coming up  Already Tokai is being harassed by NHtards. Another kitten-storm is coming.

 

Lets look what he did so far. Scarf-kun does not exist and Hinata's character is much improved than SP's version. That's why a lot of scenes had to be omitted because technically, she knits the red scarf     

Scarf-kun... Funny XD

 

Which site ? Webcomics.com ? And how do I see the comments ?

[TheFirstEvil100]

 

A page.

 

 

Well. Remember what we talked about two years ago in the PM about TL having a NS ending 

 

 

Too bad the art is still looks kind of crap. I'm sure Tokai will fixed this.

 

 

 

 

All is called Alternate TL (which means an alternate version). There is so much one person can do.

 

According to Tokai, the ending so post to end as NS, so Boruto should not be in existence or at least as Naruto's offspring. Boruto (if created) should be Toneri's son or a man that Tokai chooses for Hinata.

 

Well, we can treat this doujin as a what if SP had gone with the misleading of NH fandom. We are getting to the most controversial part of TL is the cave scene and river of genjutsu is coming up  Already Tokai is being harassed by NHtards. Another kitten-storm is coming.

 

Lets look what he did so far. Scarf-kun does not exist and Hinata's character is much improved than SP's version. That's why a lot of scenes had to be omitted because technically, she knits the red scarf     

Lol yes not Bolt or his sister that shall be good then man and all the more better as well which shall help.#

 

Well that is what I am doing and really, I mean what are they doing as I didn't see anything then again they may be sending him PM as they are all crazy and hate this, I mean they keep calling us Salty I think they may be salty

[Illnevergiveup3]

lol, I have a silly question, but if someone can answer it please do. Can any of the characters in Naruto move above Mach 1?

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Scarf-kun... Funny XD

 

Which site ? Webcomics.com ? And how do I see the comments ?

 

That's what the Japanese HN fandom calls it.

 

It's on DeviantArt. You can start reading the incomplete chapter 2 here. Although it's manga chapter 700.1.

 

Lol yes not Bolt or his sister that shall be good then man and all the more better as well which shall help.#

 

Well that is what I am doing and really, I mean what are they doing as I didn't see anything then again they may be sending him PM as they are all crazy and hate this, I mean they keep calling us Salty I think they may be salty

 

Big difference you are going to find with the original and doujin version.

 

Original

 

And we know that she was too shy to join them because of Naruto. And the fangirls made her too bit unconformable. We know the rest of this story. Sakura invites Hinata over and has a little chat with her. And next thing we know, Sakura becomes a NH matchmaker. Naruto goes chasing after her until Toneri and his goons attacked Konoha and kidnapped Hanabi blah blah blah.

 

Alternate

Now we are getting somewhere. Unlike the original, Naruto is eating by himself (no Sakura and Ino with him), he has no fangirls swarming him and he goes visit Konohamaru. Unlike the original, where Sakura tells Naruto to go after Hinata and he chases after her. He response to Hinata in this page that he heard the fight. Two different scenarios. And it seems that the battle scene and ToneHina scene is different from the original. 

 

 It is mentioned that Hanabi does indeed get kinnaped during the battle scene between Hinata and Toneri off screen. So it basically the same scenario when she saw Naruto eating alone at the Ramen Bar, she just flees without the support of Sakura. This was off screen too.

 

Now why wasn't Sakura there for Hinata just like she was in the original? Apparently, Sakura is in the same boat a situation as her and she's in her room.

 

 

This was one of the major reasons why NH became canon. And with all that set in motion,  it's simply a twist of fate   

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 26 October 2016 - 02:46 PM.

[Yyubie]

No offense but i don't like it, the art is good of course but still bellow Lady's GT art. The one that bug me the most is ... : Why the hell using The Last and then remake it??

 

Can they just make an alternate ending from chapter 690 for example ??? No need to touch that piece of crap The Last Naruto the movie, that's an NH kitten. I mean i really appreciate that they do this but, ... no not from TL.

[T XD]

 

That's what the Japanese HN fandom calls it.

 

It's on DeviantArt. You can start reading the incomplete chapter 2 here. Although it's manga chapter 700.1.

 

Waow that scarf... All those NS moments, facts and parallels... Then a scarf took the place

 

Okay. Thanks. So, a page weekly on DeviantArt. Is there a specific day each week ?

[Illnevergiveup3]

No offense but i don't like it, the art is good of course but still bellow Lady's GT art. The one that bug me the most is ... : Why the hell using The Last and then remake it??
 
Can they just make an alternate ending from chapter 690 for example ??? No need to touch that piece of crap The Last Naruto the movie, that's an NH kitten. I mean i really appreciate that they do this but, ... no not from TL.

I want him to continue. If we're lucky we might see Hinata get wtfstomped by Toneri. But yeah, he should have redid from Chapters 690-700, the NS way.

[T XD]

I want him to continue. If we're lucky we might see Hinata get wtfstomped by Toneri. But yeah, he should have redid from Chapters 690-700, the NS way.

He's doing from chapter 700 and the TL. Not just TL. The beginning of chapter 1 is from 700 then he continues then he goes to TL.

Edited by T XD, 26 October 2016 - 04:54 PM.