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[rocci]

Sasuke is not a villain.
Dart vader comparison in naruto is obito.
Bucky and Steve is not a rival in the first place. And winter soldier is brainwashed villain. That's the most easiest one to make a redemption.

[Emb3rs]

typical naruto fanfiction

 

a school au (the worst)

nh (self explanatory, some fics are good im sure but the sakura bashing in it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. just shows who they really are; jealous of the canon material)

harem (gotta please every pairing tard!)

fem kyuubi/dark naruto (all the same plot, put some DEMONS in and mix some bestiality in it and have naruto be a super angst dictator)

ss (which you cant do unless you completely rewrote sasuke's character)

sn (just yaoi, they dont care about plot)

sakura bashing (instead of you know, making her better? something a good writer would do?)

overpowered super naruto (because then not only you get rid of his sympathy you also turn him into the ultimate avatar, every boys dream fantasy)

 

I find it extremely hard to find good fanfiction because of things like this. It gets annoying having to go through the countless bad ones for the chance of maybe finding that one decent fanfiction. Up to this point ive only found one decent full length fanfiction of naruto and even it has its issues that are stated on your list unfortunately.

[Emb3rs]

What would you say is a "Typical" NS fanfic?

 

Most commonly from what ive found it just goes like, one day i noticed etc then it jumps to them kissing. Its okay if you like that sort of thing and don't care for it to be too believable to the canon versions but me personally, i like fan fictions that don't stray far from its canon inspiration. I like to see the characteristics that made me like that ship. Which is why i tend to look for fan fictions that take place in the canon universe and not alternate versions.

 

Here are examples of what i personally like fan fictions to be and if you have any suggestions please do link them to me i love Naruta, One Piece, Fairy Tail , attack on titan and Harry potter considering it was my gateway into reading fanfiction.

 

https://www.fanficti...allows-of-Death

 

https://www.fanficti.../1/Ice-and-Fire

Edited by Emb3rs, 04 January 2016 - 05:51 AM.

[Catra]

dont worry, NS fanfics aren't innocent either, i saw this one fanfic where it turned hinata completely ooc and the butt of jokes. c'mon guys dont stoop to their level. be a good author and try to improve on EVERYTHING you can. don't try to make it feel so super serious and then all the sudden turn hinata into a bad tom & jerry cartoon

[TouKen4Life3g]

Sasuke is not a villain.
Dart vader comparison in naruto is obito.
Bucky and Steve is not a rival in the first place. And winter soldier is brainwashed villain. That's the most easiest one to make a redemption.

Exactly. Plus, based on Civil War trailer, he's not scout free. He did damage and he must pay the price. Sasuke, psst, he has escape jail free card. That's another thing, stories of once criminal now act of friendly usually result in sacrifice, go back to the cell, or "dies" only to be revealed alive elsewhere. For Sasuke, nothing ever happened and I mean nothing.

[TheFirstEvil100]

Exactly. Plus, based on Civil War trailer, he's not scout free. He did damage and he must pay the price. Sasuke, psst, he has escape jail free card. That's another thing, stories of once criminal now act of friendly usually result in sacrifice, go back to the cell, or "dies" only to be revealed alive elsewhere. For Sasuke, nothing ever happened and I mean nothing.

True but we have to wait and see how much gult Buckey has, still I don't blame him poor guy was brainwashed for a long time after all, plus their is a death in the film from what I have been told but who it is we have to wait and see what will happen.

 

but again Sasuke got of free and we all know why that is Kishi loved Sasuke far too much.

[TouKen4Life3g]

I think it hit my pet peeve when Sasuke is talking to council with no one thinking, "You were a criminal." It's like no one is using that character point. Use it because it can create a story.

[VanitasDS76491]

Like hell Sasuke isn't a villain he's pretty much the 4th war started cause of him attacking Bee and the other Kage. Obito is a lame version of Vader if he was still Anakin.

[Comy]

 

Most commonly from what ive found it just goes like, one day i noticed etc then it jumps to them kissing. Its okay if you like that sort of thing and don't care for it to be too believable to the canon versions but me personally, i like fan fictions that don't stray far from its canon inspiration. I like to see the characteristics that made me like that ship. Which is why i tend to look for fan fictions that take place in the canon universe and not alternate versions.

 

Here are examples of what i personally like fan fictions to be and if you have any suggestions please do link them to me i love Naruta, One Piece, Fairy Tail , attack on titan and Harry potter considering it was my gateway into reading fanfiction.

 

https://www.fanficti...allows-of-Death

 

https://www.fanficti.../1/Ice-and-Fire

 

Three fanfics i really enjoyed, so take a look

 

https://www.fanficti...t-s-Get-Married (complete)

 

https://www.fanficti...-was-always-you (complete)

 

https://www.fanficti...ost-in-the-Rain (on going)

[starlitestarbrite]

Does anyone remember Buffy the vampire Slayer? As I have been watching it again latly catching up and and on season 2 episode 17 where Jenny was killed by Angelus I mean even the music that is played at the end playing during Jenny's funeral and Buffy realises what she must do - kill Angel.

 

Buffy: I can't hold on to the past anymore. Angel is gone. Nothing's ever gonna bring him back.

 

I mean I'm sure we can all list just how many shows in which the characters grow and know that the one that they want to save can't be saved  Naruto failed at this as all he cared about was Sasuke, and what hurts is that when fans say in real life we would be done but in anime that kitten is allowed.

 

I'm sorry but no it not I know with anime they can do thing that most can't, I mean we look at captain america winter soldier I mean with Bucky he was brainwashed so we can say that what he did was not his fault. Not sure if you all think the same but we all know that he was brainwashed by hydra.

 

I just wish I knew why so many thought that Naruto needed and saving Sasuke was a good thing, when lets face it Sasuke was nothing more that a kitten to everyone around him not once caring about them at all.

sometimes i get annoyed with people like that. they say tsunderes in anime are okay but in real life "OMG THAT'S SO RUDE!" or something like that, they say someone like sasuke is okay, or naruto trying to save sasuke is good yet they would be done with them if someone treated them that way in real life. i've lost faith in humanity cause lets face it no one knows WHAT they want anymore.

 

like ss/nh fans think their chosen ship is true love but if someone like that crossed their path  in real life they would either sue them for harassment,

 

kick their butt, or worse! sometimes its hard to tell the haters' from the fans' cause some people have such a twisted view on life, reality AND fantasy

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 05 January 2016 - 07:46 AM.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

Pardon my interruption. I like to add on to my previous post to FirstEvil. Also, I forgot to mention the 3d art I did with Sakura's reincarnation. Just look a my avatar 

 

 

 

Well... resume your topics ladies and gentlemen

[VanitasDS76491]

Saw a pre-order ad for UNS4 on Playstation Network...comes with the Boruto DLC....ugh...(and The Last available to download...only $9.99 XD)

I Still feel like i'm getting cheated by that pre-order crap. The only joy i'll get in this game is the boss fights and beating the ever living kitten out of Hinata, Obtio, Bolt, and Sasuke not so much Kaguya cause I really don't hate her that much, I just hate how they used her in what the last 30 chapters without even hinting at her before. I find her a missed idea that could have been good. They could have done a Lightspeed Rescue thing with Bansheera.

[Catra]

dont give em money. if a friend has it and if you're really curious by all means but DON'T give them your money. they dont care about reviews, they just want your money.

[VanitasDS76491]

dont give em money. if a friend has it and if you're really curious by all means but DON'T give them your money. they dont care about reviews, they just want your money.

Too late I already finished paying for it last year in 2015, besides I want to see how they kitten this up in the game with the ending also I want to who voices Sarada and Kaguya.

[TheFirstEvil100]

Pardon my interruption. I like to add on to my previous post to FirstEvil. Also, I forgot to mention the 3d art I did with Sakura's reincarnation. Just look a my avatar 

 

 

 

Well... resume your topics ladies and gentlemen

oh that is good I hope that you make Sakura a bad ass too, and was wondering who the avatar image was off.

[Emb3rs]

 

Three fanfics i really enjoyed, so take a look

 

https://www.fanficti...t-s-Get-Married (complete)

 

https://www.fanficti...-was-always-you (complete)

 

https://www.fanficti...ost-in-the-Rain (on going)

Thanks for these I will read them all, the summaries tell me they are going to be a good read

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

oh that is good I hope that you make Sakura a bad ass too, and was wondering who the avatar image was off.

 

She is already badass. Sakura, which is now Cassadra Ferguson starts in my upcoming story is  a widow (her husband American Naruto is currently M.I.A.) and a housewife, raising her son (American Naruto 2.0) by the Name of Eddie Ferguson. He is the protagonist and titled character of my up coming book series. As for Cass, she is a legendary warrior, a retired Vanhold knight and a current guild leader from Vanaheim. Her legendary and heroic tales have many ballad sang of her being the strongest woman in the universe out from the human race. This is enough for me to make her the heroine and main female lead, which is very rare for a mother and son lead characters for a story, especially for an action/fantasy literature. And also, she has a similar ability to the Strength of 100 Seal. 

 

Here's full-size art sketches of Cass close up

 

Eddie  inherited her eyes and right side bang. My visual image of Eddie will look something like Sarada's half brother. 

 

 

 

Ironically, all this could to me being in a standoff (because two different styles of Naruto 2.0 lol)  with Kishi's assistants if my story gets plenty of exposure and popularity rises even though its two completely different departments. They are releasing the Boruto manga this coming spring, while this coming fall, I expected to release my book on the market and free for readers on Wattpad (weekly chapter by chapter updates). 

 

If my story is to fail, I hope I have written a better protagonist in Eddie and better family bonds than the Boruto gen. That my very least bottom line endeavor. 

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 06 January 2016 - 11:42 AM.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Getting to the topic at hand, this post/reblog on Tumblr by our own James S. Cassidy is fitting to how the ending ruined things just to make NaruHina happen...

 

http://jamestheguy.t...ns-more-tho-but

[Catra]

wow.....wow. my heart is even more broken. we all really should have stopped at 693.

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

wow.....wow. my heart is even more broken. we all really should have stopped at 693.

 

Welcome to the club, Catra... ~_~ When I saw it, I was like "Oh, man, James nailed it..."