
The Great NaruSaku Fic Listing III
#402
Posted 19 October 2009 - 02:57 PM
Read it and found it dissapointing, not a fan of these pointless oneshots, atleast get the title right. But it's pink. not But is pink.
Talking of pointless oneshots, this one was quite interesting. Twenty and One Roots That Grew by Masu Trout not bad for first attempt, though wouldn't expect many NaruSaku fics from her, reading her bio looks like a crack pairing fan.
Edited by harry4e, 19 October 2009 - 02:58 PM.
#403
Posted 19 October 2009 - 07:35 PM
Yeah, I noticed that, but decided againts saying anything.
#404
Posted 20 October 2009 - 11:43 AM
Not sure if anyone has read this or posted it, but its pretty decent, far better than most of the stuff that floats around in my opinion. The author updates at an insane pace too, 44 chapters in a bit over 3 months.
#405
Posted 20 October 2009 - 10:00 PM
Not sure if anyone has read this or posted it, but its pretty decent, far better than most of the stuff that floats around in my opinion. The author updates at an insane pace too, 44 chapters in a bit over 3 months.
Yup, it's probably the best fic from any new author at the moment, it's nice to see someone trying something different as well.
#406
Posted 20 October 2009 - 10:02 PM
#407
Posted 21 October 2009 - 06:50 PM
#408
Posted 23 October 2009 - 11:37 AM
Shouri is considering making a full rewritting and erasing the current version, though.
ANBU Times by Believeit6 has been updated with Chapter 20.
Lost in the Green Seas by FlexRhysode1 has been updated with Chapter 20.
Actually it had been updated back in August, but I hadn't seen the update before.

Fire Fox Legacy by Kyubbi-Kitsune has been updated with Chapter 30.
Demon No More by Kyubbi-Kitsune has been updated with Chapter 26.
Edit:
The Fox's Will by Pein's Disciple has been updated with Chapter 46.
Burrow Down's Chapter One, by Kyubbi-Kitsune has been pusblished.
Witchblade: Sakura by Kanius has been updated with Chapter 46.
And there's a new one-shot: The Humor of Closets and Intoxication by Xspirit_Shinobix
New Edit:
Unforeseen Consequences by Agent-G has been updated with Chapter 10.
I used to follow Agent-G's work back when I still was a Marvel/DC fanboy (before both companies utterly destroyed all remainder vestiges of my patience and goodwill). He was a good writer (even if with faulty spelling - a flaw he's perfectly aware of and struggles with) but I hadn't paid much attention to his Naruto fics because they weren't NaruSaku. Though I have checked this, and it seems nice.
Oh, and it's becoming a NaruSakuIno story.
Edited by Jenskott, 24 October 2009 - 09:17 AM.
Fixed because of double posting. ~ Derock
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#409
Posted 25 October 2009 - 12:49 AM
Our very own member, Denim88, has updated Seireirei no Jinchuuriki with Chapter 12.
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
#410
Posted 26 October 2009 - 04:23 PM
Hefster has also started another story: Supreme Genetic Creations of a Bloodline.
Edit:
The Fox's Will by PeinsDisciple has been updated with Chapter 47.
Double Edit:
Truth Unfolds in the Wave by Mr. Mclane has been updated with Chapter 50.
A Favor by Aly247 has been updated with Chapter 4.
The last fic is turning out to be pretty good.
An Alternative Path by Zessei has been updated with Chapter 20.
A Fine Line Between Us by Heart on a Sword has been updated with Chapter 11 (not to be mistaken with A Fine Fine Line by the same writer).
A Wish on a Starby Ultraanimefan94 has been updated with Chapter 12.
AZ NS by LatimerBaka has been updated with Chapter 6 (old update, but it hadn't been added to the List).
Cherry Blossoms and Ramen by Eternal Nightingale has been updated with Chapter 18.
Cry For Me by Bitter SweetCrimson has been updated with Chapter 15.
Feel by Maiden Marmalade has been updated with Chapter 7.
Edited by Jenskott, 27 October 2009 - 09:08 PM.
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#411
Posted 27 October 2009 - 09:53 PM
edit: this guy truly updates at insane speeds O_O
Edited by Chew, 27 October 2009 - 09:53 PM.


#412
Posted 28 October 2009 - 01:16 AM
#413
Posted 29 October 2009 - 01:57 PM
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#417
Posted 31 October 2009 - 08:14 PM
Black Balloon, also by Kiritsubo has been updated with Chapter 2.
Edit:
True, I have been going through the List and I have found several fics listed twice:
A Time for Their Hearts and Tied Hearts by Gentle-Wind. They are the same fic. The author changed the name to Tied Hearts. So you should erase the A Time for Their Hearts name.
Sound of Snakes by Edstargazer is in reality the twelveth chapter of Naruto: Captured (which is already in the list). Hence, you should erase it, too.
By the way, Naruto: Captured is already up to Chapter 14. I ignore if someone had already posted the update.
New Edit:
We Are by EroSlackerMicha has been updated with Chapter 11.
He Said She Said by EroSlackerMicha Chapter 27.
Ciardha has published an one-shot in her DeviantArt page: Naruto Chapter 470 Guess Fic
It would be great this happened in the next chapter, but even though I believe NS will eventually happen, I think Kishimoto will be delaying it until the very end of the manga.
Gone by Hefster has been updated with Chapter 29.
Supreme Genetics Creations of a Bloodline by Hefster has been updated with Chapter 2.
This fic got a good start but unfortunately I'm afraid they have lost me with the blatant OOC-ness in this chapter. Sakura has NEVER done that. Naruto would NEVER talk like that to Sakura, tell those things to her or ever think them (because she never treated him like that). And if he talked like that to Sakura, Tsunade wouldn't tell: "Sakura, I'm dissappointed with you". She would punch Naruto for behaving like a bratty, careless jerk (what was what he was doing).
And nobody tells me: "But in the chapter 469...". He never did something like that in the chapter 469. He never rejected her, he never insulted her, he never accussed her from abusing him or being afraid of him and he never blamed him because the promise (she didn't ask him for a promise but she made a request, he promised her free-willy, he would have chased Sasuke anyway, she has tried getting him dropping the promise THRICE and he is way more obsessed with Sasuke than her). He got angry with her because he thought she was deluding herself (ironically he is the one is deluding himself about Sasuke).
I'm sorry, but it's too obvious when one of the co-writers is a NH shipper who believes all the Sakura-bashing NH fics he has read are canon.
Not matter what, I'm stating my flawed opinion and trying making constructive criticism, not bashing the authors, so I hope nobody felt offended. It wasn't my intention at all.
Edited by Jenskott, 02 November 2009 - 01:11 PM.
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#418
Posted 02 November 2009 - 07:13 PM
Excellent.
Edit:
Several months ago, I read one story. It seemed interesting, but I lost track of it.
Today I have found it again:
What Were You Thinking? by Gin-inu. It's up to Chapter 5.
I'm pretty excited because the premise was intriguing.
Edited by Jenskott, 02 November 2009 - 08:38 PM.
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#419
Posted 02 November 2009 - 09:06 PM
#420
Posted 02 November 2009 - 09:12 PM
This fic got a good start but unfortunately I'm afraid they have lost me with the blatant OOC-ness in this chapter. Sakura has NEVER done that. Naruto would NEVER talk like that to Sakura, tell those things to her or ever think them (because she never treated him like that). And if he talked like that to Sakura, Tsunade wouldn't tell: "Sakura, I'm dissappointed with you". She would punch Naruto for behaving like a bratty, careless jerk (what was what he was doing).
And nobody tells me: "But in the chapter 469...". He never did something like that in the chapter 469. He never rejected her, he never insulted her, he never accussed her from abusing him or being afraid of him and he never blamed him because the promise (she didn't ask him for a promise but she made a request, he promised her free-willy, he would have chased Sasuke anyway, she has tried getting him dropping the promise THRICE and he is way more obsessed with Sasuke than her). He got angry with her because he thought she was deluding herself (ironically he is the one is deluding himself about Sasuke).
I'm sorry, but it's too obvious when one of the co-writers is a NH shipper who believes all the Sakura-bashing NH fics he has read are canon.
Not matter what, I'm stating my flawed opinion and trying making constructive criticism, not bashing the authors, so I hope nobody felt offended. It wasn't my intention at all.
Well, Isn't the co-author KingKakashi? By my understanding he is an adamant NaruHina shipper.

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