Just finshed Chapter 2. Will be reading it over for mistakes and such. I definitely need a beta tho. >.<
NS Story: "Emperor Uzu" written by me.
Started by Luna, Nov 15 2016 01:34 AM
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Posted 17 November 2016 - 02:25 AM
Great start! Its actually pretty interesting. And I changed the title for you. Keep it up, Luna! 
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Posted 17 November 2016 - 02:45 PM
Great start! Its actually pretty interesting. And I changed the title for you. Keep it up, Luna!
Thank You!!! :)
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Posted 17 November 2016 - 11:49 PM
How often you plan to update the fanfic? I just read it and I wish to know the end of it 
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:28 AM
How often you plan to update the fanfic? I just read it and I wish to know the end of it
I'm actually working on the third chapter right now. This story has ways to go unfortunately and I have other multi chapter stories to finish but I think I'll focus on this one the most seeing as it's fun to write.
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 01:43 AM
Are you going to write the sasuke and naruto bond or are you gonna not overdo that like what kishi did? I prefer not overdoing it.
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 01:45 AM
Are you going to write the sasuke and naruto bond or are you gonna not overdo that like what kishi did? I prefer not overdoing it.
Yikes. Not at all. I have plans for them but it's definitely not going to be like canon. You'll have to wait and see though. :)
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 09:45 AM
I'm actually working on the third chapter right now. This story has ways to go unfortunately and I have other multi chapter stories to finish but I think I'll focus on this one the most seeing as it's fun to write.
Ahhh, that's good to hear if you focus on this one. I have a little favorite of NS fanfic and I think this is one of those.
Edited by Popuri, 18 November 2016 - 10:06 AM.
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:52 PM
Ahhh, that's good to hear if you focus on this one. I have a little favorite of NS fanfic and I think this is one of those.
Don't worry. She'll have to use it when they get married...eventually LOL
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:57 PM
I guess it was only a matter of time until the trash came out. LMAO
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 10:14 PM
Whats the rating of this fic? Is it m for mature for sex and violence?
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 10:42 PM
Whats the rating of this fic? Is it m for mature for sex and violence?
Mature. I don't know if there is a thread for those types of fics but you won't see alot of sex until later chapters hopefully. If there is a thread the mods could possibly move it for me. >.<
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 11:25 PM
I don't see that kind of thread.Mature. I don't know if there is a thread for those types of fics but you won't see alot of sex until later chapters hopefully. If there is a thread the mods could possibly move it for me. >.<
Lindenbay's Convergence has been moved it seems. But I don't know how we can access the m-rated fics.
I used to put my date of birth but it didn't work, I couldn't access the thread (if there any).
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Posted 19 November 2016 - 12:00 PM
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Posted 19 November 2016 - 12:54 PM
Wowowowow That's fast
Ikr lol. Starting chapter 5 today
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Posted 19 November 2016 - 01:00 PM
Ikr lol. Starting chapter 5 today
What?! 
Hard work, yes?
Looking forward to it in the middle of the stressful thesis
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Posted 19 November 2016 - 10:46 PM
So I plan to introduce Sai. I've found myself coming to love his character and I always liked his dynamic with team 7 so expect to see him soon. His character would be a nice balance with Naruto and Sakura's character. So there we have it. The three main heroes. (using the trio inspiration from Samurai Champloo) :)
Edited by Luna, 19 November 2016 - 10:47 PM.
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