26 replies to this topic

[JG111580]

I will do that. I worked very hard to make this flow with the rest of the story as well as possible. It really did make me feel better about Naruto again. But, it would be nice if more people could read it.

[DJSparty]

Definitely post this on FF.net. A lot of the NS shippers over there would love to read this!!

[JG111580]

It is posted there now. Spread the word if you know anyone that might enjoy it.

[ahmadaziz]

You forget to put any links . . . 

[JG111580]

Sorry about that... https://www.fanficti...mption-Chapters

[ahmadaziz]

Thanks for putting up the link. It works and I can finally enjoy your work. Some suggestions though.

 

1) Divide the work in chapters. Then release them regularly or simultaneously, that is up to you. I think 23k + words in a single chapter would be very intimidating for many. I would recommend regularly releasing chapters so that users have time to come to grips with what they read and to leave their thoughts on it.

 

2) Give the story character filters. As it is, many people who search fiction through character filters would be unable to find this. I would recommend using Naruto and Sakura in a pairing when using the filters. That would ensure maximum exposure to the most relevant audience.

 

3) A summary that is more accurate and tells what the story is about would be more appropriate I think.

 

Cheers.

Edited by ahmadaziz, 06 December 2014 - 07:22 AM.

[JG111580]

I will try to fix it. I'm not very well versed at this sort of thing. Any other suggestions are welcome.