QUOTE (harry4e @ Sep 8 2009, 07:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You're fic is definitely worth a real Whirlpool, though for future reference I wouldn't open a poll about who you should put in the team with NaruSaku, it makes it appear you didn't plan your story out that well, also Kiba being related to Sakura seems odd and completely pointless at the moment (Almost like you want to force Kiba in the story somehow) but thoer than that I like the premise for the fic and it's nice to see someone try something different yet not completely drift off from Kishimoto's story.
never heard of Pizza blade maybe will have to look them up. but will agree with the rest of the, also add Paradox Jast's Whirlpool country that needs to be updated I'm getting withdrawal symptoms, also . Medicinal Lullaby by Shivakashi is another great read recommended to everyone,
never heard of Pizza blade maybe will have to look them up. but will agree with the rest of the, also add Paradox Jast's Whirlpool country that needs to be updated I'm getting withdrawal symptoms, also . Medicinal Lullaby by Shivakashi is another great read recommended to everyone,
Really? I think it's a piece of .... you know what I was going to say, the poll was only opened cuz I couldn't get on who would be on the team, seriously my head had already worked out both possibilities and formulated the story from there on, so I really needed help on to decide who to use. The part about Sakura and Kiba being related, the only thing I can say about that is that I might work on that stuff still.
Also the other suggestions you talked about, I just didn't add them cuz I didn't remember them.
Anyway whoever reads my fic might have to wait a while for next chappy since this last month writting frenzy reduced my head to mush, but don't worry it ideas are already coming back.
And when the hell is Precious People going to be updated, I miss the story already.
Anyway thanks for the feedback Harry4e, that's what I was needing.