This could have worked, but too often do I see fan art ruined by having Naruto sport bangs like Minato. He already looks a lot like his father. He doesn't have to be a carbon copy. That's just lame. More to the point, short hair works for Naruto. The only issue is that the headband is too thick.
Just look at this though.
How can you not like that? Short h air looks great on Naruto. It makes him look a bit more mature, definitely.
you like it, i don't. different strokes for different folks.