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[ns.Believe.It]

Thank you so much for that beautiful story. Minato and Kushina, Gai and Kakashi, Obito and Rin... I finally feel like I'm connected to the story again. I remember how much I love all these characters 

[narusaku256]

MinaKushi Sigh...them feels

[starlitestarbrite]

*what could have been*
[author note summary: obito, and rin are sixteen here]
*rin, and obito are lying under the stars*
obito: the stars are really pretty tonight...but, not as pretty as you rin-chan
rin: -blushes- i agree they're pretty.
obito: if we had kids what do you think their name would be?
rin: -sweatdrop- its to early for that...but, not to late for a first real date
*at ichiraku*
obito: i'm buying ramen for both of us! we're finnally on a date!
rin: -laughs-
*meanwhile gai, and kakashi are training together*
kakashi: are you aware it's late to be training?
gai: it is never late for the youthfullness of training...i will surpass you!
kakashi: okay, you do that in your dreams...later -walks off-
gai: grrr WHY IS HE SO CLEAVER!?
*back to rin, and obito*
obito: you think we can double date with minato-sensei, and kushina-sama?
rin: -blinks- why?
obito: they just seem like what we could become. my dream is to be with you forever
rin: aw, i thought it was to be hokage?
obito: that to!
*later obito, and rin decide to walk around konoha together, and talk*
rin: what's going on in the uchiha clan? them, and the hyuuga clan seem to not get along
obito: i don't know...i think due to the hyuugas' being richer then the uchihas' the uchihas' want in...both clans are powerful i don't know why they don't just work together instead of against eachother.
rin: do you think orochimaru's a hyuuga? or uchiha?
obito: no...he don't have the byakugan, or sharingan
*he walks her home*
rin: i had fun tonight
obito: so, did i
*obito and rin kiss*
THE ED

[starlitestarbrite]

*fire&water*
[author note summary: heaven, and earth begain somewhere...before them there were minato, and kushina.]
*minato, and kushina age sixteen, picniking in the park*
kushina: i can't believe you braught ramen to another of our picniks'
minato: well, what can i say? i like ramen. but, i love you more, and ramen remindes me of the time we share together so, it's a cycle

kushina: aw, i love you to minato...your so sweet
*voice: HEY MINAAATOOO?
minato: oh crap...lets go before he sees us
*dai runs up*
dai: i still want to challenge you!
minato: -whines- can't you bother someone else instead?
dai: why?
kushina: i'll be your match -smiles-
dai: okay then-
kushina: -punches dai- WE'RE ON A DATE HERE YOU MORON! gosh -sits back down- some people are so rude!
minato: i know!
*meanwhile sakumo is training when dai lands by him*
sakumo: -sweatdrop- did you piss off kushina again?
dai: well, how am i going to be rivals with minato if SHE is always around?
sakumo: well, get a new rival.
dai: then...YOU WILL BE MY RIVAL HATAKE, SAKUMO!
sakumo: -sighs- fine...but, i'll have to kick your butt tomorrow kay?-walks off-
dai: okay...wait...HEY!!!
*back to minato, and kushina*
kushina: i love going out with you -blushes-
minato: i love going out with you to
*minato, and kushina kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 28 November 2014 - 08:44 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Beautiful. Its like reading about Naruto and Sakura 

[narusaku256]

They sure do make an adorable couple....and adorable parents nonetheless. I wish they were around But....I still crack up when I try to imagine how Minato must be handling Kishina XD There's some strangr sweetness to their pairing XD

[starlitestarbrite]

*birthday wonderland*
[author note summary: two omake in one. first takes place on kushina's birthday [july 10th], the second takes place on minato's birthday [jan. 25th].]
*minato,and kushina are at ichiraku*
minato: hey teuchi? when kushina comes back from the restroom get the surprise!
teuchi: alright, i think it's sweet your doing this for your wife
minato: shhh here she comes
*kushina comes back, and sits down*
kushina: what's going on?
minato: we're just talking about how pretty you are -smiles-
kushina: -smiles, and blushes- no, really whats-
*teuchi comes back with a cake, and the whole restraunt sing happy birthday*
kushina: -eyes water- did you plan this?
minato: yes, happy birthday kushi-chan
kushina: thank you so much
*she hugs minato*
minato: -eyes water- your...welcome...your crushing my bones! but, -hugs her back- i'm okay with that.
*meanwhile kakashi, and obito, and rin are all on the heaven, and earth bridge*
obito: this bridge is haunted...the myth is that one day there was a city under the bridge, and it got flooded. now the ghosts haunt the bridge
rin: -sweatdrop- do you two ALWAYS have to try to one-up eachother?
obito: yes! i tell a better ghost story
kakashi: you want a TRUE tale of horror?...know how the valley of the end got it's name?
obito: i've heard it was because the first, or second hokage, and madara uchiha faught to the "end" of their lives...which explains the uchiha curse -sweatdrop-
kakashi: that's not the whole tale...you know how the valley end is a waterfall?...well, it used to be another village belonging to an unknown clan...well, rumour has it they ALL turned against eachother, and they were so powerful the ground crumbled causing 1/2 the valley to fall...it was called death valley before valley of the end
rin: -thinks- they're actually good at creating creepy pasts-
obito: oh yeah? here's one!-
rin: i've got one...can i try
obito: sure rin-chan! bet you can tell one better than jerk-in-the-box, and me combined!
rin: okay,my clan has a very dark past...the nohara clan there was a time where herbs were THE go to things for medical assistance...it was believed that herbs talked to us telepathically...talked to our body
obito: waw thats not scary...thats cool
rin: well,...somewhere down the line some decided to take advantage of our "medicinal friends"...what they didn't know was herbs can be just as human as we are...well, people started being controlled by the herbs, and started getting their souls sucked out...when it was over there were a bunch of herbs...with human souls, and the nohara clan? we're all 1/2 herbs 1/2 human
obito/kakashi: -jaw drop- reaaally?
rin: NO! if your gonna tell myths you have to make them sound believable or you wont get anyones attention!
obito: YOUR AMAZING RIN-CHAN!
kakashi: -sweatdrop-
*back to ichiraku*
minato: so, what else do you want to do for your birthday?
kushina: anything as long as it's with you
minato: -smiles-
*they both kiss*

*winter birthday*
*at the namikazi house*
kushina: -gets dressed, and poofs off...she needed to get minato's surprise party set before he came to the hokage office-
*the hokage office*
kushina: okay, got the cake, ramen noodles, icecream...the tea perfect
rin: minato-senseri'll love it!
kushina: hizashi use your byakugan to tell us when he comes
hiashi: i'm hiashi
hizashi: -uses byakugan to watch for minato-
kushina: i know that...i was talking to your brother
hiashi: -sweatdrop- why am i always second best? i'm the heir to the hyuuga throne!
kushina: well, you can go do it to. he's just closer to the door
hiashi: i always live in his shadow!
tsume: well, if you would stop complaining you might get a glimpse of the light...seriously ever since we were kids you two have tried to surpass eachother
hiashi: well people used to get us mixed up!
tsume: YOUR TWINS!
hiashi: but, i'm better!
hizashi: the hokage's on his way in here!
kushina: okay, -turns light off-
*minato walks in, turns on the light*
everyone: SURPRISE!
obito: happy birthday sensei...hey rin-chan? when is your birthday? i'll make sure to give you the best party of the century! promise of a lifetime -thumbs up-
rin: -blushes- that's sweet obito. but, lets celebrate the hokage's birthday for now.
kakashi: obito your such a kiss up sometimes
obito: oh yeah! a thousand years of death! -pokes kakashi in the butt-
kakashi: AAAH, WILL YOU STOP DOING THAT!?
obito: NO!
tsume: they fight like you, and your brother hiashi -laughs-
*hizashi walks over*
hizashi: actually...i try to avoid fighting...it's not worth it...-looks at hiashi- your not worth my time
hiashi: GRRR OH YEAH!
kushina: IF YOU TWO DON'T STOP ACTING LIKE CHILDREN I WILL TOSS YOU BOTH OUT ON YOUR BUTTS! THIS IS MINATO'S BIRTHDAY NOT "FIGHT WITH MY TWIN BROTHER" DAY!
hiashi/hizashi: -sweatdrop-
hizashi: you pissed kushina off
hiashi: no YOU pissed kushina off...she's the firey redhead
*room goes silent*
*hiashi is sent flying out the window by kushina*
tsume: your brother's annoying
hizashi: yeah...he's the weird one, thinks he's "mr. perfect" but, in reality it took him a year just to learn how to use his byakugan
*flashback to when the twins were kids*
hiashi: BYAKUGAN -nothing happens- grrr WHY CAN'T I DO IT!
hizashi: BYAKUGAN! -practases using it-
hiashi: one month...it took him only one month! why can't i do that!? i will surpass him one day!
hizashi: -looks at hiashi with the byakugan- i can see right through you...these are like x-ray vision or something! they're so cool
hiashi: you think your perfect with your night vision eyeballs! -stomps off-
hizashi: I DON'T THINK I AM I KNOW I AM!
*end*
tsume: -laughs- hiashi's such a loser!
hizashi: yeah...but, one day he'll need my help, and my destiny is not only to protect the main branch...but he is my brother after all.
tsume: that's actually really nice.
obito: it took me only a day to learn sharingan!
kakashi: no it didn't i was there when minato-sensei tried to help you...we had to get someone who had the sharingan to help you because you couldn't do it without complaining about your eye strain, and head ache...it took you months!
obito: WILL YOU SHUT UP!
kakashi: well, be honest.
gai: obito i would like to challenge you to a running contest!
obito: now?...okay
*they both leave*
rin: i hope obito's careful...gai is pretty rough sometimes
kakashi: yeah...bet he'll make obito cry -laughs-
rin: come on that's not very nice
*kurama in kushina's subconscious: mmm...hey? where's that feeling i like?
kushina: -thinks- did i tell you to talk?
kurama: ...yes
kushina: -thinks- no i didn't
kurama: i like the high from your anger
kushina: -thinks- stop getting high off my chakra it's weird
kurama: the high life...mmm
kushina:-thinks-kurama?...shut up.
kurama: what if all the jinchuuriki put aaall the bijuu together? then would they become suuuper humaaannn!?
kushina: -thinks- that's it
*inner kushina punches the daylights out of kurama*
*jiraiya walks in*
jiraiya: hey, there's my favorite student
minato: HI PERVY SENSEI!
*everyone laughs*
jiraiya: i told you not to call me that anymore!
minato: would you rather i called you-
jiraiya: NOOO! thats worse!
kushina: what's worse than that?
jiraiya: i braught you a birthday present -hands minato a book-
minato: "tales of a gutsy ninja"? thanks
jiraiya: it's a romance novel...since you have a wife now she also gets a copy -hands kushina one-
kakashi: can i have a copy?
jiraiya: i only have two...but, -gives him a book- you can look at this
kakashi: -eyes widen- why's that girl naked?
jiraiya: OH NOT THAT ONE! -takes it back and blushes-
minato: -sweatdrop- "grandpa" jiraiya-sensei you should have left THAT one home
jiraiya: NOOO! YOU CALLED ME THE WORSER ONE NOOO!
kushina: -sweatdrop- you think being called that's worse than being called a pervert?
jiraiya: well...when you put it that way...yes.
*outside with gai, and obito*
gai: now the pledge say "i obito"
voice: hey gai!? you coming!?
gai: huh? -clone in front of him poofs off and gai sees obito across the feild- HEEEY i did not say go yet! -runs to catch up-
*they do 1 lap around konoha*
gai: let us go again!
obito: -pants- i...can't...-passes out-
gai: oh no! -goes to check his pulse- you were a youthful rival!
obito: you are to!
gai: -sweatdrop and looks behinde him- HEY! i thought -notices that "passed out obito" was a tree log- how did-
obito: genjutsu!
gai: i only do taijutsu
obito: i can to. thanks to my sharingan i can read your moves
gai: GRRR i did not think of that!
obito: i'm your toughest challenge yet!
gai: yosh! a youthful challenge! finnally YOUTH WILL WIN SOMEDAYYY -runs off-
obito: i was going to suggest he use shadow clone to help himself train...oh well, -walks off back to the party-
*later after the party*
kushina: did you enjoy your birthday party?
minato: yes, thank you for the best party ever
kushina: well, you only deserve the best -smiles-
minato: you do you.
kushina: but, you know whats better than the best?
minato: what?
kushina: us getting alone time together
*minato, and kushina kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 29 November 2014 - 05:44 PM.

[narusaku256]

That Kushi chan

[ns.Believe.It]

Oh wow,  THAT WAS TOO GOOD and extremely funny too. Haven't laughed this hard for a while now.  I just love Team ObiKakaRin, 1000x better than NaruSasuSaku, Jiraiya and Gai are always fun to read about. 

 

The part with Hizashi and Hiashi though... its on a whole new level . LMAO   

[starlitestarbrite]

*time travel*
[author note summary: naruto, and sakura are sixteen, and meet a strange girl who looks similar to hinata who is also sixteen...she comes with a warning. sidenote: i like using naruto, and sakura for time travel, dimension hopping, type stories lol]]
*at ichiraku*
naruto: hey sakura-chan? look -tries to put the chopstick pieces in each nostril-
sakura: -sweatdrop- thats really weird
*a purple haired girl walks in. her hair's really long similar to hinatas, only her bangs are long as well, she sits down in the distance and watches naruto, and sakura*
naruto: -looks at her- she looks similar to hinata, or did hinata change her hairstyle?
sakura: um, who cares we're on a date!
*the girl silently grins, and giggles at the two*
naruto: i know! she just looks different...but, your much more cuter!
sakura: shhh she'll hear you!
naruto: hey sakura-chan?...i think she's watching us
sakura: well, she probabbly overheard you! -looks to see who it is- waw...she does look similar to hinata...is that hanabi?
naruto: -runs over- HI! i'm naruto uzumaki, future hokage
girl: looks like you got your future all figured out...i'm himawari...um, hyuuga!
naruto: you look similar to hinata, at first sakura-chan, and i thought you were hanabi, her sister
himawari: she's got brown hair
naruto: wait...how did you-
himawari: i have to go! i'll explain another time, i need to find someone first -poofs out-
naruto: that was really weird
sakura: i know...who was that?
naruto: she said her name was himawari hyuuga...but, i feel like she was hiding something
sakura: well, the hyuuga are still a big clan so, lets not overthink.
*training field with team gai, himawari watches from a distance*
gai: AS A CELEBRATION OF OUR YOUTHFUL TRAINING WE WILL RUN 12 LAPSE AROUND KONOHA
lee: YES SENSEI!
*they both run off*
tenten: wanna train together?
neji: alright, atleast we wont have two hear those to all day.
*himawari walks up*
tenten: hey, isn't that...
himawari: hi tenten, neji...we need to talk
neji: do we know you?
himawari: no, YOU don't but i know you. you have to become the heir no matter what it takes!
neji: i can't only the main branch can do that.
himawari: no, you HAVE to! the heiress can't do anything about what's going to happen in the future!
neji: well, i know hinata's not that strong but, theres still hanabi!
himawari: IT'S YOUR DESTINY TO MAKE PEACE WITHIN THE HYUUGA CLAN! it's only you who can bring the main branch, and your branch together...from what i know there never was supossed to be a devision!
tenten: wait...how did you read that?
himawari: i'm from the future...hinata isn't strong enough to be a clan leader, and hanabi don't want to.
neji: well,...i guess i can try to bring the two branches together
himawari: good.
tenten: if your from the future how do you relate to hinata, and hanabi?
himawari: well,...all i will say is when a time traveler from the future comes, and gives you a warning? that's when you KNOW something's wrong -poofs off-
tenten: well, that was very weird
neji: I KNEW IT! finnally! i know my destiny now! -runs off-
tenten: -sighs- just when things can't get weirder the hyuuga prove me wrong.
*the hokage office*
naruto: do hinata, and hanabi have an estranged sister?
tsunade: -sweatdrop- what?
sakura: naruto, and i met a girl who calls herself himawari hyuuga, she's around our age, and looked similar to hinata.
tsunade: no, they do not have a estranged sister, nor does neji. maybe it was just a random hyuuga, and your thinking to much naruto.
sakura: thats what i told him to...kind of
naruto: but, there's something strange about her
tsunade: she's a hyuuga...they're all alittle weird when you first meet them!
naruto: true.
*himawari watches hinata training*
himawari: -thinks- so, many mistakes...so desparate...so...dense
hinata: -looks around- h-hello? anyone there? n-naruto-kun is that you?
*hinata sees a shadow flee fast*
hinata: -blush- what if it was him?...wonder what he's doing now? -daydreams about naruto-
*back to sakura, and naruto*
naruto: we can make it a mission to find out more about her!
sakura: no, she's not causing any threat so, we don't have to...plus i've had my share of hyuugahol for to day, see you tomorrow
*naruto, and sakura hug*
naruto: i'll walk you home
sakura: okay, i'll get to spend more time with you that way.
*later that night himawari sits on the monuement*
himawari: -thinks- how do i tell him whats going to happen?
kurama: just exlain it.
himawari: -thinks- oh, yeah that'll work "hey naruto? your my future dad but,you can't get together with our mom because your son bolt becomes a villan of the century" how will that even go over?
kurama: then you wont be born if they don't marry
himawari: -thinks- i will just not as himawari...the new jinchuuriki...who lives in a shoujo universe -sweatdrop-
kurama: it's not that bad...your more outgoing than your mom, and your kickbutt like your dad
*naruto hears a knock on the door*
naruto: -opens it- himawari right?
himawari: heeey you remembered...we need to talk
*they go inside*
himawari: i'm from a future timeline where you marry hinata, and have two kids...myself, and baruto.
naruto: WAW!...so, your my future daughter?
himawari: yes, but, you can't marry hinata. at any cost
naruto: i'm planning on spending my life with sakura-chan!
himawari: then confess NOW, trust me if you don't you'll live to regret it, marry someone you never unconditionally loved, become hokage, have two kids, AND YOUR SON TRIES TO DESTROY THE VILLAGE!, then you sacrifice yourself, and i get the kyuubi, and it becomes a shoujo!
naruto: -sweatdrop- you hyuugas are weird
himawari: i'll reintroduce myself, hi i'm himawari UZUMAKI
naruto: so, if i marry hinata all heck breaks loose?
himawari: yes, all hell breaks loose...it's your destiny, and sakura's destiny...unite heaven, and earth THEN there'll be peace.
naruto: that sounds familiar
himawari: see you in the future...a better one -poofs off-
*epilauge*
sakura, and naruto marry, and have two kids-shinachiku a son, and naru a girl.
the hyuuga clan united branches, and thanks to neji, and hinata learning to work together everyone found it better to work together instead of against eachother
and there is indeed peace in the village. who knew that sometimes the strongest bond can impact the world in ALOT of ways.
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 30 November 2014 - 10:20 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*trip of a lifetime*
[author note summary: naruto, sakura, and sasuke get sent back intime to when team minato was around]
*naruto, sakura, and sasuke all find themselves in konoha*
naruto: wait...we shifted AGAIN!
sakura: i think we're in the past!
sasuke: you don't do that much...doen't it hurt your head?
sakura: what?
sasuke: thinking
naruto: shut up sasuke! let's go figure out where we are now
*they notice the monuement*
sakura: it looks like we're in the past, before lady tsunade became hokage
sasuke: and before the fourth hokage to...that means the third must still be hokage
naruto: -rushes to the hokage office-
sakura: NARUTO WAIT UP -runs after him
sasuke: -sighs- -fallow them-
*hokage's office*
naruto: are team minato on a mission!?
sarutobi: do i know you three?
naruto: is kushina on a mission?
sakura: naruto, settle down!
sarutobi: no, they're not on a mission they're at the training grounds
*naruto runs out*
sakura: sorry about that...you see we're from the future, and well, it's a long confusing dragged out boring story that ends in a senseless bad romance
sasuke: well,...that escalated quickly.
*naruto at the training grounds where team minato, and kushina are*
naruto: mom?...dad?...-eyes water- -runs to join them- hi guys
minato: hey, that kid looks kinda like me!
kushina: are you lost?
naruto: no...well,...if i am then i hope i'm never found -smiles-
*sakura and sasuke pop up*
sakura: NARUTO DON'T RUN OFF LIKE THAT! -bonks him on the head-
obito: -laughs- hey sensei? she acts like kushina
kushina/sakura: WHAT!?
obito: -stops laughing- but, you two are very pretty
rin: i'm rin
obito: i'm obito uchiha! i'm going to be hokage someday!
kakashi: i'm kakashi,
sasuke/sakura/naruto: -surprised look-
naruto: then pervy sage is here to!?
*obito,and rin laugh*
sakura: he means jiraiya
minato: well, he's not in the village at the moment, but, he's on one of his "journeys'"
kushina tell us about you three.
sakura: i'm sakura
sasuke: sasuke
naruto: i'm naruto uzumaki! future hokage! we're all eighteen though
obito: heeey you can't be hokage! i'm going to!
naruto: no, i am believe it-ttebayo!
obito: i will to!
kushina: guys? arguing wont solve your problems ya know-ttebane, now where are you three from?
*after the explaning is over*
minato: well, while you guys try, and find a way back why not be on a squad. kushi-chan'll be your squad leader
naruto: okay,
sakura: will we need a place to stay?
obito: hey, sasuke? since we're uchiha you can stay at my place
rin: we can room together sakura
kakashi: -blinks- what?
naruto: um, do you mind if i stay with you guys?
minato: sure you can
naruto: -holds back tears- thank you
sakura: -smiles-
*gai runs up*
gai: WHICH ONE OF YOU WANTS TO BE MY YOUTHFUL COMPETITER TODAY?
naruto: -sweatdrop- gai-sensei you shrunk
sakura: -sweatdrop- we're in the past when they were kids naruto
naruto: oh yeah.
gai: -runs off- YOUTH FOR THE WIIIN YOUTH FOOORRR LIIIFE*
sakura: he is so weird
kakashi: i'm going else where to train -starts to walk off-
*naruto comes over, does the 1000 years of death on kakashi*
kakashi: KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAH OBITO!
obuito: -bursts out laughing- that wasn't me but, i wish it was hahaahahahhaahahhaah
naruto: payback for future reference on YOUR part!
kakashi: i will get you back you know
naruto: really? lets go
*the two go off to train*
*later at obito's place*
sasuke: feels strange being back in my old clan
obito: what do you mean?
sasuke: you don't want to know.
obito: yeah...your right i wanna go out for ramen! -poofs off-
*naruto, minato, and kushina, and obito at ichiraku*
naruto/obito/minato: -SLUUURRRPPP- mmm.
kushina: you three are so much alike -smiles-
naruto: yeah, so, anyway...i'm the nine tales jinchuuriki
kushina: wait...then your-
naruto: your future son -smiles-
obito: -slurp- waw...if i whent to the past, saw my parents i'ed never wanna leave -slurp- if i had minato-sensei, and kushina-sama as parents...are you staying with us naruto?
naruto: hmmm...well, i need to go back to my timeline...kaguya's dimension shift sent us to various places, and to be honest...i would love to stay here...i bet i could truley make a difference.
*at rin's house*
rin: so, sakura, do you like anyone?
sakura: -blushes- um...well,...do you?
rin: i'm not in love but, i do have a tiny crush on kakashi...if i were to pick who i fall in love with i hope it's obito...he's just so kindhearted
sakura: well,...i've never had time to think about it, i used to have the biggest crush on sasuke when i was your age...but, since naruto, and i got closer he makes my heart race
rin: sounds like your in love with naruto.
sakura: -smiles- i do feel warm, and fuzzy around him.
*at the uzumaki house naruto got finished trying to explain to his parents about his life*
minato: waw...thats the most longest tale ever told
naruto: yeah, the longest tale from the greatest tale that in the end was the most epic failure ever sold!
kushina: you two have good wordplay
minato: like father like son i guess
naruto: this is so, cool...but, will i be able to stay?
minato: maybe we'll ask the hokage! he's old and wise!
*hokage office they explain everything to sarutobi*
sarutobi: -half asleep- that...was...the LONGEST longest explaination ever. but, i guess i can send you all back
*later team minato, and team kushina meet up with sarutobi*
sarutobi: matrix no jutsu! open portal!...now go on through
naruto: wait! will it change anything in our timeline?
sarutobi: no, this is a multiverse jutsu. if you stayed here it would only impact our timeline.
sasuke: i'll go through first! -goes into the portal-
naruto: -eyes water- i'm staying here
obito: YAAAY!
sakura: but, naruto! we're needed back at OUR present
naruto: sage mode! shadow clone jutsu!
*a shadow clone walks through the portal*
naruto: -transforms back-
obito: how come you don't teach us cool stuff like that sensei?
minato: -sweatdrop-
naruto: there. -smiles- the clone'll protect you sakura-chan, and help sasuke end the I.T
sakura: -eyes water-
*sakura and naruto hug*
sakura: -wipes eyes- it wont be the same with out the REAL you there
sarutobi: the portal's closing in 5
naruto: i love you sakura-chan
sakura: i love you too baka,
sarutobi: 4
sakura: nice meeting all of you...well, in THIS timeline
sarutobi: 3
naruto: you better hurry before it closes sakura-chan!
sakura: -faces the portal tears run down her face-
naruto: -wipes tears from his eyes-
sakura: shadow clone jutsu!
sarutobi: 2
*sakura's shadow clone whent through the portal*
naruto: but, sakura-chan
sarutobi: 1 -the portal closes-
naruto: did you know you just left sasuke behinde?
sakura: no, i didn't. my mind clone, and yours are there...but, our hearts belong together no matter what universe we're in-
minato/kushina: AWWW
minato: they're just like us!
obito: you think we'll be like that someday rin-chan?
rin: i hope so
naruto: i'll make sure both of our dreams come true, and i'll be hokage someday...promise of a-
sakura: -bonks him on the head- WILL YOU STOP THAT!?
*everyone laughs*
*rin, and obito hug*
*kushina and minato hug and kiss*
*sakura and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 14 September 2015 - 06:32 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

 

 

sasuke: and before the fourth hokage to...that means the third must still be hokage
naruto: -rushes to the hokage office-
sakura: NARUTO WAIT UP -runs after him
sasuke: -sighs- -fallow them-
*hokage's office*
naruto: are team minato on a mission!?
sarutobi: do i know you three?
naruto: is kushina on a mission?
sakura: naruto, settle down!
sarutobi: no, they're not on a mission they're at the training grounds
*naruto runs out*
sakura: sorry about that...you see we're from the future, and well, it's a long confusing dragged out boring story that ends in a senseless bad romance
sasuke: well,...that escalated quickly.
*naruto at the training grounds where team minato, and kushina are*
naruto: mom?...dad?...-eyes water- -runs to join them- hi guys

God, this reminds me of that wonderful movie that is RtN. That movie was so emotional and meaningful   Kishimoto, how did you go from writing a special movie like RtN to this crappy writing in the Last ? How ?!

[starlitestarbrite]

i thought the anime studio [SP] were NS shippers'. i hoped the anime would end in NS but, it seems like they're destroying sakura, and naruto's bond, and character just for a movie.

[ns.Believe.It]

SP were (are? ) NS shippers. But they were Hinata fans too. Now they're just using Kishimoto's ending to make Hinata shine as much as possible. I don't think SP had anything to do with the way the manga ended. 

 

I even wrote a LAP about this in the movie thread LINK

[starlitestarbrite]

*oh my parody!*
[author note summary: the cast of naruto's reaction to the last:naruto movie trailor]
*at the stadium*
tsunade: what i have to show you all is very disturbing...-turns on the projector-
naruto: WHAAAT! why do i act like part one sasuke?...i'm not a jerk like he is!
sasuke: i can hear you dobe
naruto: i have my own fangirl club?, NOOO SAKURA-CHAN'S THE ONE I LOVE!
sakura: are you sure this is naruto: the last?...THAT's not my naruto, and WHEN DID I BECOME HINATA, AND HINATA BECOME ME!?
hinata: -blushes- naruto-kun.
ino: hey sakura? remember RTN when mine, and hinata's "peacemaker" personalities switched?
sakura: yeah...that would make sense since RTN-hinata was RTN-sakura's rival
lee: am i in the movie? what am i like?
tenten: no, mostly hinata's being shown
sakura: hey, you know what i think this is? it looks like one of those light hearted parody movies that make fun of other movies...i think SP's making fun of kishi's ending choice in the manga
naruto: so, narusaku still might have a chance?
sakura: i don't know! but, i think SP baught naruto...the anime of course
kiba: but, then how does kishi fit into it all?
sakura: hmmm...he's a sell-out, a one-hit wonder.
choji: one-trick poney
shikamaru: well, it's for the best. he wasn't the brightest star in the sky
ino: sharpest tool in the shed
sai: brightest crayon in the box...phrases are very interesting.
tsunade: now, -turns off projector- that is all
*later after they all leave naruto, and sakura are walking to ichiraku*
naruto: i have some faith in SP, they wouldn't break our bond would they?
sakura: i'm not sure...i don't think so, no NS fan would do that just because an idiot told them to
naruto: -laughs-
*hinata walks up*
hinata: hi n-naruto-kun
naruto: hey, hinata what'd you think of the trailor for the movie?
sakura: WHO CARES WHAT SHE THINKS!?
hinata: well, to be honest...i hated it
sakura: i care what she thinks...it totally ruined our characters! but, if it's a parody it's supossed to.
hinata: i know, why couldn't they make it serious if naruto-kun, and i were getting together?
naruto: i'm sorry hinata but, sakura-chan, and i had the most developement
sakura: -sweatdrop- WILL YOU GET LOST!?
*hinata walks off*
*sasuke walks over*
sasuke: do i really act like that? the way you acted in the movie?
naruto: yes, back in our academy days you were the biggest jerk ever -smiles-
sasuke: -stomps off-
naruto: wait...WHY'D THEY MAKE ME A JERK!?
sakura: -sighs-
*in ichiraku*
naruto: so, if everyones role is reversed...again whoes role did you get?
sakura: karin uzumaki of course!
naruto: that would be hilarious! to make a parody to make fun of NH, and SS...epic!
sakura: which is why NS might get the anime ending after all!
naruto: do you think the others are altered to?
sakura: no, they're just making fun of the SS, NH, NS, SK shipping wars, and otaku. that's what it looks like
naruto: i hope this troll-theory is true because it's so mean but, really funny at the same time! if this is true why didn't they tell the NS fanbase what was going on instead of making us all panic!?
sakura: because they thought they would notice they're telling the SS love story through NH i guess...then if movie!you goes back to being your sweet goofy self it'll end in NS through NH
naruto: AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT'D BE SO FUNNY AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
sakura: yeah, but, even i was hoping for a more serious tone where NS is in the center, not a funny parody spoof
naruto: HAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA
sakura: you can stop laughing now naruto...the jokes aren't THAT hilarious
naruto: HAHAAHAHAHHAAHHA YES THEY-AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-ARE HAHAAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH A TROLL OF A LIFETIME!
sakura: -bonks him on the head- WILL YOU CUT IT OUT!?
*sasuke, and karin are having a similar conversation*
karin: so, it's a parody? ALL THIS TIME WE PANICKED FOR NOTHING!?
sasuke: well,...i didn't panic.but, i believe the ending of the manga was so bad that SP couldn't pass up the chance for a parody of part one
karin: so...they're making fun of the ending?
sasuke: their making fun of the shipping otaku. mostly NH, and SS uniting both into one...in one sitting...in the end i bet the "NS" version of NH'll win!
karin: if your right...then we get the anime! YEEES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE WOOON WE WOOON WE WOOON NANANAHAAHAA
sasuke: and apparently narusaku just might be end game in the anime after all.
*karin's still gloating over SK winning*
sasuke: toneri/hinata could be a "play" on SK you know
karin: -stops- no...i think i got it...movie!NH=part one SS, ends in part two NS, toneri/hinata=part two SS?
sasuke: wait! i didn't brainwash sakura!...oh wait...the genjutsu...continue
karin: movie!SS if shown=SK. me, and you...we wooon we woon -goes back to cheering-
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
*back to naruto, and sakura who are on the monument*
*naruto, and sakura kiss*

[starlitestarbrite]

*a konoha carol*
[author note summary: since naruto got an "its a wonderful life" omake earlier this year http://www.narusaku....=13585&p=562080  i decided sakura should have an "a christmas carol" themed one lol. set during chapter 693 when she's in a genjutsu]
*sakura's in a dark void*
sakura: did...sasuke just stab me? or am i in a genjutsu?
voice: you'll be visited by three spirits...spirit of konoha past, spirit of konoha present, and spirit of konoha future...to review your life, and come to terms with who your heart truley loves.
sakura: well, i love them both! sasuke-kun, and naruto i mean
*kushina appears*
kushina: so, YOUR the girl minato told me about!?...i'm kushina uzumaki naruto's mother
sakura: i''m sakura...your the spirit of konoha's past?
kushina: of course! ready?
sakura: sure
*they stare at a screen scene 1: shows sakura, and ino when they're little*
past!ino: here -hands her a red ribbon-
past!sakura: what's this for?
past!ino: your hair...your protector goes on your forehead
past!sakura: -smiles-
kushina: sounds like you two had a sweet friendship
sakura: yeah -smiles- she was my first true friend...then it was broken because of our rivalry
*screen scene 2: sakura, and ino older and outside*
past-ino: i heard sasuke likes girls with long hair
past-sakura: then i'll grow mine out. from now on we're rivals
sakura: it was the rivalry that costed our friendship
kushina: -giggles- there's something else you need to see
*screen scene 3:the bench scene!*
sakura: -jaw drops- THAT WAS NARUTO!?...-eyes water- even after i was so mean to him he was still there for me -wipes eyes- that baka -smiles-
kushina: because naruto knows how it feels to not have someone there...he never wanted anyone to suffer the heartbroken pain he has -eyes water- you most of all
sakura: -thinks- now, i feel horrible...why'd i "fangirl" over sasuke when naruto's ALWAYS been there! i said i wouldn't cause him anymore pain then i pull a stunt like saying what i said- -tears fall-
kushina: well, that's all from the past...take care. -disappears-
sakura: -sniffs- i wish i had thought about naruto's feelings
*mitoko appears*
mikoto: hello, sakura.
sakura: hey...do i know you?
mikoto: i'm kushina's best friend, sasuke, and itachi's mother mikoto.
sakura: -smiles-
mikoto: i'm here to show you what's going on in present time,
*screen scene1: sasuke, and naruto are fighting and talking at the valley*
sakura: oh no...-gasps- i promised naruto we'd fight sasuke together next time! GRRR once again i failed naruto!
mikoto: -thinks- waw this girl seems to have self-esteem issues! good grief-
present-sasuke: i think of sakura like a sister
sakura: i have to get back, and help naruto...or sasuke-kun...or both of them if i can!
mikoto: but first...you have to help yourself realise who you are deep within...you NEVER give yourself up for anyone!...you live your life, and just love
sakura: could you tell hinata hyuuga that?
mikoto: -sweatdrop- hyuugas' they think they own the world yet fail to realize there ARE others stronger than them -sighs- but, of course the uchiha are no match for the hyuugas'
sakura: -blinks-
mikoto: sorry...just thinking outloud...-smiles- their bond is so close
sakura: yeah...naruto's gone through heck trying to save sasuke from darkness -sad smile- he pushes himself to hard but, i know he don't want to see anyone suffer
mikoto: wasn't there someone who was there to encourage him?, who supported his dreams?
sakura: yeah...i still do! honestly i'm confused about who i really love...i THINK i love them both!
mikoto: well, you can love someone platonically...but, what you need to figure out is who your in love with romantically?
sakura: am i IN love?
mikoto: no one can answer that but YOU -disappears-
sakura: okay, so past was kushina, present was mikoto...whoes going to be the-
*someone with a cloak, and a mask appears like the akatsuki*
sakura: future?...do i know you?
hooded figure: -points to the screen-
*screen scene 1-shows sakura married to sasuke, and naruto married to hinata, and naruto make hokage*
sakura: he made hokage! his dreams will come true in the future!...he seems so sad, and lonely though...do we ever interact? after the war?
hooded figure: -holds up chapter 699-
sakura: WHAT! -takes it- no! noonnoonnonono this can't happen! we don't even talk or ANYTHING!? -eyes water-
*screen scene 2: show's naruto talking about hinata*
sakura: HEEEY! I'M THE ONE YOU'VE ALWAYS LOVED YOU IDIOT! -sighs- they can't hear me...it's like he becomes academy days sasuke in the future
*screen scene 3- FAR into the future. this time sasuke is the villan once again*
future-naruto: -eyes water- why sasuke!? why'd you kill THE ONLY PERSON WHO LOVED YOU WITH ALL HER HEART!?
future-sasuke: hn...i didn't kill karin...i killed that annoying fangirl
sakura: -eyes water- sasuke-kun does this?
future-naruto: rasengan!
future-sasuke: chidori!
future-hinata: NARUTO-KUN! -tries to get between them-
future-sasuke: there goes another one -evil smile-
future-naruto: -tears fall- THAT IS IT SASUKE!
*future naruto, and sasuke both end up killing eachother*
sakura: NO! NARUTO! -tears fall- if this is the future that awaits me with sasuke then i don't want it...i want to be with naruto!
hooded figure: -disappears-
*sakura breaks out of the genjutsu*
sakura: -gets up- where's naruto!? we have to get to the valley
*at the valley kakashi, and sakura show up to see the two guys without arms-
sakura: NARUTO! -she runs and heals him-
naruto: sakura-chan -smiles-
sasuke: hey sakura?
sakura: -eyes water- i'm sorry i was so shelfish naruto...-sniffs- what i said to sasuke -sniffs-
naruto: -thank you for healing me sakura-chan -eyes water-
sasuke: sakura?
sakura: naruto?...how about we go to ichiraku when we get back?
naruto: -smiles- sounds good-...aren't you going to heal sasuke now?
sakura: thank you for always noticing me, and being there for me i love you so much naruto...oh and still wanna kiss my charming forehead?
naruto: -blushes, sits up so he can kiss her forehead- i love you to sakura-chan always have, and always will
sakura: hey sensei? if you want i can remove sasuke's sharingan, and implant into your eye, and he can have THAT eye
sasuke: YOUR GOING TO WHAT!?
*a few minuetes later kakashi got a sharingan again, sasuke got kakashi's eye*
kakashi: just like MY team...who thought the cycle would repeat!?
naruto: -gets up- we should fix his arm though
sakura: now, lets go dispel that I.T
*kakashi, sakura, and naruto go off to dispel the I.T*
sasuke: HEY...YOU GUYS FORGOT TO HEAL ME!
*naruto and sakura hug and kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 04 December 2014 - 12:08 AM.

[Nar123]

sasuke: HEY...YOU GUYS FORGOT TO HEAL ME!
*naruto and sakura hug and kiss*
THE END

           

 

LMAO!

Edited by Nar123, 03 December 2014 - 11:59 PM.

[narusaku256]

A nice piece of work indeed XD

[starlitestarbrite]

*what sakura has, hinata doesn't*
[author note summary: a poem i thought up]
hinata may have naruto in the end
but, sakura had him from the start
hinata may have held naruto's hand
but, sakura held his heart, and gave him CPR
hinata may have confessed first
but, it was sakura's confession that made him react
hinata may have his love in the future
but, sakura had his love in the past
naruhina may be canon...that was WAY to fast
but, narusaku is heaven, and earth. they're built to last.
*sakura and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 06 December 2014 - 03:25 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*my version of chapters 243-244*
[author note summary: my version of when obito is being crushed under the boulder]
*obito shoves kakashi out of the way of a falling boulder. they had just saved rin from the stone ninja*
obito: are you...okay rin-chan?, kakashi?
rin/kakashi: OBITO!
*they both rush over, and try to get the boulder off but it's to heavy*
obito: it's okay, it looks like it's over...the right side of my body's almost smashed
rin: -eyes water- we're not leaving you behinde!
kakashi: from the start if i had gone along with what you said, and whent with you to rescue rin this wouldn't have happened
rin: -tries to pour her chakkra into lifting the boulder-
obito: don't use up all your energy rin-chan-
rin: -tears fall- NO! I'M NOT LEAVING YOU HERE!
obito: kakashi...i want to give you my sharingan as a present for making jounin. rin-chan with your medical ninjutsu take out my-
rin: NO! -suddenly finds the energy to lift the boulder, and pulls obito up before the ground caves in-
rin: we have to find minato-sensei
*kakashi puts obito on his back, and the three of them go find minato*
minato: what happened!?
rin: -tries to heal obito-
*kakashi explains everything*
obito: rin-chan why did you save me?
rin: because...i love you
obito: -smiles- i love you to rin-chan
*at the hospital the next day*
obito: -wakes up in a hospital room-
kushina: your awake.
obito: where are rin-chan, kakashi, and minato-sensei
kushina: well, kakashi's in another room. he had an eye transplant...you both had surgery but, you two'll recover.
*rin walks in with flowers*
kushina: hi rin
rin: hi kushina-sama!, -smiles- i braught obito flowers
obito: thank you rin-chan -smiles-
*mnato walks in*
minato: hey kushi-chan? do they have ramen here?
kushina: -sweatdrop- no. just go to ichiraku. i'll look after your students'
minato: okay! -kisses her- hey obito's awake!
rin: i have a flower for kakashi to...can you take it to his room please sensei?
minato: sure
*kakashi's room*
minato: -walks in- flower delivery from rin!
kakashi: how is obito?
minato: he's awake now. rin, and kushina are with him now.
kakashi: this was my fault...if i had listened to what obito was saying we both could have saved rin before the boulder attack
minato: you shouldn't blame yourself...it was the stone ninja's fault -smiles-
*back to rin's room*
kushina: i'll let you two talk -walks out-
rin: i'm glad your still alive -smiles-
obito: i'm glad you are too.
rin: when you get well, we'll celebrate with ichiraku ramen, or whatever you would like -smiles-
obito: -smiles, eyes water- that sounds good rin-chan
*a month later all three are at ichiraku*
*rin gives obito a hug*
rin: thank you for always protecting me. now, i'm going to also protect you...we'll protect eachother
kakashi: you deserve to be jounin more than i do
obito: -smiles- well, as future hokage it's my job
*the three of them laugh, and talk*
*the uzumaki house*
minato: i can't believe how well, my students worked together...it's like they all risked their lives to save the other
kushina: well, they have a wonderful sensei -smiles-
*kushina and minato hug, and kiss*
*back to rin, obito, and kakashi*
*obito kisses rin on the forehead*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 07 December 2014 - 01:39 PM.