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[Paradox Jast]

hahaha, I was waiting for that.

[pharix]

hahaha, I was waiting for that.

no, WE'RE the ones waiting for it!!!!!

[Gravenimage]

no, WE'RE the ones waiting for it!!!!!

Indeed.

[Paradox Jast]

Well, so I finally managed to get FSFT out. Next on the list... another chapter of FSFT. Already got it mostly written too. Go me. My massive writers cramp has been fixed. For now.

[Paradox Jast]

Believe it or not, I just sent chapter 16 to Denim for him to beta.

Helloooooo Sage Mode.

[harry4e]

I got really excited for a second thinking Whirlpool Country was getting updated, then I saw it was Fire Shadow and got excited anyway just not as much. Now when you say Sage Mode are we talking regular Toad Sage or Super Saiyen Kyuubi Sage Mode mode? Don't answer that it will spoil the surprise.

[Paradox Jast]

I would answer, but since you asked me not to, I won't.

[shadow_Uzumaki]

Lol. So, he's about to meet an opponent that he's finally gonna take seriously is he? I gotta say, I'm not really sure what's going on in relation to Fairy Tale since I've never read it. Still love your fic though.

Edited by shadow_Uzumaki, 28 August 2011 - 04:12 PM.

[Greed-Sama]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Jast I absolutely love FSFT. You brought two of my favorite universes together in a good crossover (which is very hard to find). You sir, deserve a cookie.

[Paradox Jast]

To anyone who still hasn't read Fairy Tail yet, all I can say is... 'LE GASP!'

And I'm glad ya like it, Omega. It's pretty fun to write too, because Fairy Tail in general goes for a more humorous angle than Naruto, so I can have that carry over into FSFT.

[shadow_Uzumaki]

Hrm...interesting fight. Not as epic as I was expecting because of the involvement of Sage Mode, but a nice brawl nonetheless. You should have someone do a non-canon harem lemon one shot spin off sometime....

[Paradox Jast]

Hah, just as a humor fic, maybe.

And the Sage Mode fight was more or less intended as a warm up for his next fight.

[Greed-Sama]

Hah, just as a humor fic, maybe.

And the Sage Mode fight was more or less intended as a warm up for his next fight.

Lol. You know I get usually disappointed when there isn't a lemon at the end of one of these type of fics, but its so good I don't mind. Though if you were to do a one-shot one of these days that would be fine too.

[harry4e]

You need to make Fire Shadow a Mira/Naru/Erza threesome, so if there comes a time Naruto returns to his home planet, they have each other to for comfort...plus you get awesome Yuri Ending You add White with Red you get? Pink right? Only pink person in Narutverse is Sakura...so everyone happy.

OK it's wierd I got a strange sense of Deja-vu when reading the last chapter, was that guy in the Manga? It's like I felt I read something with an enemy with similar powers with the same weakness, yet for the life of me I can remember where.

[Paradox Jast]

Nope, he's an OC. If there is someone out there with the same skillset I wouldn't be surprised, however. It's pretty hard to be completely original these days.

[Codus N]

PJ, I've been thinking about this for a while. When you have Kushina explain the Uzumaki-style Fuuinjutsu to Naruto, be sure that you do it in the same vein as when Gamakichi explained to him about Nature energy. It's gonna be tricky, but I think you can do it. The reason why I'm saying this is because I believe Kushina's way of understanding things is the same as Naruto's way.

Here's a little reminder for you:

http://www.mangaread...hapter-409.html

[Paradox Jast]

Yeah, I originally had the concept of the 'Whirlpool' itself being a fountain of Nature energy. I don't mind spoiling that, because I have no idea when I can get back to writing WPC.

[Codus N]

Umm, I think you sort of misunderstood what I'm saying. What I meant was Kushina explaining the clan's Fuuinjutsu secrets in an unorthodox way, like the way Gamakichi explained Senjutsu to him. That's really the only way Naruto can learn such a complex art in a flash.

[Paradox Jast]

Oh. D'oh. That's what I get for trying to reply to this after being awake for almost 24 hours. Yeah, my bad. But I know what you mean now. I'll mark this down in my outline for future reference for when I can get back to writing a little more regularly. Thanks. XD

[Codus N]

Have you ever thought of retconning HS:FS?? I mean, it's not too late to retcon it to Kushina being the previous Jinchuuriki and she is dead in the future, aligning it with canon. Now that we have canon facts about Kushina, I'm starting to think HS:FS now works better as a stand-alone fic. There's also not too many things would mess up your story. Kakashi as Hokage is still plausible or works just fine for your timeline.

When Tsunade's reign ended, it was just a year after the war ended, it's still quite plausible that Kakashi was given the position so Naruto could mature a little bit and learn how to deal with politics. Hanabi being the Kyuudaime can be seen as a red herring. All in all, there's really not much for you to retcon. If we look at HS:FS as a totally different story and a stand-alone from WPC as well, it works just fine.