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[Onionhead Attacks]

Medusa Javelin, Chapter Eight

/me runs away before mob beats him up for it being so late

Wow, it's been a while since the last update. I have to go back and re-read some of the chapters, but I'm glad that you haven't given up on the story. Heh, better late than never.

[Kazama-san]

Just Naruto just another NaruSaku fic to add to the collection.

It says the story cannot be found.

o it was workin when i was reading it guess it was deleted....

[InvaderSpax]

Just Naruto just another NaruSaku fic to add to the collection.

I actualy read this story. Pretty good too. So I was noticably confused that it no longer seems to be there. However, I think I found the answer.

In a completely random moment, I found this, Just, a Kingdom hearts fic about Sora and Kairi.

Change Sora, Kairi and the Keyblade Master to Naruto, Sakura and the Kyuubi and it's nearly word for word the same thing.

Now, since Just Naruto seems to have been removed, I can't say which one was there first, but the KH one was up in August.

Just a random tidbit I stumbled upon.

[Sir Whirly]

Shouri just came out with a new chapter. Though she needs a beta to help her softening up the rough edges of her story.

[Shouri no Hana]

actually i've just been a little reluctant to go back and proofread/review the last few chapters...I'm sitting on a stupid block right now (I just finished half of chapter eight believe it or not...I guess at school I find more time to write or it was because I had nothing better to do last night.

Hrm...my computer is getting re-imaged tomorrow I think that will be the perfect time to sit down and review it all.

If you think I need a beta I have no problem with it, I just don't want a lazy one.

[Sir Whirly]

If you think I need a beta I have no problem with it, I just don't want a lazy one.

That describes most betas.

[desaix]

I burned out on beta-ing back when I was the primary editor of Lord Archive's (known best for his Digimon fanfiction, although when I was editing for him he was principly writing Ranma and Slayers fanfics) early works. Let's just say I essentially taught him how to write (his quality now is lightyears ahead of what it was then. From what I remember, it was things like 'remember to use a capital letter at the beginning of every sentence' and things like that, at first. And he'd never remember, so I would have to point out every instance he forgot to use a capital letter where he should, just so that he'd get the idea), and spent so much time and effort working on his fanfics I swore to never commit myself to prereading (beta-ing, editing, whatever you want to call it) fanfiction again. Not saying I'll never do it, but I'll only do it as the mood strikes and if I do beta a chapter, I won't commit to betaing the next.

Think long and hard before volunteering to be a beta. Also, think long and hard before asking for beta readers, as well, because you might just drive them crazy, and visa versa.

[Shouri no Hana]

LOL, that's why I'm not big on betas, anyway like I said, I'm handing in my computer tomorrow to get it re-imaged, so I'm thinking that I'll print off hard copies of my chapters and go through them throughly.

English is actually my worst subject aside from french, sometimes I even wonder why I'm writting this story...

[Sir Whirly]

LOL, that's why I'm not big on betas, anyway like I said, I'm handing in my computer tomorrow to get it re-imaged, so I'm thinking that I'll print off hard copies of my chapters and go through them throughly.

English is actually my worst subject aside from french, sometimes I even wonder why I'm writting this story...

Nah don't be down on yourself. Even though grammatically some of this chapter is off, the story is still there and it is a good one. Honestly in you would like a beta, I will be more than happy to do it for you. I am also doin MonkeysTotallyRock story but I could squeeze in yours without a problem.

[Shouri no Hana]

My mother always told me my grammar was always off...i just never noticed because I never proofread.

Let me see what damage I do tomorrow or tonight...I got 8 gigs of work on my computer I need to store somewhere...

[DarkHvN]

Guardian

My first story I'm not sure if it should be in the great narusaku listing but I just wanted to see if I can get a good start for the story.

[JoHamSandwich]

Just Naruto just another NaruSaku fic to add to the collection.

I actualy read this story. Pretty good too. So I was noticably confused that it no longer seems to be there. However, I think I found the answer.

In a completely random moment, I found this, Just, a Kingdom hearts fic about Sora and Kairi.

Change Sora, Kairi and the Keyblade Master to Naruto, Sakura and the Kyuubi and it's nearly word for word the same thing.

Now, since Just Naruto seems to have been removed, I can't say which one was there first, but the KH one was up in August.

Just a random tidbit I stumbled upon.

are you guys talking about 'Just Narutp' by Broncoley? if so, it came out in February. here's the link to that story. Just Naruto by Broncoley

on another note, he also has another NaruSaku fic that hasn't been added here yet, I think. I've read the first 4 chapters or so, and it's pretty good. Sad that it has less than 10 reviews. Naruto: War of the Ninja

[Kazama-san]

no it was sum new one but got deleted for sum reason.....

[InvaderSpax]

ayup. different one.

No Sasuke in the other one.

[tmb04]

one of my favorites, which u guys should read if u havent already is
Naruto: Hands of Destiny... or something like that, i read it on fanfic yesterday, Great Great Story and they update pretty often also

[Kazama-san]

Hands of Destiny hey this is the like for the one above

[JoHamSandwich]

Yup, that's the one. Thanks for putting up the link. Seems like it was updated too =)

[JoHamSandwich]

Rokudaime - Pretty interesting NaruSaku.

Yasha Yokujou

[DasDeke]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3041234/1/ - Broken Wings
I would say I enjoyed this one the most out of all the N/S fan fics I've read.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2967938/1/ - Her Favorite Accessory
This one was kind of cute too

[Nes Mikel]

Prudence - Medusa Javelin, Chapter Nine

Almost... finished...