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[Gnosismaster]

Ridding me of you has been updated.

[RyrineaHaruno]

Mine by Spzzgirl

Edited by RyrineaHaruno, 18 May 2009 - 03:55 AM.

[catsi563]

Pieces of a Dream Chapter 7 By the incomperable DijiFruit is out

[Jenskott]

Its not totally far fetched if seen in context.

jsut remember Fear makes people do strange and ultimatelys tupid things. and they do fear Naruto at that time, even if after his match with Neji they started to respect him.

the key for Sakura to fear him in such a fashion would be this. After he brings him back, she sees sasuke badly injured and beaten up. now this would shock her and scare her. but it would be made worse by Sasuke. Sasuke (the perosn she thinks shes in love with) gives a probably very biased description of the fight, and reveals to sakura that hes the Kyuubi. the combined shocks and revelations just overwhelm Sakura who at the time is a strong girl but not as strong emotionally as she would become.

this combines to leave her with a horrifying image of a monster on her team. Fear leads to stupidity (which thankfully shes overcome) and she rejects him in the worst way possible.

Add in Danzo and some others spreading rumors around and the populace turns against him, is not an surprising result. The goal for Danzo to isolate him, and leave him with noone else to turn too backfires when Naruto vanishes before he can track him down to offer sanctuary.

Kakashis laziness and disregard for Narutos situation for me is the more shocking OOC ness in the story. his oh well they wont do anything to you attitude is WAY OOC especially after his those who abandon their comerades speach. (hes fixing it in the story but still)

like K said in MIB. a person is smart. people are dumb panicy animals. gather people in large groups and the IQ of the person in volved goes down dramatically.

I haven't read that fic. So tell me: Sakura's actions and the villagers' actions are presented in that context? The author knows they are acting out-of-character and tries coming up with a valid, believable or understandable justification?

Unfortunately, Catsi, I'm so jaded with that kind of stories and so sick from them that I'm afraid I wouldn't buy that scenary, even if a believable justification is offered.

I've stumbled upon -too- many stories with that premise, and most of them don't offer a context for explaining her and their actions. Her actions aren't presented in a "she was frightened and upset and told and did things usually she would never do" context. Her actions are presented under the reasoning of "Sakura is a b*tch hates Naruto, doesn't care for him and is obsessed with Sasuke, so of course usually she would do and tell that". The most of the people writes those stories don't try and come up with a reason for Sakura being OOC because they don't think she's being OOC at all.

Moreover, often Sakura calls Naruto a demon in those scenes. She never knew about his burden before the timeskip, and we didn't got a scene where Sasuke narrates a biased verion of the fight or someone else tells her Naruto is the NIne-Tailed Demon. Therefore, that word can't be explained away with a "she was frightened, hurt and mad and didn't think clearly" justification. However they can be explained with the author altering everybody's behaviors and personalities in order to drive Naruto in a despair would justify that outlandish premise (Naruto leaving his hometown).

I repeat that I don't know if that was what happened in "Mizukage". But I have seen so much stories where that kind of garbage is used over and again, and again, AND AGAIN... that I don't feel inclined to check it.

[Jenskott]

Pieces of a Dream by DigiFruit has been updated with Chapter 7.

[naruto-sama]

Human Contact by yooso has been updated with Chapter 25

[RyrineaHaruno]

I haven't read that fic. So tell me: Sakura's actions and the villagers' actions are presented in that context? The author knows they are acting out-of-character and tries coming up with a valid, believable or understandable justification?

Unfortunately, Catsi, I'm so jaded with that kind of stories and so sick from them that I'm afraid I wouldn't buy that scenary, even if a believable justification is offered.

I've stumbled upon -too- many stories with that premise, and most of them don't offer a context for explaining her and their actions. Her actions aren't presented in a "she was frightened and upset and told and did things usually she would never do" context. Her actions are presented under the reasoning of "Sakura is a b*tch hates Naruto, doesn't care for him and is obsessed with Sasuke, so of course usually she would do and tell that". The most of the people writes those stories don't try and come up with a reason for Sakura being OOC because they don't think she's being OOC at all.

Moreover, often Sakura calls Naruto a demon in those scenes. She never knew about his burden before the timeskip, and we didn't got a scene where Sasuke narrates a biased verion of the fight or someone else tells her Naruto is the NIne-Tailed Demon. Therefore, that word can't be explained away with a "she was frightened, hurt and mad and didn't think clearly" justification. However they can be explained with the author altering everybody's behaviors and personalities in order to drive Naruto in a despair would justify that outlandish premise (Naruto leaving his hometown).

I repeat that I don't know if that was what happened in "Mizukage". But I have seen so much stories where that kind of garbage is used over and again, and again, AND AGAIN... that I don't feel inclined to check it.

Yeah it was what happened in that story. Sakura was a total bi** to him. The Kakish bashing made me stop reading that story I loath Bashing at least I try to let them stay in character even thought I might not like them as much. The fact is that those stories usually make Sakura the bad guy in order for him to get with Hinata *Sighs*... Mizukage is the worst case of Character bashing as well. The whole village is O.O.C, and I really dislike the Hate the demon brat plot device in order for him to leave. I mean he'd never leave the village so why make him leave the village?

Edited by RyrineaHaruno, 19 May 2009 - 02:31 AM.

[catsi563]

I haven't read that fic. So tell me: Sakura's actions and the villagers' actions are presented in that context? The author knows they are acting out-of-character and tries coming up with a valid, believable or understandable justification?

Unfortunately, Catsi, I'm so jaded with that kind of stories and so sick from them that I'm afraid I wouldn't buy that scenary, even if a believable justification is offered.

I've stumbled upon -too- many stories with that premise, and most of them don't offer a context for explaining her and their actions. Her actions aren't presented in a "she was frightened and upset and told and did things usually she would never do" context. Her actions are presented under the reasoning of "Sakura is a b*tch hates Naruto, doesn't care for him and is obsessed with Sasuke, so of course usually she would do and tell that". The most of the people writes those stories don't try and come up with a reason for Sakura being OOC because they don't think she's being OOC at all.

Moreover, often Sakura calls Naruto a demon in those scenes. She never knew about his burden before the timeskip, and we didn't got a scene where Sasuke narrates a biased verion of the fight or someone else tells her Naruto is the NIne-Tailed Demon. Therefore, that word can't be explained away with a "she was frightened, hurt and mad and didn't think clearly" justification. However they can be explained with the author altering everybody's behaviors and personalities in order to drive Naruto in a despair would justify that outlandish premise (Naruto leaving his hometown).

I repeat that I don't know if that was what happened in "Mizukage". But I have seen so much stories where that kind of garbage is used over and again, and again, AND AGAIN... that I don't feel inclined to check it.

Oh I agree it is overused and your right in that in many of the cases it is the"Sakura is a B@#ch scenario". Also Im not certian either that that was what happend in Mizukage since there is no such scene.

In my case I was simply tryingh ti illustrate in context how such a scenario might occur. At least If I were to write such a story that is. It is woefully out of character for Sakura, and Kakashi, and not so much for Sasuke at that particular time.

the failure of most of those stories as youve said is jsut that. the author nevers offers any context for those friends turn on Naruto scenarios.

[Jenskott]

Yeah it was what happened in that story. Sakura was a total bi** to him. The Kakish bashing made me stop reading that story I loath Bashing at least I try to let them stay in character even thought I might not like them as much.

Exactly! Damn it, why can't other fans respect the characters? Nobody is telling they must like all characters, but at least they could show respect for them when they write fanfiction featuring them.

That isn't something happens in NaruHina/NaruSaku/NaruSasu fics where the character interferes in the pairing often is twisted into the spawn of Satan. There're Shikatema writers turn Ino into a shallow, brainless slut. There're ShikaIno writers turn Temari into an overpossessive harlot tries breaking up Shikamaru and Ino in order to enslave Shikamaru. And there're ShikaTema and ShikaIno writers would like Shiho suffered an unpleasantly long and excruciatingly painful death.

You'd think if those characters were so awful, they wouldn't need twisting their personalities to turn them into a**holes.

The whole village is O.O.C, and I really dislike the Hate the demon brat plot device in order for him to leave. I mean he'd never leave the village so why make him leave the village?

In fact, I can imagine one scenery where in-character Naruto could believably leave the village, without character-bashing and without ridiculously artificial drama. I'm thinking of writing one story using that premise, but the plotline isn't fully ready.

Oh I agree it is overused and your right in that in many of the cases it is the"Sakura is a B@#ch scenario". Also Im not certian either that that was what happend in Mizukage since there is no such scene.

In my case I was simply tryingh ti illustrate in context how such a scenario might occur. At least If I were to write such a story that is. It is woefully out of character for Sakura, and Kakashi, and not so much for Sasuke at that particular time.

the failure of most of those stories as youve said is jsut that. the author nevers offers any context for those friends turn on Naruto scenarios.

Yes, you need making your best for explaining it. If I was to write such scenario, I reckon I'd use somewhat similar. Unfortunately or fortunately, I have no intention of writing that. That kind of fics use to be bait for Sakura-haters who use them like an excuse for justifying their hatred towards canon Sakura.

[shadow_Uzumaki]

I'm really, really hesitant to put my fanfiction here because A) I haven't updated it in a loooong time, B) There's quite a bit I have to edit, and C) many may not like the crossover-ing, but here we are.... Harry Potter and the Exiled Shinobi

[RyrineaHaruno]

Exactly! Damn it, why can't other fans respect the characters? Nobody is telling they must like all characters, but at least they could show respect for them when they write fanfiction featuring them.

Really I hate it when people do the CHARACTER BASHING

That isn't something happens in NaruHina/NaruSaku/NaruSasu fics where the character interferes in the pairing often is twisted into the spawn of Satan. Therefore Shikatema writers turn Ino into a shallow, brainless slut. Therefore ShikaIno writers turn Temari into an overpossessive harlot tries breaking up Shikamaru and Ino in order to enslave Shikamaru. And therefore ShikaTema and ShikaIno writers would like Shiho suffered an unpleasantly long and excruciatingly painful death.

You'd think if those characters were so awful, they wouldn't need twisting their personalities to turn them into a**holes.

Yeah I have noticed that too, I like Shiho so I have her hook up with Shikamaru in order for Temari or Ino too see that they love Shikamaru and don't wont to loose him lol. I also keep them in character as well I don't change their character in order for them to get the guy they love lol.

In fact, I can imagine one scenery where in-character Naruto could believably leave the village, without character-bashing and without ridiculously artificial drama. I'm thinking of writing one story using that premise, but the plot line isn't fully ready.



Yes, you need making your best for explaining it. If I was to write such scenario, I reckon I'd use somewhat similar. Unfortunately or fortunately, I have no intention of writing that. That kind of fics use to be bait for Sakura-haters who use them like an excuse for justifying their hatred towards canon Sakura.

I would love to read the story when your finished. Plus I can too like he goes on a training trip or something like that lol.

[harry4e]

I'm really, really hesitant to put my fanfiction here because A) I haven't updated it in a loooong time, B) There's quite a bit I have to edit, and C) many may not like the crossover-ing, but here we are.... Harry Potter and the Exiled Shinobi

Wow you really haven't updated in a long time, over 10 months. Though if you are going to recommend a crossover, I think you should post the pairing of other main charactor from the other series. For example, this fic appears to be a Harry/Hermione, and personally i'm a die hard Harry/Ginny fan and cannot understand the H/Hr pairing, screams incest to me, I'd rather read Sasu/Saku or Naru/Hina than that pairing, I love charactors individually, but never want to read about them together.

I think Mizukage is rather good overall. My only problem with it is the number of lasting OC's.

Now, OC's that last an entire story are fine. It gets to be a problem, however, when those OC's last the entire story, there are more than 5 of them, and updates come maybe once a month (if that). If they aren't an established canon character, I have to go back and re-read old chapters just to remember who the OC's are, because they are names I don't recognize.

The latest chapter had a lot of spelling and grammar errors too. I like the story overall, but I've been finding my interest waning.

It's exactly the same for me, I have trouble keeping in mind what one original charactor is like, but when they have the entire swordsman of the mist collection of OC's it's a constant battle between with reading one part, going back few chapters to find out who your reading about then continuing, specially when some of them are so similar in charactor...i'll admit the first time I read it, I skipped large sections of this story where any OC's are involved. I read it all with all the OC char sections and even after reading it all I still didn't have a clue who any of the OC's were, and would need to read the whoel thing again get an idea who everyone is...which i'm reluctant to do.

Also the second post Konoha Invasion section just isn't as interesting to read, you've got a whole bunch of extra OC's in an area which we know very little about so it's hard to visualise all the scenes.

Edited by harry4e, 19 May 2009 - 08:24 PM.

[shadow_Uzumaki]

Wow you really haven't updated in a long time, over 10 months. Though if you are going to recommend a crossover, I think you should post the pairing of other main charactor from the other series. For example, this fic appears to be a Harry/Hermione, and personally i'm a die hard Harry/Ginny fan and cannot understand the H/Hr pairing, screams incest to me, I'd rather read Sasu/Saku or Naru/Hina than that pairing, I love charactors individually, but never want to read about them together.

It is intended to be a HarryxHermione and NaruSaku, I'm not sure of other character pairings as of yet though.

[catsi563]

Chapter 11 of Tenchagan by Bradw316 is out

[Jenskott]

I would love to read the story when your finished. Plus I can too like he goes on a training trip or something like that lol.

It's a working project. I don't know if I'll ever post it, because the ninety nine percent of my fanworks never are published or finished.

Anyway, I'd use an Itachi-like scenary. My history would go like this: before the Chuunin exams, Naruto and Sakura fulfill a mission for the sake of Konoha. Unfortunately that mission's success guarantees all will believe they are criminals and traitors. Knowing this, they leave the town, becoming missing nins. Due to this single fact, Naruto's storyline completely changes.

[peanutbutter126]

Just a couple of oneshots I came across:

Days by Selunchen123.

The Gloves And Her by Cella N. This one's genre is friendship, but it does have some NaruSaku essence in it.

[jim1982]

It's a working project. I don't know if I'll ever post it, because the ninety nine percent of my fanworks never are published or finished.

Anyway, I'd use an Itachi-like scenary. My history would go like this: before the Chuunin exams, Naruto and Sakura fulfill a mission for the sake of Konoha. Unfortunately that mission's success guarantees all will believe they are criminals and traitors. Knowing this, they leave the town, becoming missing nins. Due to this single fact, Naruto's storyline completely changes.

Wow, sounds oddly familiar.... ever read Naruto: Captured by EdStargazer?

It's a little more of a darker story line where Naruto is caught stealing the the forbidden scroll, which leads to changes in the story. I suggest ya check it out to see if your plots are different enough to avoid confusion.

[Jenskott]

Wow, sounds oddly familiar.... ever read Naruto: Captured by EdStargazer?

It's a little more of a darker story line where Naruto is caught stealing the the forbidden scroll, which leads to changes in the story. I suggest ya check it out to see if your plots are different enough to avoid confusion.

Nah. I know that fic but I can assure my plot is quite different, althought I can understand why you find familiar some detail. I'm not drawing my inspiration from it.

[jim1982]

Nah. I know that fic but I can assure my plot is quite different, althought I can understand why you find familiar some detail. I'm not drawing my inspiration from it.

ah cool, I'm sure your plot will be entertaining and well written.

[RyrineaHaruno]

It's a working project. I don't know if I'll ever post it, because the ninety nine percent of my fanworks never are published or finished.

Anyway, I'd use an Itachi-like scenary. My history would go like this: before the Chuunin exams, Naruto and Sakura fulfill a mission for the sake of Konoha. Unfortunately that mission's success guarantees all will believe they are criminals and traitors. Knowing this, they leave the town, becoming missing nins. Due to this single fact, Naruto's storyline completely changes.

Cool that would be a cool story


Ch. 33 of story, Return of Namikaze 2, by wilkins75‏

Edited by RyrineaHaruno, 20 May 2009 - 07:50 PM.